成都市二診應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作短文投稿講義

【2021級(jí)成都二診?書(shū)面表達(dá)】你校英文報(bào)正舉行以“ThePowerofSmile”為題的征文比賽，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.自身經(jīng)歷；2.你的感悟。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫(xiě)好。ThePowerofSmile審題體裁：短文（夾敘夾議文）——微笑的力量時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)/一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第一人稱/第三人稱謀篇布局結(jié)構(gòu)：1.事例→觀點(diǎn)；2.觀點(diǎn)→事例；3.觀點(diǎn)→事例→觀點(diǎn)寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)：smile一詞是指微笑這個(gè)表情動(dòng)作還是引申含義？（eg.面對(duì)困難、挫折等不輕易放棄，樂(lè)觀勇敢面對(duì)?)power是一種什么力量？（不能泛泛而談，要具體化）寫(xiě)親身經(jīng)歷時(shí)敘述部分容易寫(xiě)得平淡乏味怎么突破？（添加關(guān)于心理活動(dòng)、表情動(dòng)作等描述）寫(xiě)感悟時(shí)要合情合理、恰如其分，不要言過(guò)其實(shí)（微笑不是萬(wàn)能的）。重難點(diǎn)突破寫(xiě)親身經(jīng)歷時(shí)可以選哪些場(chǎng)景？如何切入？社交場(chǎng)合——結(jié)識(shí)新朋友、參加社交活動(dòng)等（微笑代表友好、開(kāi)放，能緩解尷尬、緊張情緒等，給對(duì)方留下好的印象）；人際關(guān)系——與家人或朋友產(chǎn)生矛盾沖突、心情低落時(shí)（微笑代表寬容、理解等，起到減少矛盾沖突，緩解人際沖突等作用）身處逆境、遭遇挫折時(shí)——比賽或考試失利等；（微笑代表了安慰、鼓勵(lì)，告訴我們要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)勇敢面對(duì)困難、挫折，對(duì)未來(lái)充滿希望等）成長(zhǎng)或成功時(shí)——通過(guò)努力成績(jī)?nèi)〉眠M(jìn)步或認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備比賽取得成功（微笑代表了認(rèn)可、喜悅、自豪、充滿信心等）自己失意卻幫助他人被感謝時(shí)等（微笑代表了喜悅、感激之情，能幫助我們改善心情、振作精神）ApossibleversionTherearetimeswhenasmallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Smileisjustoneofthemandmyrecentexperiencehasdeepenedmyunderstandingofitsmagicalpower.ThePowerofSmileTherearetimeswhenagestureassimpleasasmilecandowonders,lightingupsomeoneinthedarknessandevenhealingthesoul.Overwhelmedbythestressfrommypooracademicperformance,Iwasonthevergeofbreakingdown.Noticingmyfrustration,Shelly,mybestfriendcametoofferafewwordsofcomfortbutIwasinsuchlowspiritsthatIblurtedoutsomesharpwordsandsheranawayweeping.Regrettably,IwastooashamedtoapologizeandIcouldn’tfeelworse,whichthrewmeintoaworldofdarkness.ThemomentIsawherapproachingthenextday,Iloweredmyheadimmediately,tryingtoshunher/avoidherdeliberately.However,shestoppedmeandgavemeahug.WhenIlookedup,Imetasmilingface,assweetasflowersinthespring/asgentleasasummerbreeze.Atthatmoment,allmyanxietyanddepressionmeltedaway.Whenwordsfail,smilespeaks.Usefulexpressionsboostone’smood/cheersb.upestablish/forgeacloserelationship/rapport/tieswithsb.與某人建立親密的關(guān)系(①connectwithsb./bondwithsb.②build/create/forgeaspecialbondwithsb.)strengthenthebondbetween...and...reducefeelingsofanxietyanddepression減少焦慮和抑郁make/leaveagoodfirstimpressiononsb.overcome/getoverembarrassment/awkwardness消除尷尬、局促不安relieve/easetensionandstress緩解緊張和壓力take/drawcomfortfromone’swords從某人的話中得到安慰offerafewwordsofcomfort說(shuō)上幾句安慰的話語(yǔ)comeintoconflictwithsb.(resolveconflictswithsb.)情緒情感描寫(xiě)Iwasontheverge/brinkofbreakingdown.Tearsstreamed/rolleddownmycheeks./Tearswelledupinmyeyes.Iwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.WiththeCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,IamverynervousandinlowspiritsbecauseIamafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.Overcomewith

bitterdisappointment,Icouldn'thelpweepingwithmyfaceburiedinmyhands.Informedofthebadnews,I

was

seizedbyaburstofsadness

andsankontothechair,

myeyeswet.TheinstantIsetmyeyesontheresult,I

feltalumpinmythroat如哽在喉/mythroattightened,

sorrowful

tearsblurringmyvision.Aterriblepangofgriefenvelopingme,Iburstintobittertears,feeling

asif...Ifeltlikeallmyenergyhadbeendrained,feelingemptyanddespaired.Gloomanddepressionclouded/envelopedme,likeablackhole,swallowingmeupfromtheinside.Withsomanyeyesfixedonme,

embarrassmenttakeholdofmesofirmlythatmy

palmsweresweatingandmylegstrembling/my

kneesgotweakStandingontheplatform/stage,Ibecameincreasinglyembarrassedandcouldfeelmyheartbeating/poundingwildly,myfaceburning.安慰、鼓勵(lì)Pullyourselftogether.振作起來(lái)。Don'tletitgetyoudown.Itwillbeoverwithsoon.別為此煩惱。事情很快就會(huì)