2022高考英語語法專題復(fù)習(xí)-課件17《作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞》

17《作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞》審校：王偉第一頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。表示時(shí)間關(guān)系：first,second,then,finally/atlast／intheend,soonimmediately,suddenly,atthesametime,meanwhile,recently表示對(duì)稱順序關(guān)系：foronething…..fortheotherthing,ononehand,…..ontheotherhand，aboveall,firstofall,firstly,secondly,next,finally，theformer….thelatter,

表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：whatismore,aswell,moreover,besides,furthermore,inaddition，what’sworse表示換一種方式表達(dá)：inotherwords,thatistosay,第二頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。表示舉例說明：forexample,like,suchas,forinstance

表示陳述事實(shí)：infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth表示總結(jié)：onthewhole,inaword,tosumup,inshort,inconclusion,fromwhatIhavesaidabove表示因果關(guān)系：asaresult,thus,therefore,sothat,as,because,consequently,表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but,however,while,instead,although,differentfrom,notonly..butalso表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,personally,asfarasIknow,Ibelieve,Ithink,asweallknow,Itisknowntousallthat….第三頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。范例1：假如你事實(shí)李華，你班同學(xué)最近開長(zhǎng)了一場(chǎng)討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．第四頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。比例５５％４５％你的觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)支持反對(duì)主要理由１．應(yīng)該明天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉２．做早操，打乒乓球，打籃球，但時(shí)間不要過３．鍛煉能增強(qiáng)質(zhì)減少疾病４．鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好．１鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間２．鍛煉使人疲勞３．鍛煉以后很興奮，較長(zhǎng)時(shí)間不能學(xué)習(xí)４．鍛煉中可能受傷．．．．．．第五頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。1.關(guān)鍵詞語體育鍛煉做早操增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)減少疾病休息學(xué)習(xí)有效果浪費(fèi)時(shí)間投入學(xué)習(xí)受傷takeexercisesdomorningexercisesbuildupthebodyreducethediseasehaveareststudymoreeffectivelyawasteoftimepayattentiontostudybehurt第六頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。2.作文結(jié)構(gòu)1.….havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins./Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.2.55%ofthestudentsthink………….suchas(舉例)……..（原因）…..3.Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelieve…….(原因）……..4.Inmyopinion,Ipreferto第七頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。

3.范文：

Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherhavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins.

55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercises,playingtabletennisandplayingbasketball,butnotspendtoomuchtimeonthem.Asaproverbsays,”allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy."Exercisebuildsuptheirbodyandreducelotsofdiseases.Sportsletthemhaveagoodrestsothattheirstudywillbemoreeffective.

第八頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelievetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandtiring.Aftertakingexercise,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Andit’spossibletobehurtinsports.

Inmyopinion,Iprefertotakeproperexercisesinmysparetime.第九頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。練習(xí)１：“你們班會(huì)的討論主題是“上大學(xué)是高中生唯一的出路嗎？”請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息．寫一偏短文，客觀的介紹下討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．比例６０％３０％１０％觀點(diǎn)上大學(xué)無所謂不上大學(xué)理由增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，提高素養(yǎng)，利于擇業(yè)成功的路不只一條學(xué)費(fèi)高，就業(yè)難我的看法關(guān)鍵詞語：widenknowledge,improvequalities,hightuition,seniorstudents關(guān)鍵句子：６０％ofusconsideritnecessarytogotocollege10%ofstudentsthinkitnousegoingtocollege30%believe“AllroadsleadtoRome.”第十頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。范例２：某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社正開展一場(chǎng)題為“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers，whichdoyouprefer?”請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。

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你的觀點(diǎn)?

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；2．短文必須包含表格的全部?jī)?nèi)容。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫第十一頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。學(xué)生作品1：

Comparewith

youngteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.

Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.They

notonly

sparenoeffort

toteachthestudents,butalso

giveclassescarefully.Theywill

doalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstand

theteaching

content.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,

especiallyforusseniorstudents.

Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用比較靈活2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。2、審題不全面，忽略了對(duì)青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點(diǎn)是比較大的失誤?！?)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之處：1、個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需要改進(jìn)。第十二頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。學(xué)生作品2:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.

Somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience.

However,theothershaveadifferentopinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy.Besides,theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas.Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot.點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：1、段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式表達(dá)比較靈活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。2、過渡詞運(yùn)用也比較熟練。需要改進(jìn)的地方：1）2)3)＼4)1)prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones2)withexplanations3)the去掉4)Theyoungteachers第十三頁，編輯于星期五：八點(diǎn)四十九分。Onepossibleversion:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers'teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.However,Iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers.Firstly,westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem.Sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers.Secondly,theyaremore.energeticandenthusiastic.Usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.Besides,