Unit5IntothewildWriting課件高中英語

Unit

5

Into

the

wild

Writing寫作技法寫一篇動物簡介Ⅰ.技能指導1.寫作指南：

此類文章以說明為主要表達方式，用來介紹動物的類屬、生活習性、生存狀態(tài)、外貌特征等，也可以是某種動物的生存現(xiàn)狀或者歷史的描述。2.常用表達：（1）開頭One

of

my

favourite

wild

animals

is...They

live

in...我最喜歡的野生動物之一是……它們生活在……Because

of...,

the

number

of...

is

on

the

decline.由于……，……的數(shù)量在下降。We

have

realized

that

the

habitats

of

wild

animals...They

are

in

great

danger.我們已經意識到野生動物的棲息地……它們處于極大的危險之中。A

variety

of

animals

have

been

killed

for

their

meat,

skins

and

fur.為了獲得肉、皮和毛，人們殺害了各種各樣的動物。（2）主體...are

very

cute

animals,

whose

fur

is...……是非常可愛的動物，它們的毛是……Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

body.它們的尾巴和身子一樣長。They

mainly

feed

on...它們主要以……為食。（3）結尾Protecting...can

not

only...，

but

also...保護……不但能……，而且能……As

for

me,

I

have

volunteered

to...Meanwhile,

the

government

should

take

effective

measures

to

protect

endangered

animals.對我來說，我已經志愿做……同時，政府應該采取有效的措施來保護瀕危動物。Therefore,

we

should

seek

for

solutions

to

protecting

wild

animals.因此，我們應該尋求保護野生動物的解決方案。Ⅱ.情景再現(xiàn)

寫一篇關于瀕危動物——金絲猴（golden

monkey）的短文。要點如下：

1.棲息地：主要在中國；

2.外貌：金黃色，有點灰；尾巴和身體一樣長；

3.生活環(huán)境：海拔1,500—3,000米的森林；

4.生活習性：群居，吃野果、樹葉等；

5.它們的數(shù)量在減少，呼吁人們停止獵殺金絲猴。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___【審題謀篇】【詞匯儲備】1.

____n.軟毛fur2.

_____adj.灰色的grey3.

____n.尾巴tail4.

_____v.獵取hunt5.

________以……為食feed

on【句型運用】1.

金絲猴主要生活在中國。___________________________________Golden

monkeys

mainly

live

in

China.2.

金絲猴受到中國政府的保護。_____________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.3.

它們的毛是金黃色的，略帶灰色。________________________________Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.4.

它們的尾巴和身體一樣長。___________________________________Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.5.

雄性金絲猴又大又壯。__________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong.6.

雌性的要小得多。________________________________The

female

ones

are

much

smaller.7.

金絲猴生活在海拔1,500—3,000米的森林中。______________________________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.8.

它們喜歡群居生活。_______________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups.9.

它們以野果、樹葉等為食。____________________________________________They

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.10.

但是現(xiàn)在它們的數(shù)目越來越少。________________________________________________But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.11.

我們希望人們停止獵殺金絲猴。__________________________________________________We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.【句式升級】1.

用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語合并句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.2.

用while合并句5和句6。______________________________________________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.3.

用and合并句8和句9。_______________________________________________________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.【連句成篇】

將以上句子連成一篇語言流暢、用詞準確、邏輯嚴密的短文。The

golden

monkeys

Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.

Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.

Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.

The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.

Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.

They

like

living

in

family

groups

and