書面表達(dá) -2023年暑假初升高英語銜接（新高一適用）

專題14書面表達(dá)

溫故知新自學(xué)鞏固

回顧一書面表達(dá)中考主要題型

1.話題作文此類題型通常會給出一定的提示,如中文提示、英文提示、關(guān)鍵詞提示、要點(diǎn)提示、首句提

示等，要求根據(jù)這些提示寫一篇完整的短文.有時題目會有一個圖表材料，其中包括所有的要點(diǎn)和提示,要求學(xué)

生抓住要點(diǎn)信息，按一定的主題和體裁進(jìn)行寫作.

2.看圖作文看圖作文是通過對圖片的觀察來獲取語言素材的，即根據(jù)圖片呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合所給的漢語

提示或英語提示來描述圖畫的內(nèi)容,使意思連貫、通順,并符合圖意.

3.應(yīng)用作文應(yīng)用作文在人們的日常生活、工作和學(xué)習(xí)中運(yùn)用最為廣泛，因此是近幾年中考高頻書面表達(dá)

題型之一.包括書信（明信片）、電子郵件、日記、便條、通知、啟事（失物啟事、招領(lǐng)啟事、征聘啟事）、發(fā)言

稿等.

回顧二解題方法技巧

1.認(rèn)真審題在完成書面表達(dá)前,考生一定要認(rèn)真閱讀書面表達(dá)的提示要點(diǎn)及要求，精心審題，確定內(nèi)容，明

確文體，做到“五定”，即定格式、定人稱、定時態(tài)、定要點(diǎn)、定關(guān)鍵結(jié)構(gòu)，為行文做好充分的準(zhǔn)備.

2.關(guān)注文化中英文表達(dá)方式有很大的差異，漢式英語無疑會影響書面表達(dá)的效果.因此考生要謹(jǐn)記平時

老師講過的中英語言差異，學(xué)會用英語思維，直接用英語表達(dá),力求語言地道，注意文章連貫,正確運(yùn)用連詞，同

時注意做到邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn).

3.語言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)初中英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)重在正確表達(dá)，考查考生語言的準(zhǔn)確性，因此考生最好使用自己

熟練掌握的詞匯和句型，盡量使用簡單句,力避語言知識錯誤.

4.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮在題目要求考生針對話題自由發(fā)揮時，考生要注意:要緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不可任意表達(dá)，嚴(yán)格

控制字?jǐn)?shù)，做到符合字?jǐn)?shù)要求.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)明確指出字?jǐn)?shù)不符合要求會扣分，故字?jǐn)?shù)不可太少，也并非多多益善，以

免畫蛇添足，得不償失.

5.書寫規(guī)范要做到卷面整潔，書寫規(guī)范，這有利于掃描,也能給閱卷老師一種親近感.若考生字跡潦草，涂

涂改改，不光會影響掃描，也會影響閱卷老師對考生的第一印象,進(jìn)而直接影響最后的評分.

6.復(fù)核全文全文寫完后，考生有必要細(xì)致全面地通看一遍文章，關(guān)注以下細(xì)節(jié):要點(diǎn)有無遺漏;語法是否正

確，包括動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài),名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、所有格，主謂一致,詞語搭配等;語言是否地道流暢,邏輯上有無前后矛盾

之處;書寫是否規(guī)范，包括單詞拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等.

真題引路考點(diǎn)對接

【問題】下面是武漢的中考真題,你能找準(zhǔn)做題的切入點(diǎn)嗎?

你是一名中考生，想成為國際動物救助中心“InternationalAnimalHelpers”(IAH)的一名志愿者，請你用英

文寫一封自薦信.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)能參加周末活動;(2)從家乘地鐵到“中心”約十分鐘;(3)喜愛動物，愿意幫助

它們;(4)懂一點(diǎn)醫(yī)學(xué)知識;(5)補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個人信息和想法.

注意：(1)文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;(2)詞數(shù):60?80;(3)不得逐條翻譯，內(nèi)容要連貫得體;(4)信的開

頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù).

