Unit1Friend-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級英語上冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(牛津譯林版)(原卷版+解析)

Unit1Friends單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度自薦信人物介紹（榜樣、親人、朋友、老師、同學(xué)等）本單元的話題是“朋友”，主要介紹朋友的外貌、性格、愛好、未來計劃等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。寫作主要涉及對人物進(jìn)行介紹。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.正確運(yùn)用描述外貌特征的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠用語言描述主人公性格的變化情況；3.能夠用簡潔的語言介紹主人公的興趣愛好和理想；4.能夠正確使用形容詞的比較級和最高級；將主人公與其他人進(jìn)行對比，并能將主人公的過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對比?！驹~匯積累】Jobs:1.醫(yī)生 2.護(hù)士 3.廚師4.歌手 5.游泳者 6.警察Looks：7.好看的8.英俊的9.圓的10.直的 11.可愛的 12.微笑的13.胖的 14.苗條的 15.長的16.矮的；短的 17.棕色的 18.漂亮的Personality：19.聰明的 20.有禮貌的 21.友好的22.慷慨的 23.勤奮的 24.有幫助的25.誠實的 26.幽默的 27.有耐心的28.害羞的【短語積累】1.保守秘密2.關(guān)心3.樂于干……4.長大5.幽默感6.讓座7.說壞話8.講笑話【句型積累】1.Ihaveafriend.His（Her）nameis...2....hasashort/long/curly/straight/black/blondhair.3....hasaface/nose/mouth/eyes/ears....face/nose/mouth/eyes/earsis（are）...4.He（She）oftenwears...glasses.5.He（She）istall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong.He（She）isastall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong...as...He（She）istaller/shorter/fatter/thinner/slimmer/strongerthan...6.He（She）isclever/smart/generous/helpful/kind/friendly...7.He（She）likes...8.He（She）wantstobea...whenhe/shegrowsup.9.MybestfriendisMax.我最好的朋友是馬克斯。10.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.有一雙又大又亮的眼睛和一頭長長的直發(fā)。11.Heisthetallestboyinourclass—almost1.75metres.他是我們班最高的男生——幾乎1.75米。12.Hewearssmallroundglasses.他戴小圓眼鏡。13.Sheisslimandhasshorthair.她很苗條并且留短發(fā)。14.Bettyisgenerous.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithherfriends.貝蒂慷慨大方。她樂意與她的朋友們共享她的東西。15.Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.她也樂于助人并且隨時準(zhǔn)備幫助別人。16.Maxhasagoodsenseofhumour.Hetellsfunnyjokesandalwaysmakesmelaugh.馬克斯有很好的幽默感。他講滑稽的笑話，總讓我捧腹大笑。17.Bettyhasagoodvoice.Shewantstobeasingerwhenshegrowsup.貝蒂有一副好嗓子，她長大了想當(dāng)一名歌手?！局V語積累】?有朋自遠(yuǎn)方來，不亦樂乎？.人生沒有朋友，猶如生活沒有陽光。.患難見真情。.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f能寫作模板】模板①介紹人物的外形特征Ihavemademanygoodfriends.（引出人物）isoneofthem.Sheis（總體給人的感覺）.Sheistalland（身材）.Herhairis（頭發(fā)）.Shealwayswears（表情）andgivesustheimpressionthat（給人的印象）.介紹人物的外形特征介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個典型的事例提出愿望isalwayswillingto（性格）.Sheisgoodat（特長）.WheneverIhaveproblemsI.Once（引出事例）.Tomysurprise,.介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個典型的事例提出愿望Wewill,butIhope（表達(dá)愿望）.模板②人物介紹人物介紹（年齡、外貌、身份、性格等）...isanine-year-oldboy.Heisvery...and...Heisverynaughty.Andhe...典型事例（說明性格、品質(zhì)等）人物評價（喜愛、夸贊等情感）Heoften...Onedayhe......likehimverymuch.Ithinkhe...假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，表格中是Susan的個人信息，請你根據(jù)提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要點提示：NameSusanAge14CountryAmericaAppearanceTall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharactersLovely,helpfulFavouritesportsSwimming,runningHobbiesReading,listeningtomusicInterestChinesehistoryandculture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】1.點題，引入正文：agoodfriend,hername2.詳細(xì)介紹Susan的個人信息：14yearsold,fromAmerica,withblueeyes,longgoldenhair,doingsports,enjoyreadingbooks,lovelyandfriendly,getonwellwith3.