書面表達10篇(重慶名校模擬)-2024年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞(重慶專用)

2024年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞(重慶專用)第四期專題04書面表達10篇(重慶名校模擬)1．（2024·重慶渝中·二模）書籍是人生的導(dǎo)師，擁有改變我們命運的力量。2024年的世界讀書日的主題為“閱讀推動未來”。為了更深入地了解人們的閱讀方式，學(xué)校英語社團在社區(qū)開展了以People’sFavoriteBook-readingWays為主題的調(diào)查，請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英文報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.描述調(diào)查結(jié)果；2.陳述你的讀書方式并說明理由；3.……要求：1.80—120詞；2.短文須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Recently,theschool’sEnglishclubdidasurveyinthecommunityaboutpeople’sfavoritebook-readingways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文1Recently,theschool’sEnglishclubdidasurveyinthecommunityaboutpeople’sfavoritebook-readingways.Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsaboutthem.Nowherearetheresults.Assmartphonesbecomemoreandmorepopular,about52%ofpeoplelikereadingonthephone.20%ofpeoplelikereadingonthecomputer.18%ofpeoplelikelisteningtoe-books.However,only10%ofthemlikereadingapaperbook.Inmyopinion,bothe-booksandpaperbookshaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Iprefere-books,becauseIcanreadbooksonthephoneore-readersnomatterwhereIam.Wecangetinformationfromthelibrarieseasily.AndIthinkwhatweshoulddoistousee-bookswisely.Allinall,everyonehastheirownwayofenjoyingbooks.Nomatterwhatwayofreadingwechoose,weshouldsticktoreadingandenjoyreading.參考范文2Recently,theschool’sEnglishclubdidasurveyinthecommunityaboutpeople’sfavoritebook-readingways.Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsaboutthem.Nowherearetheresults.Asthee-booksbecomemoreandmorepopular,about52%peoplelikereadingonthephonewhile20%takeinterestinreadingoncomputers.Inaddition,thenumberofpeoplewhochoosetolistentoe-booksisalsolarge,whichreaches18%.Only10%ofthemprefertoreadpaperbooks.Personally,Istillenjoythetraditionalwayofreadingpaperbooks.Ilovethefeelofthepagesbetweenmyfingersandthesmelloftheink.Itallowsmetofocusbetterandimmersemyselfinthestory.Moreover,Icaneasilytakenotesonthepages,whichisveryhelpfulformystudy.Inconclusion,whiledifferentpeoplehavedifferentpreferenceswhenitcomestoreading,weshouldallrealizetheimportanceofreadinginourlivesandmakeitagoodhabit.Let’sembracereadingandletitshapeourpromising/brightfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：應(yīng)用“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，突出重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述并評價調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二步，陳述你的選擇并說明理由；第三步，結(jié)尾總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①Inmyopinion按我的觀點②nomatterwhere無論在哪里③sticktodoing堅持做④takeinterestindoing對做……感興趣⑤moreandmore越來越⑥prefertodo寧愿做[高分句型]①Nowherearetheresults.（倒裝句）②Iprefere-books,becauseIcanreadbooksonthephonenomatterwhereIam.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）2．（2024·重慶開州·三模）4月23日是“世界讀書日”，為了倡導(dǎo)全民閱讀，打造“書香校園”，我校英語俱樂部正開展EnjoyReading主題沙龍，請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹你的閱讀情況并闡述閱讀給你帶來的好處。要求：1.文章80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：EnjoyReadingReadinghabitsMaterials:magazines,newspapers,books...Time:for_________minutesSkills:takenotes,shareideasafterreading...…BenefitsMakefriendsOpenyourmindBringyouhappiness…EnjoyreadingApril23rdisWorldBookDay.Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.Asforme,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文EnjoyreadingApril23rdisWorldBookDay.Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.Asforme,everymorning,Ispendfifteenminutesreadingnewspapersforthelatestnews.I’malsofondofnovelsandmagazines.Besides,bookreviewsprovidemewithdifferentideasongreatbooks.Icanalsolearnsomeusefulskillsbyreading,suchastakingnotesandsharingideasafterreading.Whenreading,Ifeelrelaxedandpleased.It’sthebestmomenttomakefriendswithothersinlife.What’smore,readingopensmymindandbringsmehappiness.Throughreading,IcanexperiencewhatIhaven’tseenordonebefore.That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的閱讀情況；第二步，介紹閱讀給自己帶來的好處；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①spendtimedoingsth.花費時間做某事②befondof喜愛③providesb.withsth.給某人提供某物④openmymind打開我的心扉[高分句型]①Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.（被動語態(tài)）②It’sthebestmomenttomakefriendswithothersinlife.（句型：it’s+n.+todosth.）③IcanexperiencewhatIhaven’tseenordonebefore.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）3．（2024·重慶九龍坡·二模）最近，教育部發(fā)文指出，要建設(shè)“和諧有序、豐富活力”的校園，并強調(diào)良好的學(xué)生關(guān)系在其中的重要作用。作為九年級的學(xué)長，請你寫一篇演講稿，向同學(xué)們說明良好學(xué)生關(guān)系的重要性，提出建立良好關(guān)系的具體建議，并號召同學(xué)們一起行動。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80—120詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mydearfriends,todayI’mheretosharesomeofmyideasonbuildinggoodstudentrelationswithyou.Asweallknow,goodrelationsamongstudentsarequiteimportantforus.Theywillhelpuscreateasuitablelearningenvironmentandfindaidwhenweareintrouble.Moreover,goodrelationsallowusmakeprogressandhaveachievementsasawhole.Sincebuildinggoodrelationsisofgreatimportance,howcanwedoit?Ithinkit’simportanttobefriendly.Wecanshareourideaswithourclassmates.Wecanalsogetsomeusefuladvicefromothers.Let’sbuildgoodstudentrelations,andthenwecanstudyhardtogether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明良好學(xué)生關(guān)系的重要性；第二步，提出建立良好關(guān)系的具體建議；第三步，總結(jié)觀點。[亮點詞匯]①Asweallknow眾所周知②makeprogress取得進步③beofgreatimportance非常重要[高分句型]①Theywillhelpuscreateasuitablelearningenvironmentandfindaidwhenweareintrouble.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)4．（2024·重慶永川·一模）幫助別人如夏花之燦爛。在日常生活中，你曾幫助過他人或得到過他人的幫助嗎？近日，某英文雜志社正在開展以“HelpOthersforJoy”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇征文，談?wù)劇爸藶闃贰钡闹匾曰蛞饬x，并結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷描述具體的“助人為樂”的事例及感受。要求：1.80—120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：HelpOthersforJoyimportanceexperienceFeelingIt'simportantto...spreadlove..Youhelpedothers/Othershelpedyou.Date:March5th/...Place:onthewaytoschool/atschool/inthelibrary/...Person:aclassmate/afriend/...Whathappened:first:saw...do/...then:helped...do/spenttime/...finally:solvedtheproblem/...realizethetruemeaningof.../astrongfeelingof.../findjoyinhelpingothers/...HelpOthersforJoy____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文： HelpOthersforJoy

