讀后續(xù)寫杜西先生和可愛的小貓讓我不再害羞講義2024接湖南省邵陽市高三第一次聯(lián)考英語試題

邵陽市高三第一次聯(lián)考(2024年1月23日)讀后續(xù)寫題目：Iwasanextremelyshygirlinprimaryschoolandcouldn’tmakefriendseasily.Myteacher,

Mr.Doocy,calledmymotherandexplainedthatIhadn’tspokenasinglewordinclass.Andwe

weremorethanhalfwaythroughtheschoolyear.Evenasalittlegirl,Iknewthiswasunusual.I

watchedthefreeandhappyinteractionofmyclassmateswithenvy.我在小學(xué)時(shí)是一個(gè)非常害羞的女孩，很難交到朋友。我的老師，杜西先生打給我媽媽，解釋說我在課堂上一句話也沒說。我們的學(xué)年已經(jīng)過半。即使在我還是個(gè)小女孩的時(shí)候，我就知道這是不尋常的。我羨慕地看著同學(xué)們自由快樂的互動(dòng)。MomtriedtoexcusemybehaviorassomethingthatIwouldoutgrow.ButMr.Doocywasstill

quiteconcernedaboutme.HeaskedMomifIhadsomethingathomethatIliked.Hesaidhe

wouldarrangeashowandtellactivityfortheclassifIbroughtittoschool.Mymomtoldhim

aboutmycatwhohadgivenbirthtoseveralbabycatsaboutthreeweeksearlier.Iwascrazyabout

thosebabycats.媽媽試圖為我的行為開脫，因?yàn)槲议L大了。但杜西先生還是很關(guān)心我。他問媽媽家里有沒有我喜歡的東西。他說，如果我把它帶到學(xué)校，他會(huì)為班上安排一場(chǎng)表演和演講活動(dòng)。我媽媽告訴他我的貓?jiān)谌芮吧藥字恍∝垺Ｎ覟槟切┬∝埗偪?。ThenMr.DoocysuggestedIbringthebabycatstoschoolthenextdayandintroducethemto

myclassmates.ItseemedthatMomdidn’tthinkthisshowandtellactivitywouldhelpmeand

hopedtodiscourageMr.Doocy.SheexplainedthatIwouldhavetobringthemothercatalongwith

thesixbabycatsbecausetheyweretooyoungtobeseparatedfromtheirmother.Sheprobably

thoughtthiswouldputanendtotheplan.ButMr.Doocysaidthatwasfine.然后杜西先生建議我第二天把小貓帶到學(xué)校，把它們介紹給我的同學(xué)。媽媽似乎不認(rèn)為這個(gè)表演和演講活動(dòng)會(huì)對(duì)我有幫助，希望能打消杜西先生的念頭。她解釋說，我必須帶上母貓和六只小貓，因?yàn)樗鼈兲×?，不能和媽媽分開。她可能認(rèn)為這會(huì)結(jié)束這個(gè)計(jì)劃。但杜西先生說這很好。Inormallywalkedtoschool,butmymotherdrovemethenextmorningalongwithabigbrown

cardboardbox.Istruggledtowalktowardtheclassroomwiththeheavyload.Innotime,the

groupofbabycatscaughttheattentionofmyclassmates.Theireyeslitupinwonderwhenthey

caughtsightofmytinytreasures.Myheartbeatquicklyagainstmychestasprideswelledwithin

me.Ihadneverfeltsoimportantinmyentirenineyearsoflife!我通常步行上學(xué)，但第二天早上媽媽開車送我去，還帶了一個(gè)棕色的大紙箱。我拖著沉重的負(fù)載艱難地向教室走去。很快，這群小貓就引起了我同學(xué)的注意。當(dāng)他們看到我的小寶貝時(shí)，驚奇地瞪大了眼睛。當(dāng)驕傲在我心中膨脹時(shí)，我的心在胸口快速跳動(dòng)。在我整整九年的生命中，我從未感到如此重要！Mr.Doocyinstructedmetositonthestepsoutsidetheclassroomsoeveryonecouldgetagood

lookinsidethecontainer.

“CanIholdone?”

alittlegirlaskedaloudwithexcitement.Thenall

theotherchildrenchimedinlikeachoir,beggingtoholdoneofthebabycats.杜西先生讓我坐在教室外的臺(tái)階上，這樣每個(gè)人都能好好看看集裝箱里的情況。“我能拿一個(gè)嗎？”一個(gè)小女孩興奮地大聲問道。然后，所有其他的孩子都像唱詩班一樣插話，乞求抱一只小貓。第一段：Inoddedandsaid,

“Yes.”我點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭說：“是的?！钡诙危篧ith

everyonesitting

inthe

classroom,

Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.大家都坐在教室里。杜西邀請(qǐng)我談?wù)勎业呢垺?/p>

這道續(xù)寫題出得很好，符合課標(biāo)的命題要求?、艑W(xué)生熟悉的題材：校園生活、成長教育、人與動(dòng)物和諧相處。⑵前文易懂，續(xù)寫走向明朗，學(xué)生有話可寫。