結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)開頭，表明觀點：belucky,havesuchagoodfriend【佳作賞析】MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She'sfromAmerica.She'satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What'smore，sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She'slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She'salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp，IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I'mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.常用詞匯：tall,strong,square,smiling,helpful,humour,wear,singer,bored,unhappy常用短語：haveasquareface,smilingeyes,wearglasses,becauseof,toomuch,haveagoodsenseofhumour,feelbored,tellfunnyjokes,makesb.Laugh,growup,workhard常用句型：He/Shehas...He/Shedoesn'tlike...He/Shewantstobe...whenhe/shegrowsup.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.一、給好朋友制作一張IDcard。IDCardphotoName:____________photoLooks:_____________Personality:____________________________二、中譯英。（翻譯要點：先判斷句子：主謂賓還是主系表，有形容詞的句子大多是主系表）長大后，她想成為一名英語老師。__________________________________________________________________他總會在公交車上給需要的人讓座。__________________________________________________________________Tony戴著一副圓框眼鏡。__________________________________________________________________她人很好，從不說別人壞話。__________________________________________________________________他長得比我?guī)洑?。__________________________________________________________________Lisa的臉上總是掛著笑容。__________________________________________________________________三、連句成篇。請你根據(jù)提示完成英語短文，介紹一下Mary。提示：1.Mary有一雙大眼睛，圓圓的臉，披肩發(fā)，很可愛；2.她對朋友很慷慨，樂于助人；3.她很有幽默感，常講笑話給朋友們聽；4.她會替朋友保守秘密。她是一個真正的朋友。Maryisgirl,bigeyesonherface.Shehasshoulder-lengthhair.Sheisherfriends.Shethinkssheshouldsharefriendsandhelppeople.Shehasagood.Shealwaystellstoherfriendshappy.Herfriendsneverfeelwhentheyarewithher.Shecanherfriends.Sheisafriend.（一）以下是你的好朋友Mike在外貌、性格和愛好方面的變化。請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹他的變化并談?wù)勀銓λ淖兓目捶ā懸黄簧儆?0詞的短文。InthepastNowAppearancethin,shorttall,strong,wearglassesPersonalityquietoutgoingHobbieswatchTVplaybasketball,readbooksMyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）請你以“Mybestfriend”為題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition:●WhatclassisJennyin?●What’sJenny’shobby?●WhatsportsdoesJennylike?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●especially●volleyball●violin要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mybestfriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）作為一個國際化城市，深圳每年都有大量的外國學(xué)生來留學(xué)和交流，假如你是李華，美國PinkmanMiddleschool的師生將到你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流，需要在中方學(xué)生中征集接待美國學(xué)生的寄宿家庭，你與父母商量后決定做出申請。請你向美方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫一封申請信。要點提示：（1）介紹家庭成員：一家三口，父親母親皆為英語老師，為人友善。（2）介紹你家條件：有單獨(dú)的臥室，學(xué)校離家近。（3）說明你們?yōu)榻涣魃媱澋奶厣顒?。（一到兩項）要求：?）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）（2）要點齊全，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；（3）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實。參考詞匯（僅供參考）：separate單獨(dú)的DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（一）（2023年湖南省株洲市中考真題）學(xué)校英語角即將開展一次以“朋友”為主題的演講活動，請你寫一篇演講稿參加活動，包括以下內(nèi)容：1.你最好的朋友是什么樣的？2.你的朋友曾給予過你什么？3.你準(zhǔn)備為你的朋友做什么？詞數(shù)90左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2023年四川省涼山彝族自治州中考真題）在成長的過程中，你一定遇到過讓你感到溫暖的人。