高三英語寫作公開課課件-(共26張)

英班級：高班時(shí)間：2020.09語寫作Whatmakesagoodwriting?AGoodWriting作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分?jǐn)?shù)檔要點(diǎn)詞匯語法交際邏輯21-25覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)豐富基本無錯得體，滿足要求清楚、合理16-20覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)基本滿足任務(wù)要求少許錯誤基本符合要求清楚、合理11-15漏掉一些要點(diǎn)有限有一些錯誤但不影響理解基本得體基本清楚6-10漏掉主要要點(diǎn)貧乏錯誤較多，影響理解不得體混亂1-5未能傳達(dá)任何信息，寫的內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)要點(diǎn)完整；語言準(zhǔn)確且多樣；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；

邏輯連貫交際得體書寫美觀好作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：好作文的寫作步驟(寫作七步法)審題體裁時(shí)態(tài)人稱要點(diǎn)列提綱結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵詞補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確地道詞匯句式連詞成句+過渡詞邏輯連貫流暢連句成篇潤色修正美化句子高級替換定稿審列補(bǔ)表連潤定

假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展，請寫一封信申請做志愿者。

內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的;

2.個人優(yōu)勢;3.能做的事

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好

Dearsirormadam,_________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,LiHua(2019全國1卷)體裁人稱時(shí)態(tài)要求一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)120左右

gallery,artcenter應(yīng)用文（申請信）第一人稱AChinesepaintingexhibition其它相關(guān)表達(dá)：中國畫Chinesepaintings,traditionalChineseart,theartworks.字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容avolunteer,thevoluntaryjob,theposition寫作背景:(抓關(guān)鍵詞)

美術(shù)館中國畫展

志愿者內(nèi)容要求：1.寫信目的;2.個人優(yōu)勢;3.能做的事1、審題自我介紹+寫信目的開頭正文結(jié)尾Para.1Para.2Para.3個人優(yōu)勢+能做的事（具體說明能勝任此工作的理由,3個優(yōu)勢）總結(jié)意愿2、列提綱自我介紹+寫信目的Para.1+我是李華，是從中國來的一個留學(xué)生；得知你們美術(shù)館要舉行中國畫展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地寫信想申請這個工作。補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.+anexchangestudent;thecomingChinesepaintingexhibition;thelocalgallery;can’twaittodo;applyfortheposition;IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.個人優(yōu)勢①+能做的事（中國畫展）Para.2因?yàn)閷χ袊鴤鹘y(tǒng)藝術(shù)非常感興趣并且受到過良好訓(xùn)練，所以我非常了解中國畫。我不僅可以給游客解說畫美在哪里，還可以講述他們背后的故事。+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：+traditionalChineseart;IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.

bedeeplyinterestedin;haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;notonly···butalso···;explaintoIcannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.個人優(yōu)勢②+能做的事（在倫敦的中國人）我的英語很流利，這使得我在與別人交流方面沒有障礙。haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Para.2+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：+communicatewithothers;havenotrouble/difficultyindoing個人優(yōu)勢③+能做的事（申請做志愿者）

我非常熱情并且有責(zé)任心，我相信我完全勝任志愿者工作。enthusiasticandresponsible;Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Para.2+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：+bequalifiedfor總結(jié)具備了以上提到的所有品質(zhì)(如上所述)，我可以肯定的說，我就是你要找的合適人選。Asismentionedabove；Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Para.2+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：+with；qualities表達(dá)感謝和期待回復(fù)Para.3如果你能考慮我的申請，我將十分感激。期待你的回復(fù)。Iwouldappreciateitif…;Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)：語言表達(dá)：連詞成句：+takemyapplicationintoconsideration/account/takeaccountof/seriouslyLookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.邏輯角度合適的過渡性詞匯⑴排序關(guān)系

⑵遞進(jìn)關(guān)系⑶舉例關(guān)系⑷轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系⑸因果關(guān)系⑹歸納總結(jié)⑺并列關(guān)系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexample

but;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;6、連句成篇：（使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使文章流暢）自我介紹+寫信目的開頭正文結(jié)尾Para.1Para.2Para.3個人優(yōu)勢+能做的事（具體說明能勝任此工作的理由,3個優(yōu)勢）總結(jié)意愿邏輯角度合適的過渡性詞匯⑴排序關(guān)系

⑵遞進(jìn)關(guān)系⑶舉例關(guān)系⑷轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系⑸因果關(guān)系⑹歸納總結(jié)⑺并列關(guān)系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexample

but;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;6、連句成篇：（使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞）6、連句成篇：DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.

Atfirst,IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.Icannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Besides,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Additionally,Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.好作文的寫作步驟(寫作七步法)審題體裁時(shí)態(tài)人稱要點(diǎn)列提綱結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵詞補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確地道詞匯句式連詞成句+過渡詞邏輯連貫流暢連句成篇潤色修正美化句子高級替換定稿審列補(bǔ)表連潤定二.使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔三.巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式一.使用較高級詞匯與句型使文章增加吸引力①強(qiáng)調(diào)句②With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)③定語從句④名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)⑤各種狀語從句⑥被動語態(tài)7、潤色修正方式一.使用較高級詞匯與句型使文章增加吸引力（形容詞做狀語，對謂語動詞強(qiáng)調(diào)）IamenthusiasticandresponsibleandIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Enthusiasticandresponsible,IdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.

7、潤色修正

DeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandhavingreceivedagoodeducationinart,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.二.使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandhavereceivedagoodeducationinart.IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.7、潤色修正Icannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.三.巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力NotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.7、潤色修正IamquitesatisfiedthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.四.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式(主語從句+表語從句)WhatsatisfiesmemostisthatmygoodcommandofEnglishmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.7、潤色修正DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.HearingthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaitto

applyfortheposition.

Deeplyinterestedin

traditionalChineseartandhavingreceivedagoodeducationinart,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.NotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Besides,WhatsatisfiesmemostisthatmygoodcommandofEnglishmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Additionally,enthusiasticandresponsible,IdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Withallthesequalitiesment