文本大意：我是害羞的女孩，半學(xué)期過去了我在班上還沒有說過話。但我的老師杜西先生還是很關(guān)心我。他讓我把一件心愛之物帶到學(xué)校，他會(huì)為它在班上安排一場(chǎng)表演和演講活動(dòng)。于是我?guī)Я宋覟橹偪竦男∝?。我?guī)Я艘粋€(gè)棕色的大紙箱，里面有貓媽媽和剛出生的幾只小貓。很快，這群小貓就引起了我同學(xué)的注意。當(dāng)他們看到我的小寶貝時(shí)，驚奇地瞪大了眼睛。當(dāng)驕傲在我心中膨脹時(shí)，我從未感到自己如此重要！然后，所有其他的孩子都乞求抱一只小貓。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：很快，盒子里一只貓也沒有了。貓們?cè)谖彝瑢W(xué)的懷里顯得有點(diǎn)緊張和害怕。我非常擔(dān)心，所以我立即要求他們把貓放回盒子里。就在這時(shí)，杜西先生腋下夾著一本書走進(jìn)了教室。我站在舞臺(tái)上非常緊張，但努力讓自己平靜下來。于是我開始分享關(guān)于七只貓的有趣故事。走下舞臺(tái)時(shí)，我聽到一陣掌聲。然后，我想，“這次演講不算成功,但下一個(gè)會(huì)更好。”下水作文：Inoddedandsaid,

“Yes.”

Soontherewasn’ta

single

catleftinthebox.Thecats

seemed

slightly

nervous

andscared

inthearmsofmyclassmates.

Soworriedwas

IthatIimmediately

demanded

they

putthe

cats

backinthebox.

WhenIsaw

thesix

littlecats

nestled

(偎依)

happilyagainst

theirmother’s

chest,

myheartwas

overflowing

withjoy.

Theminute

thebellrang,Imovedtheboxtomyseat.Justthen,Mr.Doocyenteredtheclassroomwithabookunderhisarm.

(83words)With

everyonesitting

inthe

classroom,

Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

I

stoodon

the

stage,

thirtysix

pairsofeyeslooking

atmelikesearchlights.Mymindwentblank,

mybodyshaking.“Whoeverspeakspubliclyforthefirsttimewillhavebutterfliesinhisstomach.”

smiledMr.Moocy.

Itooka

deep

breathandremindedmyself,“Calmdown!

Bebrave!”

SoIbegantosharefunnystoriesaboutthesevencats.

Whensteppingoffthestage,Iheard

aroundofapplause.

Then,

Ithought,“Thisspeechwas

nosuccess

(不算成功),butthenextonewillbebetter.”

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官方范文：Inoddedandsaid,“Yes.”

ThenI,withgreatcaution,handedthebabycatsonebyonetomyexpectantandexcitedclassmates.Theygentlyheldkittensinturncautiously,asiftheywereholdingthemostdelicateartworkintheworld,pettingthemgentlyandobservingthem.Soon,theschoolbellrang,butallofusturnedadeafeartoitandnoonemovedorwantedtoentertheclassroom,evenMr.Doocy!Heallowedustositthereuntileachstudenthadaturnholdingthecats.Then,hewalkedmetothefrontoftheclassroomandwaitedforthestudentstoeinandsitdown.Stillexcited,myclassmateslikechirpingbirdswereexchangingideasaboutthelovelykittensuntilMr.Doocyhushedthem.

(127words)Witheveryonesittingintheclassroom,Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

Standinginfrontoftheclass,Ireallyhadbutterfliesinmystomach,palmssweaty,notknowingwheretostart.Mr.DoocybegantoasksomequestionsandIbegantotellhowthemothercatlovedandlookedafterherbabies,whatkindof“home”Idesignedforthem,etc.Myclassmateswereallstaringatmeandlisteningattentively.DancingintheireyeswastheadmirationthatIhadneverexpected.Withasurgeofprideandconfidencerisinginsideme,Iraisedmyvoice.Afterthatclass,Iproudlysatamongmyclassmateswithanewsenseofachievement,andmyinteractionwithotherkidsincreased.HowmuchIappreciatedthehelpofMr.Doocyandmylovelycats!Butforthem,IwouldprobablystillbethatinordinatelyshygirlIusedtobe.

(138words)

[265words]默寫版:Inoddedandsaid,“Yes.”

ThenI,withgreatcaution,handedthebabycatsonebyonetomyexpectantandexcitedclassmates.__________________________________________________他們小心翼翼地輪流溫柔地抱著小貓，仿佛手里拿著世界上最精致的藝術(shù)品,pettingthemgentlyandobservingthem.Soon,_________________________________________________學(xué)校的鈴聲響了，但我們都置若罔聞，沒有人動(dòng)，也沒有人想進(jìn)教室,evenMr.Doocy!Heallowedustositthereuntileachstudenthadaturnholdingthecats.Then,hewalkedmetothefrontoftheclassroomandwaitedforthestudentstoeinandsitdown.______________________________________________________________我的同學(xué)們?nèi)匀缓芘d奮，就像嘰嘰喳喳的小鳥一樣，在交流關(guān)于可愛小貓的想法，直到杜西先生讓它們安靜下來.

(127words)Witheveryonesittingintheclassroom,Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

__________________________________________________________________站在全班同學(xué)面前，我真的很緊張