2025屆新高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)-如何給作文潤色

PolishourwritingHowtoPolishyourwriting！2025屆新高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)如何給作文潤色你校即將舉辦以“ChallengeYourself”為主題的演講比賽，請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.對挑戰(zhàn)的看法；2.相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3.應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Passage1Mostpeopleonlyconsiderchallengesharmful.ButIthinktheyarealsoveryimportanttous.Twoyearsago,IwasquitepoorinEnglish.However,encouragedbymyteacher,Idecidedtochallengemyselfandmakeimprovements.Withgreatdetermination,Imadeeffortstostudyeverysubject.Finally,myhardworkpaidoffandIevenmadesomenewfriends.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Don’tfacethemnegativelyorjustescapefromdifficulties.Mostimportantly,believeinourselvesandnevergiveup.Alwaysremembertokeepconfidentandpersistentwhenyouseeksuccess.Passage2Mostpeopleonlyconsiderchallengesasdemandingtasksthatcauseanxiety,stressandevenfear.ButIthinktheyarealsogreatopportunitiestomakeprogress.Twoyearsago,IwasquitepoorinEnglish.However,encouragedbymyteacher,Idecidedtochallengemyselfandmakeimprovements.Withgreatdetermination,Ikeptpracticingformonths.

Finally,myhardworkpaidoffandIevenwonaprizeinanEnglishspeakingcontest.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Thisgivesuscouragetogetstarted.

Mostimportantly,believeinourselvesandnevergiveup.Confidenceandpersistencealwaysmattersonourwaytosuccess.Activity1ReadandJudgeWhichpassageisbetter?Why?Activity2CompareandAnalyzeWhyispassage2better?

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2.Mostpeopleonlyconsiderchallengesasdemandingtasksthatbringanxiety,stressandevenfear.ButIthinktheyarealsogreatopportunitiestomakeprogress.specificWhyispassage2better?

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2.Twoyearsago,IwasquitepoorinEnglish...Withgreatdetermination,Ikeptpracticingformonths.Finally,myhardworkpaidoffandIevenwonaprizeinanEnglishspeakingcontest.morerelevantActivity2CompareandAnalyzeWhypassage2isbetter?

Paragraph41.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Don’tfacethemnegatively

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escapefromdifficulties.Mostimportantly,believeinourselvesandnevergiveup.Alwaysremembertokeepconfidentandpersistentwhenyouseeksuccess.repetitive

2.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Thisgivesuscouragetogetstarted.Mostimportantly,believeinourselvesandnevergiveup.Confidenceandpersistencealwaysmattersonourwaytosuccess.concise(簡練)Activity2CompareandAnalyzeWhatconclusioncanwemakeabout“適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)”whenwriting?Theaddeddetailsshouldberelevant,specificandconcise.要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)寫原則：切題、具體、精煉，杜絕與主題相關(guān)度不高、太寬泛空洞或重復(fù)啰嗦的內(nèi)容。Activity2CompareandAnalyzeHow？Activity3ExploreandFindout

1.Howtobespecific?Challengesaregood.(1)Challengesarebeneficialandinspiring.(2)Challengesaregood.Forexample,theyprovidechancesforustoimproveourknowledgeandskills.(3)Challengesaregood.Withoutthem,wecouldhardlymakeanyprogress.usespecificexpressionprovideevidence(example...)giveexplanation(reason,influence...)Activity3ExploreandFindout2.Howtoberelevant?Twoyearsago,IwasquitepoorinEnglish.However,encouragedbymyteacher,Idecidedtochallengemyselfandmakeimprovements.Withgreatdetermination,Imadeeffortstostudyeverysubject.Finally,myhardworkpaidoffandIevenmadesomenewfriends.focusonthesubjectkeptpracticingformonthswonaprizeinanEnglishspeakingcontest.Whatdoesrelevantmean?[closelyconnectedwiththesubjectyouarediscussingorthesituationyouarethinkingabout]Whydoweadddetails?Tosupportourideas--servethewritingpurpose.servethewritingpurposeActivity3ExploreandFindout3.Howtobeconcise?(1)Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Don’tfacethemnegativelyorjustescapefromdifficulties.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively.Totacklechallenges,myfirstadviceistofacethempositively,whichwillprovidecourageforyoutogetstarted.avoidrepetitiveinformationActivity3ExploreandFindout3.Howtobeconcise?avoidrepetitiveinformationuseelliptical(省略)

sentences,non-predicateverbs(非謂語v)(2)Whenwefacechallenges,weshouldbebraveandoptimistic.Whenfacingchallenges,weshouldbebraveandoptimistic.Facingchallenges,weshouldbebraveandoptimistic.Activity3ExploreandFindout3.Howtobeconcise?avoidrepetitiveinformationuseelliptical(省略)

sentences,non-predicateverbs(非謂語v)useattributiveclausesorpronouns(3)Youcanalsoturntoothersforadvice.Turningtoothersforadvicemayhelpyoufindabettersolutiontotheproblems.Youcanalsoturntoothersforadvice.Thismayhelpyoufindabettersolutiontotheproblems.Youcanalsoturntoothersforadvice,whichmayhelpyoufindabettersolutiontotheproblems.

Activity5SummarizeAddingdetailsbespecificberelevantbeconciseusespecificexpressionprovideevidence(example...)giveexplanation(reason,influence...)focusonthesubjectservethewritingpurposeavoidrepetitiveinformationuseellipticalsentence,non-predicateverb,attributiveclause,pronoun......Activity4IdentifyandPractiseIdentifytheproblemsofthesentencesanddiscusshowtoimprovethem.1.OnceImetachallenge.Eventually,Iworkedhardandovercameit.2.Therearemanywaystodealwithchallenges.Mostimportantly,youshouldexerciseregularlytokeephealthy.3.Lifeisfullofchallenges.Youcanfindchallengeseverywhereandnobodycanavoidthemnomatterwheretheyare.

toogeneralnotrelevantrepetitiveActivity6PolishYou