譯林版高中英語選擇性必修第四冊UNIT3表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案

寫一篇關(guān)于職業(yè)規(guī)劃的短文本單元要求寫一篇關(guān)于職業(yè)規(guī)劃的短文，屬于說明文的寫作范疇。[基本框架]開頭(thebeginning)——引出職業(yè)主體(thebody)——列舉原因結(jié)尾(theending)——提出展望[常用詞塊]1．sharemoredreamcareerswithyou同你分享更多理想的職業(yè)2．keepupdating持續(xù)更新3．havegreatexpectationsforthefuturejob對未來的工作有很大的期望4．enrichingtheirlifeexperience豐富他們的生活閱歷5．liveawell-offlife過上小康生活6．a(chǎn)highlyqualifiedtourguide一位高素質(zhì)的導(dǎo)游[常用語句]★精彩開頭1．Somewanttobedoctors，somewanttobeteachers，andsomewanttobeengineers.有人想當(dāng)醫(yī)生，有人想當(dāng)老師，有人想當(dāng)工程師。2．Mydreamcareeristobeatourguide.我夢想的職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名導(dǎo)游?！镎募丫?．Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummerandwinterholidays.我可以在暑假和寒假里玩得很開心。2．Ihavebeenadmiringtourguideswhotravelworldwide，enjoyingthespectacularscenery，appreciatingdifferentculturesandenrichingtheirlifeexperienceatthesametime.我一直很羨慕環(huán)游世界的導(dǎo)游，他們能欣賞壯觀的風(fēng)景，欣賞不同的文化，同時(shí)豐富他們自己的生活閱歷。★余味結(jié)尾1．Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.總之，我將比以往任何時(shí)候都更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)，為我未來的教學(xué)工作做準(zhǔn)備。2．Therefore，mydreamcannotbefulfilledwithoutindustriousworktopavetheway.因此，沒有辛勤的工作來鋪路，我的夢想就無法實(shí)現(xiàn)。請你以“MyIdealJob(我理想的職業(yè))”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：1．人們有不同的理想職業(yè)；2．我理想的職業(yè)是什么；3．我怎樣為我理想的職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備。[學(xué)生習(xí)作]MyIdealJobIwanttobeateacherinthefuture.Firstly，Ilikechildrenandenjoyplayingwiththem.Secondly，Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummerandwintervacations.Finally，Iwanttoteachstudentsknowledgetoensurethemtoworkbetterinthefuture.Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iwillstudyhardallthetime.Ihavetoimprovemyhandwritingandmakemyselfmoreknowledgeable.Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.點(diǎn)評：1．本篇習(xí)作符合寫作要求，能夠?qū)ψ约何磥砝硐氲穆殬I(yè)進(jìn)行合理描述，原因貼合實(shí)際，內(nèi)容豐富充實(shí)。2．該篇寫作能夠使用firstly，secondly，finally等過渡詞，使得文章更加有條理。3．文章簡單句過多，同時(shí)詞匯方面還應(yīng)該斟酌。[升格作文]MyIdealJobMyidealjobisgoingintoteaching.Firstly，Ilikechildrenverymuch.Secondly，ateacherhastwovacationseachyearandIcanenjoymyselfduringthevacations.Finally，IwanttoteachstudentsallthatIknowsothattheycanworkbetterforourcountryinthefuture.Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iwillstudyhardnotonlyinclass，butalsoindailylife.Iwilltrainmypatience，improvemyhandwriting，andenrichmyknowledge.Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.在成長的過程中，我們總是對未來的職業(yè)充滿憧憬。請以“MyDreamCareer”為題寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你的理想職業(yè)；2．選擇它的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縈yDreamCareerMydreamcareeristobeatourguide.Sincemyearlyage，Ihavebeenadmiringtourguideswhotravelworldwide，enjoyingthespectacularscenery，appreciatingdifferentculturesandenrichingtheirlifeexperienceatthesametime.Besides，thiscareerisfinanciallyrewardingaswellsothatIcanliveawell-offlife.Additionally，Iwillhavemoreopportunitiestomeetpeoplefromallwalksofl