2024屆高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)讀后續(xù)寫：溜冰場(chǎng)的小伙伴（人際紐帶）任務(wù)單學(xué)案

讀后續(xù)寫：溜冰場(chǎng)的小伙伴一．題目ItwasawarmSunday.16-year-oldStellasettleddownwithabook,enjoyingherquietmomentwhenherfriendBogcameoverwithhis6-year-oldsister.“Stella,please!IneedyoutohelptowatchHazel!Ihavealecturetoattendthisafternoon,”Bogbegged.Stellafrowned,notthrilledwiththeideaofbabysittingalittlegirl.However,Bogdidn’tofferheranyotherchoice.HedroppedHazeloffwithStellaandquicklyranawaybeforeshecouldreact.Withaheavysigh,StellaunwillinglyturnedherattentiontoHazel.“Fine,juststaythereanddon’tcauseanytrouble,”shegrumbled（嘟囔）.Tohersurprise,littleHazelsmiledandobedientlysatbythetable,drawingquietlywithoutmakingasinglenoise.Forthenexthour,StellawasquietlyengagedinreadingwithoutbeingdisturbedbyHazel.Gradually,herannoyancedisappearedandshegotaccustomedtothecompanyofHazel.Afterawhile,HazelcautiouslyapproachedStella,holdingapicture.“Look,it’syouandme,”shesaidinalowvoice.Itwasasimpledrawingoftwogirls,handinhand,smiling.Stella’sheartsoftenedasshelookedatthedrawing.ShefeltguiltyabouttreatingHazelimpatiently.Settingherbookaside,Stellasmiledwarmlyandsaid,“Iloveit.Thankyou!”ThenStellabegantojoinHazeltocreateittogether.Justastheywerelostinaworldofcolors,asuddenphoneringingbrokethewarmatmosphere.Itwasaphonecallfromherfriend,remindingheraboutthelong-awaitedplantogoskatingontheicerink（溜冰場(chǎng)）.Stella’sheartsankbecauseshehadforgottenallaboutit.ShewastornbetweenthedesiretogoskatingandherdutytolookafterHazel.Shewasalsoworriedthattakinghertoskatewouldpreventherfromenjoyinggliding（滑）freelyontheice.二．情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)AsStellahesitated,Hazellookedupatherwithhopefuleyes.AsStellahesitated,Hazellookedupatherwithhopefuleyes.心軟答應(yīng)帶上----去往溜冰場(chǎng)的之前、之中、之后HazeladmiringlywatchedStellaandherfriendsglidingontheice.教Hazel溜冰---情感鏈接三．范文：AsStellahesitated，Hazellookedupatherwithhopefuleyes.“CanIcomewithyou?"sheaskedeagerly.“我能和你一起去嗎？”她急切地問。Stella'sheartmeltedagainatthesightofHazel'stwinklingeyesandshecouldn'tbearthethoughtofdisappointingHazel.“Ofcourse,"shesaidsoftlywithawarmsmile.Hazel'sfacelitupwithsheerdelightasshejumpedwithexcitement.Stella看到Hazel閃爍的眼睛，她的心又融化了，一想到讓Hazel失望，她無法忍受?！爱?dāng)然了，”她帶著溫暖的微笑，溫柔地說。Hazel興奮地跳了起來，臉上充滿了純粹的喜悅。Then,theyquicklygatheredthingsandheadedtotheicerink.Uponarriving,StellaintroducedHazeltoherfriends,whowelcomedherwithopenarms.TheypatientlyhelpedHazelputonskatesandencouragedhertofollowthemontotheice.然后，她們迅速收拾好東西，前往溜冰場(chǎng)。一到那里，Stella就把Hazel介紹給她的朋友們，他們張開雙臂歡迎她。他們耐心地幫助Hazel穿上溜冰鞋，并鼓勵(lì)她跟著他們走上冰上。HazeladmiringlywatchedStellaandherfriendsglidingontheice.Thenshetentativelysteppedontotheice.然后她試探性地走上冰面。SensingHazel'sfear,Stellaskatedclosertohelpher.Withpatienceandcare,shegentlyguidedHazelhowtofindbalanceandglideontheice.Stepbystep,theymovedforward.Stella感覺到Hazel的恐懼，溜近一些去幫助她。她以耐心和細(xì)心，溫柔地指導(dǎo)Hazel如何在冰上找到平衡并滑行。她們一步一步地向前移動(dòng)。Stella'sgentleencouragementandsupporthelpedHazelgainconfidence.TheinitialfeargraduallyfadedandgavewaytoexcitementasHazelglidedmoresmoothly.Stella溫和的鼓勵(lì)和支持幫助Hazel獲得了信心。隨著Hazel的平穩(wěn)滑行，最初的恐懼逐漸消散，取而代之的是興奮。Watchingit,Stellafeltasenseoffulfillmentwellingupinsideher.Theyhadafantastictimeontheiceandgraduallyformedabondgoingbeyondbeingtemporarycompanions看著這一幕，Stella感到一種滿足的感覺在她的內(nèi)心涌動(dòng)。她們?cè)诒隙冗^了一段美好的時(shí)光，并逐漸形成了一種紐帶（親密聯(lián)系），不再是暫時(shí)的伙伴而已。四．最終自測(cè)AsStellahesitated，Hazellookedupatherwithhopefuleyes.“我能和你一起去嗎？”她急切地問。Stella看到Hazel閃爍的眼睛，她的心又融化了，一想到讓Hazel失望，她無法忍受?！爱?dāng)然了，”她帶著溫暖的微笑，溫柔地說。Hazel興奮地跳了起來，臉上充滿了純粹的喜悅。然后，她們迅速收拾好東西，前往溜冰場(chǎng)。一到那里，Stella就把Hazel介紹給她的朋友們，他們張開雙臂歡迎她。他們耐心地幫助Hazel穿上溜冰鞋，并鼓勵(lì)她跟著他們走上冰上。HazeladmiringlywatchedStellaandherfriendsglidingontheice.然后她試探性地走上冰面。Stella感覺到Hazel的恐懼，溜近一些去幫助她。她以耐心和細(xì)心，溫柔地指導(dǎo)Hazel如何在冰上找到平衡并滑行。她們一步一步地向前移動(dòng)。Stella溫和的鼓勵(lì)和支持幫助Hazel獲得了信心。隨著Hazel的平穩(wěn)滑行，最初的恐懼逐漸消散，取而代之的是興奮。看著這一幕，Stella感到一種滿足的感覺在她的內(nèi)心涌動(dòng)。她們?cè)诒隙冗^了一段美好的時(shí)光，并逐漸形成了一種紐帶（親密聯(lián)系），不再是暫時(shí)的伙伴而已。五．語料默寫：心融化了______________________________________臉上充滿了純粹的喜悅______________________________________興奮地跳了起來______________________________________收拾好東西______________________________________前往某地______________________________________張開雙臂歡迎她______________________________________一步一步地向前移動(dòng)______________________________________某人溫柔的鼓勵(lì)和支持