新高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)考點(diǎn)過關(guān)練考點(diǎn)22 應(yīng)用文寫作：祝賀信、慰問信（解析版）

考點(diǎn)22應(yīng)用文寫作：祝賀信、慰問信（解析版）【命題解讀】書信類寫作包括邀請(qǐng)信、感謝信、推薦信、求職信、祝賀信、告知信、求助信、建議信、道歉信、咨詢信以及慰問信等類別。 以下對(duì)祝賀信、慰問信類別提供對(duì)應(yīng)的模板和基本寫作技巧。祝賀信【布局思維導(dǎo)圖】【基本模板】Dear______(稱謂)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______(祝賀事由).As______(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhen______(祝賀事由).Fortheseyears,you______(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).Notonlydid/have/were______(被祝賀人的努力),butalso______(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作實(shí)操技巧】 假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Michael在學(xué)校舉辦的“中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)”比賽中獲得了外國(guó)選手組一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀。 1.祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng)； 2.肯定他付出的努力； 3.詢問何時(shí)方便，一起交流一下中國(guó)古詩(shī)詞學(xué)習(xí)心得。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)ChinesePoetryContest______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMichael(稱謂)IamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupintheChinesePoetryContest(祝賀事由).Asyourfriend(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowyoursuccess(祝賀事由).Fortheseyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChinesepoetryandkeptonrecitingpoemseveryday(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).NotonlyhaveyouaccumulatedmuchknowledgeaboutChinesepoetry(被祝賀人的努力),butalsoyouhaveformedadeepunderstandingofit(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourappreciationtowardsthosepoems(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)). Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假設(shè)你是李華，來自美國(guó)的交流生Peter在你班學(xué)習(xí)半年，與你成為好朋友。目前，他即將完成學(xué)成回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你用英語給他寫一篇臨別留言。要點(diǎn)包括：

1.祝賀Peter學(xué)習(xí)漢語取得的成績(jī)；

2.取得成績(jī)的原因；

3.你們的友誼和對(duì)他的祝愿。注意： 1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearPeter(稱謂)Iamwritingtoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourachievementinyourstudy(祝賀事由).Asyourfriend(身份關(guān)系),IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIwaswhenIknowhaveachievedyourgoal(祝賀事由).Forthepastsixmonths,youastonisheduswithyouramazingtalentinlearningChinesewellinashortoftime(被祝賀人過去的經(jīng)歷).Notonlyareyoudiligentandactive,whichisvitalforChineselearning(被祝賀人的努力),butalsoyouhaveshowedyourgenuinepassionforChinesereading,whichenablesyoutohaveagoodmemoryforChinesecharacters(被祝賀人的努力).Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyourenthusiasm(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)). StillIknowit’stimeforustosaygoodbye.

Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yoursincerely,LiHua慰問信【布局思維導(dǎo)圖】【基本模板】Dear______(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthat______(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou(Ihopethattheunexpectedfailure/troublewon’tletyoudown).Youmust______(表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnotto______(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,______(提供建議或幫助).Remember,

I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful（Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon）.Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作實(shí)操技巧】 假定你是李華，你的同班同學(xué)王剛的家鄉(xiāng)遭受臺(tái)風(fēng)(TyphoonMujigae)的襲擊，洪水毀壞了家園。你作為班長(zhǎng)給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.

表示安慰和關(guān)心；2.

提供幫助。注意： 1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearWangGang(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatahorribleandsevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometownandyourhouseisinruins(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavesufferedalotfromtheaccident(表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,wewillsparenoefforttohelpyou.We’vemadeadonationofsomemoney,expectingitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Asfor

thelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup(提供建議或幫助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Hopeyoucanhaveyourtroublesremovedsoon.Yoursincerely,LiHua【仿寫演練】 假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike來信說他現(xiàn)在心情很不好，因?yàn)樵谏现芙Y(jié)束的?；@球比賽中，他所在的班級(jí)籃球隊(duì)以一分之差輸了。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.表示安慰；2.

提出建議。注意： 1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMike(稱謂)WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend(寫信原由).Iamwritingtoextend

sincerepityandcareforyou.Youmusthavebeeninbadmood(表達(dá)對(duì)遭遇的理解).However，ifyouwerebraveenoughnottobedepressed(悲觀失望等),

whichisadmirable.Anyway，Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanliftyourspiritsto

faceupto

theresult.Plus,theessence

ofcompetition

liesnotin

victory

butin

participation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses(提供建議或幫助).Remember,I

won’tbefaraway.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Yoursincerely,LiHua【真題1】（2008全國(guó)1）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：1、 自我介紹；2、 祝賀蘇琳生日；3、 感謝工作人員；4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________