Unit2TravellingAroundReadingforWriting寫一封旅行計劃的郵件講義高中英語人教版

ReadingforWriting寫一封旅行計劃的郵件一．教材原文范文詮釋教材原文名師解析DearXiaoLi,MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday,myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi'antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It'samazingthattherearemorethan8,000statues,andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”!We'realsogoingtotheXi'anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We'rearrivingat9:30a.m.andwillstartsightseeingrightaway,soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat'sallfornow!I'llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos!Doyouhaveanyplansfortheingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard[學(xué)語言]第一段1.本段使用了amazing和unbelievable,說明兵馬俑栩栩如生，令人稱奇。短語can'twaittodosth意為“迫不及待做某事”，展示了作者的迫切心情。2.本段運用了不定式短語(toseetheTerracottaArmy)作目的狀語;賓語從句(I'veheardthat...);it作形式主語而that從句為真正的主語(It'samazingthat...)以及not...until句型(nooneinmoderntimes...untilthe1970s),這些高級句式的運用描繪出兵馬俑是令人向往之處。第二段1.本段使用了短語lookforwardto，描述了作者和父親對參觀陜西歷史博物館盼望許久。2.本段使用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句(becausemydadloveshistory...)以及that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句(Ihaveheardthatthismuseum...)，寫出了作者和父親打算參觀陜西歷史博物館的原因。第三、四段1.第三段中短語rightaway的使用表達出作者去觀光的急切心情。2.第三、四段運用了現(xiàn)在進行時表將來(We'retakingthetrain...,We'rearrivingat9:30a.m.);現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語(leavingthedaybefore...);賓語從句(Ihopewesleepwell...,Iguessthat'sall...)以及不定式作賓語(Hopetohearfromyousoon.),這些高級句式的運用描繪出作者打算乘坐的交通工具、出發(fā)及到達時間以及盼望盡快收到來信等細(xì)節(jié)。[學(xué)結(jié)構(gòu)]短文由四部分組成:第一部分:開門見山地指出旅游的目的地和時間;第二部分:簡單介紹其他旅游景點;第三部分:介紹交通工具及動身時間;第四部分:詢問計劃并表達期望。文章使用了副詞also，從屬連詞because和并列連詞and,使文章渾然一體。二．佳句背誦1.旅行計劃的開頭:交代時間和目的地。=1\*GB3①Thismonth,IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwobestfriends,whichissupposedtobeasevendaytrip.這個月，我要和兩個好朋友去長沙和張家界旅游,這應(yīng)該是一次七日之旅。=2\*GB3②I'mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou,acitycalledEasternVenice.我計劃去蘇州旅游，一個被稱為東方威尼斯的城市。=3\*GB3③TheMayDayising,andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五一節(jié)就要來了,我打算去上海欣賞其美景。2.主體段落:交代動身時間、所乘坐的交通工具、停留的時間等。=1\*GB3①Wewillsetouton10June.我們6月10日出發(fā)。=2\*GB3②Iwillstaythereforaboutthreedays.我要在那兒待大約三天。=3\*GB3③I'mplanningtogotherebytrainandebackbybus.我計劃乘火車去那兒,乘公共汽車回來。3.旅行計劃的結(jié)尾:自己的想法和對對方的期待或要求。=1\*GB3①DoyouhaveanyplansfortheingMayDayholiday?對于即將到來的五一假期,你有計劃嗎?=2\*GB3②Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.盼望著盡快收到你的回信。三．仿佳句·找差距[題目要求] 假定你是李華,寒假即將來臨,你打算和家人下周去北京游覽長城。請你給你的好友王明寫一封電子郵件，分享你的出行計劃。要點:1.對長城的認(rèn)識;2.其他旅游目的地(故宮和頤和園)及交通方式;3.表達期望。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:故宮theImperialPalace;頤和園theSummerPalace [仿寫步驟] Step1一仿結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理 第一段:旅游時間和目的地介紹。第二段:簡單介紹其他旅游景點及交通工具。第三段:詢問計劃并表達期望。Step2二仿語言規(guī)范美觀我和我的父母計劃去游覽長城。(現(xiàn)在進行時)MyparentsandIareplanningtovisittheGreatWall.長城有著悠久的歷史。TheGreatWallhasalonghistory.它是由古代中國人民創(chuàng)造的一個偉大奇跡。ItisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.長城已經(jīng)成為中國最著名的旅游景點之一。TheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostwellknowntouristattractions.我們迫不及待地想去參觀。Wecan’twaittopayavisittoit.我們還計劃參觀北京的其他地方，如故宮、頤和園。WearealsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinBeijing,liketheImperialPalaceandtheSummerPalace.我們將乘火車去那兒。(take)Wearetakingthetraintogothere.希望早日收到你的來信。(hope) Hopetohearfromyousoon.Step3三仿句間過渡自然 用并列連詞連接句2和句3 TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbyancientChinesepeople.2.用表示因果關(guān)系的并列連詞連接句4和句5TheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostwellknowntouristattractionsinChina,sowecan’twaittopayavisittoit.Step4謄寫DearWangMing,I'mgladtotellyoumyparentsandIareplanningtopayavisittotheGreatWallnextweek.TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.NowtheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinChina,sowecan'twaittovisitit.Besides,we'r