2025屆高考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí) 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)之動(dòng)作鏈描寫(xiě)九種

高考續(xù)寫(xiě)之動(dòng)作鏈描寫(xiě)1.獵人發(fā)現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)的野獸動(dòng)作鏈：感受到威脅→確認(rèn)野獸的位置→準(zhǔn)備武器→評(píng)估逃跑或戰(zhàn)斗的可能→做出決定→行動(dòng)以確保安全例子：他感覺(jué)到背后有一陣寒意→慢慢轉(zhuǎn)身，發(fā)現(xiàn)是一頭熊正向他走來(lái)→他悄悄拉開(kāi)弓箭，目光緊盯著熊→評(píng)估了周?chē)牡匦危瑳Q定采取防御姿態(tài)→當(dāng)熊靠近時(shí)，他果斷射出箭矢→熊受傷后逃跑，他才松了一口氣。Hefeltachilldownhisspine→Slowlyturnedaroundtoseeabearapproachinghim→Quietlydrewhisbow,eyeslockedonthebear→Assessedthesurroundingterrainanddecidedtotakeadefensivestance→Asthebearcamecloser,heswiftlyreleasedthearrow→Thebearfledafterbeinghit,andhefinallybreathedasighofrelief.2.受到野獸攻擊動(dòng)作鏈：意識(shí)到被攻擊→嘗試躲避→找到武器或防御物→反擊或逃跑→確保自己安全例子：一聲低吼在他耳邊響起，他猛然轉(zhuǎn)頭，發(fā)現(xiàn)一頭狼正撲向他→他迅速躲閃，狼的爪子擦過(guò)他的肩膀→他抓起地上的樹(shù)枝，用力揮向狼→狼被擊退，他趁機(jī)拔腿跑開(kāi)→跑出一段距離后，他回頭確認(rèn)狼沒(méi)有追來(lái)，才稍稍放下心。Alowgrowlsoundedinhisear,andheturnedsharplytoseeawolflungingathim→Hequicklydodged,thewolf’sclawsgrazinghisshoulder→Hegrabbedabranchfromthegroundandswungithardatthewolf→Thewolfretreated,andheseizedthemomenttosprintaway→Afterrunningagooddistance,helookedbacktomakesurethewolfwasn’tfollowingbeforeherelaxedslightly.3.轉(zhuǎn)危為安動(dòng)作鏈：發(fā)現(xiàn)自己處于危險(xiǎn)之中→冷靜思考解決辦法→實(shí)施行動(dòng)→成功脫險(xiǎn)→重新確認(rèn)安全例子：他發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被困在狹窄的山路上，兩側(cè)是陡峭的懸崖→他深吸一口氣，努力讓自己冷靜下來(lái)→發(fā)現(xiàn)一塊較大的石頭可以作為支撐點(diǎn)→小心翼翼地一步步爬上去，避免滑倒→終于到達(dá)安全地帶，他長(zhǎng)舒一口氣，環(huán)顧四周確認(rèn)無(wú)其他危險(xiǎn)。Hefoundhimselftrappedonanarrowmountainpath,withsteepcliffsonbothsides→Tookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhimselfdown→Spottedalargerrockthatcouldserveasafoothold→Carefullyclimbedup,makingsurenottoslip→Finallyreachedasafearea,heexhaleddeeplyandlookedaroundtoensuretherewasnootherdanger.4.朋友/夫妻吵架動(dòng)作鏈：意見(jiàn)產(chǎn)生分歧→情緒逐漸升級(jí)→爆發(fā)爭(zhēng)吵→言辭激烈→其中一方冷靜下來(lái)→吵架結(jié)束，氣氛緊張例子：他們討論著晚飯的安排，意見(jiàn)很快產(chǎn)生了分歧→聲音逐漸提高，彼此都不愿讓步→最終，話語(yǔ)變得越來(lái)越尖銳，爭(zhēng)吵不可避免地爆發(fā)了→“你從來(lái)不考慮我的感受！”她喊道→他看著她，一言不發(fā)，慢慢冷靜下來(lái)→房間里陷入了一片沉默，空氣中彌漫著緊張的氣氛。Theywerediscussingdinnerplans,anditdidn’ttakelongfortheiropinionstodiverge→Theirvoicesgraduallygrewlouder,neitherwillingtobackdown→Finally,thewordsbecamesharper,andafull-blownargumenterupted→“Youneverconsidermyfeelings!”sheshouted→Helookedather,sayingnothing,slowlycalmingdown→Theroomfellintosilence,tensionhangingintheair.5.