讀后續(xù)寫（拯救小貓） 高三英語一輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫

拯救小貓Hankwasatwo-year-oldcat.Hank’sbigadventurestartedlastNovember6.DeloresBushong,his75-year-oldowner,hadjustreturnedfromamarketwhensherealizedHankdidn’tcomeinforhissnacks.Shecalledhisnameinthestreetsaroundherhome.Thensheheardsomething.ShelookedupandspottedHankonabranchnearthetopofaneighbor’stree.BushongbelievedHankcameoutthroughafence’scracks(縫隙)andthenbecamescaredbysomedogs.Themorescaredhegot,thehigherheclimbed.“Catshaveanamazingabilitytoclimbuptrees,butactuallytheyaren’tgoodatclimbingdown,”saidDanD’Eramo,directoroftheHumaneRescueAlliance(HRA).Bushong,worriedaboutHank,askedtheHRAtohelpher.HRAcalledthefiredepartment,butthetree’sbranchesweren’tstableenoughtosupportaclimb.Andthepositionofthetreemadeafiretruckladderuseless.ThenBushongcalledaconstructioncompanytorentscaffolding(腳手架)butwastoldsheshouldbooktheequipment10daysinadvance.Bushongwasupset.“Itisfrustratingtorealizesomethingyouloveisintroublebutyoupersonallycan’tdoanythingaboutit,”shesaid.Toherdelight,theneighborscametohelp.EdBaptiste,whosetreeHankhadclimbed,letBushongsitinhisbackyardandcalledtoHank.Oneneighborcalledalocalbusiness,EJ’sPestControl,whichhadatallladder.Unfortunately,the42-footladderprovedtooshort.Anotherneighbordonatedacanoffish,hopingitmightattractthehungrycattocomedown.NearbydogownerstooktheirpetsawayonwalksinsteadoflettingthemoutintheiryardstoavoidfurtherfrighteningHank.Bythefifthday,nothinghadworked.That’swhenRobert,aveterinary(獸醫(yī))assistantatHRA,cameupwithanidea.HeaskedBushongtofillaspecialbagwithsomeofHank’sfavoritethings:catfoodandasoftblanket.TheycalleditHank’spartypack.RobertwantedtosaveHankwithit.Paragraph1:ThenRoberttiedthepacktoalongbamboopole.Paragraph2:Bushongtoldthekindactstoalocalnewspaperoffice.淺層信息理解When:Where:Who:What:Why:LastNovember6--11Underaneighbor’streeHank,Bushong,theHRA,theneighbors,RobertPeopletriedeveymeanstohelpHankclimbdownthetreeTheywantedtosaveHank(thecat)深層信息理解Toherdelight,theneighborscametohelp.EdBaptiste,whosetreeHankhadclimbed,letBushongsitinhisbackyardandcalledtoHank.Oneneighborcalledalocalbusiness,EJ'sPestControl,whichhadatallladder.Unfortunately,the42-footladderprovedtooshort.Anotherneighbordonatedacanoffish,hopingitmightattractthehungrycattocomedown.NearbydogownerstooktheirpetsawayonwalksinsteadoflettingthemoutintheiryardstoavoidfurtherfrighteningHank.Bythefifthday,nothinghadworked.That'swhenRobert,aveterinary（獸醫(yī)）assistantatHRA,cameupwithanidea.HeaskedBushongtofillaspecialbagwithsomeofHank'sfavoritethings:catfoodandasoftblanket.TheycalleditHank'spartypack.RobertwantedtosaveHankwithit.showingtheneighors’andRobert’skindnessReadforconflictBushong’scatcouldn’tclimedownthetree.Herneighborstriedeverymeanstohelpherrescuehercat.ReadforthethemePeopletriedeveymeanstohelpHankclimbdownthetreeSolutionKindnessHelpeachotheramongneighbors.Buildaharmoniouscommunity…Whatinformationcanyougetfromthissentence?Bushongtoldthekindactstoalocalnewspaperoffice.Withthehelpoftheneighbors,Hankwassavedsuccessfully.Bushongwantedtospreadthekindnessandshowhergratitude.四句定框架Paragraph1:ThenRoberttiedthepacktoabamboopole.①___________________________________②_______________________________________Paragraph2:Bushongtoldthekindactstoalocalnewspaperoffice.③___________________________________________________④___________________________________________________按照“主位推進”確定段落主角按照“主位推進”確定段落主角并升華主題（過渡句）上下情節(jié)的銜接（結(jié)尾句）正能量且與主題保持一致Hankwashelpedtogetdown.Shetoldthenewspaperofficeaboutthepeople’skindactstohelpherwithhercat.Sherealizedpeopleshouldliveinaworldwherepeoplewoulddowhatevertheycouldtohelpeachother......Hetookthe42-footladderunderthetree.Paragraph1:

ThenRoberttiedthepacktoabamboopole.

Paragraph2:Bushongtoldthekindactstoalocalnewspaperoffice.WhatactiondidRoberttakethen?Whatdidthecatdothen?DidRobertsavethecat?WhatdidBushongandtheneighborsfeel?WhatdidBushongtellthenewspaperoffice?WhatdidthelocalnewspaperofficerespondtothiseventWhatwastheendingofthestory?Onepossibleversion:

ThenRoberttiedthepacktoabamboopole.

Hetookthe42-footladderunderthetree.HeclimbeduptheladderandpositionedthepackjustbeneathHank.Tohisgreatdelight,Hankjumpedinafterawhile,andheloweredhimslowly.OnceHankwashelpedtogetdown,Bushonghuggedhimtightly,pattinghimconstantly.Bushongexpressedherappreciationtothepeoplethere.

Bushongtoldthekindactstoalocalnewspaperoffice.

Hank’sadventuretaughthisgratefulowneralessonaboutkindness.Shetoldthenewspaperofficethatshecouldn’tbelievethatthereweresomanypeoplegoingoutoftheirwaytohelpherwithhercat.Itmadeherrealizethatweshouldliveinaworldwherepeoplewoulddowhatevertheycouldtohelpeachotherandthatweshouldgiveothershope.好詞積累：Itisfrustratingtorealizesomethingyouloveisintroublebutyoupersonallycan'tdoanythingaboutit.Toherdelight