高中英語短文改錯(cuò)

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學(xué)生姓名家長(zhǎng)意見

Passage1

LastSunday,itwasmyfather^funnyday.Aftersupper,myfatherwenttoseethefilm.Butin

oursurprise,hecamebackjustabouthalfanhourlater.Iaskedhimwhatwasthematter.He

smiledandtoldusaboutthefunnythingwhathadhappenedinthecinema.Hewassittinginhis

seatwhileawomancametoherandsaidtheseatwashers.Surprising,theylookedattheirticket

carefully,onlytofindtheseatsshownintheirticketswerethesamewhilethecolorswere

different.Sotheylookedattheticketscarefully.Afterawhile,myfatherapologizedtothewoman,

saying,66Sorry,Imakeamistake.Takethisseat,please.^^Thefactwasthathisticketfoundout

undertheglassonhisdeskwasforthefilmamonthago.

Passage2

ItwasmyfirstMid-AutumnFestivalspentwithmyparentswhenIwas12.Intheearlymorning,

myparentsandIwenttotheparkattheircar.Therewerelotsofvisitorsstoodinthefrontofthe

ticketwindow.Wewaitedalongtimeandbuythreetickets.IntheTigerMountainofthepark,I

wastooeagertoseethefiercefrightenedanimalsthatIquickenedmystepsthroughthecrowd.

Unfortunately,Igotseparatedfrommyparents.Ihadhardtimelookingforhim,butIhadnoluck.

Wanderinginthepark,Ifeltalonewithoutanycompanions.Worsestill,Ihadnomoney,soIhad

towalkhome,coveredasmuchas5kilometers.

Passage3

September15,2013Fine

Oneweekago,wefinishedourmid-exams.TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldown

andhurtmyfoot.Iwasingreatlypainatthatmoment,butItriedtoactasifnothinghashappened

untiltheclasswasover.ThoughIhaddifficultywalkbacktomyclassroom,Istilldidn'ttell

anyonebutevenrefusedtheofferofhelpofmyclassmates.Asresult,thehurtinmyfootbecame

bad.NowIknowI'mwrong.Wecantellothersourneedforhelpandaccepthishelp.Someday

wecannothelpothersinreturn.Inthisway,wecangetalongtoeachotherhappilyand

peacefully.

Passage4

Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30

minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.Butnosooner

hadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaught

it.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealize

myproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.Now

wheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,rilthinkofthisexperience.

Passage5

Howharmfulcigarettesaregettingnow!Mygrandmotherdiedoflungcanceratageofsixtyon

Jan27,2009.OnlythendidIknowcigaretteswerethemainlycauseofhercancer.Sheknows

smokingwasharmful,soshejustcouldn'tquit.Shealwayshidheraddiction,hopedthatIwould

neverstartsmoking.MygrandmotherwasmyrolemodelsandIlovedhersomuch.NowIstill

wakeupineverydaywishingthatsmokinghasneverbeeninvented.OurpromisetoheristhatI

willneversmokeaslongasIlive,sothatIdon,thavetogothroughwhichshedid.

Passage6

Todayitwasasunnyday.InthemorningIwenttoanearbyfoodstoretobuysomebreads.

Afterthemaninthestorepackingthebreadinasmallbagforme,Ibegantowalkhomewithbag

inmyhand.OnthewayImetmynext-doorneighbor,MissWang,thatwaswalkingherdog.We

greetedwitheachotherandbegintotalkabouttheweather.Asweweretalking,hisdogcameup

atthebaginmyhandthoughthebreadgaveoffadelicioussmell.Asaresult,someofthebread

felltothegroundorthedogbegantoenjoyit.Fiveminuteslate,Iwasbackatthestoretobuy

breadagain.

Passage7

Anmostinterestingthinghappenedtomelastwinter.Duringmywintervocation,Ispendmy

luckymoneyonaspecialgiftforGrandma.OneFridayafternoon,Iwenttoacellphonestoreand

chosealargerbuttonphonespecialdesignedforseniors.IgavethemtomygrandmawhenIcame

tovisitherattheweekend.Uponreceivethephone,Grandmawasveryhappyandeagerlearn

howtouseit.Ihadpatientlyexplainedalltheimportantfunctionssheneeded.Grandmalearned

carefullybutwantedtohaveatrystraightaway.Undermyhelp,shesuccessfullycalledhergood

friend.ThatafternoonGrandmaproudlytoldtheneighborthatshecouldmakecallswiththenew

phoneIboughther.TheyallpraisedwhatthoughtfulIwas.

Passage8

Asiswell-known,growuphappilyorhealthilyisveryimportantforus.Inordertoachievingthe

goal,wemustdoseveralthings.Firstly,weshouldhaveapositiveattitudetolife,whichisin

benefittoyourhealth.Secondly,wemuststudyhardly.Itistimethatwestudieddiligently.There

isnodoubtwhethergettinggoodresultsintheentranceexamisveryimportantforusstudents.

