作文13 江西卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文解讀+素材積累

作文13江西卷2021年江西中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)TheValueofNegativeResultsWeallavoidfailure（失?。?andmostofusfearit.However,withoutfailure,progresswouldbeimpossible.Whatdoessuccessusuallycomeafter?Failure.Itseemsthatonecannotexist（存在）withouttheother.Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,thoughweareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.______Inthepasttenyears,forexample,somescientificmagazineshavepublishedreportsoffailedtests.Itisbelievedthatscientistscanlearnmore“negative（負(fù)面的）”resultsandthatthiscanfinallyleadtopositiveresults._______TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute（機(jī)構(gòu)）ofBrilliantFailurestolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.EliLillyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs（藥物）thatdon’twork.Infact,oneofthebusinessworld’smostfamousfailuresbecameoneofitsbiggestsuccesses,inpartbecausetheproduct’smakerslearnedfromtheirmistakes._____Theproduct,thoughunique（獨(dú)特的）atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy;besides,someofitsmostimportantfeatures（特點(diǎn)）didn’tworkproperly.Asaresult,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.______Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromitifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent（執(zhí)著的）.ThoughApplestoppedsellingtheNewtonin1998,thefirstiPhonewasn’tavailableuntil2007.IttookalotofresearchandhardworktogofromtheAppleNewtontoiPhonebutintheend,theeffortbecamesuccessful.Allinall,thereisalotwecanlearnbystudyingmistakes.Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin.______A．Onetrulycannotexistwithouttheother.B．Wearebraveenoughtofacedifficulties.C．Intheearly1990s,ApplecreatedaphonecalledtheAppleNewton.D．Thebusinessworldalreadyunderstandsthevalueofnegativeresults.E.TheAppleNewtonhaswonpopularitywithpeopleallovertheworld.F.However,thingsareslowlychanging,especiallyinbusinessandscience.G.ThestoryoftheAppleNewtoncanteachusanimportantlessonaboutfailure.1．_______2．_______3．______4．_______5．_______6、書(shū)面表達(dá)失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解部分文章討論了失敗對(duì)于獲取成功具有重要的價(jià)值請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)，采取有效行動(dòng)，失敗為成功。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?2Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?3Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?要求：1短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1．F2．D3．C4．G5．A

6、例文Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveourproblems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspokeninfrontofthepubliceversince.Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakinpublicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,bepersistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.【分析】本文介紹了人們對(duì)待錯(cuò)誤不同態(tài)度，過(guò)去的時(shí)候人們害怕錯(cuò)誤，避免錯(cuò)誤；現(xiàn)在人們正面錯(cuò)誤，從錯(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)，改進(jìn)產(chǎn)品。1．根據(jù)上一句“Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,though.Weareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.”可知人們并不愿意接受失敗，但通過(guò)空格后的內(nèi)容可以知道，人們開(kāi)始接受失敗，并在科技和商業(yè)界做一些與失敗有關(guān)的研究。前后存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，F(xiàn)選項(xiàng)“然而，事情在慢慢地改變，尤其是在商業(yè)和科技方面?！?，符合題意。故選F。2．根據(jù)空格后“TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute(機(jī)構(gòu))ofBrilliantFailuretolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.Similarly,EiLilyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs(藥物)thatdon’twork.”可知商界已有人士認(rèn)識(shí)到失敗的價(jià)值，并進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的研究，D選項(xiàng)“商界早已領(lǐng)悟到了負(fù)面結(jié)果的價(jià)值。”，符合題意。故選D。3．根據(jù)下文“Theproduct,thoughunique(獨(dú)特的)atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy”可知這個(gè)產(chǎn)品在那個(gè)時(shí)候是昂貴且笨重的，盡管很獨(dú)特，此處在介紹一個(gè)新的產(chǎn)品。C選項(xiàng)“在二十世紀(jì)九十年代初期，蘋(píng)果公司創(chuàng)造了一款名為蘋(píng)果牛頓的手機(jī)?！保项}意。故選C。4．根據(jù)前文“However,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.”舉蘋(píng)果公司由失敗到成功的例子，可知失敗極為重要，與后文“Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromit;ifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent(執(zhí)著的).如果我們想要獲得成功，不僅要從中學(xué)習(xí)，還要堅(jiān)持不懈?！毕嚆暯?。G選項(xiàng)“蘋(píng)果牛頓的故事告訴我們一個(gè)與失敗有關(guān)的重要道理?！狈项}意。故選G。5．根據(jù)前文“Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin?！笨芍∨c成功是同一枚硬幣的兩面，所以二者相互依存，A選項(xiàng)“失敗與成功無(wú)法離開(kāi)彼此而存在?！?，符合題意。故選A。6．（1）.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)閱讀理解B部分文章，談?wù)勅绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)，結(jié)合所給寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇文章。