參考詞匯:subwayn.地鐵volunteern.志愿者medicaladj.醫(yī)學(xué)的

DearSir/Madam,

MynameisLiMing.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

答案：

DearSir/Madam,

MynameisLiMing.Pmamiddleschoolstudent,IwishtobeavolunteerfortheInternationalAnimal

Helpers(IAH),Iamwritingtorecommendmyselfaccordingtothefollowingpoints.Firstly,asastudent,Iamable

totakepartintheactivitiesonweekends.AndIfseasyformetogettothecenter,Itonlytakesabout10minutesto

gettherebysubway,Secondly,IloveanimalsandIamwillingtohelpthem,Besides,Iknowalittlebitabout

medicalknowledge,IfIamluckyenoughtobechosen,Iwilltrymybesttohelpanimals,Thankyouforyour

patience.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

第1講求助信

典例解析歸類探秘

例題

假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，己寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume).給外教Ms.Jenkins寫信,

請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format).注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

第一步:認(rèn)真審題，組織要點(diǎn)

體裁:書信話題:求助人稱:第一、二人稱時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時

要點(diǎn):①問候?qū)Ψ?說明寫信目的;②說明求助事由和內(nèi)容;③表達(dá)感激之情.

第二步:遣詞造句，設(shè)計亮點(diǎn)

1.詞匯積累

confused困惑的;confusing令人困惑的;anxious焦急的;difficulty/troublen.困難/麻煩;worryn.焦慮v.困

擾，煩擾;anxietyn.焦慮:confidencen.信心;bothern./v.困擾，煩擾;dosb.afavor幫某人一個忙;have

trouble/difficulty(in)doing做某事有困難;turntosb.forhelp向...求助;facing/befacedwith面對;loseheart失

去信心

2.句式積累

(1)開頭句

①Howareyoudoinglately?Howiseverythinggoingwithyourecently?你近來過得怎么樣？

②IamamiddleschoolstudentandIamwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastroubledme.我是一名中學(xué)

生.我寫信告訴您一個困擾我的問題.

③Imwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.我寫信是想請問您是否能夠幫助我.

④I'msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.很抱歉打擾您,但我有些困

難需要得到您的幫助.

⑤Ihavesomedifficultiesindoingwhichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.

我在做某事方面有困難，這很困擾我.所以我別無選擇只能向您求助.

(2)篇中句

①Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability,I'mgoingtotakeapart-timejob

duringthesummervacation.為了獲得一些社會經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高工作能力,我準(zhǔn)備在暑假做一份兼職.

②Sointerestedinapositioninafbreign-fiindedcompanyamIthatI'vealreadywrittenanapplicationletter

andmyresumeallinEnglish.我對一家外資公司的一個職位非常感興趣，已經(jīng)用英語寫了一份申請信和簡歷.

（3）However,Pmafraidthattheremightbesomegrammarmistakesorinappropriateformatinthematerials

thatIprepare.然而,我怕我準(zhǔn)備的材料里有語法錯誤或者格式不對.

④Wouldyoubesokindastocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheformatoftheapplicationletterandthe

resumeforme?請問您能否幫我修改錯誤，改進(jìn)申請信和簡歷的格式？

⑤Pmeagertogetyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到您及時的幫助.

@1seemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.在這兒，我似乎不能與他人融洽相處.

?Ican'tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedays,andIfailedinthelastexam,whichworriesmealot.這些日子

我不能專心學(xué)習(xí),上次考試我沒有及格，這使我很著急.

⑧Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon'tknowhowithascomeabout.在這所學(xué)校我經(jīng)常感至!J受至！J冷

落，我不知道這是怎么回事.

⑨Idon*tfeelquiteaccustomedtothelifehere.我覺得我沒有完全習(xí)慣這兒的生活.

?Facing/Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面對如止匕多的問題，我不得不向您求

助.

（3）結(jié)尾句

①Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucangivemeahand./Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafhvor.如果您

能幫助我，我會非常感激.

②rdappreciateitalotifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.如果您能考慮我的請求，我將

不勝感激.

第三步:連句成篇，完美譽(yù)寫

【參考范文】

DearMs.Jenkins,

（問候?qū)Ψ?，說明寫信目的）Howareyoudoinglately?Pmwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.

（說明求助內(nèi)容）Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability,Pmgoingtotakea

part-timejobduringthesummervacation.Sointerestedina.positioninaforeign-fundedcompanyamIthatPve

alreadywrittenanapplicationletterandmyresumeallinEnglish.（弓|人問題）However,Pmafraidthattheremight

besomegrammarmistakesorinappropriateformatinthematerialsthatIprepare,（提出請求）Wouldyoubesokind

astocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheformatoftheapplicationletterandtheresumeforme?

