河南省2024八年級英語下冊Unit10I'vehadthisbikeforthreeyears寫作能力提升練課件新版人教新目標版

UNIT10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyearsUNIT10寫作能力提升練童年是令人難忘的。你一定還保存著你小時候最喜歡的東西吧。請你用英語寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，向大家介紹一下它。內(nèi)容包括：1.它是什么；2.你是如何得到它的，擁有它多久了；3.它對你有什么特別之處。［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。

［遣詞造句］根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點寫出句子。1.

我童年時最喜愛的東西是一只泰迪熊，我已經(jīng)擁有它12年了。Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.

Ihavehaditfor12years

?.Ihavehaditfor12years

123452.

我的奶奶在我三歲生日時把它作為生日禮物送給了我。Mygrandma

gaveittome

?onmythirdbirthdayasabirthdaygift.gaveittome

123453.

我非常喜歡我的泰迪熊，因為它很漂亮，而且它穿的衣服顏色是我最喜愛的。Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sverybeautifuland

dressedinmyfavoritecolor

?.dressedinmyfavoritecolor

123454.

我記得小時候我在晚上很害怕。每天晚上我都和它睡覺，這樣使我感到安全。IrememberwhenIwasyoung，I

wasscaredatnight

?.I

sleptwithit

?everynight.Itcould

makemefeelsafe

?.wasscaredatnight

sleptwithit

makemefeelsafe

123455.

我想對我的泰迪熊表示感謝，我會永遠保存它，以使我想起我的奶奶。Iwantto

saythankstomyteddybear；

?.Iwillkeepitforeverto

remindmeofmygrandma

?.saythankstomyteddybear；

remindmeofmygrandma

12345［巧妙銜接］利用連詞，使句意連貫。文中用because，so等連詞表示因果，使行文流暢。［連句成篇］Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.Ihavehaditfor12years.Mygrandmagaveittomeonmythirdbirthdayasabirthdaygift.Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sbeautifulanddressedinmyfavoritecolor.Ilikeitalsobecausemygrandmamadeitbyherself.Theteddybearhasgivenmemanysweetmemories.IrememberwhenIwasyoung，Iwasscaredatnight.SoIsleptwiththeteddybeareverynight.Itcouldmakemefeelsafe.IfIhadtospendanightawayfrommyhome，Ialwaysbroughtitalongwithme.Iwanttosaythankstomyteddybear.Iwillkeepitforevertoremindmeofmygrandma.人生最快樂的時間是我們的童年。盡管我們已告別童年，但童年時總有那么一件你最愛的并能給你帶來美好回憶的物品值得珍藏。請你以“MyFavoritein

?Childhood”為題寫一篇英語短文，談一談童年你最喜歡的東西。100詞左右。寫作要點：

(1)Whatisit？Canyoudescribeit？(2)Howlonghaveyouhadit？

(3)Howdidyougetit？

(4)Whydoyoulikeitsomuch？MyFavorite

Gift

?

in

Childhood

SinceIwasborn，Ihavereceivedagoodnumberofgifts.

Butthebestoneisabeautifulredwatch，whichmydadgavemewhenIwas10yearsold.

Gift

SinceIwasborn，Ihavereceivedagoodnumberofgifts.

Butthebestoneisabeautifulredwatch，whichmydadgavemewhenIwas10yearsold.

Atthattime，myfamilywerelivingahardlife.Althoughitwasnotexpensive，inordertobuymethegift，mydadmadeeveryefforttoearnmoney.I’vehaditfor4years.IlikeitbecauseeachtimeIseethewatch，Ithinkaboutmygreatdad.Healwaystrieshisbesttosupportourfamilyandheisthegreatestmaninmyheart.

Iwillstudyhard，andIwilltrymybesttorepaymyfamily.

?

Atthattime，myfamilywerelivingahardlife.Althoughitwasnotexpensive，inordertobuymethegift，mydadmadeeveryefforttoearnmoney.I’vehaditfor4years.IlikeitbecauseeachtimeIseethewatch，Ithinkaboutmygre