2024年高考英語(yǔ)模擬題：書面表達(dá)12篇(第五期)(江蘇專用)素材

備戰(zhàn)2024年高考英語(yǔ)名校模擬真題速遞（江蘇專用）

第五期

專題08書面表達(dá)12篇

一、書信寫作

1.（2023上?江蘇南通?高三統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以“Roadsafetybeginswithus”

為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.分析道路交通事故的原因；

2.提出改善交通安全的建議。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右（標(biāo)題不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：行人pedestrian電動(dòng)車騎行者e-biker

Roadsafetybeginswithus

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Roadsafetybeginswithus

Hello,everyone!WhatIamgoingtotalkabouttodayis"Roadsafetybeginswithus”.

Withtherapidlygrowingpopulationandeconomy,trafficaccidentsareincreasingtoo.Toavoidroad

accidents,wemustunderstandtheircauses.

First,thewidespreaduseofmobilephonesmakesiteasierforroaduserstobecomedistracted.Besides,

ignoringtrafficrulesalsoincreasestheriskofaccidents.

Toimprovesafety,roadusersmustalwayspayattentiontotheirsurroundingsandbealert,especially

pedestriansande-bikerswhoaremoreexposedtoinjury.Besides,everyonemustobeytrafficrules.

Roadsafetybeginswithus.Thankyou.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生以“Roadsafetybeginswithus”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參加英

語(yǔ)演講比賽，需要分析道路交通事故的原因，并提出改善交通安全的建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

討論：talkabout—>discuss

止匕夕卜：besides—what飛more

注意：payattentionto一takenoticeof

遵守：obey一?fdllow

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Toavoidroadaccidents,wemustunderstandtheircauses.

拓展句：Inorderthatwecanavoidroadaccidents,wemustunderstandtheircauses.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]WhatIamgoingtotalkabouttodayistcRoadsafetybeginswithus”.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)

主語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Toimprovesafety,roadusersmustalwayspayattentiontotheirsurroundingsandbealert,

especiallypedestriansande-bikerswhoaremoreexposedtoinjury.（運(yùn)用了不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)、who引導(dǎo)限制

性定語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2023上?江蘇?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，上周五你校組織了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于保護(hù)方言的重要性的

講座，請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.講座時(shí)間和參加人員；

2.講座的內(nèi)容；

3.活動(dòng)意義。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ProtectingDialects

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

ProtectingDialects

LastFriday,allseniorthreestudentsparticipatedinaspeechconcerningprotectingdialects.

Fromthisspeech,wewereawarethatadialect,carriersoflocalcultureandhistory,wasnotonlybeneficial

totheinheritanceoflocalcultures,butalsocouldmakepeoplefromthesameregionmorecloselyconnected.In

addition,someexpressionsindialectsmadeiteasierandmoreefficientforlocalstocommunicate.

Thisactivityprovedtobeagreatsuccess,makingusunderstandtheimportanceofprotectingdialectsfroma

morecomprehensiveanddeeperangle.Moreimportantly,italsoinspiredustotakerelevantmeasures

immediately.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道上周五你校組織了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于保

護(hù)方言的重要性的講座。其內(nèi)容包括：講座時(shí)間和參加人員、講座的內(nèi)容和活動(dòng)意義。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

意識(shí)至U：aware—conscious

止匕夕卜：Inaddition—?what'smore

重要性：importance-^significance

激勵(lì)：inspire-motivate

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：LastFriday,allseniorthreestudentsparticipatedinaspeechconcerningprotectingdialects.

拓展句：LastFriday,allseniorthreestudentsparticipatedinaspeechconcerningprotectingdialects,which

benefitedthemalot.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Fromthisspeech,wewereawarethatadialect,carriersoflocalcultureandhistory,

wasnotonlybeneficialtotheinheritanceoflocalcultures,butalsocouldmakepeoplefromthesameregionmore

closelyconnected.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型21Thisactivityprovedtobeagreatsuccess,makingusunderstandtheimportanceofprotecting

dialectsfromamorecomprehensiveanddeeperangle.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

3.（2023上?江蘇連云港?高三連云港高中校考階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，你的朋友David發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)們都

有自己愛(ài)好和特長(zhǎng)，而他只會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)，他感到有點(diǎn)小嫉妒，有點(diǎn)不知所措，寫信向你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提

示給他回信：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右；

2.可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelabitjealousofseeingyourclassmateshavingtheirownhobbiesandspecialties

whileyouonlylearn.

