深圳2020-2024年中考英語真題專題07 書面表達(dá)（解析版）

深圳2020-2024年中考英語真題專題07書面表達(dá)-教師【五年考情回顧】年份體裁主題內(nèi)容2024年演講稿假如你是李華，你的作品在“theBeautyofNature”主題攝影展上獲得了一等獎。你的英語老師邀請你在“英語一分鐘演講”上給同學(xué)們做分享。2022年演講稿假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)們拍了一個畢業(yè)活動視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚(yáng)”的國際中學(xué)生vlog作品展。請給該視頻寫一段解說詞。2021年新聞報(bào)道深圳是一座科技之城、創(chuàng)新之城，為培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對科技的興趣，你的學(xué)校上周舉辦了科技節(jié)。假定你是你校英語報(bào)的小記者，請你編寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，介紹這次活動。2020年倡議書深圳市正在爭創(chuàng)全國文明城市、假定你是鵬城中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席，希望同學(xué)們?yōu)?創(chuàng)文'做出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。請你按照所提示的要點(diǎn)，代表學(xué)生會寫一篇倡議書。1．（2024·廣東深圳·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的作品在“theBeautyofNature”主題攝影展上獲得了一等獎。你的英語老師邀請你在“英語一分鐘演講”上給同學(xué)們做分享。要點(diǎn)如下：1.拍攝的時間，地點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容；2.選擇這張照片的原因；3.參賽感受。Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!ThankYou!【答案】例文：Dearclassmates,MynameisLiHua,whoisinterestedinphotography.HereIwouldliketosharemypicturewithyou.ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.Howcutetheyare!ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.Actually,italsoshowsustheharmonybetweentheanimalsandnature.TakingpartinthiscompetitionmakesmerealizethebeautyofnatureandletusprotectourEarthtogether!That’sall!Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為演講稿；②時態(tài)：以“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹演講的主題，即介紹自己在攝影展上獲得一等獎的照片；第二步，介紹照片拍攝的時間、地點(diǎn)以及內(nèi)容；第三步，闡述選擇這張照片的原因；最后，表達(dá)自己的參賽感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對……感興趣②wouldliketodosth.想要做某事③harmony和諧④takepartin參加⑤realize意識到[高分句型]①ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.（which引導(dǎo)定語從句）②Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.（If引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）③ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.（sucha/anadj.+名詞+that從句）2．（2022·廣東深圳·中考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)們拍了一個畢業(yè)活動視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚(yáng)”的國際中學(xué)生vlog作品展。請給該視頻寫一段解說詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.海邊活動：下午：①沙灘排球；②……；晚上：搭帳篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享會。2.活動感言。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯：沖浪surf

帳篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【答案】例文Hi,everyone!IamLiHua.lt’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,wehadabeachvolleyballgame.Then,weenjoyedthefunofsurfinginthesea.Beforedark,wepickedupthelitteronthebeach.Howmeaningfulitwas!Atnight,weputuptwotentsandhadapicnic.Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.Finally,allofussharedourfeelingsaboutthisfantasticexperience.Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇解說詞，屬于演講稿寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)介紹在海邊的活動，包括下午和晚上的具體活動，要列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)活動帶來的感悟并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①pickupthelitter撿垃圾②notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Howmeaningfulitwas!（how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句）②Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.（過去分詞作定語）③Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.（部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）3．（2021·廣東深圳·中考真題）深圳是一座科技之城、創(chuàng)新之城，為培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對科技的興趣，你的學(xué)校上周舉辦了科技節(jié)。假定你是你校英語報(bào)的小記者，請你編寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，介紹這次活動。要點(diǎn)：1.活動目的2.活動項(xiàng)目：模型制作比賽3.活動亮點(diǎn)：學(xué)生發(fā)明的服務(wù)于校園的機(jī)器人：外表、功能4.學(xué)生感受提示詞：1.科技節(jié)sciencefestival

