讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長類-越野跑講義高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

試題呈現(xiàn)：Afewyears

ago,ata

clinic,anelderly

woman

satonawaiting

roomchairbeltingout(引吭高歌）theCeline

Diontune“My

HeartWillGoOn.”Hersweethighpitchedvoiceexplodedintoeverycorner

of

theclinic.

Ihadfunwatchinghowpeoplereacted.Therewasalotof

shifting

inseatsandacoupleofstonysidewaysstares,but

mainlytheyawkwardlyaverted(轉(zhuǎn)移)

theireyesandtriedtopretendthattherewasnothing

special

happening.

Iwasattheclinicwithmy

dad,whowasgettingaroutinebloodtest,whenthewomanfirstarrived.Shesettledinto

theseatdirectlyacrossfrommydad.

Becauseshewassotiny,shewasforcedtositontheedgeofthechair

soherfeetcouldtouchthefloor.Thepositionmadeitseemasthoughshewassittingforward

toengagein

conversation

withmydad.She

smiled

athimandhesmiledback.

I

wasconcernedabouthowmydadwouldreacttothe

invasion

onhisspace.Hewas77yearsoldatthetimeandhadbeenlivingwith

Alzheimer(老年癡呆癥)

forseveralyears.Alzheimer

woulddamageaperson’spatienceandrestraint.Sincehisdiagnosis,privacyandpersonalspacehaddefinitelybeenhisthing,andhehadconsidereditwhollybadmanneredtobring

excessive

attentiontooneself.Moreover,hehadbeguntoabandonanyefforttonodpolitelyorinsertasmileinappropriateplaces.Icouldn’thelpbutthinkthatthismelodicwomanwasplayingwithfire.

Her

singing

begangently,likeaquiethum.IglancedoveratDadtoseehis

response.Hissmilewasgone,andhewasstaringrightather.Shewasstaringback.Icouldn’treadhisexpressioninitially,butitseemedtobesomethinglike

confusion.

Bythetimethewomangottothechorus,“Near,far,whereveryouare...”itwasfulltiltbelting.Shewasmotionless,withhereyesshutandherarmscrossedelegantlyoverherchest.

Paragraph1:NowDadlookedalittleshocked,whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.

Paragraph2:Whenhersongended,mydadlookeddirectlyatherandsaid,“thatwasbeautiful.”

語言積累：1.在診所attheclinic2.一位老婦人anelderlywoman3.在位置上坐下來settle(down)intotheseat4.參與到談話中來engageintheconversation5.得了?。顟B(tài)）livewithadisease6.只好做某事can’thelpbutdo7.玩火playwithfire8.讀懂某人的表情readsb’sexpression9.雙臂優(yōu)雅地交叉在胸前withhisarmscrossedelegantlyoverthechest10.Hisvoiceexplodedintoeverycornerof

下水作文1：NowDadlookedalittleshocked,whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.

Worriedthatthe

woman’ssingingmightbeinterpretedbymyfatherasan

invasion

onhisspaceandfurtherignitehisimpatience,Irosetomyfeet,watchingcautiously.Ononehand,IhopedthathewouldnotoverreactandthatIcouldevendraghimaway.Ontheotherhand,howIwishedthatIcouldsomehowstopthewoman’songoingsinging!Caughtinsuchanembarrassingdilemma,Iwasataloss.However,whathappenedsubsequentlyconfusedmeandevendelightedme.Withnosignsofapatientlivingwith

Alzheimer

breakingout,myfather’sfacesoftenedand

smiles

reappearedonhisface:heseemedtobeenjoyingthewoman’s

singing.112Whenhersongended,mydadstilllookingdirectlyatherandsaid,“thatwasbeautiful.”

Lookingintohiseyes,Icouldclearlyseetherewasnodisapprovalbutlight.Theverythreewordswereansweredwithasweetthankyoufromthewomanandstartedfurther

conversation

betweenthetwoseniors.Theyseemedtohavealotofmontopics,startingwithMyHeartwillGoon,travellingthroughtheirjobsandfamiliesandstoppingattheiragreementtomeetregularlyatthe

clinic.Seeingthetwotalkingdevotedlylikelonglostfriends,Ifeltreallyrelieved.Thechanceencounterwiththe

Celine

Dion

finallyhelpedmefindbackthetrueversionofmyfather.Bothmy

dad

andIlookedforwardtothemeetingwiththesingingwoman.AndIhopedthatthewomandid,too!120

下水文2NowDadlookedalittleshocked,whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.

Hands

quiveringslightly,

Iprayedthatmydadwouldnotblazewithoutrageand

take

somerudeaction.

Nevertheless,tomyrelief,

dad'sbodygentlywaved

to

thesongasifhewaslost

inthemusic.

Arippleofsurprisemingledwith

confusion

surgedthroughme.