Finally,weshoulddoexerciseseveryday.Itisfactthatgoodhealthishelpfultoourstudy.Only

whenweareingoodhealthcanwedothatwhatwewanttodo.

Passage9

Onecoldeveningduringtheholidayseason,alittleboyaboutsixorsevenwasstandingoutinthe

frontofastorewindow.Thelittlechildhasnoshoesandhisclotheswerejustrags.Ayoung

womanpassesbysawthelittleboyandcouldreadthedesireinhispaleblueeyes.Shetookthe

childbythehandandledhimintothestore.Theresheboughthersomenewshoesandacomplete

suitofwarmlyclothing.Theycamebackoutsideintothestreet,sothewomantoldthechildto

comehomeandhaveahappyholiday.ThelittleboylookedherandaskedhowshewasGod.She

smiledandrepliedthatshewasjustoneofHischild.

Passage10

ItisfiveyearsnowsinceIgraduatefromNo.3HighSchool.LastSaturday,theclassthatIwason

heldaget-together,whichtookusalongtimeprepare.Itwasindeednoteasytogetinthetouch

witheverybodyandsetawelltimeforallofus.Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,

rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.Itwasapitywhich

someofuswerenotpresentastheyhadgonetoabroadforfurtherstudy,buttheycalledbackor

sentgreetingcardfromdifferentplaces.

Passage11

Iamsohappytolearnyouarecomingtostudyinourschoolandstayatmyhome.

MyhomeisatNo.58,MingzuStreet.Afive-minuteswalkfrommyhomealongMingzuStreet

willleadyoutoacrossroads,whenMingzuStreetmeetsBaohuRoad.Onthecornerofthe

crossroadslieashoppingmall,whereyoucangeteverythingyouneeded.Walkingforabout300

meteralongBaohuRoad,you911seeourschoolonright.Therewewillspendmostofthedaytime.

IntheendofMingzuStreetstandsthenewrailwaystation,andthatifseasyforyoutoreach.Asa

busstopisjustnexttomyhome,BusNo.23willdirecttakeyouthere.

Ican'twaittoseeingyouinChina.

Passage12

Iamwritingtotalkaboutthecanteenofourschool.Thereareonlyafewstandinthecanteen,

leadingtolotsofstudentshavetolineupforfood.Itiswasteoftime,isn'tit?Butattimesthe

foodisnotfreshanddoesnottastedeliciously.Soit'snotsurprisingthatsomestudentschoseto

gotothestreettobuyjunkfoodwhichdoharmtotheirhealth.Wouldyouthinkaboutthathowto

improveit?Iwouldappreciateyouifyoucouldtakesomemeasures.Hopefully,myopinioncan

betakentoaccount.

短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)答案

Passage1

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Passage2

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Passage3

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6.As后力口a7.bad—worse8.hisTtheir9.去掉not10.to—>with

Passage4

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Passage5

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Passage6

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Passage7

l.spend—spent2.special^specially3.them^it4.receive^receiving5.eager后力口to6.去掉had

7.but^-and8.Under^With9.neighbor—>neighbors10.what—>how

Passage8

1.graduate-graduated2.on一in3.prepare前加to4.去掉the5.well一good

6.remember^remembering7.theywe8.which—that9.去掉to10.card-cards

Passage9

Onecoldeveningduringtheholidayseason,alittleboyaboutsixorsevenwasstandingout

in^fh^frontofastorewindow.Thelittlechildhasnoshoesandhisclotheswerejustrags.A

had

youngwomanpassesbysawthelittleboyandcouldreadthedesireinhispaleblueeyes.

passing

Shetookthechildbythehandandledhimintothestore.Theresheboughthersomenew

him

shoesandacompletesuitofwarmlyclothing.Theycamebackoutsideintothestreet,

warm

butthewomantoldthechildtocomehomeandhaveahappyholiday.ThelittleboylookedAand

goathergoandaskedhowshewasGod.She

smiledandrepliedthatshewasjustoneofhischild,

if/whetherchildren

Passage10

Asiswell-known,growuphappilyorhealthilyisveryimportantforus.Inorderto

growingand

achievingthegoal,wemustdoseveralthings.Firstly,weshouldhaveapositiveattitudetolife,

achieve

whichisinbenefittoyourhealth.Secondly,wemuststudyhardly.Itistimethatwestudied

ofourhard

diligently.Thereisnodoubtwhethergettinggoodresultsintheentranceexamisvery

that

importantforusstudents.Finally,weshoulddoexerciseseveryday.ItisfaAhatgood

exercisea\

healthishelpfultoourstudy.Onlywhenweareingoodhealthcan或dothatwhatwewantto

do.

Passage11

Iamsohappytolearnyouarecomingtostudyinourschoolandstayatmyhome.

MyhomeisatNo.58,MingzuStreet.Afive-minuteswalkfrommyhomealong

five-minute

MingzuStreetwillleadyoutoacrossroads,whenMingzuStreetmeetsBaohuRoad.