2.實(shí)驗(yàn)experimentShenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Shenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,ourschoolheldasciencefestival,whichaimstodevelopstudents’interestinscienceandtechnologyandbroadentheirhorizons.Atthefestival,somestudentstookanactivepartinthemodel-makingcompetition.Manyoftheirrobots,whichwerethehighlightofthefestival,drewpeople’sattention.Theserobotswereintheshapeoflovelyanimals,suchasrabbits,monkeysanddogs.Theyweredoingsomesimpletaskslikesweepingthefloorandthrowingawayrubbish.Besides,someotherstudentscarriedoutscienceexperiments.Thestudentswhowerepresentatthefestivalwereallsurprisedattheexhibitsandgavethemabigaroundofapplause.Ourschoolhopesthatmoreandmorestudentscanlearnscienceandtechnologybettertoserveourcountry.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于新聞報(bào)道的寫作，在寫作時要根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，介紹科技節(jié)的目的，活動項(xiàng)目以及活動亮點(diǎn)和學(xué)生們的感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，內(nèi)容完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。4．（2020·廣東深圳·中考真題）深圳市正在爭創(chuàng)全國文明城市、假定你是鵬城中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席，希望同學(xué)們?yōu)?創(chuàng)文'做出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。請你按照所提示的要點(diǎn)，代表學(xué)生會寫一篇倡議書。環(huán)境保護(hù)①垃圾分類；②綠色出行公益慈善①志愿服務(wù)；②……人際交往①誠信友善；②……要求：1、詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2、要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯：分類sortout

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貢獻(xiàn)contributionDearfriends,Asweknow,ShenzhenisworkinghardtowinthetitleofChina'sNationalCivilizedCity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Allinall,Shenzhenisourhome.It'stimetotakeaction.TheStudentUnionJuly20,2020【答案】Dearfriends,Asweknow,ShenzhenisworkinghardtowinthetitleofChina'sNationalCivilizedCity.(引出話題)It'swellknownthatShenzhenisstrivingforoneofthetencivilizedcitiesinChina,andnowitisagoodopportunityforustomakeourowncontributions.(倡議緣由)Firstly,morechangesinourdailylife,suchassortingouttherubbishandtravellinginagreenerway,canbemadetoprotectthecityenvironment.What'smore,tomakeShenzhenalovingcity,wearealsosupposedtohelpthoseinneedbydoingsomevoluntaryworkorraisingdonations.【高分句型一】Lastbutnotleast,getalongwithothersinanhonestandfriendlyway.We'dbetteravoidtalkingaboutothers'privacyifwewanttoshowourrespect.(具體介紹如何做)IstronglybelievethatwewillmakeShenzhenamorecivilizedandbeautifulcitywithourjointefforts.(展望)Allinall,Shenzhenisourhome.It'stimetotakeaction.【高分句型二】(號召)TheStudentUnionJuly20,2020【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于倡議書寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第一段引出話題；第二段寫倡議緣由；第三段具體介紹如何做；第四段進(jìn)行展望；第五段號召大家行動起來。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來進(jìn)行寫作；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。5．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）假如你是李華，你校交流生Tom將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)禮儀。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.提前5—6分鐘到；2.帶合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀：①用餐時，需等長輩先動筷子，②吃飯時避免發(fā)出聲響，③……要求：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使語句通順、條理清楚、意義連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；4.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：風(fēng)俗(custom)DearTom,Howareyoudoing?Learning_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】參考范文DearTom,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwonderingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstly,trytoarrive5to6minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,bringingsomeappropriategiftsforthehostisakindaction.Thingslikesmallgiftsfromyourhomecountrycanserveasnicegifts.Besides,understandingtablemannersisalsoimportant.WhendiningwithaChinesefamily,remembertowaitfortheelderlytostartthedinnerfirst.Trynottomakeanynoisewheneating.Also,pleaseavoidstickingyourchopsticksintoyourfood,andinstead,laythemonyourdish.Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Yours,LiHua【詳解】【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中餐桌禮儀的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，語句連貫，條理清楚，突出重點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“交流生湯姆將去中國朋友家做客”來引出重點(diǎn)建議的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，從“時間”“禮物”“餐桌禮儀”三個維度進(jìn)行闡述，每個部分都包含具體細(xì)節(jié)，如提前到達(dá)5-6分鐘、合適的禮物類型以及餐桌上的注意事項(xiàng)。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“如有問題，隨時聯(lián)系我”。體現(xiàn)了友好和支持的態(tài)度。【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①payavisitto拜訪；參觀②putforward提出③serveas充當(dāng)【高分句型】①LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwonderingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.（現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語）②Firstly,trytoarrive5to6minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）③Secondly,bringingsomeappropriategiftsforthehostisakindaction.（動名詞短語作主語）④WhendiningwithaChinesefamily,remembertowaitfortheelderlytostartthedinnerfirst.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）6．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）你校英文報(bào)打算增加一個欄目“用英語講好中國故事”（“TellingChina’sStoriesinEnglish”）。你是欄目負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Ray寫封郵件咨詢建議。內(nèi)容包括：1．介紹欄目意義：弘揚(yáng)中國文化（自行補(bǔ)充2—3點(diǎn)）；2．詢問他的建議；3．表達(dá)感謝和期望。欄目