Asweallknow,helpingothersishelpingourselves.However,Ididn’ttrulyunderstandthemeaningofhelpingothersuntilIactuallytookaction.

Oneday,Isawmyfriend,Mike,cryingalone.Later,Ilearnedthathecouldn’tplayvolleyballwell.Withoutthinkingtwice,Idecidedtohelphim.Wepracticedtogether,whetheritwasonhotdaysorrainydays.Throughhardwork,hisskillgreatlyimproved.Istillrememberthesweetsmilehegavemewhenhesucceeded.WheneverIthinkofthesmile,asenseofpriderunsthroughmybody.

Thankstothisexperience,Icometorealizethatwhenhelpingothers,wecanspreadwarmthandmakeourworldabetterplace.So,giveahelpinghandwhenothersaskyouforhelp.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：以“HelpOthersforJoy”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇征文，談?wù)劇爸藶闃贰钡闹匾曰蛞饬x，并結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷描述具體的“助人為樂”的事例及感受。[寫作步驟]第一步，圍繞幫助別人就是幫助自己的主題，記敘幫助他人的具體過程；第二步，描述幫助別人后的感受，可以結(jié)合事件的結(jié)果來寫；第三步，文章總結(jié)，呼吁大家在別人需要幫助的時候能主動伸出援手。[亮點詞匯]①takeaction采取行動②throughhardwork通過努力③asenseofpride自豪感④thanksto...多虧了……[高分句型]①Ididn’ttrulyunderstandthemeaningofhelpingothersuntilIactuallytookaction.(not...until引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)②Thankstothisexperience,Icometorealizethatwhenhelpingothers,wecanspreadwarmthandmakeourworldabetterplace.(賓語從句和時間狀語從句的省略句型)5．（2024·重慶渝中·一模）學(xué)生時代除了有忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)，可敬可愛的老師和同學(xué)，還有豐富的校園活動，是人生最美好、最難以忘懷的時代。請根據(jù)提示，向大家介紹一至兩個你們的校園活動，以及你的感受。要求：1.80—120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：Activities:

