四川省九地市2025屆高三第一次診斷性考試英語(yǔ)試題讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-跨越困境的感恩之旅+講義

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasNovember2008inAstoria,asmallcityinthewesternpartofOregon,USA.DonMcLean,a60-year-oldkind-heartedlandlord(房東),hadatenant(租客)namedJosiah,whowas50yearsoldandhadcomefromapoverty-strickenfamilytoseekworkinAstoria.WhenJosiahfirstmovedin,hewasclearlyhavingahardtimemakingendsmeet.DonnoticedthatJosiahwasconstantlyworriedandseeminglyeconomicalwitheveryexpense.HealsosawthatJosiahoftenateverysimpleandinsufficientmeals.Oneday,whentherentwasdue,JosiahcametoDonwithalookofgreatembarrassment.Hehesitatedashetriedtoexplainthathedidn'thavethefull$300.DonimmediatelyrealizedthedepthofJosiah'financialstruggle.Withouthesitation,hesaidtoJosiahsoftly,“Iknowyou'rehavingatoughtime.I'mgoingtoreducetherentto$100permonth.Weallneedahelpinghandsometimes.”JosiahwasextremelygratefulandgaveDonagreatdealofthanks.However,oneyearlater,Josiah'swifefellil.Worriedabouther,hereturnedtohishometown,whichwasafour-hourwalkfromAstoria,Duetothelongdistance,hiscommunicationwithDonbecamelessfrequent.Topayforhiswife'smedicalbillsandmedicine,Josiahspentallhissavings.Despiteworkinghardeverydayhestillcouldn'tmanagefinanciallyandledaverydifficultlife.Butfortunately,hiswife'sconditiongraduallyimproved.Oneday,JosiahhappenedtohearthatDonwasseriouslyillandstillinhospital.HeknewthatDon'ssonwasworkingintheUKandcouldn'treturnimmediately,Heonlyhadhiselderlywifebyhisside.RememberinghowDonhadhelpedhim,Josiahmadeafirmdecision:tovisitDon.Withonly$13inhispocket,JosiahchosetowalktoAstoriatosavemoney,Afteratiringfour-hourjourney,hefinallyarrived.注意:(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$l3inthepocket.Paragraph2:Withtheappleshespent$llon,JosiahenteredDon'shospitalroom.文章大意（300字）：這篇文章講述了一個(gè)發(fā)生在美國(guó)俄勒岡州阿斯托里亞小鎮(zhèn)的感人故事。房東DonMcLean是一個(gè)善良的老人，他的租客Josiah來(lái)自一個(gè)貧困家庭，生活拮據(jù)。Don在Josiah付不起房租時(shí)，慷慨地減免了他的租金。一年后，Josiah的妻子生病，他不得不回到四小時(shí)步行路程的家鄉(xiāng)，兩人的聯(lián)系變得稀少。當(dāng)Josiah得知Don病重住院，他決定步行回到阿斯托里亞去看望Don，以表達(dá)他的感激之情。這個(gè)故事展現(xiàn)了人與人之間的善良和互助，以及在困難時(shí)期人與人之間深厚的情感聯(lián)系。伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：Josiah經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，無(wú)法支付全額房租。回應(yīng)：Don減免了Josiah的房租，體現(xiàn)了他的善良和同情心。伏筆：Josiah的妻子生病，他回到遙遠(yuǎn)的家鄉(xiāng)?；貞?yīng)：這導(dǎo)致他與Don的聯(lián)系變得稀少，增加了故事的緊張感。伏筆：Josiah的妻子病情逐漸好轉(zhuǎn)?；貞?yīng)：這為Josiah能夠離開(kāi)家鄉(xiāng)去看望Don提供了可能。伏筆：Don病重住院，兒子在英國(guó)無(wú)法立即回來(lái)?；貞?yīng)：這突顯了Don的孤獨(dú)，為Josiah的行動(dòng)提供了動(dòng)機(jī)。伏筆：Josiah只有13美元，選擇步行去阿斯托里亞?；貞?yīng)：他用11美元買(mǎi)了蘋(píng)果，體現(xiàn)了他為了看望Don不惜一切代價(jià)的決心。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）：第一段：描述Josiah在饑餓中如何使用他僅有的13美元，以及他為何選擇買(mǎi)蘋(píng)果作為食物。第二段：描述Josiah帶著蘋(píng)果進(jìn)入Don的病房，以及他們之間情感交流的情景。情感線(xiàn)：文章中的情感線(xiàn)是Josiah和Don之間的友情和互助。從Don的慷慨幫助到Josiah不顧困難去看望病重的Don，兩人的情感聯(lián)系逐漸加深。故事線(xiàn)：故事從Josiah的經(jīng)濟(jì)困難和Don的善行開(kāi)始，經(jīng)歷了Josiah妻子的疾病和Don的孤獨(dú)，最終以Josiah步行回城看望Don作為高潮。