比如對你噓寒問暖的親人，帶你遨游知識海洋的老師，伴你嬉戲暢玩的伙伴……為了表達(dá)對他（她）的感謝，請你以“Thanks,________”為標(biāo)題，根據(jù)下面思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，向校園廣播站投稿。Thanks,________Everyonemustmeetaspecialpersonwhomakesyoufeelwarminlife,yourparent,yourteacherormaybeyourfriend___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）（2022年遼寧省沈陽市中考真題）榜樣是我們學(xué)習(xí)的楷模、努力的方向。學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)開展以“介紹我心中的榜樣”為主題的社團(tuán)活動。假如你是李華，請你寫一封英文發(fā)言稿來介紹你心中的榜樣——李想。內(nèi)容包括：1.人物描寫；2.說明理由；3.表達(dá)希望?！咀⒁狻?.詞數(shù)80—100，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實校名和姓名。Dearfellowstudents,IamLiHua.TodayIwouldliketointroduceLiXiang,amodelstudentinmymind.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!（四）（2022年四川省阿壩州、甘孜州中考真題）假設(shè)你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去倫敦Linda家住一段時間。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語給Linda寫一封郵件，介紹你姐姐的基本情況。姓名LiRong年齡16外貌中等身高、黑色短發(fā)性格隨和、外向、友好愛好歷史、博物館、烹飪、打籃球衣著T恤、牛仔褲注意：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息，如姓名、校名等；(2)文中應(yīng)包含表格所給信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；(3)詞數(shù)80-100。DearLinda,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing

Unit1Friends單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度自薦信人物介紹（榜樣、親人、朋友、老師、同學(xué)等）本單元的話題是“朋友”，主要介紹朋友的外貌、性格、愛好、未來計劃等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。寫作主要涉及對人物進(jìn)行介紹。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.正確運(yùn)用描述外貌特征的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠用語言描述主人公性格的變化情況；3.能夠用簡潔的語言介紹主人公的興趣愛好和理想；4.能夠正確使用形容詞的比較級和最高級；將主人公與其他人進(jìn)行對比，并能將主人公的過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對比。【詞匯積累】Jobs:1.醫(yī)生doctor 2.護(hù)士nurse 3.廚師cook4.歌手singer 5.游泳者swimmer 6.警察policeLooks：7.好看的good-looking 8.英俊的handsome 9.圓的round10.直的straight 11.可愛的lovely/cute/sweet 12.微笑的smiling13.胖的fat 14.苗條的slim 15.長的long16.矮的；短的short 17.棕色的brown 18.漂亮的beautiful/prettyPersonality：19.聰明的clever/smart 20.有禮貌的polite 21.友好的friendly/kind22.慷慨的generous 23.勤奮的hard-working 24.有幫助的helpful25.誠實的honest 26.幽默的humorous 27.有耐心的patient28.害羞的shy【短語積累】1.保守秘密keepasecret2.關(guān)心careabout3.樂于干……bewillingtodo/bereadytodo4.長大growup5.幽默感asenseofhumour6.讓座giveone’sseatto7.說壞話sayabadword8.講笑話tellfunnyjokes【句型積累】1.Ihaveafriend.His（Her）nameis...2....hasashort/long/curly/straight/black/blondhair.3....hasaface/nose/mouth/eyes/ears....face/nose/mouth/eyes/earsis（are）...4.He（She）oftenwears...glasses.5.He（She）istall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong.He（She）isastall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong...as...He（She）istaller/shorter/fatter/thinner/slimmer/strongerthan...6.He（She）isclever/smart/generous/helpful/kind/friendly...7.He（She）likes...8.He（She）wantstobea...whenhe/shegrowsup.9.MybestfriendisMax.我最好的朋友是馬克斯。10.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.有一雙又大又亮的眼睛和一頭長長的直發(fā)。11.Heisthetallestboyinourclass—almost1.75metres.他是我們班最高的男生——幾乎1.75米。12.Hewearssmallroundglasses.他戴小圓眼鏡。13.Sheisslimandhasshorthair.她很苗條并且留短發(fā)。14.Bettyisgenerous.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithherfriends.貝蒂慷慨大方。她樂意與她的朋友們共享她的東西。15.Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.她也樂于助人并且隨時準(zhǔn)備幫助別人。16.Maxhasagoodsenseofhumour.Hetellsfunnyjokesandalwaysmakesmelaugh.馬克斯有很好的幽默感。他講滑稽的笑話，總讓我捧腹大笑。17.Bettyhasagoodvoice.Shewantstobeasingerwhenshegrowsup.