應(yīng)用文類型5：告知信

告知信【試題探究】

假定你是晨光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動(dòng),你的英國(guó)朋友Chris很想了解該活動(dòng)。你于當(dāng)晚給Chris寫一封信,介紹相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:

1.成人禮活動(dòng)內(nèi)容(成長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)滴回顧等);

2.對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受;

3對(duì)自己未來(lái)的展望。注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。參考詞匯:成人禮thecoming-of-ageceremonyStep

1:審題布局人稱第一人稱為主,第二人稱為輔時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),一般過去時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.介紹成人禮活動(dòng)內(nèi)容2.成人禮活動(dòng)感受Step

2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:這次的成人禮儀式深深地打動(dòng)了我們,并且我們從中意識(shí)到了責(zé)任感始終伴隨著我們的成長(zhǎng)過程。一般表達(dá):Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremonyandwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowthfromit.句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句)Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,________________________________________________________________________________________.fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth要點(diǎn)2:我明白了成長(zhǎng)的意義。一般表達(dá):________________________________________.句式升級(jí)(倒裝句)這就是我對(duì)成長(zhǎng)的理解。________________________________________IhaveunderstoodthemeaningofgrowingupSuchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Step

3:銜接成篇DearChris,

I’msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youshowedgreatinterestinthecoming-of-ageceremonyheldinourschool.Thefollowingisabriefintroductiontotheceremony.

TheceremonywasscheduledonJune8,duringwhichwereviewedthepastevents.Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth.Wearedeterminedtofollowtheexamplesofourexcellentschoolmatesandmakeourselvesusefultothewholesociety.Suchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Whataboutyours?

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,說明目的、原因等①Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium,I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitementandinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.很高興得知一場(chǎng)重要的排球比賽將在我們學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)舉行,我寫信是為了表達(dá)我的興奮,并告訴你一些相關(guān)的信息。②I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouthataninternationalculturalfestivalistobeheldinmycity.我非常高興地告知你們國(guó)際文化節(jié)將在我市舉行。2.篇中——詳細(xì)介紹,告知具體信息①Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2p.m.andlastforroughly3hours.首先,比賽將于下午兩點(diǎn)開始,持續(xù)大約3個(gè)小時(shí)。②ThenyouwillbetakentotheTeaRoom,whereyoucantastesomefamousChineseteaandwatchperformancesofteaart.有人將你帶至茶室,品嘗中國(guó)名茶、觀看茶藝表演。3.結(jié)尾——作總結(jié),盼回復(fù)①Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.我非常希望這段經(jīng)歷是有益的,將學(xué)習(xí)和樂趣完美地結(jié)合在一起。②Itwouldbeniceifyoucouldprovideabitmoreinformationonthearrangementsofthemeeting.你要能提供更多有關(guān)此次會(huì)議安排的信息,那將再好不過了。【拓展訓(xùn)練】

假定你是李華,你因故不能參加下周二的音樂會(huì),想把票轉(zhuǎn)贈(zèng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友John。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件告知相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:

1.你不能參加音樂會(huì)的理由;

2.音樂會(huì)的基本情況;

3.如何獲取門票。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJohn,

How’severythinggoing?I’vegotthechancetoenjoyaconcert.However,it’saregretthatIhavetogotomeetanhonoredforeignfriendthen.Thus,you’rethefirstpersonIwanttopresenttheticket.

TheconcertwillbeheldinthecityCulturalPlazaat7p.m.nextFriday,lastingtwohours.Somefamousmusiciansfromhomeandabroadwillbeinvitedtoshowtheir