讀后續(xù)寫-意外之財與純真心意還錢背后的品德考驗講義-山東省東營市多校2024-2025學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期期中考試英語試題

閱讀下面材枓，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。8yearoldEvanwasstandingbythesidewalkwhenhenoticedMrs.Carteropeninghershopagain.Severaldaysago,whenEvanwaspassingbyherstore,hesawaclosedsignonthestore’sdoor.Whentheshopremainedclosedfornotjusttwodays,Evanwasworriedhe’dneverbeabletogethis“dreamjob”.85yearoldMrs.CarterwasawomansellingflowersforalivingandEvanhadbefriendedherwhenhehelpedhercrossthestreetoneday.Nowseeingheragain,Evanranuptoherandgreetedher.“CanIhelpyoutoday,Evan?Doyouwantflowers?”Mrs.Carterasked.Evansmiled,“I’mlookingforajob!Canyoupleasehireme?”“Ajob?”theelderlyladylaughed,thinkingEvanwastoolittleforthat.ButEvanproudlyrepliedheknewmanythings,likemakingsandwichesandhelpinghismomgetgrocerybagsfromthecar.Mrs.CarterlaughedandaskedEvanhowmuchmoneyshewouldhavetopayhimifshehiredhim.Evanshookhishead.“AllIwantisabigbouquet(花束)formymom.HernameisStaceyandherbirthdayisoneweekaway.Momsaysweshouldworkhardforwhatwewant.Iwanttoworkhardforthatbouquet.Canyouhireme?”Evanasked.Mrs.Carterwasimpressedandnodded.Thenforawholeweek,EvanwouldetoMrs.Carter’sstoreintheeveningsandhelpher,andhavingEvanaroundrelievedMrs.Carter’sboredomwhileshewasworking.SomecustomersthoughtEvanwaslovelyandentertaining,sotheyboughtmoreflowers.Mrs.Carter’sbusinessbecamebetter.Aweeklater,onEvan’slastdayonthejob,Mrs.Carterwasemotional.Theyhadgrowncloseforworkingtogether,andEvanhadbeelikeagrandchildtoher.WhilemakingahugebouquetforEvan’smother,Mrs.Cartersecretlyplacedoneenvelopeintothebouquet.Theenvelopecontained$200.Whenhandinghimthebouquet,shesaid,“Willyouetoseemesomeday,Evan?I’dbehappytohaveyouhere.”“Iwill!”EvansmiledandwavedgoodbyetoMrs.Carter.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請按如下格式作答。Carryingtheflowers,Evanrushedhometosurprisehismom.Carryingtheflowers,Evanrushedhometosurprisehismom.Then,EvanandhismomhurriedtoreturnthemoneytoMrs.Carter.文章大意：八歲的Evan為了在媽媽生日時送她一大束花，請求賣花的Mrs.Carter雇傭自己。他工作了一周，幫了Mrs.Carter不少忙，還讓店里生意變好。Mrs.Carter在給Evan準(zhǔn)備的花束里偷偷放了200美元。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：Evan說媽媽教導(dǎo)要為想要的東西努力工作。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：他努力工作得到花束送給媽媽，媽媽得知錢的事后，帶著他歸還，體現(xiàn)他們堅守靠努力獲取而非不勞而獲的價值觀。伏筆：Evan幫助Mrs.Carter并使店里生意變好。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Mrs.Carter出于感激和喜愛給了Evan錢，但Evan和媽媽不愿接受，展現(xiàn)他們正直的品質(zhì)。伏筆：Mrs.Carter把裝錢的信封偷偷放在花束里。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Evan和媽媽回家發(fā)現(xiàn)后決定歸還，推動后續(xù)情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：Evan與Mrs.Carter相處一周關(guān)系親近如祖孫。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：歸還錢時Mrs.Carter雖有些失落但理解，且他們的情誼未減，進(jìn)一步深化人物間的情感聯(lián)系。伏筆：Evan為媽媽生日努力工作換花束。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：媽媽收到花束后的驚喜與感動，以及后續(xù)歸還錢的行為，都圍繞著這份對媽媽的愛和家庭正確價值觀展開。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：描述Evan回家后媽媽看到花束的反應(yīng)，如驚喜、感動，詢問Evan得到花束的過程，然后發(fā)現(xiàn)信封里的錢。