Reasons:aballgame

interestingasportsmeeting

meaningfulanartfestival

educationalasingingcompetition

(to)makefriendsascienceandtechnologyfestival

(to)relaxoneself___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Schoollifeisnotjustaboutstudying.Wealsohavemanyexcitingactivitiesthatmakeourschooldaysmemorable.

Oneofmyfavoritesistheannualsportsmeeting.Studentscompeteindifferentsports,andwecheerthemon.It’snotonlymeaningful,butalsoagreatwaytoshowourschoolspiritandsupportourfriends.

Anotherspecialeventistheartfestival.Studentsshowofftheirtalentsinsinging,dancing,painting,andsoon.It’sachancetoappreciateourclassmates’creativityandhavesomefun.What’smore,itisveryeducational.Theseactivitieshelpuslearnnewskills,makefriends,andcreatememoriesthatwilllastalifetime.Theymakeschoollifemorethanjuststudyingandexams.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明要介紹校園活動；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點介紹了一至兩個校園活動；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①memorable難忘的②compete競爭③cheersbon為某人加油④spirit精神⑤showoff炫耀⑥last持續(xù)[高分句型]①Wealsohavemanyexcitingactivitiesthatmakeourschooldaysmemorable.(定語從句)②Theseactivitieshelpuslearnnewskills,makefriends,andcreatememoriesthatwilllastalifetime.(定語從句)6．（2024·重慶綦江·一模）假如你是李華，上周末在網(wǎng)上某服裝店購買了一件毛衣。收到貨后你發(fā)現(xiàn)衣服有問題，與客服(thecustomerserviceagent)理論，其服務(wù)態(tài)度(attitude)不好，而且不予退換。因此你決定給經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信。內(nèi)容包括：1.服裝問題(顏色，尺寸……)；2.服務(wù)問題；3.提出解決方案。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。DearSir,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmyexperienceinyourclothingstore._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearSir,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmyexperienceinyourclothingstore.Iboughtasweatertherelastweekend.WhenIreceivedthesweater,Ifoundthattherewassomethingwrongwithit.First,itscolorisn’tright.Iboughtapurpleone,buttheoneIreceivedisblack.Second,Iorderedamediumsizebutreceivedalargesizeinstead.Third,thesweaterisevenbrokeninsomeplaces.Italkedtothecustomerserviceagentabouttheproblems.Buttomysurprise,notonlywassheimpolite,butsherefusedtochangeit,andsheevensaiditwasmyfault.Iwasdeeplyhurtbyherattitude.So,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Firstofall,you’dbetterimproveyourservicetoyourcustomers.Then,youshouldchangemysweater.Atthesametime,Ihopeyoucansaysorrytome.I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信作文；②時態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過去時”為主；③提示：寫作要點應(yīng)注意題干給出的“投訴商品質(zhì)量問題，以及與客服溝通卻未得到妥善處理”并適當(dāng)補充，使文章內(nèi)容充實。[寫作步驟]第一步，點題，介紹寫這封信的意圖；第二步，根據(jù)題干的要點，描述商品的問題，與客服溝通未能解決問題等信息；第三步，期待這次不好的購物體驗得到妥善解決。[亮點詞匯]①talkto與某人說②firstofall首先[高分句型]①WhenIreceivedthesweater,Ifoundthattherewassomethingwrongwithit.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）②Atthesametime,Ihopeyoucansaysorrytome.（賓語從句）7．（2024·重慶大渡口·二模）初中三年，白駒過隙，轉(zhuǎn)眼畢業(yè)在即。假設(shè)你是九年級A班的李華，你所在的班級計劃舉辦一場告別初中的晚會(afarewellparty)。請你撰寫一份發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勅陙砟愕某砷L和收獲，你對未來的期待，以及你對同學(xué)或老師們的祝福。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithamixoffeelings—joyforthehappydayswe’vespenttogetherandexcitementforthejourneythatliesahead.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithamixoffeelings—joyforthehappydayswe’vespenttogetherandexcitementforthejourneythatliesahead.IstillrememberthefirstdayofGrade7likeitwasyesterday.Iusedtobeafraidofspeakinginpublic.IthoughtIwouldneverlearnEnglishwell.Butnow,IrealizethatIwasjustbeingsilly.Sincethen,IhavetriedtospeakEnglishinpublicmanytimesandmadesomuchprogress.NowIammoreandmoreconfident.EventhoughIamsadthatjuniorhighwillbeover,Iamlookingforwardtonewexperiencesinseniorhighschool.I’vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudy,forIbelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“nopains,nogains.”Atlast,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationtothosestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parentsandfriendsincluded.Thankyouall!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是發(fā)言稿；②時態(tài)：主要時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“即將告別初中時代，我感慨萬千”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點——你的進步、你的期望、你對同學(xué)、老師們的祝福等均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表達“表達我對所有人的感謝”的謝意。[亮點詞匯]①beafraidof害怕②eventhough盡管③madesomuchprogress取得大的進步[高分句型]①IthoughtIwouldneverlearnEnglishwell.(賓語從句）②EventhoughIamsadthatjuniorhighwillbeover,Iamlookingforwardtonewexperiencesinseniorhighschool.（讓步狀語從句）8．（23-24九年級下·重慶江津·期中）4月23日是“世界讀書日”，為了倡導(dǎo)全民閱讀，打造“書香校園”，你校英語俱樂部正開展Enjoyreading主題沙龍，請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹你的閱讀情況并闡述閱讀給你帶來的好處。注意：1.發(fā)言稿中必須包含方框中的提示信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息；3.詞數(shù)：80~120；4.文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Ladiesandgentlemen,April23rdisWorldBookDay.Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.Asforme,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【答案】Ladiesandgentlemen,

