安徽省2024八年級英語上冊Module7Afamousstory寫作能力提升練課件新版外研版

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錄CONTENTS01話題寫作常見錯誤呈現(xiàn)02寫作實踐03實戰(zhàn)演練下面句子均有1～2處錯誤，請找出并寫出正確的句子。1.

ThereisagirlcalledMary.Heisveryfriendly.

?2.Iwasdoingmyhomework,whilehetalkedwithhisfriend.

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?ThereisagirlcalledMary.Sheisveryfriendly.

Iwasdoingmyhomework,whilehewastalkingwithhis

friend.

4.Thereisinterestingnothinginthisbook.

?Thereisnothinginterestinginthisbook.

3.EveryoneinChinaknowfamousstory.

?EveryoneinChinaknowsthefamousstory.

《愛麗絲漫游奇境記》中愛麗絲跟著兔子進(jìn)入洞里，但根

本沒想過自己要怎么出來。愛麗絲后來發(fā)生了什么，又遇到

了哪些奇怪的事？請根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇故事。Timec5pm5：05

pm6：30pm6：50pmPlacesinatreeina

gardeninahouseonthegrassCharac

tersthe

Cheshire

Catthe

White

RabbittheMadHatterand

theMarchHaretheKing

andthe

QueenActiviti

essmilingrunninghavingateapartysittingand

playing2.注意過去進(jìn)行時的使用。要求：

詞數(shù)80左右。提示內(nèi)容：

1.按照表格提示的順序?qū)懽鳎?.

體裁：

記敘文

2.人稱：

第三人稱3.

時態(tài)：

敘述故事，用一般過去時和過去進(jìn)行時。［審題指導(dǎo)］［思路構(gòu)建］ThenAlicewentdownintoalargerabbitholeaftertherabbit

butneverthoughtabouthowshewasgoingtogetoutagain.［精彩范文］First，AlicesawtheCheshireCatsmilinginatreeat5pm.

Shewasverysurprisedthatacatcouldsmile.Shecameovertoa

garden.JustthentheWhiteRabbitwasrunningpasther.Itwas

5：05pm.WhenAliceenteredahouseat6：30pm，shefound

thattheMadHatterandtheMarchHarewereatthetable，

havingateaparty.Whensheranoutofthehouseat6：50pm，shesawtheKing

andtheQueen.TheKingwassittingonthegrassandtheQueen

wasplaying.

你讀過或聽過《龜兔賽跑》的故事嗎？假如你是李輝，請

你用英語在郵件里寫一下這個故事，把它介紹給你的外國筆

友托尼。注意：

1.句子要通順、連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80左右。提示：tortoise龜；havearace舉行賽跑；catchupwithsb.趕

上某人I’lltellyouastory.

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?Oneday,arabbitandatortoise

decidedtohavearace.Theybothwantedtoreachtheend

first.Therabbitthoughtthathecouldwintheraceeasily

becausehecouldrunmuchfasterthanthetortoise.Therace

started.Therabbitranfastatfirst.TherabbitthoughttheDearTony，tortoisecouldnevercatchupwithhim,sohedecidedto

havearestunderatree.Aftertherest,hecouldnotseethe

tortoise,sohethoughtthatthetortoisemightgiveup

running.Buttohissurprise,thetortoisearrivedmuch

earlierthanhim.Therabbitlosttherace.

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