內(nèi)心掙扎動(dòng)作鏈：面臨選擇→內(nèi)心糾結(jié)→不斷反復(fù)權(quán)衡利弊→決定采取行動(dòng)→付諸實(shí)踐例子：他站在門(mén)口，手里握著那封信，心里充滿(mǎn)了掙扎→他一遍遍告訴自己這是正確的決定→但另一種聲音卻在耳邊響起，提醒他可能的后果→他反復(fù)踱步，手心冒汗→最終，他深吸一口氣，將信放進(jìn)了信箱→決定已經(jīng)做出，他的肩膀頓時(shí)感到一陣輕松。Hestoodatthedoor,holdingtheletter,hisheartfullofconflict→Hekepttellinghimselfthiswastherightdecision→Butanothervoiceechoedinhismind,remindinghimofthepotentialconsequences→Hepacedbackandforth,palmssweating→Finally,hetookadeepbreathanddroppedtheletterintothemailbox→Thedecisionwasmade,andaweightliftedfromhisshoulders.6.籌備驚喜活動(dòng)動(dòng)作鏈：產(chǎn)生驚喜的想法→計(jì)劃活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié)→準(zhǔn)備驚喜材料→實(shí)施驚喜→觀察對(duì)方反應(yīng)例子：他突然想到要為她籌備一個(gè)驚喜生日派對(duì)→他列出賓客名單，挑選合適的場(chǎng)地→購(gòu)買(mǎi)了她最喜歡的花和蛋糕，裝飾了場(chǎng)地→當(dāng)她走進(jìn)房間時(shí)，燈光突然亮起，大家齊聲高喊“生日快樂(lè)！”→看著她臉上的驚訝與感動(dòng)，他的心里滿(mǎn)是滿(mǎn)足感。Hesuddenlythoughtoforganizingasurprisebirthdaypartyforher→Hemadeaguestlistandchoseasuitablevenue→Boughtherfavoriteflowersandcake,decoratedthevenue→Whenshewalkedintotheroom,thelightssuddenlycameon,andeveryoneshouted“HappyBirthday!”→Seeingthesurpriseandemotiononherface,hisheartwasfilledwithsatisfaction.7.準(zhǔn)備禮物動(dòng)作鏈：決定送禮物→選擇禮物類(lèi)型→考慮對(duì)方的喜好→購(gòu)買(mǎi)或制作禮物→包裝禮物→將禮物送出例子：他決定給她準(zhǔn)備一份特別的禮物→想了想她最近提到的那本書(shū)→馬上去了書(shū)店，挑選了一本精裝版→回家后，他用心地包上了漂亮的包裝紙→當(dāng)她打開(kāi)禮物時(shí)，臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。Hedecidedtoprepareaspecialgiftforher→Rememberedshehadrecentlymentionedaparticularbook→Immediatelywenttothebookstoreandpickedoutahardcoveredition→Athome,hecarefullywrappeditinbeautifulpaper→Whensheopenedthegift,abrightsmileappearedonherface.8.意料之外動(dòng)作鏈：事情按計(jì)劃進(jìn)行→突發(fā)意外→應(yīng)急反應(yīng)→處理意外→結(jié)果出乎意料例子：他們按計(jì)劃去野餐，一切都很順利→突然天色變暗，下起了大雨→他們慌忙收拾東西，尋找避雨的地方→但雨越下越大，他們只好躲進(jìn)一間廢棄的小屋→雖然計(jì)劃被打亂，但他們反而在小屋里度過(guò)了一段難忘的時(shí)光。Theywentonapicnicasplanned,everythingwasgoingsmoothly→Suddenly,theskydarkened,anditstartedtorainheavily→Theyquicklypackedupandlookedforshelter→Buttherainkeptpouring,sotheyhadtotakerefugeinanabandonedhut→Althoughtheirplansweredisrupted,theyendeduphavinganunforgettabletimeinthehut.9.自己一個(gè)人在野外探險(xiǎn)動(dòng)作鏈：準(zhǔn)備探險(xiǎn)裝備→選擇探險(xiǎn)路線→出發(fā)→途中遇到困難→解決問(wèn)題→繼續(xù)探險(xiǎn)例子：他整理好背包，檢查了地圖和指南針→選了一條通往森林深處的路線→迎著晨光，他開(kāi)始了獨(dú)自的探險(xiǎn)→途中他遇到了一片沼澤地，前進(jìn)受阻→他仔細(xì)觀察地形，找到了一條繞過(guò)沼澤的小道→克服了障礙后，他繼續(xù)向前，心中充滿(mǎn)了成就感。Hepackedhisbag,checkingthemapandcompass→Chosearouteleadingdeepintotheforest→Settingoutinthemorninglight,hebeganhissoloadventure→