考點(diǎn)40 應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信 求助信（ 核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）（含答案解析）

考點(diǎn)40應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信&求助信（核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）1.高考真題考點(diǎn)分布年份試卷體裁話題題材內(nèi)容2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信學(xué)校生活介紹美術(shù)課的個(gè)人作品和感想全國甲卷演講稿社會(huì)科技中國交通發(fā)展天津卷演講稿社會(huì)生活低碳生活浙江卷征文投稿學(xué)校生活課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建議信學(xué)校生活給外教提建議全國甲卷征文投稿歷史文化介紹中國歷史人物全國乙卷征文投稿生活學(xué)習(xí)假期習(xí)得新技能天津卷申請信社會(huì)生活“中國工坊”活動(dòng)浙江卷活動(dòng)報(bào)道學(xué)校生活認(rèn)識我們身邊的植物2022全國卷乙卷征文投稿調(diào)查結(jié)果學(xué)習(xí)英語的狀況全國卷甲卷征文投稿世界海洋日保護(hù)海洋新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷邀請信文化生活學(xué)校的電臺訪談?wù)憬硌埿艑W(xué)校生活圖書館開設(shè)了一個(gè)小組學(xué)習(xí)室天津卷視頻文字稿學(xué)校生活社團(tuán)活動(dòng)2.命題規(guī)律及備考策略【命題規(guī)律】近3年命題規(guī)律：對中國傳統(tǒng)文化種類的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有針對某一具體文化現(xiàn)象的考查；體現(xiàn)個(gè)人成長與時(shí)代發(fā)展相融合；體裁上有：提綱作文；開放性作文；圖表作文；看圖作文；內(nèi)容上選材貼近考生實(shí)際生活。所寫內(nèi)容都是學(xué)生熟悉內(nèi)容。盡管對寫作內(nèi)容有限制，學(xué)生仍有較大的自由發(fā)揮空間（自己的感想），以展示自己的個(gè)性和創(chuàng)意【備考策略】熟練掌握各種應(yīng)用文的基本構(gòu)架；積累基本詞匯和句式，尤其是簡單基本句式，寫好簡單句；背誦優(yōu)美的段落和范文，模仿高級句式和表達(dá)；加強(qiáng)審題（主題、時(shí)態(tài)）訓(xùn)練；練習(xí)書寫，達(dá)到整潔美觀的程度。【命題預(yù)測】預(yù)測2025年應(yīng)用文考查仍然貼近考生實(shí)際生活，以電子郵件和投稿為主，考查考生的解決問題能力?？键c(diǎn)一、建議信必備基礎(chǔ)知識：建議信通常是寫給家人或朋友，對于對方在生活、工作、求學(xué)等過程中遇到的實(shí)際問題或困惑提供看法、指導(dǎo)或給予對方所需要的建議，或?qū)τ趯Ψ讲幻髦堑呐e動(dòng)進(jìn)行勸勉、告誡或展開討論。建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】

①首段：a.介紹自己，不要羅嗦；b.說明目的，注意語氣。②主體：a.提出具體建議；b.首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則會(huì)變成投訴信；c.經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對方感受，時(shí)時(shí)提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文。③尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，使對方易于接受。3.寫作流程圖【必備詞匯】1.gve/offer

sb.some

advice(on) 給某人提建議2.ask

sb.for

advice 向某人征求意見3.as

follows 如下4.in

my

opinion/in

my

view/from

my

point

of

view

在我看來5.find..…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficial 認(rèn)為……有用6.take