主旨升華句（5句英文）："Intimesofneed,ahelpinghandcanchangelives.""Compassionknowsnobounds,anditisoftenreturnedinthemostunexpectedways.""Thetruemeasureofaperson'scharacterishowtheytreatthosewhoarestruggling.""Asmallactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonanother'slife.""Inthefaceofadversity,thehumanspiritisoftendefinedbyourcapacityforempathyandsupport."兩篇寫(xiě)作示范：示范一：Feelingthegnawinghunger,Josiahclutchedthethirteendollarsinhispocket.Hekneweverycentcounted,buthisbodydemandedsustenance.Withasigh,hedecidedonafrugalmeal-applesfromanearbymarketforelevendollars,keepingtwoforemergencies.Wearyfromthejourney,heclutchedthebagofapples,asymbolofhiscommitmenttoDon.UponenteringDon'shospitalroom,Josiah'sheartswelledwithamixofreliefandsorrow.Don'sweakenedstatewasastarkcontrasttotherobustmanwhohadonceshownhimkindness.Withagentlesmile,Josiahofferedanapple,asimplegesturethatspokevolumesaboutthedepthoftheirbond.示范二：Josiah'sstomachrumbledashefumbledwiththethirteendollarsinhispocket.Heknewhemustconservehisfunds,butthelongwalkhadlefthimfamished.Optingforthemosteconomicalchoice,hepurchasedabagofapplesforelevendollars,keepingtheremainingtwoforanyunforeseenneeds.AsheenteredDon'shospitalroom,Josiah'sspiritwasheavywithconcern.Don,onceapillarofstrength,nowlayfrailandconnectedtotubes.Josiah'ssimpleofferingofanapplewasatestamenttohisgratitudeandtheunbreakablebondtheyhadforged.Theireyesmet,andinthatmoment,thelanguageofgratitudeandcompassiontranscendedwords,bindingtheminamomentofsharedhumanity.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考答案1Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$13inthepocket.Howmuchhewantedtobuyhimselfsomethingtoeatwiththose13dollars!ButherememberedhowDonhadnothesitatedtolowertherentwhenhewasstruggling,andhehopedtobuysomething,howeversmall,tobringabitofcomforttoDonduringhisillness.RecallingthatDonhadoncementionedhisfondnessforapples,heknewwhatheshoulddo.Heused$11tobuyfiveapples,carefullyselectingthefreshestonesinthestore.Then,withtheremaining$2,heboughtasimplesandwichforhimselftoquicklyeasehishunger.Withtheappleshespent$11on,JosiahenteredDon'shospitalroom.Donwaslyinginbed,lookingpaleandweak.Josiahwalkedoverandsaidsoftly,“Don,I'mJosiah.”Donopenedhiseyesandwassurprised,“Josiah,whyareyouhere?”Donaskedweakly.JosiahheldDon'shand,saying,“YouhelpedmewhenIwasintrouble.Nowit'smyturntobehereforyou.“Then,DonaskedJosiahabouthisjourneyandtheapples.Josiahhadtotellhimthetruth.Hearingthis,Donwasdeeplytouchedandsaid,“Josiah,youhavesolittlebutstillthinkofme.Iwillneverforgetthisgesture.”讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考答案2Paragraph1:Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$13inthepocket.HeknewheneededtosaveeverypennyforDon'srecovery,buthisstomachwasgrowlingfromthelongwalk.Hedecidedtospendasmallportionofthemoneyonsomethingtoeat.Josiahfoundalocalmarketandboughtabagofapplesfor$11,keeping$2foranyunforeseenneeds.Theappleswouldhavetosufficeashismealfortheday.Withthebagofapplesinhand,hefeltamixofhungeranddetermination.HewasdeterminedtoseeDon,toexpresshisgratitudeinperson,andtoofferanysupporthecould,nomatterhowsmall.Paragraph2:Withtheappleshespent$11on,Josiahent