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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容及所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Christmaswasapproaching,andIhadnoideawhattogetformywife.WehadjustmovedtoItaly.Donnawasawayattendinganimportantmeeting,soIhadtherestoftheweektofigureoutwhattogetherasaChristmasgiftbeforeshegotback.MyhousepartnerwhileDonnawasawaywashercat,Princess,whowaseverythingthathernameimplied.IwaskeepingPrincessindoorsinournewhomeuntilshebecamefamiliarwiththeplaceandthenplannedtoslowlyintroducehertothegreatoutdoors.Princesshadotherideas,andslippedoutofthehouseasIwasbringinginsomefood.BythetimeIhadturnedaroundandgonebackoutofthedoortolookforher,shewasgone.DonnawouldbebackinafewdaysanditwouldruinChristmasforbothofusifPrincesswasnotbackbythen,safeandsound.DonnahadalreadyexcitedlytoldmeoverthephonethatshehadfoundseveralfuntoysanddelicioussnacksforPrincessasChristmasgifts.Shecouldn’twaittogetbackandwrapthemup.Iwasinbigtrouble.IhadtofindPrincessassoonaspossible.So,ImadeupaposterofthecatthatIpersonallydrewbecauseIcouldn’tfindaphotoofheranywhere.Iwassuremywifehadhundredsonherphone,butIdidn’tdareaskherforone.Perhapsbecausemyposterwerenotsoclear,soonpeopleintheareacametomyhousewithseveralhomelesscats.ThoughPrincesswasn’tamongthem,Iletthemstayinouryard.IfiguredDonnawouldunderstand.Donna’shappydailycallscontinued,asdidmydailysearchesforPrincess.Istillhadn’tmentionedanythingaboutthedisappearancetomywife.Finally,thedaycameformywifetoreturn.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右;2.開頭已給出。Paragraph1:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意圣誕節(jié)快到了,妻子唐娜(Donna)外出開會,我要為她準備圣誕禮物。唐娜不在時,她的貓公主(Princess)溜出了家門。我知道如果在唐娜回來前找不回公主,這個圣誕節(jié)就毀了,因為唐娜已經(jīng)為公主準備了圣誕禮物。我找不到公主的照片,就自己畫了海報尋找,雖然沒找到公主,但收留了一些被送來的流浪貓。唐娜每天都開心地和我打電話,而我一直在找公主,沒敢告訴她貓丟了,終于到了唐娜回來的日子。伏筆與續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆:我不敢向妻子要公主的照片。續(xù)寫中我向妻子坦白貓丟了的事,解釋了沒要照片的原因,回應(yīng)了這個伏筆,推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆:我收留了流浪貓。續(xù)寫中妻子看到流浪貓后流淚,我的解釋和妻子的反應(yīng)都圍繞這個伏筆展開,體現(xiàn)了我們的善良。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線:忐忑、愧疚。我在機場接妻子時決定坦白,心里忐忑不安,因弄丟公主而愧疚,向妻子講述事情經(jīng)過和自己的努力。故事線:描述在機場接妻子時我的緊張心情,如實告訴她公主走失了,以及我制作海報、收留流浪貓的過程。續(xù)寫示范:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.Itookadeepbreathandsaid,"Donna,Princessgotout.I'vebeenlookingeverywhere.Imadeaposterbutitdidn'tworkwell.I'msosorry."Iwatchedherfaceclosely,waitingforherreaction.第二段情感線:感動、善良。妻子看到流浪貓流淚,既有對公主走失的難過,也有被我收留流浪貓行為感動的成分,展現(xiàn)出善良的品質(zhì)。故事線:講述妻子看到院子里流浪貓后的反應(yīng),包括流淚,我向她解釋收留原因,我們決定一起尋找公主。續(xù)寫示范:WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.IquicklyexplainedthatIletthemstayaspeoplebroughtthemthinkingtheywerePrincess.ShesmiledthroughhertearsandsaidweshouldkeeplookingforPrincesstogether.情感線從最初找貓時的焦急,到接妻子時的忐忑、愧疚,再到妻子看到流浪貓后的感動與難過交織,情感細膩且符合情境,使讀者能深切感受到人物內(nèi)心世界。情感變化推動故事發(fā)展,讓讀者更關(guān)注后續(xù)找貓的情節(jié)和夫妻間的情感。故事線故事圍繞公主走失展開,包括我找貓、準備向妻子坦白、妻子回來后的情節(jié),情節(jié)完整、邏輯清晰,有明確的起因、經(jīng)過和發(fā)展方向。每個環(huán)節(jié)緊密相連,突出了夫妻間的情感、對寵物的愛以及善良對待流浪動物的主題。主旨升華句"Trueloveisn'tjustaboutthejoyofsharinggoodtimes,butalsothestrengthtofacedifficultiestogether."(真正的愛不只是分享美好時光的快樂,也是共同面對困難的力量。)"Inthesearchforourlostbeloved,weoftendiscoverthedepthofourhumanityandkindness."(在尋找我們走失的所愛之物時,我們常常發(fā)現(xiàn)人性和善良的深度。)"Eveninthefaceofloss,ourabilitytoshowcompassiontoothercreaturesdefinesourtruecharacter."(即使面對失去,我們對其他生物表現(xiàn)出同情的能力決定了我們的真實品格。)"ThejourneyoffindingPrincesstaughtusthatlovecanextendbeyondourownpetstothoseinneed."(尋找公主的過程教會我們,愛可以從我們自己的寵物延伸到那些有需要的動物身上。)"OuractionsduringthiscrisisshowthatthespiritofChristmasisnotjustaboutgifts,butaboutloveandkindnesstowardsalllivingbeings."(我們在這場危機中的行動表明,圣誕節(jié)的精神不僅僅是禮物,還有對所有生物的愛和善良。)下水文一Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.Itookherhands,lookedintohereyes,andsaidwithguilt,“Donna,Princessgotout.I’vetriedsohardtofindher.”Itoldheraboutthehomemadeposterandthecatsbroughtbyneighbors.Shewasshockedatfirst,butthenshehuggedme,sayingitwasn’tmyfault.
WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.Shewentovertothemandpettedthemgently.Shesaidthroughhertearsthatitwasakindthingtodo.WebothknewwehadtokeeplookingforPrincess,butthesecatsalsoneededourcarefornow.下水文二Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.InervouslytoldherthatPrincesshadslippedawayandthatI'dbeensearchingfrantically.IshowedhertheroughdrawingontheposterandexplainedhowI'dlettheothercatsstay.Donna'sfacefell,butsheremainedcalm.
WhenDonnasawthehomelesscatsintheyard,hereyesjustfilledwithtears.Shecroucheddowntocomfortthem.ShetoldmethatalthoughshewasworriedaboutPrincess,thesepoorcreaturesdeservedlovetoo.WedecidedtosearchforPrincesstogetherandalsotakecareofthenewcats.參考答案Paragraph1:Ipickedherupattheairportanddecidedtotellherwhathadhappened.IexplainedtoheraboutPrincessandhowIhadbeensearchingforhereveryday.Donnawasunderstandingandsupportive,butshecouldn'thelpfeelingsadaboutPrincess.WespentthenextfewdaystryingtofindP
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