2024年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)類(lèi)型模版與能力拔尖（全國(guó)）04.建議信（原卷版）

備戰(zhàn)2024年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)類(lèi)型模版與能力拔尖必備04建議信【真題示例】（2023·江蘇鎮(zhèn)江·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校整理出一塊空地，將用于拓寬學(xué)生活動(dòng)和實(shí)踐的空間。校英語(yǔ)報(bào)登載了校方初擬的兩種方案，就這塊空地建設(shè)文化角還是菜園征求意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示給校報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信談?wù)勀愕南敕ê徒ㄗh。ACultureCornerAVegetableGarden●displayartworks●shareideasandfeelings●holdactivities(fashionshows,…)●developasenseofbeauty●…●workwithclassmates●learnfarmingskills●harvestvegetables(tomatoes,…)●formthehabitoflabour(勞動(dòng))●…要求：1.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括一種方案的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.對(duì)你所選擇的方案說(shuō)明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議；3.文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,I’mhappytohearthatthereisanemptyareainourschoolforbuildingaCultureCorneroraVegetableGarden.Inmyopinion,it’sbetterto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mhappytohearthatthereisanemptyareainourschoolforbuildingaCultureCorneroraVegetableGarden.Inmyopinion,it’sbettertobuildavegetablegarden.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstofall,ourcountryadvocateslaboreducation.Second,studentscanworkwiththeirclassmatesinthegardentostrengthentheirfriendship.Third,workinginthegardencanhelpstudentslearnfarmingskills.Fourth,agardenbuiltontheemptylandcanharvestalotofvegetables,suchastomatoes,potatoes,carrotsandsoon,whichcansavethecostoffoodfortheschool.Lastbutnotleast,studentscanformthehabitoflaborbyplantingvegetables.Thisisnotonlygoodfortheschool,butalsogoodforthegrowthofstudents.Yours,LiHua【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)表格選擇一種方案；第二步，就選擇的方案結(jié)合提示信息介紹下你的想法和建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事③lastbutnotleast最后也是最重要的[高分句型]Fourth,agardenbuiltonemptylandcanharvestalotofvegetables,suchastomatoes,potatoes,carrotsandsoon,whichcansavethecostoffoodfortheschool.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【必背句式】第一部分：說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的套語(yǔ)：1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問(wèn)題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會(huì)有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)你打算下個(gè)月來(lái)參觀中國(guó)十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對(duì)你是有幫助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顧客）.我給你寫(xiě)信是想說(shuō)明一下我對(duì)于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢問(wèn)我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢問(wèn)我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，我寫(xiě)信給你一些建議。第二部分：介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因套語(yǔ)：(1)它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開(kāi)始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午，我們會(huì)一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)順便說(shuō)一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車(chē)，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂(lè)部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，還是一名英語(yǔ)老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠(chéng)地邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語(yǔ)，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保證你在那里會(huì)過(guò)得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建議套語(yǔ)：我建議……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)套語(yǔ)：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記住：有志者事竟成。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。阂粋€(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（給你）最美好的祝愿！4.

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無(wú)論如何，我希望這些建議對(duì)你有所幫助。我會(huì)非常高興看到情況改善。5.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無(wú)論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真誠(chéng)的希望我的建議對(duì)你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請(qǐng)告訴我?！灸０媸纠磕０澧貲ear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建議的內(nèi)容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對(duì)方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具體到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行為的信心和決心).Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua【突破策略】1.建議信寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)建議信的寫(xiě)作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。2.寫(xiě)作方法①首段：a.簡(jiǎn)介自己，不要羅嗦；b.說(shuō)明目的，注意語(yǔ)氣。②主體：a.提出具體建議；b.首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫(xiě)改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則會(huì)變成投訴信；c.經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對(duì)方感受，時(shí)時(shí)提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫(xiě)成議論文。=3\*GB3③尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，使對(duì)方易于接受。3.寫(xiě)作流程圖說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因提出建議提出希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)【寫(xiě)作演練】1．假如你叫李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom將要來(lái)你校學(xué)習(xí)一段時(shí)間，他來(lái)信向你征求意見(jiàn)，請(qǐng)就此寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容：①表明你對(duì)Tom來(lái)你校學(xué)習(xí)的態(tài)度；②對(duì)他來(lái)你校學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)可以做什么和不該做什么提出你的建議。注意：1）文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)人名，校名和地名；2）詞數(shù)：不低于80詞；3）文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)正確。DearTom,I’mverygladthatyouwillcometostudyinourschoolforsometime._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你叫王明，你的好朋友李華寫(xiě)信告訴你說(shuō)他熱愛(ài)科學(xué)，夢(mèng)想成為一名科學(xué)家，但他不知道該怎么做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，提出你的一些建議。建議包括：上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，努力學(xué)習(xí)各門(mén)功課，多閱讀科學(xué)書(shū)籍，多向別人請(qǐng)教……要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：subject，science，question，keeponDearLiHua,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwanttobeascientistwhenyougrowup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangMing3．假如你是李明，你的好友Mike寫(xiě)信告訴你，最近他和父母難以溝通，他為此很傷心。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，并建議他如何與父母相處。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．表示對(duì)Mike的理解。2．介紹自己曾經(jīng)的苦惱：（1）父母不準(zhǔn)在愛(ài)好上花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間。（2）不允許和朋友逛街超過(guò)晚上九點(diǎn)。3．給Mike提供一些與父母相處的建議。寫(xiě)作要求：1．不得使用真實(shí)的校名和姓名。2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3．字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精煉，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。4．至少80詞。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李輝，你的好朋友李華來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你學(xué)英語(yǔ)的方法。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封回信，并給她提一些學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.開(kāi)頭：點(diǎn)題表達(dá)理解和安慰；2.中間：提出觀點(diǎn)和建議；3.結(jié)尾：表達(dá)期待。注

意：1.詞數(shù)80—100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLiHua,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHui5．勞動(dòng)教育（laboureducation）在社會(huì)發(fā)展中起著重要作用。為此，上周你們班召開(kāi)了班會(huì)。假如你是李平，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter對(duì)此班會(huì)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)信給Peter，介紹一下班會(huì)內(nèi)容，并說(shuō)一說(shuō)你對(duì)校內(nèi)開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育活動(dòng)的建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.班會(huì)的主題：勞動(dòng)教育的重要性。2.班會(huì)上同學(xué)們討論了勞動(dòng)教育的意義：（1）以勞健體；（2）以勞增智；（3）以勞樹(shù)德；等等。3.說(shuō)一說(shuō)你對(duì)校內(nèi)開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育活動(dòng)的建議。寫(xiě)作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________