（表示感謝）1wouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

思路點(diǎn)撥：

第一步:詢問對方情況，說明寫信目的.

第二步:說明困難，提出請求.應(yīng)注意：（1）向別人征求意見，一定要態(tài)度誠懇，語氣委婉;（2）把握時態(tài):應(yīng)用一

般現(xiàn)在時表明目前自己存在的困難用一般將來時描述自己得到幫助后的情況.

第三步:表達(dá)感謝與期盼之情.

【滿分模板】

Dear...,

Mynameis.Fmwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafhvor.（說明自己身份，提出寫信目的）

Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein（交代自己面臨的困難'Besides,Pmveryupset

that（提出令自己苦惱的問題）.Whafsmore,Idon*tknow（進(jìn)一步說明自己的困

境）.Wouldyoubesokindastosothat（請求對方幫助）？

I'd.appreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand（表達(dá)得到對方幫助的感激）.Pmlookingforwardtoyourearly

reply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【模板范文】

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?IhavebeeninAmericafortwomonths,butfacedwithalotofdifficultiesinlife

andstudy.Ifeelquiteleftout.SoPmwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.

Tobeginwith,Ican'tadapttothewesterndiet,soIfeelhomesickandlonely.Tomakemattersworse,Istill

finditdifficulttofollowthenativespeakersthoughIhavebeenexposedtoEnglishfortenyears.Besides,Pm

afraidtoanswerquestionsinclassforlackofconfidence.Iwaswonderinghowtodealwiththeproblems.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeusefultips.Lookingforwardtoyourearly

reply.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

即學(xué)即練

(邯鄲模擬)假定你是李華，你班上最近轉(zhuǎn)來一位身材肥胖的女生彳艮多同學(xué)都嘲笑她.這讓你感到非常氣憤,

但又無計可施.就此請你用英語寫封郵件給你的網(wǎng)友Tom求助.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:(1)簡略介紹該情況;(2)表達(dá)你

對該事的看法;(3)征求Tom的建議.

注意:⑴詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案：

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyourecently?Ifeelverydepressednowbecausethereisanannoyingthingthat

discouragesme.Ihavenochoicebuttowritetoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.

Thereisanewclassmatewhoisveryfatcomingtomyclass.Manyclassmateslaughatherjustbecauseofher

weight,whichmakesmeangry.Inmyopinion,lookingdownuponthenewcomerisafoolishbehavior,andit

makesthemselveslooklikeafool.Inthelongrun,therelationshipbetweenclassmatesmustbebroken.Unluckily,

Ihavenoideahowtosolvetheproblem.Wouldyoubesokindastogivemesomesuggestions?

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmegetoutofthetrouble.

Yours,

LiHua

驗(yàn)學(xué)

1.假如你是李華，最近與好朋友Lucy吵架了，現(xiàn)在寫郵件給外教MissWang請求幫助.郵件內(nèi)容包含:(1)吵

架的原因;(2)吵架后的心情;(3)請求MissWang給出解決辦法.

注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案:

DearMissWang,

ThereasonwhyIamwritingtoyouisthatIquarreledwithmybestfriendLucyandIneedyourhelpnow.

Thequarreloccurredwhenwewerediscussingwhetherweshouldgoshoppinglastweekend.Becauseofthe

comingexamination,Iinsistedonstudyingatschoolwhilesheopposedstrongly.

Aftertheincident,wehavenotchattedanymore,causingmegreatdepression.IreallyregretwhatIdidandI

havebeenfeelingfrustratedeversince.

Ireallydon'twanttolosethisfriend.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeeffectiveandpracticaladvice?Looking

forwardtoyourreply.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

2.假定你是李華,你的美國好友Alice將在近期來你所在的城市旅游.請給她寫信，告訴她你愿意為她安排

住宿及旅游行程.同時，委托她幫你買一個Coach牌子的小錢包，你打算將其作為生日禮物送給媽媽.

注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案：

DearAlice,

Iamdelightedtohearthatyouwillcometomycityforsightseeing,Iamwritingtotellyoumywillingnessto

makearrangementsforyourtour.

Asforaccommodation,youhavetheoptionofeitherstayinginmyhomeorinahotel,whichIcanreservefor

youinadvanceifyoulike.Besides,Pdliketohelpyouworkoutatravelschedule.Bytheway,couldyoudomea

favorandpurchaseaCoachpurseifitdoesn'tbotheryou?Withmymother'sbirthdayapproaching,Iwishto

presentittoherasabirthdaygift.

Lookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.Ihopeyouwillhavefunhere.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

第2講建議信

典例解析歸類探秘

例題

為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長,某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄.假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯

Jamie,收到一封署名為Worried的求助信.信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾:近日容易發(fā)脾氣，讓正常的學(xué)習(xí)

和生活受到了影響.請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:(1)表示理解并給予安慰;(2)提出建議并說明

理由.

注意:詞數(shù)100左右.

第一步:認(rèn)真審題，組織要點(diǎn)

體裁:書信話題:建議人稱:第二人稱時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時

要點(diǎn):①問候?qū)Ψ?說明寫信目的;②提出建議及理由;③表達(dá)愿望.

第二步:遣詞造句，設(shè)計亮點(diǎn)

1.詞匯積累

suggest/advise/recommendv.建議;conceming/asto/regardingprep.關(guān)于［practical實(shí)用的;askforsb.'s

advice征求某人的建議;givesb.advice/suggestionson在...方面給某人建議;makesomesuggestions提出一

些建議;inmyopinion依我看;expressone'sviews/opinions表達(dá)某人的觀點(diǎn)

2.句式積累

(1)開頭句

①I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.得知你現(xiàn)在過得不好，我很抱歉.

?Actually,everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.Therefore,it

isunnecessarytobeworried.事實(shí)上，每個人都會有一切都不對勁的時候.所以，沒有必要擔(dān)心.

(3)1havelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein..andIwouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions,

我知道你在……方面有困難，因此我想給你提如下一些建議.

④You'veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding...andIlltrytomakesomeuseful/helpful/practical

suggestionshere.關(guān)于……你向我征求建議，在此，我盡量提出一些有用的/有幫助的/實(shí)用的建議.

⑤Whenitcomesto/Asforthefollowingaremysuggestions./mysuggestionsareasfbllows.當(dāng)涉及/關(guān)

于……，我的建議如下.

⑥Pmwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.我寫這封信的目的是給你一些建議/幫助.

⑦Pmgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhow…我非常高興收到你的來信，在信中,關(guān)于如

何……你向我征求建議.

⑧Herearemy/somesuggestions.這是我的/一些建議.

(2)篇中句

①Inmyopinion/AsfarasPmconcemed/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.在我看來,

采取如下行動是明智的.

②Whenitcomesto/AsforIwouldliketosuggest/advise/recommendyoushould…當(dāng)涉及/關(guān)于...,

我建議你應(yīng)該……

(3)1thinkitwouldbeofbenefit/beneficialifyou…我認(rèn)為如果...將會受益.

④Doing...isagood/great/betterchoice.做....是一個好的/棒的/更好的選擇.

⑤Itisalsoagoodidea/alsohelpstodo...,whichcan…做...也不錯，這能....

@Aneffectivesuggestionisthatyou(should)；一個有效的建議是你應(yīng)該...

⑦Youmayaswell/hadbetterdo...你不妨/最好做...

(3)結(jié)尾句

@Iwillbegladifyouwilltakemyadvice/suggestionsintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議我將非常

高興.

②Ihopethatmysuggestions/advicewillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.我希望我的建議對你有益.

(3)1hopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpfiil/usefiil/practical/beneficial,我希望你認(rèn)為我的建議有

幫助/有用/實(shí)用/有益.

第三步:連句成篇，完美譽(yù)寫

【參考范文】

（理解與安慰）I'msorrytoknowthatyou*rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Actually,everyonewill

haveoneofthoseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.Therefore,itisunnecessarytobeworried.

Whatmattersmostistolearnself-controlsothatyoumayavoidsayingordoingsomethingthatyou'llregret.The

followingaremysuggestions.

（提出建議）Tobeginwith,sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsandteachersisagoodchoiceasyoucan

removeyournegativeemotionsbydoingso.Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysical

exercise,whichcanliftyourspirits.Lastbutnotleast,keepanoptimisticattitudetowardslifeandyouwillenjoy

thepleasurelifehasbroughttoyou.（用“祈使句+and+簡單句”說明最后一條建議）

（表達(dá)愿望）1hopeyou'llfindthesesuggestionshelpful!

思路點(diǎn)撥：

第一步:表明寫信原因/陳述事由，簡單自我介紹.

第二步:列出具體建議/先肯定對方優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫需改進(jìn)之處.應(yīng)注意:（1）目的要明確;（2）合情合理，簡明扼要

且具有說服力.