貝蒂有一副好嗓子，她長大了想當(dāng)一名歌手。【諺語積累】Isitnotajoytohavefriendscomingfromafar?有朋自遠(yuǎn)方來，不亦樂乎？Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutsunshine.人生沒有朋友，猶如生活沒有陽光。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f能寫作模板】模板①介紹人物的外形特征Ihavemademanygoodfriends.（引出人物）isoneofthem.Sheis（總體給人的感覺）.Sheistalland（身材）.Herhairis（頭發(fā)）.Shealwayswears（表情）andgivesustheimpressionthat（給人的印象）.介紹人物的外形特征介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個典型的事例提出愿望isalwayswillingto（性格）.Sheisgoodat（特長）.WheneverIhaveproblemsI.Once（引出事例）.Tomysurprise,.介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個典型的事例提出愿望Wewill,butIhope（表達(dá)愿望）.模板②人物介紹人物介紹（年齡、外貌、身份、性格等）...isanine-year-oldboy.Heisvery...and...Heisverynaughty.Andhe...典型事例（說明性格、品質(zhì)等）人物評價（喜愛、夸贊等情感）Heoften...Onedayhe......likehimverymuch.Ithinkhe...假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，表格中是Susan的個人信息，請你根據(jù)提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要點提示：NameSusanAge14CountryAmericaAppearanceTall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharactersLovely,helpfulFavouritesportsSwimming,runningHobbiesReading,listeningtomusicInterestChinesehistoryandculture【審題思路】1.點題，引入正文：agoodfriend,hername2.詳細(xì)介紹Susan的個人信息：14yearsold,fromAmerica,withblueeyes,longgoldenhair,doingsports,enjoyreadingbooks,lovelyandfriendly,getonwellwith3.結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)開頭，表明觀點：belucky,havesuchagoodfriend【佳作賞析】MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She'sfromAmerica.She'satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What'smore，sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She'slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She'salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp，IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I'mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.常用詞匯：tall,strong,square,smiling,helpful,humour,wear,singer,bored,unhappy常用短語：haveasquareface,smilingeyes,wearglasses,becauseof,toomuch,haveagoodsenseofhumour,feelbored,tellfunnyjokes,makesb.Laugh,growup,workhard常用句型：He/Shehas...He/Shedoesn'tlike...He/Shewantstobe...whenhe/shegrowsup.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.一、給好朋友制作一張IDcard。IDCardphotoName:____________photoLooks:_____________Personality:____________________________二、中譯英。（翻譯要點：先判斷句子：主謂賓還是主系表，有形容詞的句子大多是主系表）長大后，她想成為一名英語老師。__________________________________________________________________他總會在公交車上給需要的人讓座。__________________________________________________________________Tony戴著一副圓框眼鏡。__________________________________________________________________她人很好，從不說別人壞話。__________________________________________________________________他長得比我?guī)洑?。__________________________________________________________________Lisa的臉上總是掛著笑容。__________________________________________________________________【答案】（1）ShewantstobeanEnglishteacherwhenshegrowsup.Healwaysgivesherseatonthebustosomeoneinneed.Tonywearsroundglasses.Sheisfriendlyandneversaysbadwordsaboutothers.Heismorehandsomethanme.Lisaalwayshasasmileonherface.三、連句成篇。請你根據(jù)提示完成英語短文，介紹一下Mary。提示：1.Mary有一雙大眼睛，圓圓的臉，披肩發(fā)，很可愛；2.她對朋友很慷慨，樂于助人；3.她很有幽默感，常講笑話給朋友們聽；4.她會替朋友保守秘密。她是一個真正的朋友。