第二段：講述Evan和媽媽前往Mrs.Carter店里還錢的經(jīng)過，Mrs.Carter的反應(yīng)，以及最終這件事對Evan和Mrs.Carter關(guān)系的影響，還有Evan從中得到的感悟。情感線：Evan懷著對媽媽的愛和為目標(biāo)努力的熱情工作，媽媽收到花束時滿是驚喜與欣慰，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢后轉(zhuǎn)為嚴(yán)肅與堅定要歸還，Mrs.Carter從送錢時的感激與喜愛，到被還錢時的失落但理解，最后他們的情誼依然深厚，情感豐富且有起伏變化。故事線：Evan帶著花束回家給媽媽驚喜，媽媽發(fā)現(xiàn)錢后，他們一起回店還錢給Mrs.Carter，在這個過程中展現(xiàn)了人物的品質(zhì)和彼此間真摯的情感，也給Evan上了一堂關(guān)于道德與價值觀的課。主旨升華句：Truewealthisnotmeasuredbymoneybutbytheintegrityandkindnessoneholdsintheheart.（真正的財富不是用金錢衡量，而是由內(nèi)心秉持的正直與善良所決定。）Inthefaceofunexpectedgain,thechoicetodotherightthingreflectsthenoblestcharacter.（面對意外之財，做出正確的選擇彰顯最高尚的品格。）Thebondbetweenpeopleisstrengthenednotbymaterialofferingsbutbymutualrespectandmoraluprightness.（人與人之間的紐帶不是靠物質(zhì)饋贈加強，而是憑借相互尊重與道德正直。）Achild'supbringingismirroredinthechoicestheymakewhenfacedwithmoraldilemmas.（孩子的教養(yǎng)體現(xiàn)在面對道德困境時所做的選擇上。）Actsofhonestyandvirtuearethecornerstonesthatbuildasocietyoftrustandharmony.（誠實與美德的行為是構(gòu)建信任和諧社會的基石。）寫作示范一：Carryingtheflowers,Evanrushedhometosurprisehismom.Hismomwasinthekitchenwhenheburstthroughthedoor.“Happybirthday,Mom!”Evanshouted,presentingthebouquet.Hismom'seyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelight.ShehuggedEvantightly,askinghowhemanagedtogetsuchabeautifulbouquet.Asshearrangedtheflowersinavase,shenoticedtheenvelope.Whensheopeneditandsawthemoney,herexpressionturnedserious.ShetoldEvantheycouldn'tkeepitandhadtoreturnittoMrs.Carter.Then,EvanandhismomhurriedtoreturnthemoneytoMrs.Carter.Whentheyarrivedattheshop,Mrs.Carterwasabitsurprised.Evan'smomexplainedthattheyappreciatedthegesturebutcouldn'tacceptthemoneyasitwasimportantforEvantolearnthevalueofhardworkandhonesty.Mrs.Carterwasdisappointedatfirstbutthensmiled,understandingtheirstance.ShehuggedEvanandsaidhewasalwaysweleinhershop.Evanleftwithanewunderstandingthatdoingtherightthingwasmoreimportantthananyamountofmoney.寫作示范二：Carryingtheflowers,Evanrushedhometosurprisehismom.Hismotherwasreadingonthecouchwhenheentered.“Mom,lookwhatIgotforyou!”Evansaid,handingherthebouquet.Hismomwasoverjoyed,tearsofhappinesswellingupinhereyes.SheaskedEvanabouthisweekatMrs.Carter's.Asshewassmellingtheflowers,shefoundtheenvelope.Afterseeingthemoney,sheimmediatelydecidedtheymustgiveitback.ShetoldEvanitwasnotrighttotakemoneyforakindact.Then,EvanandhismomhurriedtoreturnthemoneytoMrs.Carter.Attheflowershop,Mrs.Cartergreetedthem.Evan'smompolitelyreturnedthemoney,sayingthatEvanhadworkedhardfortheflowers,notforthemoney.Mrs.Carterwastouchedbytheirhonesty.ShetoldEvanthathewasaspecialboyandthattheirfriendshipwasmorepreciousthananything.Evanrealizedthattheloveandrespectbetweenpeoplewerefarmorevaluablethanmaterialthingsandthatheshouldalwaysstrivetobeanhonestperson.讀后續(xù)寫參考范文：Carryingtheflowers,Evanrushedhometosurprisehismom.“Happybirthday,Mom!”hecried,runninguptoher.Staceywasshockedatthehugebouquet.“Wheredidyougetit?”sheasked.WhenEvantoldthewholestory,Staceywasdelightedandhuggedhersonclosely.Evansmiledandwasabouttog