第三步:表達(dá)愿望.

【滿分模板】

Dear,

Pmgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto（弓I出對方需要提建議的主

題）.Pm.../I'mwritingto.../Hereareafewsuggestions（引出作者的建議）.

Tobeginwith,itisagoodideato.Then,italsohelpsto,Besides,doingisalsoa

goodchoice,as.

（可以根據(jù)要求用不同句式提出建議，如下：）

AstoJsuggest（具體到建議的某一方面）,Inaddition,（其他的建議）Im

sure（預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心）.

Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【模板范文】

DearPeter,

PmgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Herearemysuggestions.

Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatomakemoreChinesefriendsinyourdailylife,withwhomyoucanpractice

yourspokenChinese.What'smore,italsohelpstolistentoChinesesongsandwatchChinesemovies,whichcan

enableyoutogainabetterunderstandingofChinese.Besides,keepingadiaryisalsoagoodchoice,asitcan

benefityourwritinglevel.

IhopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficialandmakegreatprogressinChinese.

Yours,

LiHua

即學(xué)即練

假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據(jù)提示給她寫一封信:(1)要交朋友首先

要做一個朋友;(2)要和朋友同甘共苦;患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友;(3)友誼需要時間和投入(effort).

答案：

DearSuRu,

Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeif

youtakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.

Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyou

sharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnot

least,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendship

callsfortimeandeffort.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.

Yours,

LiHua

驗(yàn)學(xué)

1.假如你是高中生李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Tom的班上最近來了一位左腿殘疾的同學(xué)，很多人都嘲笑他,Tom

不知如何應(yīng)對.請你用英語給他寫封信.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:(1)指出正確的立場(接納不完美的一面);(2)給出可行的

建議(多和這位同學(xué)接觸;引導(dǎo)大家的行為).

注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案：

DearTom,

Howareyougoing?Pmsorrytohearthattherearemanystudentsinyourclasswhooftenlaughatthenew

classmate.Althoughhehassomedisabilityonhisleftleg,it*sashameforyourclassmatestolookdownuponhim.

Inmyopinion,weshouldaccepttheimperfectsideofhim.Asasayinggoes,nobodyisperfect.HereIwantto

sharesomeadvicewithyou.

Ononehand,Isuggestyoushouldspendmoretimewalkingandtalkingwithhimandhelpinghimwithhis

study.Ontheotherhand,youshouldtryyourbesttosolvetheunreasonablebehaviorsofotherclassmatesand

persuadethemintogettingonwellwithhim.Iwishmysuggestionscouldhelpyougetoutofthetrouble.

Yours,

LiHua

2.假如你是李華，你所喜愛的校英語選修課《英語電影欣賞》向同學(xué)們征集意見.請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英

文給你校英語教研組寫一封信,內(nèi)容主要包括：(1)說明你對這門英語選修課的喜愛;(2)贊賞該課的優(yōu)點(diǎn);(3)對

該課的內(nèi)容或方式提出兩點(diǎn)建議.

注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案:

DearSirorMadam,

PmLiHua,oneofthestudentswhoattendedthecourseEnglishFilmAppreciationlastterm.Ilikeitvery

muchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons,First,intheclass,weareexposedtodifferentkindsofEnglishfilms,

whichhelpsusimprovebothourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.Equallyattractivearetheamazingstoriesofthe

heroes,becausetheyshowushowapersoncanworkhardtomakeadifference.

Asayoungstudent,Isuggestthattheteacherchoosesomemorefilmsthatappealtousteenagers,thusmaking

thecoursemoreinteresting.Besides,moreactivitiesshouldbeinvolvedsothatwecanhavemorechancesto

practiceourEnglish.

Pdappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Idohopethatthecoursewillbecome

morepopular.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

第3講記人敘事

典例解析歸類探秘

例題

(北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興

趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物，請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括:(1)該人物是誰;(2)該人物的主要貢

獻(xiàn);(3)該人物對你的影響.

第一步:認(rèn)真審題，組織要點(diǎn)

體裁:書信/記敘話題:寫人人稱:第一、三人稱時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時

要點(diǎn):①問候?qū)Ψ?說明寫信目的;②介紹人物貢獻(xiàn),說明其影響;③結(jié)尾.