part

in/participate

in... 參加7.follow/take/adopt

one's

advice 采納某人的建議8.take

sth.into

account/consideration

把……考慮在內(nèi)9.withregardto 關(guān)于；就10.putforward 提出11.in

this

regard/in

this

respect 在這點(diǎn)上/在這方面12.share

sth.with

sb. 與某人分享某事13.with

time

going

on

隨著時(shí)間的推移14.Befacedwith 面臨15.take

sth.seriously 重視；認(rèn)真對待【萬能句式】第一部分：說明寫信的目的套語：1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽說你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會(huì)有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來信。信上說你打算下個(gè)月來參觀中國十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對你是有幫助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顧客）.我給你寫信是想說明一下我對于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你的來信，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件。現(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語，我寫信給你一些建議。第二部分：介紹詳情、說明原因套語：(1)它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午，我們會(huì)一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)順便說一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母語是英語，還是一名英語老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠地邀請你來比賽現(xiàn)場。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保證你在那里會(huì)過得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建議套語：我建議……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)套語：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會(huì)對你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩?。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”).我希望這些建議會(huì)對你有用。記?。阂粋€(gè)決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（給你）最美好的祝愿！4.

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無論如何，我希望這些建議對你有所幫助。我會(huì)非常高興看到情況改善。5.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真誠的希望我的建議對你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請告訴我?！緦懽髂０濉磕０澧貲ear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建議的內(nèi)容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具體到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行為的信心和決心).Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)?！?023年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動(dòng)形式；(2)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJimHearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給好友Jim策劃的“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動(dòng)給出一些建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide開展：carryout→conduct主題：theme→topic2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.（24-25高三上·重慶沙坪壩·開學(xué)考試）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國好友Jack所在的學(xué)校計(jì)劃組織學(xué)生來重慶旅行，請你給他寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歡迎；（2）推薦景點(diǎn)（至少兩個(gè)）；（3）注意事項(xiàng)。注意：（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.Isuggestedvisitingtwomust-seespots:HongyaCaveandCiqikouAncientTown.HongyaCaveoffersstunningviewsofthecity’sskylineandriver,especiallyatnightwhenit’sbeautifullylitup.CiqikouAncientTownprovidesaglimpseintoChongqing’srichhistoryandtraditionalculture,withitscharmingoldstreetsandlocalcrafts.What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.Wishyouanamazingjourneyfilledwithwonderfulmemories.Enjoyyourtripandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedanymoreadviceorassistance.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國好友Jack寫一封建議信，因?yàn)樗诘膶W(xué)校計(jì)劃組織學(xué)生來重慶旅行。【詳解】1.詞匯積累激動(dòng)的：thrilled→excited建議：suggest→recommend充滿：befilledwith→befullof極好的：amazing→marvelous2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.拓展句：SinceChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid,makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)考點(diǎn)二、求助信求助信是一種寫給朋友或機(jī)構(gòu)的正式信件，請求他們提供幫助、支持或資金，以實(shí)現(xiàn)某個(gè)目標(biāo)或完成某項(xiàng)任務(wù)。通常，求助信會(huì)詳細(xì)說明請求幫助的原因、需要的具體支持以及如何使用這些支持。【思路點(diǎn)撥】

求助信是當(dāng)個(gè)人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時(shí)向別人請求幫助的一種書信。通常包括三部分內(nèi)容:1.表明寫信目的，請求幫助。2.要清晰陳述請求幫助的具體內(nèi)容。3.希望得到幫助。注意語氣委婉、真誠，并要向收信人表示感謝?！颈貍湓~塊】1.have

trouble/difficulty(in)doing

sth.做某事有困難2.do

sb.a

favor/give

sb.a

hand給某人幫助3.ask

for

help/seek

for

help尋求幫助4.encounter

some

problems遇到一些問題5.be

busy/occupied/engaged

in

doing

sth.忙于做某事7.make

preparations

for.…為某事做準(zhǔn)備9.put...in

use學(xué)以致用10.let

sb.down讓某人失望11.overcome

the

fear

克服恐懼12.be

anxious/eager

to

do

sth./long

to

do

sth.渴望做某事13.take

the

trouble

to

do

sth.費(fèi)心地去做某事14.offer

some

constructive

guidance提供一些有益的指導(dǎo)15.be

grateful/thankful/appreciative

to

sb.for

sth.因某事感激某人【萬能句式】首段：請求幫助1.NowIamwritingtoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor/lendmeahand.現(xiàn)在我寫信請你幫我一個(gè)忙。2.Iamwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我希望你能幫我一個(gè)忙。3.Iwonderif