Maryisagood-lookingandlovelygirl,withbigeyesonherroundface.Shehasshoulder-lengthhair.Sheisgeneroustoherfriends.Shethinkssheshouldshareeverythingwithfriendsandhelppeopleinneed.Shehasagoodsenseofhumour.Shealwaystellsfunnyjokestomakeherfriendshappy.Herfriendsneverfeelboredwhentheyarewithher.Shecankeepsecretsforherfriends.Sheisatruefriend.（一）以下是你的好朋友Mike在外貌、性格和愛好方面的變化。請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹他的變化并談?wù)勀銓λ淖兓目捶ā懸黄簧儆?0詞的短文。InthepastNowAppearancethin,shorttall,strong,wearglassesPersonalityquietoutgoingHobbieswatchTVplaybasketball,readbooksMyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹我的朋友改變了很多；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，從“長相、性格、愛好”等幾個方面重點介紹朋友的變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，祝愿我的朋友健康、聰明?！炯炎髻p析】MyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Heusedtobethinandshort,butnowheistallandstrong.Besides,hewearsglassesnow.Asforpersonality,heusedtobequiet,butnowheisoutgoing.Ithinkthechangesinhisappearanceandpersonalityarebecausethechangesofhishobbies.MikeusedtowatchTVandheseldomplayedoutside.However,atpresent,heisinterestedinplayingbasketballandreadingbooks.Exercisingandreadingmakehimmoreenergeticandoutgoing.IamsogladtoseethegoodchangesandIbelievemyfriendMikewillbehealthierandsmarter.【亮點詞匯】①usedtobe過去是②atpresent現(xiàn)在③beinterestdin對……感興趣【高分句型】①Exercisingandreadingmakehimmoreenergeticandoutgoing.（動名詞作主語）②IamsogladtoseethegoodchangesandIbelievemyfriendMikewillbehealthierandsmarter.（省略that的賓語從句）（二）請你以“Mybestfriend”為題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition:●WhatclassisJennyin?●What’sJenny’shobby?●WhatsportsdoesJennylike?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●especially●volleyball●violin要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mybestfriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，介紹自己最好的朋友是誰；第二步，介紹她的個人信息，愛好等；第三步，發(fā)表自己的評價。【佳作賞析】MybestfriendThisismybestfriendJenny.SheisagoodstudentandsheisstudyinginClass3,Grade8.Jennyhasmanyinterests.Shelikesplayingsports.Sheisespeciallygoodatplayingvolleyball.Sheplaysvolleyballwithherclassmatesafterschooleveryday.Shewantstobeanexcellentvolleyballplayer.Sheisalsogoodatsingingandplayingtheviolin,soshejoinsthemusicclub.Whatagoodgirlsheis!Ifeelluckytohavesuchafriend.【亮點詞匯】①begoodatdoingsth擅長做某事②afterschool放學(xué)后【高分句型】①Shelikesplayingsports.（動名詞作賓語）②Shewantstobeanexcellentvolleyballplayer.（動詞不定式作賓語）（三）作為一個國際化城市，深圳每年都有大量的外國學(xué)生來留學(xué)和交流，假如你是李華，美國PinkmanMiddleschool的師生將到你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流，需要在中方學(xué)生中征集接待美國學(xué)生的寄宿家庭，你與父母商量后決定做出申請。請你向美方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫一封申請信。要點提示：（1）介紹家庭成員：一家三口，父親母親皆為英語老師，為人友善。（2）介紹你家條件：有單獨(dú)的臥室，學(xué)校離家近。（3）說明你們?yōu)榻涣魃媱澋奶厣顒?。（一到兩項）要求：?）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）（2）要點齊全，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；（3）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實。參考詞匯（僅供參考）：separate單獨(dú)的DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【審題思路】①題材：本文是一封申請信；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，自我介紹以及說明寫信目的（已經(jīng)給出）；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。說明“家庭成員、家庭條件以及特色活動”的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)期待?！炯炎髻p析】DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.MyfatherandmotherareEnglishteachers.Theyareveryfriendly.WeallcanspeakEnglish,soitwillbeeasytocommunicatewithourg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