Firstofall,pleaserememberthatnothingisasimportantasfocusingonyourstudies.However,Ibelievethereare

manyotherthingsbesidesacademicstoexploreanddiscover.Whynottaketheinitiativetotalktopeople?Your

friendsmayhaveinterestinghobbieswhichmayinspireyou.Additionally,youcouldfindsomethingthatsuits

yourinterestsontheinternetorbyreadingbooks.Usethisasanopportunitytoexploreanduncoverthehidden

potentialthatlieswithinyou.Ibelievethatyou'lleventuallyfindwhatyouarelookingfor.

IhopemysuggestionsarehelpfulandIwishyouthebestofluck.

Yourfriend,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這是一封建議信。要求考生以李華的身份給你的朋友David寫一封信，對(duì)于愛(ài)好和特長(zhǎng)問(wèn)題給

他一些建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

得知：hear一bemadeaware

看見：see一spot

重要的：important一significant

有益的：behelpful一bebeneficial

2.句式拓展

同義句改寫

原句：Ibelievetherearemanyotherthingsbesidesacademicstoexploreanddiscover.

拓展句：Itismybeliefthattherearemanyotherthingsbesidesacademicstoexploreanddiscover.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeelabitjealousofseeingyourclassmateshavingtheirown

hobbiesandspecialtieswhileyouonlylearn.（使用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句、現(xiàn)在分詞作賓補(bǔ)）

【高分句型2】Yourfriendsmayhaveinterestinghobbieswhichmayinspireyou.（使用了which引導(dǎo)限制性

定語(yǔ)從句）

4.（2023上.江蘇鎮(zhèn)江.高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試）假如你是李華，來(lái)自英國(guó)的友好學(xué)校師生一行10人上周末到

你校進(jìn)行交流訪問(wèn)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于接待活動(dòng)的報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)目的；

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；

3.活動(dòng)反響。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AnInter-schoolExchange

【答案】Lastweekend,ourschoolhadthepleasureofwelcomingagroupoftenteachersandstudentsfroma

friendlyschoolintheUK.Theaimofthevisitwastopromoteculturalunderstandingandexchangebetweenour

twoschools.

Onarrival,theyweregivenatourofourcampus,whichincludedavisittoourlibraryandaninsightintoour

classroom-basedactivities.Later,theyattendedaperformanceputonbyourschooFsdramaclub,givingthema

tasteoftraditionalChineseculture.

TheUKguestswereimpressedwiththefriendlinessandhospitalityofourstudentsandstaff,andwereeager

tocontinuetheexchange.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。來(lái)自英國(guó)的友好學(xué)校師生一行10人上周末到校進(jìn)行交流訪問(wèn)，要求

考生為校英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于接待活動(dòng)的報(bào)道。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

目標(biāo)：aim一goal/purpose

促進(jìn)：promoteadvance/facilitate

包含：include—contain

渴望做某事：beeagertodosth.一desiretodosth.

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Later,theyattendedaperformanceputonbyourschool'sdramaclub,givingthematasteoftraditional

Chineseculture.

拓展句：Later,theyattendedaperformancewhichwasputonbyourschool5sdramaclub,givingthematasteof

traditionalChineseculture.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Onarrival,theyweregivenatourofourcampus,whichincludedavisittoourlibraryand

aninsightintoourclassroom-basedactivities.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Later,theyattendedaperformanceputonbyourschool'sdramaclub,givingthematasteof

traditionalChineseculture.（運(yùn)用了過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)和現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)）

5.（2023上?江蘇南通?高三統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）學(xué)校將開設(shè)更多課外活動(dòng)，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)代表班級(jí)向?qū)W

生會(huì)主席David寫信，推薦一項(xiàng)團(tuán)體運(yùn)動(dòng)，并給出理由。內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦項(xiàng)目；

2.推薦理由。

注意:1.詞數(shù)80字左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：extra-curricularactivitieso

2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearDavid,

I'mLihua,fromClass2GradeThree.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

I'mLihua,fromClass2GradeThree.Hearingthatmoreextra-curricularactivitiesaretobeorganized,I'm

writingtorecommendfootball.