you

could

do

meafvour,thisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitsus.我想知道你是否能幫我一個(gè)忙，這是我叔叔第一次來訪，所以我希望你能到機(jī)場接他。4.IwonderifyousomeChineseknotsforme.Imadethemmyselfwithredsilkthreads,clothandotherbmaterials.我想知道你是否能幫我出售一些中國結(jié)，這是我自己用紅絲線、布等材料做的5.Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意幫我潤色草稿嗎？中間段：描述具體困難1.1amencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…我遇到的三個(gè)間題很困擾我，首先……另外……最困擾我的是……2.Unfortunately,I

find/feel

it

quite/extremelydifficult/hardtodowith(使用形式賓語)不幸的是，我覺得做某事十分/非常難。3.ltis

difficult/challenging

for

me

todosth.做某事是困難的/有挑戰(zhàn)性的。4.Thave

trouble/difficulty/problems

(in)doing

sth.我做某事有困難。5.Domg

sth.is

another

terrible

headache

for

me.(使用動(dòng)名詞做主語）做某事是另一件讓我很頭痛的事。6.I

find

myself

struggling

with

sth.(使用find復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己做某事有困難。7.Faced

with

the

above

problems,I

am

anxious

to

get

your

help.Would

you

pleaseoffer

me

some

advice

on...?面對上述問題，我渴望得到你的幫助。請你給我一些建議。結(jié)尾段：希望得到幫助：1.Iwonderifcanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme?我想知道你能不能幫我解決這些困難。如果你能幫助我，我真的很感激。2.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice)如果你能給我一些必要的幫助/及時(shí)的幫助（給我一些實(shí)用的/有價(jià)值的建議）。我會(huì)很感激。常見困難：

【生活方面】

與人相處

get

along

well

with

my

classmates/

the

new

teacher

/

my

parents.和我的同學(xué)/新老師/父母相處

把握時(shí)間

arrange

and

make

good

use

of

my

everyday

time

for

valuable

things.

安排和利用每天的時(shí)間去做有意義的事情

明確目標(biāo)

know

the

purpose

of

my

life

and

the

destination

of

my

future

in

order

to

passionately

live

a

purpose-driven

life

everyday.