It

went

beyond

mywildestdreamsthatmydad,

whowasanaggingpersonsoeasilygetting

furious,

actedsogentlylike

a

sheep.The

sunshine,

likeamberpeepingthroughthecurtains,

kissedeveryinchofthewoman'sskin.Shewasanangel

andmydadwasher

sinceresupporter.Gradually,

I

was

alsomovedbyhervoicewhich

seemingly

raspynotlongbefore.Awarmharmonydescendedonthe

clinic

andwe

were

allfloating

inanoceanofpeace.Whenhersongended,

mydadlookeddirectlyatherandsaid,“thatwasbeautiful.”Atidalwaveof

gaietyoverwhelmedtheelderlywoman,

withpleasuredancingeverycornerofherblossomingface.

"Thankyou,”

sherosetoherfeetandlockedmy

dadinatightembrace.

Therarebutinnocent

smile

inmy

dad'sfacewasengravedinmymindforever.Andnowmydad,

though

with

Alzheimer,listenedattentivelyandgaveenough

respect.

MyheartwasswelledupandIgotalessonfrommydadthatI'llneverforgetintherest

ofmylife.Thatis,

respect

othersand

learn

tobeconsiderate,

an

angleforothers.下水文3NowDadlookedalittleshocked,

whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.

Sneakingapeeratthe

singing

woman,

Icouldsee

herface

lightingupwith

joviality主語一致.

Iopenedmymouthforafraction,

but

thenswallowed

thewords.

Iwasabout

to

say.

Whynotjustlisten?

Ithought,

withtheflameinmyheartblazingviolently.Thesuncastitsamberlikerayoverher,

wrappingherinsheerbliss.Gazingatmyolddad,

spontaneoussmile

blossomedonhisface主語一致.

It

seemed

thathewasamanwithoutAlzheimer.

Forthatsplit

second,

Ithoughtitwasjustamistake.

Minutestickingby

beforewerealizedit,

nearlyanhourflew

byinablinkofeyes重復(fù)表達(dá).

Myfather,

totally

intoxicatedinhervoice,

couldn'thelphummingtoo.

Sucha

jolt

didIgetthatwordsfailedme,

jawrigid.Isthatmy

hottempered

father?

Oh,God!

Ijust

couldn't

imaginethat!Hisvoicepiercedthroughhislonely,

boringlife.Whenhersongended,mydadlookeddirectlyatherandsaid,

“thatwasbeautiful.”Iroundedmyeyesin

outpouringdisbelief,

whichwassoon

substituted

byoverwhelming

ecstasy.

"Thankyou.

Andsodidyou!"

Thetinywomangiggled,

distinctlydelighted.Thefollowingtimesawthemhavingaball,

chatting,

chortlingandsinging,

which

dampened

myheart.

Ifoughttheurgetotears,

sayingtomyself,

"Dadlooksmuch

happierthanbefore.

Thiswomanisanangelgodsenttous.”

When

thetimecametoleave,

I,

flingingthewomanintomyarmsandpeckingherantheforehead,

blurtedout,

"Thankyousomuch!"

andtold

herthewholestory.

Themoonburstthroughthecloud,

spillingits

milkylightoverthe

way

we

backhome,

soakingmeinpurebliss.Thatdayultimatelyunfurleditssplendor,

makingeverythinganimateand

radiant.下水文4NowDadlookedalittleshocked,whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.

Considering

hisimpatienceandextremetempercausedbyAlzheimer,Ifeltasurgeof

worry

andanxietyforhispossibleactionandterribleresults.

However,theelderwomancontinuedsingingandmydad’s

face

wasshowingconfusionagain.Onseeingthis,

Imadeupmymind

notto

interrupt

andkeeptrackofmydad's

response.

Hersweet

highpitchedvoice

lingeredaroundthewholeroom,picturingthehopeandlove

scenery

inourminds.Justatthatmomentmydad'sexpression

softened

and

he

beameda

relieved

smilethatI

hadn't

seen

for

a

longtime.

Acpaniedbythemerrymelody,heshookhisbodyslightlyandshuthiseyes,pletelyimmersedinthemusicworld.

Myhangingheartsank,

too.Whenhersongended,

mydadlookeddirectlyatherandsaid

"thatwasbeautiful"

Thewoman

castasmileathimasa

response,

which

led

toadeepconversation.

Seeingmydad's

eyesshining

dynamically,

Irecalledtheprevious

memorydays

whenhewasstillstrongand

did

notsuffer

fromAlzheimer,

whichblurredmyvision.Justlikethesentence

"MyHeartwillgo

on”,

thoughdad'smemorywasfading

away,I

wouldstoreitandcherishthese

treasures

forever.

Whenit’stimetoleavetheclinic,I

extended

myheartfelt

gratitude

toherforhelping

mydadenjoyhislifeandsherespondedwithanunderstandingsmile.

Impressed

byhersmallact

of

kindness,

Iwas

moved

totearsandfirmly

believed

theemotionlinkexistedinourhearts.參考答案：NowDadlookedalittleshocked,whichmademefeeltherewassomethingwrong.Iwatchedcautiously,waitingforanysign