試題導(dǎo)練（十四）

試題導(dǎo)練（十四）試題展示閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihadbeenswimmingpetitivelyforaboutfiveyearsandwasreadytoquit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanattheswimmingpetitionsandourteamcouldn'taffordgooduniforms.However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions".Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon'twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonorableMentions",whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtotellmygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldher,shelookedmeintheeyeandsaid,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn'traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmy groupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedthatIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewthatshewasincludingmeintheracesothatourjourneytothemeetwouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythat,becausethereweren'tninelanes.AsImountedtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereallheretodojustonethingbeatme.Allofasudden,mygrandma'swordsranginmyhead,“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.”“Yes,Grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,"Isaidtomyself.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Paragraph1:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析①人物:I;mygrandma;mycoach;theothergirls②情節(jié)線:③主題:1)面對(duì)困難,永不言棄,才能收獲成功;親人的鼓勵(lì)給予我們勇氣、動(dòng)力和信心。④情感線:readytoquit→tooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”→Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.(confident)→?作者已經(jīng)參加了五年的游泳比賽,準(zhǔn)備退出。然而,奶奶堅(jiān)定的支持和鼓勵(lì)的話語讓作者不得不又去參加游泳比賽。在比賽的那天,作者卻遲到了,沒趕上自己年齡組的游泳賽,教練卻堅(jiān)持讓她和年齡大一點(diǎn)的選手比賽,作者無奈接受了這樣的安排。比賽開始前,想起奶奶的話,信心又被激發(fā)出來。思考:根據(jù)閱讀部分的情感線,在接下來的續(xù)寫部分,作者的情感可能會(huì)有哪些變化?努力比賽→依然只獲得“HonorableMentions”→感到氣餒,徹底退出游泳比賽;奮力拼搏→贏得比賽→堅(jiān)定信心→感悟到奶奶話語的力量。續(xù)寫時(shí),同學(xué)們可以根據(jù)自己推演出來的故事情節(jié),恰當(dāng)體現(xiàn)某種情感變化。細(xì)讀語言①第一段:However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions”.此句表明作者想退出游泳比賽的最主要原因是她這些年在所參加的游泳比賽中都是被授予“榮譽(yù)獎(jiǎng)”。思考:作者已經(jīng)參加了五年的游泳比賽,卻每次都被授予“榮譽(yù)獎(jiǎng)”,她心灰意冷,準(zhǔn)備退出比賽。然而奶奶說的話卻迫使作者又一次走進(jìn)游泳比賽的現(xiàn)場。她會(huì)有怎樣的表現(xiàn)呢?續(xù)寫第二段中的ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme暗示作者的比賽結(jié)果如何呢?她這一次是否會(huì)贏得比賽?②第二段:‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.'此句是作者的奶奶激勵(lì)她時(shí)說的一句話,并且這句話在閱讀部分最后一段再次出現(xiàn)。思考:正是奶奶說的這句話激勵(lì)作者又一次走進(jìn)游泳比賽現(xiàn)場，奶奶說的這句話貫穿全文。在續(xù)寫部分,我們可否再次提及這句話回響在作者耳畔,與上下文之間進(jìn)行較好的呼應(yīng)?③高頻詞:swim,quit, my grandma,Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit是本文的關(guān)鍵詞和句,在閱讀部分反復(fù)出現(xiàn),是串聯(lián)整個(gè)故事發(fā)展脈絡(luò)的重要成分。思考:這些高頻詞和句如果在續(xù)寫部分出現(xiàn),會(huì)如何決定故事的走向呢?作者在此次游泳比賽中表現(xiàn)如何呢?奶奶說的話對(duì)她起到了什么作用呢?她是否還會(huì)考慮退出游泳比賽呢?研讀首句第一段首句:關(guān)鍵詞:harder;首句譯文:撲通一聲!我游得比以前任何時(shí)候都賣力。第二段首句:關(guān)鍵詞:heard,clapsandcheers;首句譯文:就在那時(shí),歡呼聲和掌聲淹沒了我。續(xù)寫部分預(yù)測:第一段內(nèi)容:奶奶激勵(lì)的話促使作者又一次走進(jìn)了游泳比賽現(xiàn)場。比賽過程中,作者充滿了力量,希望不會(huì)辜負(fù)奶奶的期望。在比賽中,她可能會(huì)遇到強(qiáng)勁的對(duì)手,但是奶奶的話語縈繞在她耳畔,激勵(lì)她奮力拼搏,盡自己最大的努力來應(yīng)對(duì)這場游泳比賽。續(xù)寫首段應(yīng)講述作者比賽的經(jīng)過和心理活動(dòng)。第二段內(nèi)容:根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme,可推測,續(xù)寫第二段應(yīng)講述作者獲得了17/18歲年齡組游泳比賽的冠軍,以及作者獲勝后的感想,結(jié)尾應(yīng)給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。