知道我生命的目的和未來的目標(biāo)，以便每天充滿激情地過著“目標(biāo)驅(qū)動(dòng)”的生活

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【寫作模板】模板①Dear______,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto______（請求的內(nèi)容）.Thereasonfor_____________isthat_____________（給出原因）.I___________,soI_____________（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.Iwouldalsoliketorequest___________（提出進(jìn)一步的要求）.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat__________（電話號碼）.Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板②Dear________,Mynameis_______________(自我介紹).I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetdifficultyin_______________(求助內(nèi)容).First,Ifind___________(困難1).Besides,________(困難2).What’smore,__________(困難3).Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo____________(委婉提出請求)？Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto(請求內(nèi)容)sothat___________(請求目的).Also,Iwouldlikeyouto(請求內(nèi)容).I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressin_____________(表達(dá)期待).Yours,LiHua（2024·江西吉安·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是校英語報(bào)的編輯李華。你校英語報(bào)擬開設(shè)一個(gè)新欄目“英文電影賞析”，請你給外教Johnson寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.請他推薦一部英文電影；2.說明推薦理由。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMr.Johnson,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Johnson,OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.Knowingthatyouareamoviefan,I’mwritingtoaskforyourrecommendation.ItiswidelyacceptedthatEnglishmoviescannotonlyhelpgreatlyimprovestudents’interestandacquisitionofthelanguage,butalsobroadenstudents’mindaswellasdeepenculturalunderstanding.Asamoviefan,youmusthaveseenalotofEnglishmoviesthatarebothinterestingandthought-provoking.Couldyoupleaserecommendonethatyouappreciatemost,andlistsomereasonsforit?I’msurestudentswilllikeit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，學(xué)校英語報(bào)擬開設(shè)一個(gè)新欄目“英文電影賞析”，要求考生給外教Johnson寫封郵件，請他推薦一部英文電影并說明推薦理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累普遍地：widely→universally提高：improve→boost肯定的：sure→certain打算做某事：intendtodo→plantodo2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.拓展句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperintendstosetupanewcolumn,whosenameis“EnglishMovieAppreciation”.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】ItiswidelyacceptedthatEnglishmoviescannotonlyhelpgreatlyimprovestudents’interestandacquisitionofthelanguage,butalsobroadenstudents’mindaswellasdeepenculturalunderstanding.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句)【高分句型2】Couldyoupleaserecommendonethatyouappreciatemost,andlistsomereasonsforit?(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)（最新模擬試題演練）Writing1（2024·河南鄭州·模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是鄭州外國語學(xué)校高三學(xué)生李華，臨近畢業(yè)，你們班的英語老師請每位同學(xué)給新高一學(xué)弟學(xué)妹寫封英文郵件，郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.你的建議；2.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfellowstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Congratulationsonbecomingapartofourwonderfulschoolcommunity.AttherequestofourEnglishteacher,I’mreachingouttoofferyousomeadviceonnavigatingyourtimehere.First,treasureeverymomentspentwithyourteachersandclassmates.Yourtimeherewillpassquickly,soseizetheopportunitytoforgemeaningfulandlastingconnections.Secondly,letgoofyourpastachievementsorfailures.Instead,focusonthetasksathand.Itisthededicationandeffortyouinvestnowthatwillshapeyourfuture.Finally,explorewhattrulysparksyourpassion.TakeEnglishlearningforinstance.Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindwhatgenuinelymotivatesyou.Wishingyouallafulfillingandrewardingjourneyaheadfilledwithjoy,growth,andsuccess.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫出對高一學(xué)弟學(xué)妹各方面的建議，最后表達(dá)美好的祝愿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累珍視：treasure→cherish抓住：seize→grasp/catchholdof專注于：focuson→concentrateon以……為例：takesth.forinstance→takesth.forexample2.句式拓展賓語從句變定語從句原句：Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindwhatgenuinelymotivatesyou.拓展句：Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindsomethingthatgenuinelymotivatesyou.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itisthededicationandeffortyouinvestnowthatwillshapeyourfuture.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：Itis/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+其他部分）【高分句型2】Finally,explorewhattrulysparksyourpassion.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）Writing2（24-25高三上·山東濱州·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你剛剛得知你的美國筆友Jim打算雇一個(gè)同學(xué)幫他完成期末論文。請你給他寫封信，指出他的錯(cuò)誤并提出建議。注意：（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell.Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.Secondly,itmaynothelpyoutrulyunderstandthesubjectanddevelopyourownskills.Asanalternativesolution,Isuggestseekinghelpactively.Youcanapproachyourteacherforguidance,consulrelevantbooksandresources,orevenjoinastudygrouptodiscussideasandimproveyourwritingskills.Onlyinthiswaycanyounotonlylearnthematerialbetter,butalsoenhanceyourabilitiesforfutureassignments.I’mconfidentthatyoucanfinishthispaperonyourownandmakehugeprogress!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國筆友Jim寫封信，他打算雇一個(gè)同學(xué)幫他完成期末論文，要求信中指出他的錯(cuò)誤并提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累打算：planto→intendto不合適：improper→inappropriate導(dǎo)致：leadto→contributeto建議：suggest→recommend2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.拓展句：Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegritysothatitcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)Writing3（2024·江蘇南京·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你的朋友Daniel被伊利諾伊大學(xué)厄巴納-香檳分校(UniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign)錄取了，但是他對未來的大學(xué)生活感到緊張。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)祝賀；2.表示理解；3.提出建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearDaniel,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDaniel,

I’msohappytohearthatyou’vebeenadmittedtoUniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign.Congratulations!