Playingfootballenjoysmuchpopularityamongus.Physicallydemandingasitis,itcanhelpuskeepfitand

improveourmentalthinkingsuchasstrategicthinkinganddecision-making.Additionally,itrequiresustowork

togetherasteam,whichpromotessportsmanshiplikefairplay,disciplineandcooperationamongteammembers.

Toconclude,ifsagreatwaytoimproveourhealthandsportsmanship.Hopemysuggestionswillbe

considered.

Yours,

Lihua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將開設(shè)更多課外活動(dòng)，要求考生代表班級(jí)向?qū)W生會(huì)主席David

寫信，推薦一項(xiàng)團(tuán)體運(yùn)動(dòng)，并給出理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

推薦：recommend一suggest

保持健康：keepfit一maintainfitness

提高：improve一enhance

另夕卜：additionally—?furthermore

2.句式拓展

同意句替換

原句：Physicallydemandingasitis,itcanhelpuskeepfitandimproveourmentalthinkingsuchasstrategic

thinkinganddecision-making.

拓展句：Althoughplayingfootballisphysicallydemanding,itcanhelpusstayfitandimproveourmental

thinking,suchasstrategicthinkinganddecision-making.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatmoreextra-curricularactivitiesaretobeorganized,I'mwritingto

recommendfootball.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Additionally,itrequiresustoworktogetherasteam,whichpromotessportsmanshiplikefairplay,

disciplineandcooperationamongteammembers.（which弓|導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

6.（2023上?江蘇連云港?高三校考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回

自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示感謝；

2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；

3.臨別祝愿。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.信的開頭，結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

DearAlex,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearAlex,

Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.Butmeanwhile,Iwanttosendmy

sinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.

IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovingmyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youalso

franklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Additionally,withoutyourhelp,Iwouldnothavebeenatop

studentinEnglishandwouldnothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmy

thankfulnesstoyou.

Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給即將返回自己國(guó)家的朋友Alex寫一封郵件，對(duì)于他經(jīng)常

幫助自己學(xué)習(xí)表示感謝并表達(dá)祝愿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

沮喪的：upset—■distressed/frustrated

誠(chéng)摯的：sincere—>genuine

止匕夕卜：besides—>what'smore

比賽：contest—^-competition

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnothavewon

theEnglishSpeechContest.

拓展句：Additionally,ifithadnotbeenforyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwould

nothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.（運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)

詞作狀語(yǔ)和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnot

havewontheEnglishSpeechContest.（運(yùn)用了含蓄條件句的虛擬語(yǔ)氣）

7.（2023上?江蘇南通?高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試）假如你是李華，你向校報(bào)英文版投稿，介紹當(dāng)下出現(xiàn)的外國(guó)

人學(xué)漢語(yǔ)的熱潮的相關(guān)情況，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹該現(xiàn)象；

2.該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。

要求：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearEditor,

Sincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearEditor,

Iamwritingtoshareaninterestingtrend-anincreasingnumberofforeignersarekeenonlearningthe

Chineselanguage.Thereasonsbehindthisareobvious.

First,asourcountrycontinuestoplayanincreasinglyimportantroleontheworldstage,moreforeigners

realizethatbeingabletocommunicateinChinesecangivethemanadvantage.Also,thecharmofChineseculture,

art,andliteraturehascapturedtheheartsofmanyforeigners.LearningChineseallowsthemtobetterappreciate

andunderstandthosespecialthings.