April23rdisWorldBookDay.Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.Asforme,everymorning,Ispendfifteenminutesreadingnewspapersforthelatestnews.I’malsofondofnovelsandmagazines.Besides,bookreviewsprovidemewithdifferentideasongreatbooks.Icanalsolearnsomeusefulskillsbyreading,suchastakingnotesandsharingideasafterreading.

Whenreading,Ifeelrelaxedandpleased.It’sthebestmomenttomakefriendswithothersinlife.What’smore,readingopensmymindandbringsmehappiness.Throughreading,IcanexperiencewhatIhaven’tseenordonebefore.

That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的閱讀情況；第二步，介紹閱讀給自己帶來的好處；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①spenddoingsth.花費時間做某事②befondof喜愛③providesb.withsth.提供某人某物④openmymind打開我的心扉[高分句型]①Weareencouragedtoreadgoodbooksthesedays.（運用了被動語態(tài)）②It’sthebestmomenttomakefriendswithothersinlife.（句型：it’s+n.+todosth.）③What’smore,readingopensmymindandbringsmehappiness.（動名詞作主語）④IcanexperiencewhatIhaven’tseenordonebefore.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）9．（2024·重慶沙坪壩·一模）春天來臨，萬物復(fù)蘇，人們紛紛來到戶外感受春天的美好。學(xué)校為了緩解學(xué)生壓力，也發(fā)起了周末“踏青”活動。假如你是學(xué)校英語雜志主編，請你用英文給同學(xué)們發(fā)出活動倡議，內(nèi)容包括：1.號召大家積極加入“踏青”并說明它的好處。2.向大家推薦踏青中有意義的具體活動。3.呼吁大家踏青時綠色出行，愛護環(huán)境，并提出可行的建議。參考信息如下：踏青：haveaspringouting____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Springiscoming,andallflowersareinfullbloom.It’sthebesttimetohaveaspringouting.Wecannotonlyenjoythebeautyofnaturebutalsobreathefreshair.Atthesametime,itcanalsorelieveourstudystress.Solet’sgotohaveaspringouting.Duringthetrip,therearemanyinterestingactivities,suchasflyingakite,goingforapicnic,goingcampingandsoon.However,weshouldtakethetripinenvironmentally-friendlyways.Don’tpickthef