第二步:遣詞造句，設(shè)計亮點(diǎn)

1.詞匯積累

生平及教育背景:bebomin出生于;lead/livea...life過著...的生活;inone*searly/latefifties在某人50

多歲時;bewelleducated受到良好教育;graduatefrom畢業(yè)于;beadmittedto…被...錄取

經(jīng)歷及事跡：overcome克服;takeanactivepartin/beactivein積極參加;devoteoneselfto致力于;make

greatcontributionsto對...做出貢獻(xiàn);achieveone'sgoal實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的目標(biāo);winthe…prize贏得....獎

他人評價:behonoredas被授予;setagoodexampleto給樹立好榜樣;beconsidered/

regarded/recognized/thoughtofas被認(rèn)為;think/speakhighlyof高度評價;haveagiftfbr/begiftedin有...天

賦

2.句式積累

(1)出生及教育背景

@...wasbomin/intoapoor/richfamily.......出生在一個貧窮的/富裕的家庭.

②Hedoesverywellinscience,andisgoodatartsaswell./Notonlydoeshedowellinscience,butalsoheis

goodatarts.他理科學(xué)得很好，文科也很擅長.

③Whenatcollege,hemajoredinhistory.讀大學(xué)時他主修歷史.

?Showinggreatinterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.對音樂有很大的興趣,

他3歲時就開始學(xué)著彈鋼琴.

⑤Heisgoodatsports,suchasrunning,football,basketballandtabletennis.他酷愛運(yùn)動，例如跑步、足球、

籃球、乒乓球等.

(2)主要事跡

?Havingbrokentheworldrecordandgotthegoldmedal,...becametheidoloftheyouth.打破了世界紀(jì)錄并

獲得金牌,……成了青年人的偶像.

②Heisalwayswillingtohelpothersintrouble,thusbecomingpopularamongus.他總是樂于幫助需要幫助

的人,因此很受大家歡迎.

③Hewasoneofthescientistswhomadegreatcontributionstosociety.他是對社會做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)的科學(xué)家

之一.

④Shehasbeenburyingherselfinmedicalstudy,whichenableshertowintheNobelPrize.她——直埋頭于醫(yī)

學(xué)研究，這使得她獲得諾貝爾獎.

(3)人物評價

①Peoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.人們都贊美他，尊敬他.

②Heishonestandalwaysreadytohelpothers.Thafswhywemadehimmonitor.他彳艮誠實(shí)，而且總是樂于助

人，那就是我們選他當(dāng)班長的原因.

③Shereallycaredaboutotherpeopleandwasanextremelytalentedlistener.她彳艮關(guān)心身邊的人，是個彳艮好的

傾聽者.

④Herdiligencehassetanexampletoothers.她的勤奮為他人樹立了榜樣.

⑤Hewillalwaysberememberedasagreatleader,awiseandwarm-heartedman.他永遠(yuǎn)會作為一個偉大的

領(lǐng)袖，一個有智慧而熱心的人為人們所懷念.

⑥MissZhangissuchagoodteacherthatweallloveherverymuch.張老師這么好，我們都很愛她.

⑦Withalovingcharacter,LiHuaissuchakindandhelpfulpersonaswecannotpraisetoomuch.充滿愛心

的李華是一個善良、樂于助人的人，我們怎么贊揚(yáng)他也不為過.

⑧Fromhersuccess,wecanseethateveryoneshouldbedevotedtohardworkconsistently.從她的成功中我

們可以看出每個人都應(yīng)始終如一地努力工作.

第三步:連句成篇，完美譽(yù)寫

【參考范文】

DearJim,

（問候語+寫信目的）Greattohearfromyou.KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChinesehistory,Ifeelvery

proud.AsformyfavoritefigureinChinesehistory,itmustbeZhangHeng,agreatastronomerandinventor,who

livedfromAD78to139,

（介紹人物貢獻(xiàn)）Duringhislife,hemademanyimportantdiscoveries,includingthefamousseismograph.He

madegreatcontributionstotheprogressofscienceandhumansociety.

（說明影口向）Asisknown,itwasnotalwayseasytomakeothersbelievenewtheories.Whenfirstintroducing

hisseismograph,hegotlaughedat,whereverhewent.However,hedidn'tgiveupbutwentontomakenew

discoveries,Hebelievedinwhathedidevenwhenothersdidn*t,whichiswhatIhavelearntfromhim.

Interestedinknowingmore?Icanfindyousomebooks!Justletmeknow.