Personally,Ifirmlybelievethatasthistrendcontinues,itnotonlystrengthensculturalexchangebutalso

bringsnewopportunitiesforinternationalcooperation.

Sincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于信函類應(yīng)用文，要求考生以信函的寫作格式給校報(bào)英文版投稿，介紹當(dāng)下出

現(xiàn)的漢語(yǔ)熱現(xiàn)象，并具體分析其原因。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

越來(lái)越多的：anincreasingnumberoJagrowingnumberof/moreandmore

熱衷于：bekeenon-beeagerfor/beenthusiasticabout

意識(shí)至U：realizethat—beawarethat

允許：allow-permit

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Iamwritingtoshareaninterestingtrend-anincreasingnumberofforeignersarekeenonlearningthe

Chineselanguage.

拓展句：Iamwritingtoshareaninterestingtrendthatanincreasingnumberofforeignersarekeenonlearning

theChineselanguage.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11First,asourcountrycontinuestoplayanincreasinglyimportantroleontheworldstage,

moreforeignersrealizethatbeingabletocommunicateinChinesecangivethemanadvantage.（使用了as弓I導(dǎo)時(shí)

間狀語(yǔ)從句、不定式短語(yǔ)作continues的賓語(yǔ)、that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句、beabletodo結(jié)構(gòu)）

【高分句型21Personally,Ifirmlybelievethatasthistrendcontinues,itnotonlystrengthensculturalexchange

butalsobringsnewopportunitiesforinternationalcooperation.（使用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句、as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從

句、notonly…butalso…連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)）

8.（2023上?江蘇?高三校聯(lián)考開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你的筆友Tom給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他下學(xué)期將到北京的

一所高中做交換生，向你請(qǐng)教如何提升漢語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示關(guān)注；

2.提出建議；

3.期待進(jìn)步。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案］DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoing?KnowingyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthe

followingsuggestions.

Firstofall,tryexposingyourselftosomeChineseprogrammes,thusimprovingyourpronunciationgradually.

Besides,itisadvisabletoreadChinesenewspapers,magazinesornovelsinyoursparetime.Inthisway,youcan

notonlyenlargeyourvocabulary,butalsolearntouseChineseaswenativespeakersdo.Lastbutnotleast,you

shouldbebraveandmakeuseofeveryopportunitytopractisespeakingChinesealoud.

Lookingforwardtoyourprogress.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給筆友Tom寫一封回信，就如何提升漢語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平給他一

些建議，并表達(dá)對(duì)他的期待。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion一advice

止匕夕卜：besides一what飛more

充分禾U用：makeuseof一makethemostof

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity一chance

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：KnowingyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthefollowingsuggestions.

拓展句：BecauseIknowyouwouldliketoimproveyourspokenChinese,Iamofferingyouthefollowing

suggestions.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1JFirstofall,tryexposingyourselftosomeChineseprogrammes,thusimprovingyour

pronunciationgradually.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）

【高分句型2]Inthisway,youcannotonlyenlargeyourvocabulary,butalsolearntouseChineseaswenative

speakersdo.（運(yùn)用了“notonly...butalso…”連接兩個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)以及as引導(dǎo)的方式狀語(yǔ)從句）

9.（2023上?江蘇鎮(zhèn)江?高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友David參加校園戲曲藝術(shù)節(jié)獲

得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng)；

2.肯定他付出的努力；

3.期待他為弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化做出貢獻(xiàn)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：校園戲曲藝術(shù)節(jié)CampusOperaArtFestival

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningtheFirstPrizeintheCampusOpera

ArtFestival.

YoureallydeservethehonorforwhatyouhavedevotedtoChinesetraditionaloperatheseyears.Notonly

haveyouhadagoodknowledgeofChineseculturethroughreadingbooks,butalsoyouhavegainedadeep

insightintotraditionaloperaartbyenteringallkindsofChineseoperacontests.Youhavemadeitahabitto

practiseBeijingOperaonadailybasis,whichisthekeytoyoursuccess.