Iunderstandyournervousnessabouttheupcomingcollegelifeasit’sanewchapterwithmanyunknowns.Butdon’tworrytoomuch.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Trytogetfamiliarwiththecampusanditsfacilitiesbeforeyoustart.Besides,makeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.Anddon’thesitatetojoinvariousclubsandactivitiestomakenewfriends.

Iamsureyouwilladapttoyournewlifesoonbyfollowingthesuggestionsabove.Yours,

LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生就你的朋友Daniel對未來的大學(xué)生活感到緊張這事給他寫一封郵件。其內(nèi)容包括：表達(dá)祝賀、表示理解和提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：happy→glad焦慮：nervousness→anxiety很多：many→plentyof建議：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,makeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.拓展句：Besides,itisadvisablethatyoushouldmakeastudyplantomanageyourtimewell.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’msohappytohearthatyou’vebeenadmittedtoUniversityoflllinoisUrbana-Champaign.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Iunderstandyournervousnessabouttheupcomingcollegelifeasit’sanewchapterwithmanyunknowns.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）Writing4（24-25高三上·江蘇南京·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，最近收到好友Ben來信，信中說他因?yàn)槭褂萌斯ぶ悄芡瓿煞g作業(yè)而受到老師批評，請你寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的寬慰；2.對使用人工智能完成作業(yè)的看法；3.你的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。DearBen,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBen,I’msorrytolearnaboutyourcurrenttroubleregardingtheuseofAItoolsforyourassignment.IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.Asascientistoncesaid,“Ourintelligenceiswhatmakesushuman,andAIisanextensionofthatquality.”WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.Therefore,IsuggestyouimproveyourworkwithoutsolelydependingonAItoolsandhaveanopenconversationwithyourteacher,clarifyingyourintentionsanddemonstratingyourcommitmenttogenuinelearning.Learningisnotjustaboutcompletingtasksbutalsoabouttheprocessofacquiringknowledge.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給因?yàn)槭褂萌斯ぶ悄芡瓿勺鳂I(yè)而受到老師批評的好友Ben寫一封回信，表達(dá)你的寬慰、闡述對使用人工智能完成作業(yè)的看法并提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累理解：relateto→understand代替；取代：replace→taketheplaceof因此：therefore→thus建議：suggest→advise2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.拓展句：However,itisourownintellectualeffortsthatAIshouldneverreplace.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)【高分句型2】WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.(運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)Writing5（24-25高三上·福建廈門·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，在美國某博物館參觀時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)博物館對一些中國文物(artifacts)的英文介紹有誤。請你就此向博物館寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.投訴問題并舉例說明；2.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.ItwouldalsobebeneficialtocollaboratewithChineseculturalexpertsorinstitutionstoguaranteeauthenticityandrespectfortheartifacts.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。這是一封寫給博物館的建議信，反映了博物館對中國文物英文介紹有誤的問題，并提出建議?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累表達(dá)：express→convey不準(zhǔn)確：inaccuracies→imprecisions建議：suggest→propose合作：collaborate→cooperate句式拓展同義句改寫原句：IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.拓展句：IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuracieswhichwerefoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.（使用了連接代詞that連接的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.（使用了動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語）Writing6（2024·江蘇·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，將擔(dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。請你給外教Mr.Smith寫封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1.陳述問題；2.請求指導(dǎo)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：串詞programcue

情景喜劇sitcomDearMr.Smith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Smith,IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceasI’mgoingtohostourschool’supcomingEnglishsitcomcompetition.Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.Anyadviceonmyhostingworkwouldbegreatlyappreciated.I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。考生將擔(dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。要求考生給外教Mr.Smith寫封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累合適的：appropriate→proper比賽：competition→contest建議：suggestion→advice維持：maintain→sustain2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.拓展句：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldofferyourpreciousguidance.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語從句)[高分句型2]Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)賓語從句)Writing7（23-24高一下·湖北·期末）假定你是學(xué)校英語社負(fù)責(zé)人李華，為參加你校即將舉辦的“多彩社團(tuán)