Yours,

LiHua

思路點(diǎn)撥：

第一步:問候語十寫信目的.

第二步:介紹人物身份和生平事跡.應(yīng)注意:（1）依據(jù)題干所給的提示信息寫，不得隨意增添或刪減要點(diǎn);（2）

應(yīng)突出人物的性格或經(jīng)歷貢獻(xiàn)等重要信息，不可含混不清.第三步:總結(jié)及發(fā)表感想.

【滿分模板】

Asweallknow,（人物）isconsideredtobeoneofthegreatest（身份）.

Bomintoafhmily（家庭狀況）,heshowedagreatinterestin（興趣愛好）.Hestudied

at（地點(diǎn)）,andthenbecame（人物的現(xiàn)狀）.

Hedevotedhimselfto（事業(yè)名稱）andmadegreatcontributionstosociety.Hewas

awarded（獎項）fbrhisachievement.

【模板范文】

OurmonitorLiHuawashonoredStaroftheCampus.HereissomethingaboutLiHua.

Asastudent,LiHuaworksveryhardathislessons,soheisalwaysoneofthetopstudentsinourclass.He

lovessportssomuchthathemakesitaruletoplayfootballatweekendswithhisfriends.LiHuaisconcerned

aboutthestudentswhoarenotgoodatlessons,sohealwayshelpsthemwiththeirlessonsafterclass.Asamonitor,

LiHuahassuccessfullyorganizedsomevoluntaryactivities.Wevisitedanursinghomelastmonth.Andwepicked

uprubbishintheparknearourschool.Whatwedidwaswarmlywelcomedbypeoplearoundus.ThatiswhyLi

Huaispopularamongourclassmates.

即學(xué)即練

光陰似箭，中學(xué)生活一晃而過，豐富多彩的校園生活一定給你留下了美好而深刻的印象.假設(shè)你是光明中

學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你校校報英語欄目正在征集以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”為題的英語短文,請你根

據(jù)提示寫一篇短文向校報投稿。）介紹活動（組織或參與）的過程;（2）參加活動的感受和收獲.

答案:

Inordertoencouragestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountainclimbingonApril

10th.Hundredsofstudentstookpartinit.

Itwasaniceday.At8a.m.,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.

Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Wewerelike

birdsfromcages,eagertoflytonature.Duringthetrip,wehelpedeachother.Whensomefellbehind,otherswould

comeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinthesunshine,wejumpedandcheered

withjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavy

schoolwork,butalsoitpromotedthefriendshipamongus.

Whatawonderfultimewehad!Ihopetherearemoresuchactivitiesheld.

驗(yàn)學(xué)

L假如你是中學(xué)生李華，某國外中小學(xué)教育雜志向你約稿，請你以“孔子和《論語》(ConfuciusandThe

Analects)”為題寫一篇文章,向西方的學(xué)生讀者簡要介紹孔子和《論語》，要點(diǎn)包括:(1)孔子，生于春秋時代的魯

國，著名的大思想家、大教育家，他的思想至今在中國有著深遠(yuǎn)的影響;(2)《論語》由孔子的弟子們編寫而成,

主要記錄孔子及其弟子們的言行，反映了孔子的思想，是儒家學(xué)派(ConfucianSchool)的經(jīng)典著作之一,全書共

20篇(book)、492章(chapter);。)介紹你最喜歡的一則論語并說明其內(nèi)涵(例如:三人行，必有我?guī)熝?.

注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

答案：

ConfuciusandTheAnalects

Confucius,bominLuStateinSpringandAutumnPeriod,isbothagreatthinkerandaneducator,whoseideas

havebeeninfluencingChinadeeplyandprofoundly.

Consistingof492chaptersfrom20books,TheAnalects,writtenbyhisstudents,showsuswhatConfucius

andhisstudentssaidanddid.ItisoneofthemostclassicalmasterpiecesofConfucianSchoolbecauseitcontainsa

lotofideasofConfucius.

OneofmyfavoritepiecesfromTheAnalectsisthat“asthreemenareworkingtogether,oneofthemisbound

tobegoodenoughtoactasateachern,whichmeansweshouldlearnandbenefitfromeachothersoastomake

greaterprogress.

2.假設(shè)某英文報舉行一次英語作文競賽，主題是講述一個關(guān)于你(或你的朋友)的父母對子女無私的愛的

故事.內(nèi)容主要包括:⑴講述一個體現(xiàn)父母無私的