Congratulationsagain!I'mlookingforwardtoyourmakinggreatercontributionstothepromotionof

Chineseculture.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的祝賀信。要求考生向美國(guó)網(wǎng)友David寫信，祝賀他在校園戲

曲藝術(shù)節(jié)獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)，并肯定他的付出以及期待他為弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化做出貢獻(xiàn)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

真誠(chéng)的：sincere一genuine

真地：really-actually

各種各樣的：allkindsof-avarietyof

做出貢獻(xiàn)：makecontributionsto一contributeto

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningtheFirstPrizeintheCampus

OperaArtFestival.

拓展句：IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyoubecauseyouwontheFirstPrizeintheCampus

OperaArtFestival.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】YoureallydeservethehonorforwhatyouhavedevotedtoChinesetraditionalopera

theseyears.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型21YouhavemadeitahabittopractiseBeijingOperaonadailybasis,whichisthekeytoyour

success.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

10.（2023上?江蘇南京?高三校聯(lián)考期中）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于1月來(lái)你校學(xué)中文，

寫信請(qǐng)你幫忙在學(xué)校附近租一套住房，請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.住房面積和位置；

2.住房的條件；

3.需要提前預(yù)定。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearBob,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearBob,

Ihavefoundaflatofabout25squaremetres,whichisveryclosetotheWenHuaMiddleSchool,ortobe

exact,withintenminutes9ridefromtheschool.

Theflatisfurnishedwithnecessarybasiclivingfacilities,suchasabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Theflat

hasaseparatekitchen,abedroomandabathroom,whichareconvenientforlife.Therentis800yuanpermonth.

Ifyouwouldliketorentit,youneedtobookinadvance,becausethiskindofflatisalwaysingreatdemand.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Bob回封信，告訴他在學(xué)校附近租的一套住房

的相關(guān)情況

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

公寓：flat—apartment

酉己備：befurnishedwith一beequippedwith

提前：inadvance一aheadoftime

需求：demandmeed

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theflatisfurnishedwithnecessarybasiclivingfacilities,suchasabed,asofa,adeskandachair.

拓展句：Theflatisfurnishedwithnecessarybasiclivingfacilities,whichincludeabed,asofa,adeskandachair.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Theflathasaseparatekitchen,abedroomandabathroom,whichareconvenientfor

life.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]Ifyouwouldliketorentit,youneedtobookinadvance,becausethiskindofflatisalwaysin

greatdemand.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）

11.（2023上?江蘇南通?高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你班同學(xué)打算本周六下午在絮瑯湖畔舉辦野

餐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給外教Ella寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)地一起參加并共賞繁瑯湖夜景。內(nèi)容包括：

1.具體安排：

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：

3.期待回復(fù)。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearElla,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearElla,

Giventhatyouholdastrongpassionforoutdooractivities,I'mmorethangladtoexpressmysincere

invitationtoyoutotakepartinthepicnicorganizedbyourclass.

Asplanned,wearesupposedtogatheratourschoolgateat13o'clockthisSaturday.Andthenwewillgoto

theXulangLakebybus,whichisabouthalfanhour'sride.Afterarrivingthere,someofusaregoingtoplay

games.Atthesametime,classmateswhoareinterestedinmusiccansingsongstogether.Afterthat,weplanto

collectrubbishthatisthrownaboutbycarelessvisitorstill16：00.Eachofusshouldbringhisfavoritefoodand

we'dbetterwearsunglassestoprotectusfromthestrongsunlight.Whenthesunsets,wewillsitaroundandhave

awonderfuldinnerbythelake.Oneofthemostappealingactivitiesisthatwecanenjoythecoolwindand

appreciatethebeautifulnightscenealongthebank.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Ella寫信，邀請(qǐng)他參加野餐活動(dòng)并共賞繁瑯湖夜景。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

誠(chéng)摯的：sincere一genuine

開心的：glad-delighted

計(jì)戈：planned一scheduled

美麗的：beautiful^-fascinating

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Eachofusshouldbringhisfavoritefoodandwe'dbetterwearsunglassestoprotectus

fromthestrongsunlight.

拓展句：Eachofusshouldbring