新高考英語一輪復習考點過關(guān)練考點22 應用文寫作：祝賀信、慰問信（解析版）

考點22應用文寫作：祝賀信、慰問信（解析版）【命題解讀】書信類寫作包括邀請信、感謝信、推薦信、求職信、祝賀信、告知信、求助信、建議信、道歉信、咨詢信以及慰問信等類別。 以下對祝賀信、慰問信類別提供對應的模板和基本寫作技巧。祝賀信【布局思維導圖】【基本模板】Dear______(稱謂)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______(祝賀事由).As______(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhen______(祝賀事由).Fortheseyears,you______(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).Notonlydid/have/were______(被祝賀人的努力),butalso______(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作實操技巧】 假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Michael在學校舉辦的“中國詩詞大會”比賽中獲得了外國選手組一等獎。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀。 1.祝賀他獲獎； 2.肯定他付出的努力； 3.詢問何時方便，一起交流一下中國古詩詞學習心得。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。中國詩詞大會ChinesePoetryContest______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMichael(稱謂)IamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupintheChinesePoetryContest(祝賀事由).Asyourfriend(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowyoursuccess(祝賀事由).Fortheseyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChinesepoetryandkeptonrecitingpoemseveryday(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).NotonlyhaveyouaccumulatedmuchknowledgeaboutChinesepoetry(被祝賀人的努力),butalsoyouhaveformedadeepunderstandingofit(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourappreciationtowardsthosepoems(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假設(shè)你是李華，來自美國的交流生Peter在你班學習半年，與你成為好朋友。目前，他即將完成學成回國，請你用英語給他寫一篇臨別留言。要點包括：

1.祝賀Peter學習漢語取得的成績；

2.取得成績的原因；

3.你們的友誼和對他的祝愿。注意： 1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右； 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearPeter(稱謂)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourachievementinyourstudy(祝賀事由).Asyourfriend(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowhaveachievedyourgoal(祝賀事由).Forthepastsixmonths,youastonisheduswithyouramazingtalentinlearningChinesewellinashortoftime(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).Notonlyareyoudiligentandactive,whichisvitalforChineselearning(被祝賀人的努力),butalsoyouhaveshowedyourgenuinepassionforChinesereading,whichenablesyoutohaveagoodmemoryforChinesecharacters(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourenthusiasm(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點). StillIknowit’stimeforustosaygoodbye.

Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua慰問信【布局思維導圖】【基本模板】Dear______(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthat______(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou(Ihopethattheunexpectedfailure/troublewon’tletyoudown).Youmust______(表達對遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnotto______(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,______(提供建議或幫助).Remember,

I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful（Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon）.Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作實操技巧】 假定你是李華，你的同班同學王剛的家鄉(xiāng)遭受臺風(TyphoonMujigae)的襲擊，洪水毀壞了家園。你作為班長給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.

表示安慰和關(guān)心；2.

提供幫助。注意： 1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearWangGang(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatahorribleandsevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometownandyourhouseisinruins(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavesufferedalotfromtheaccident(表達對遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,wewillsparenoefforttohelpyou.We’vemadeadonationofsomemoney,expectingitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Asfor

thelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup(提供建議或幫助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon.Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mike來信說他現(xiàn)在心情很不好，因為在上周結(jié)束的?；@球比賽中，他所在的班級籃球隊以一分之差輸了。請你給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.表示安慰；2.

提出建議。注意： 1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右； 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMike(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavebeeninbadmood(表達對遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottobedepressed(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,theessence

ofcompetition

liesnotin

victory

butin

participation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses(提供建議或幫助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Yoursincerely,LiHua【真題1】（2008全國1）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：1、 自我介紹；2、 祝賀蘇琳生日；3、 感謝工作人員；4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________