高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+帕金森畫家父親：用創(chuàng)作對(duì)抗病魔+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)帕金森畫家父親：用創(chuàng)作對(duì)抗病魔1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Myfather,Michael,ledmethroughthelittlewoodenhousehe’dfilledwithhispaintings.“WhenIhaveanexhibition...”hebegan,pointingtotheartworkshe’dcreated,beforestopping.“PoorPa,”Ithought.In1994hegotParkinson’sDisease(帕金森氏病),whichhadshockedthewholefamilyashewasonlyinhisforties.Ahusbandandfathertothree,Pahadhadasuccessfulcareerrunninganadvertisingagencyandhadalwaysbeenextremelycreative.Outsideofwork,he’dspent15yearsfrontingthecoverband,MusicalChairs,whichperformedatthepubinSydney’sDoubleBayeachweekand,whenIbecameamother,hedevelopedaveryclosebondwithmydaughter.4續(xù)寫原文EvenwhenhisParkinson’sadvanced,myfatherdecidedhewantedtopaint.“Whydon’tyoutryclasses?”mymumLouisasuggestedtohim.Heagreed.Inartlessons,theclasspractisedpaintingstilllifeobjects,likepears,butmyfatherhadotherideasforhisinspiration.Hebeganproducingabstractpieces,inspiredbyhisfavouriteartist,JacksonPollock,aleadingabstractexpressionist.“Whyabstract?”Iaskedhim.“Because,”hereplied,“ithelpsustoseetheworldaroundusinadifferentway.Youcanlookatthesepaintingsandask‘whatif?’”5續(xù)寫原文Soon,Irealizedhewasright.WhenIobservedmyfather’swork,Icouldinterpreteachoftheminmanyways.Oncehegotstarted,heshowednosignsofslowingdown.Thelittlehousewasquicklyfilledwithmoreandmoreworks.Butin2019,Padevelopedcancerandwasgivenjustthreemonthstolive.Thethoughtoflosinghimwastoomuchforanyofmyfamilytoaccept,butwesoonreceivedgreatnewsthatanewformoftreatmentcanhelphimgreatly.Sincehecontinuedspeakingaboutwantingtosharehispaintingswiththeworld,Iknewwhathadtobedone.6段首句Paragraph1:ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Paragraph2:Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以人物為中心展開，文章講述了文章講述了作者的父親邁克爾，他曾有著成功的廣告事業(yè)，還在樂隊(duì)活躍，家庭美滿。然而1994年，四十多歲的他不幸患上帕金森氏病。患病后他仍決定投身繪畫，在繪畫課上他受喜愛的抽象表現(xiàn)主義畫家啟發(fā)創(chuàng)作抽象畫，其作品有著多樣解讀。2019年又患癌癥且生命垂危，好在新治療方法帶來希望。因父親一直想與世界分享畫作，作者便決心為其實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望，展現(xiàn)出在疾病困境中父親對(duì)繪畫的熱愛以及家人對(duì)他的支持與守護(hù)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.我告訴他我會(huì)幫他籌備一場(chǎng)畫展。父親的眼中閃過一絲驚喜與欣慰交織的光芒。我們立刻行動(dòng)起來。我著手列出可能的場(chǎng)地清單，聯(lián)系當(dāng)?shù)氐拿佬g(shù)館和社區(qū)中心。盡管被疾病纏身而身體虛弱，父親仍積極參與挑選要展出的畫作，講述每一幅背后的故事與靈感來源。我們還設(shè)計(jì)了邀請(qǐng)函，以父親的抽象畫作作為背景。那些日子里，電話、會(huì)議和精心的籌備工作填滿了生活。隨著展覽日期逐漸臨近，我們心中既滿懷期待又有些緊張，期望他的創(chuàng)作能得到大家的喜愛。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.一個(gè)月后，那個(gè)重要的日子終于來臨。畫廊里彌漫著柔和溫暖的光線，讓父親的畫作看起來更加生動(dòng)鮮艷。人們開始陸續(xù)抵達(dá)，有朋友、家人以及藝術(shù)愛好者。父親身著他最愛的西裝，被推進(jìn)畫廊。看著人們圍聚在他的作品周圍，討論著、欣賞著，他的臉上滿是自豪。我站在他身旁，將那些渴望見到藝術(shù)家本人的人介紹給他。觀眾們沉浸在抽象之美中時(shí)，現(xiàn)場(chǎng)時(shí)而寂靜無聲，時(shí)而又爆發(fā)出熱烈的交談。這一天，不僅是對(duì)父親藝術(shù)的頌揚(yáng)，更是對(duì)他在病痛面前不屈精神的禮贊。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Father'seyeslitupwithamixtureofsurpriseanddelight.Weimmediatelysprangintoaction.Istartedbymakingalistofpotentialvenues,contactinglocalartgalleriesandcommunitycenters.Father,thoughweakenedbyhisillnesses,activelyparticipatedinselectingthepaintingstobedisplayed,sharingthestoriesandinspirationsbehindeachpiece.Wealsodesignedinvitations,withfather'sabstractartworksasthebackground.Dayswerefilledwithphonecalls,meetings,andcarefularrangements.Astheexhibitiondatedrewnearer,webothfeltasenseofanticipationandnervousness,hopingthathiscreationswouldbewell-received.14范文呈現(xiàn)Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.Thegallerywasfilledwithasoft,warmlightthatmadefather'spaintingsseemevenmorevibrant.Peoplestartedtoarrive,friends,family,andartenthusiasts.Father,dressedinhisfavoritesuit,waswheeledintothegallery.Hisfacewasfilledwithprideashewatchedpeoplegatheringaroundhisworks,discussingandadmiringthem.Istoodbyhisside,introducinghimtothosewhowereeagertomeettheartist.Thereweremomentsofsilenceasviewersimmersedthemselvesintheabstractbeauty,andthenburstsofexcitedconversation.Itwasadaythatcelebratednotonlyfather'sartbutalsohisunwaveringspiritinthefaceofillness.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Father'seyes,whichwerefilledwithamixtureofsurpriseanddelight,litupinstantly.Weimmediatelysprangintoaction.Icommencedbymakingalistofpotentialvenues,contactinglocalartgalleriesandcommunitycenters.Despitebeingweakenedbyhisillnesses,fatheractivelyparticipatedinchoosingthepaintingstobeexhibited,sharingthestoriesandinspirationsbehindeachpiece.Theinvitationswedesignedhadfather'sabstractartworksasthebackground.Dayswerefilledwithphonecalls,meetingsandmeticulousarrangements.Astheexhibitiondateapproachednearer,asenseofanticipationandnervousnessfilledbothofus,hopingthathiscreationswouldbewell-received.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallyarrived.Thegallery,bathedinasoft,warmlight,madefather'spaintingsseemevenmorevivid.Peoplebegantoarrive,includingfriends,familyandartenthusiasts.Father,dressedinhisfavoritesuit,waswheeledintothegallery.Itwashisfacethatwasbeamingwithprideashewatchedpeoplegatheringaroundhisworks,discussingandadmiringthem.Standingbyhisside,Iintroducedhimtothoseeagertomeettheartist.Thereweremomentsofsilencewhenviewersimmersedth