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PAGE第四講增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，錦上添花在英語書面表達中，增加細微環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不行少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生肯定不能簡潔地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充溢、詞數(shù)要求不達標或者結構不連貫等問題。適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習作流暢、豐滿，達到應有的表達效果。eq\a\vs4\al(技能一列舉詳細的實例進行補充說明)1.(2024年全國卷Ⅰ書面表達)另外，你最好帶一些小禮物。Besides,you'dbetterbringsomelittlegifts.→Besides,you'dbetterbringsomelittlegifts,suchasaspecialfoodordrinkfromyourcountry．2．我們青少年應盡我們所能愛護環(huán)境、挽救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy．3．我要花一些時間和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework．4．我是一個充溢活力的健康男孩，我特別喜愛體育運動。IamahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch,especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates．5．我想找一個像我一樣喜愛旅行的筆友。I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences．技能二增加與所寫信息相關的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1.(2024年全國卷Ⅱ書面表達)它講解并描述了一所學校的發(fā)展歷程。Ittellsthestoryofaschoolgrowingup.→Ittellsthestoryofaschoolgrowingup,fromsmalltolarge,fromweaktostrong.(背景渲染)2．我有時去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相關背景)3．旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbutveryhappy.(心理描寫)技能三增加相關信息的時間、地點等內(nèi)容1.(2024年全國卷Ⅱ書面表達)歡迎任何對這部電影感愛好的人來學校報告廳觀看。Anyonewhoshowsinterestinthefilmiswelcometoschool'slecturehalltoenjoyit.→Anyonewhoshowsinterestinthefilmiswelcometoschool'slecturehall,locatedonthefirstfloorofthethirdteachingbuilding,toenjoyit.(增加地點)2．我被這個城市的漂亮所吸引。Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecity.→IwasattractedbythebeautyofthecityassoonasIarrivedhereat6o'clockinthemorningbyplane.(增加時間)技能四適當增加與所給信息相關的緣由、結果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容1．假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假支配。請依據(jù)下面要點寫一封回信，說明你的支配，并簡述理由。①休息；讀書；②參與社會活動(1)Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears．Ofcourse,I'lldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.(因果關系)(2)I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime,I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)→Ifpossible,I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)→I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(目的狀語)2．Tracy來電話說在咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)的見面取消了。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehassomethingimportanttodo.(緣由狀語)3．我也幫助鄰里的孩子補習英語。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增加結果)技能五結尾適當發(fā)揮，寫出個人感受、評價、希望、愿景、倡議等1.(2024年全國卷Ⅲ書面表達)I'mlookingforwardtoyourarrivalandjoiningmeinexperiencingitinthenearfuture.(希望)2．AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個人感受)3．Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評價)4．Asastudent，it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議)‖即學即練‖Ⅰ.按要求對下列句子進行擴充1．每天要努力學習，為每一次考試做出細致的支配。(增加條件狀語)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.______________.答案：Ifweareprepared,wewillnotfeelworried2．復旦高校位于上海。(增加which引導的非限制性定語從句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai,_____________________________.答案：whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience3．不管我將面對什么樣的困難，我都不會屈服。(增加目的狀語)_____________________________，whateverchallengeIwillface,Iwillnevergivein.答案：Torealizemydream4．我們應當學會如何與他人相處。(增加詳細實例進行補充說明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers._____________________．答案：Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlytoourclassmates5．一些學生特別擔憂考試以至于晚上無法入睡。(增加結果狀語)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycan'tfallasleepatnight._______________________________________________________________．答案：Asaresult,theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcan'tconcentrateinclassⅡ.請為下面的短文適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)DearSam，TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.NowI'lltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.