column要求：1．80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4．標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。DearRay,MynameisLiHua.Astheleaderofthenewcolumn“TellingChina’sStories”forourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,I’mwritingto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文DearRay,MynameisLiHua.Astheleaderofthenewcolumn“TellingChina’sStories”forourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,I’mwritingtodiscussandseekyourvaluableadvice.OuraimwiththiscolumnistoshareinformativeandengagingstoriesaboutChineseculture.Thereasonswillbeillustratedasfollows.Tobeginwith,thisinitiativeaimstocelebrateandpromoteChineseculture.What’smore,webelieveitwillencouragestudentstodeveloptheirEnglishlanguageskillsthroughstorytelling.Anotherpurposeofitistoenhancestudents’cross-culturalunderstandingandfosteradeeperappreciationforourrichculturalheritage.Besides,itwillalsomakeournewspapermorecomprehensiveandhelpusgainmorepopularity.Givenyourexpertiseinstorytellingandculturalexchange,wehighlyvalueyoursuggestionsoradviceregardingthecontentplan,oranyotheraspectsofthecolumn.Thankyouforyourtime.We’reeagertohearyourthoughtsandexcitedaboutthepossibilityofcooperatingwithyouonthisexcitingproject.YoursSincerely,LiHua.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹這個欄目，并向外教咨詢建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明寫作目的；第二步，介紹這個欄目的意義；第三步，詢問他的建議；第四步，表達(dá)感謝和期望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①tobeginwith首先②encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人做某事③beeagertodosth.迫切要做某事[高分句型]①OuraimwiththiscolumnistoshareinformativeandengagingstoriesaboutChineseculture.(動詞不定式作表語)②Givenyourexpertiseinstorytellingandculturalexchange,wehighlyvalueyoursuggestionsoradviceregardingthecontentplan,oranyotheraspectsofthecolumn.(過去分詞作狀語)7．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）假如你是學(xué)生李華，你校下周將舉辦主題為“節(jié)儉讓你更美麗”的英文演講比賽活動，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿。生活中的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象請簡述至少兩種。節(jié)儉的必要性請列出至少兩點(diǎn)。節(jié)儉的做法至少兩點(diǎn)做法并適當(dāng)舉例說明。要求：1.80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi))；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使語句通順、條理清楚、意義連貫；4.書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。SavingmakesyoumorebeautifulDearteachersandfellowstudents,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文SavingmakesyoumorebeautifulDearteachersandfellowstudents,

Asweknow,oneoftoday’shottopicsistosaveresources.However,manypeoplewastefood,water,electricityandsoon.Weoftenseelightsandfansleftonwhenpeopleleavetheroom.Theydon’trealizethebadeffectoftheirbehavior.Itcanmakethembecomemoreselfish.What’smore,itcancausethereductionofenergyandresource.It’stimeforustosay“NO”tounnecessarywaste.Itisverynecessarytosavesomethingtomakeyoumorebeautiful.Hereismyadviceasfollows.

First,weshouldn’tleavethetaponafterusingit.Besides,eatupthefoodweorderintherestaurant,orpacktheleftovers.Furthermore,remembertoturnoffthelightsortheair-conditionersbeforeleavingtheroom.Let’stakeactiontostopwastingresources.Wecanmakeadifference.

Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是演講稿；②時態(tài)：主要時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格內(nèi)的提示要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“眾所周知，當(dāng)今的熱門話題之一是節(jié)約資源”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象、節(jié)儉的必要性以及節(jié)儉的做法等一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“謝謝您的聆聽”的感謝。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①eatup吃光②turnoff關(guān)閉③takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Besides,eatupthefoodweorderintherestaurant,orpacktheleftovers.(祈使句）②Weoftenseelightsandfansleftonwhenpeopleleavetheroom.(狀語從句)8．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）假如你是李華，臨近中考沖刺階段，你將向同學(xué)們分享如何提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)如下：1.制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃；2.養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣:①早睡早起②勤鍛煉③……；3.有樂觀的態(tài)度?！⒁猓?.詞數(shù)為80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文章不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯:highschoolentranceexam（中考）It’smyhonortobeheretogiveaspeech.