微寫作練習(xí)根據(jù)要求和括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示完成下列句子。遭遇打擊局面落后補(bǔ)全句子:①Icouldn't__________________(追上)theotherpetitors,and__________________(遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)落后).②Theotherswimmers__________(超過)meand_________________________(讓我望塵莫及).身心疲憊①擴(kuò)充句子:Halfwaythroughtherace,Ifelttired.Halfwaythroughtherace,Ialreadybeganto_______________(感到非常疲憊).②轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá):Theintensepetitioncausedmetobreakdown.Theintensepetitiondroveme_________________________(瀕臨崩潰).堅(jiān)持不懈激發(fā)動(dòng)力轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá):Mygrandma'swordssoundedinmyear.①Allofasudden,mygrandma'swords____________________(回響在我耳邊).②Atthatmoment,thepowerfulwordsofmygrandma_________________________(又一次回響在我耳邊).全力以赴補(bǔ)全句子:①Iwilledmyarmsandlegstokeepswimmingand used_________________________(最后一點(diǎn)力氣)toswimthelast50meters.②SoenergeticwasIthatI____________________(游得比以前更快了).Withmyarmsmovingsmoothly,Icutthroughthewater____________________(像飛魚一樣).得償所愿擊敗勁敵①補(bǔ)全句子:AssoonasItouchedthewall,Ilookedupatthescreen,_______________(焦急地等待)theresult.②擴(kuò)充句子:Icouldn'tbelievetheresult.I_______________(幾乎不敢相信)theresult.③轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá):Thoughitwasanarrowvictory,Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday._________________________(雖然險(xiǎn)勝),Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday.自我突破補(bǔ)全句子:①IrealizedI_________________________(創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)新的個(gè)人最好成績)itwasabrandnewrecord.②Myconfidence__________(恢復(fù))andIspenttherestoftheeventgluedtomyseat,tooexcitedtolookanybodyintheeye,andit_______________(最終成為)themostfortablemeetforme.登臺(tái)領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)①補(bǔ)全句子:_________________________(眼淚順著我的臉頰流下來)asIstoodonthewinner'spodium.②擴(kuò)充句子:Iacceptedtheawardtoapplause.Iacceptedtheawardto____________(雷鳴般的)applause.銜接連貫合并句子:1.IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.Thegirlssoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.①IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.________(連詞),theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.②IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls,__________________________(定語從句). 2.Istoodonthewinner'spodium.Iwepttearsofjoy.①Istoodonthewinner'spodium_________(連詞)wepttearsofjoy.Istoodonthewinner'spodium,_______________________(動(dòng)詞ing形式).小試身手請(qǐng)你將自己的習(xí)作寫在題目后的橫線上吧!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：遭遇打擊1.①catchupwith;fellfarbehind②passedby;leftmeinthedust2.①feelextremelytired ②totheedgeofbreakdown 堅(jiān)持不懈1.①ranginmyhead/cars②echoedagaininmyears2.①everylastbitofstrength②swamfasterthanever;likeaflyingfish得償所愿1.①waitinganxiouslyfor ②couldhardlybelieve ③Narrowvictoryasitwas2.①setanewpersonalbest②wasrebuilt/restored;endedupbeing3.①Tearsrandownmyface②thunderous銜接連貫1.①However②whosoonspedupandnarrowedthegap2.①and ②weepingtearsofjoy 小試身手Onepossibleversion:SPLASH!IswamharderthanIhadeverswumbefore.Afterthefirstflipturn,IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.However,theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.Halfwaythroughtherace,thegirltomyleftalmostdrewlevelwithme.whileIalreadybegantofee