Thankyouforlistening.【答案】

It’smyhonortobeheretogiveaspeech.

Asthehighschoolentranceexamiscoming,weshouldlearntobeself-disciplined.Tomakeusreviewourlessonseffectively,I’vemadealistofthingsIneedtodo.I’dliketosharemyideaswithyou.

Thefirstthingformeistomakeagoodlearningplanformyself.Secondly,Ithinkformingagoodlivinghabitwillbenefitmealotinbothofmystudyandhealth.Asweknow,earlytobedandearlytorisemakesmehealthy,wealthyandwise.AlsoIneedtoeathealthilyandsaynotojunkfood.Besides,tomakemyselfactiveandstrong,Iplantodoanhour’sexerciseatleastaday.Additionally,Iwillmanagetohaveapositiveattitudetowardsthestressandfacedifficultybravely.IfIamhappy,Icanstudybetter.Inall,Ibelievebeingself-disciplinedwillbringmeenjoymentandsuccess.Ihopemoreandmorestudentscanjointhegroupofbeingself-disciplinedlikeme.

Thankyouforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為發(fā)言稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題。表明“中考即將到來，分享關(guān)于‘提高復(fù)習(xí)效率’的一些觀點(diǎn)和建議”；第二步，介紹具體要做的事情，并闡明如何實(shí)施。圍繞“制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃、養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、樹立積極樂觀的的態(tài)度”等方面展開；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。“感謝大家聆聽”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①giveaspeech做演講，發(fā)言②self-disciplined自律③haveapositiveattitudetowards對……有積極的態(tài)度④makeagoodlearningplan制定一個好的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃⑤earlytobedandearlytorise早睡早起[高分句型]①Asthehighschoolentranceexamiscoming,weshouldlearntobeself-disciplined.（as引導(dǎo)狀語從句）②Asweknow,earlytobedandearlytorisemakesmehealthy,wealthyandwise.（as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）9．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）近些年來，刷短視頻(shortvideo)占據(jù)了許多人的空閑時間。有人擔(dān)心短視頻最終會取代文本閱讀，但也有人認(rèn)為不會。針對此現(xiàn)象，英文?？鏕reenBuds面向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出征文倡議，請你就此寫一篇文章投稿，發(fā)表自己的看法。要點(diǎn)；1.闡述目前過度刷視頻的現(xiàn)象；2.此現(xiàn)象引發(fā)的負(fù)面影響（至少兩點(diǎn)）；3.呼吁大家理性刷視頻。要求；1.短文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。提示詞:browseshortvideos(刷短視頻)MyViewonShortVideosOverthepastfewyears,itiscommonthatpeoplespendexcessivetimeonbrowsingshortvideoswhichmaybringsomenegativeeffects.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyViewonShortVideosOverthepastfewyears,itiscommonthatpeoplespendexcessivetimeonbrowsingshortvideoswhichmaybringsomenegativeeffects.Firstofall,watchingshortvideoswasteslotsoftime.Sometimes,studentsspendtoomuchtimewatchingshortvideos,whichcaninfluencetheirschoolwork.Someevenstayuplatewatchingshortvideosandoftenfeeltiredandsleepyinclass.Next,watchingshortvideosisalsobadforoureyes.Studentsmayhavelesstimeforsportsandthat’snotgoodfortheirhealth.What’sworse,someofthebadshortvideosmayleadtonegativevaluesorbadbehaviors.Finally,someevenarguewiththeirparentsbecausetheirparentsstopthemwatchingshortvideos.Inmyopinion,videosmightchangethewayweentertainourselves,buttextsarelikeimmortalstarswhichshinefromthepasttothefuture.So,videowillneverreplacetext.Asstudents,weshouldtakeourschoolworkandhomelivesmoreseriously.It’snecessaryforustocontrolthetimeofwatchingshortvideos.Whenwearefree,wecansharethehousework,readsomebooksordosomesports.Workhardandenjoyourselves.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括所列三個方面的要點(diǎn)，要