內(nèi)容包括從Apple的故事中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，你的失敗經(jīng)歷，要如何將失敗變?yōu)槌晒?。?）.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第一部分介紹從Apple的成功中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二部分描寫(xiě)自己的失敗經(jīng)歷，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)；第三部分為如何把失敗變?yōu)槌晒Γ瑫r(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要行文連貫，條理清晰，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。2020年江西中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)為了幫助學(xué)生迎接中考，在中考前幾個(gè)月，老師一般都會(huì)進(jìn)行復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)。一家英語(yǔ)教學(xué)研究中心(EnglishTeachingResearchCenter)正在對(duì)中考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向他們介紹你們班的英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的情況，談?wù)勀銓?duì)英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的感受及看法，并提出建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.YourfeelingsaboutyourEnglishrevisionclasses.2.Classactivities:a.WhatdidyourEnglishteacherusuallydoinclass?b.Whatdidyouusuallydoinclass?3.YouradviceonEnglishrevisionclassestoyourEnglishteacher.要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswere_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswereusefulbuttiring.Inclass,myEnglishteacherorganizeddifferentkindsofactivitiestohelpusreviewwhatwehadlearnt.Sometimessheexplainedhowtousethekeywordsandsentencepatterns.Wetooknotesandmadesentences.Withtheteacher'shelp,wepracticedlistening,readingandwritinginclass.Butweoftendidexercisesandhadexams,whichmademestressedout.IhopeEnglishrevisionclassescanbemoreenjoyable.Wecanplaygamesandrole—playconversations.It’sagoodideatohavediscussionswithmypartnersinEnglish.What’smore,Iliketeacherswhoarealwayswithasmile.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料類(lèi)作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于中考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀的文章，談?wù)勀銓?duì)英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的感受及看法、復(fù)習(xí)課上老師及同學(xué)開(kāi)展的一些活動(dòng)、個(gè)人對(duì)于英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的一些建議，以上寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)缺一不可。根據(jù)題目要求可知，本文時(shí)態(tài)以為一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全。首段介紹了自己對(duì)英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的感受以及老師在課堂上的教學(xué)活動(dòng)和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)情況；第二段介紹了個(gè)人對(duì)英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)課的改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)。文章使用了正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，符合表達(dá)的需要。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：takenotes；makesentences；practicedoingsth；stressedout；what’smore。句型：疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定式；which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；it作形式主語(yǔ)。2019年江西中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)文章討論了許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問(wèn)題，文章的最后指出：“Weneedtojudgepeoplebywhattheydo,notwhattheylooklike.”你同意文章最后提出的觀點(diǎn)嗎?對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)你有何看法?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎU述理由，并舉例說(shuō)明。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):I.Youropinion(agree/disagree/…);2.Reasons(looks,personality品性,ability…);3.Anexample(yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/…).要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.如舉自己或身邊的人作為例子，不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;3.詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PossibleversionOne;Iagreewiththeopinion.Comparedwithlooks,personalityandabilityaremoreimportant.Becausewecan’tchangeourlookseasily,butwecandecideandcontrolwhatwedo.Thankstothekindandhard-workingpeople,oursocietyisbecomingbetterandbetter.Forexample,MaYun,awell-knownbusinessman,doesn’tlookhandsome,buthecreatedAlibabawhichhaschangedourlifestyleandmadeourlifemoreconvenient.Hehasbeendoingsomuchforoursocietythatwealladmirehim.Becauseofhiscontributiontooursociety,weeventhinkhelookssocool.Solet’stryourbesttodomoreusefulthingsforoursocietyandpaylessattentiontoourlooks.PossibleVersionTwoInmyopinion,IthinkweneedtojudgepeoplebybothwhattheydoandwhattheylooklikeAperson'spersonalityandabilityareveryimportant,butforsomejobs,looksarealsoimportant,suchasanactororanactress,awaiterorawaitress,orevenateacherBecauseit'senjoyabletoseeagood-lookingpersonForexample,myteachersinmyclassallteachverywell,andtheyarekindandhelpful.Allofuslikethem.ButthemostpopularteacherismyEnglishteacher,becauseshelooksreallybeautiful.ShedressesherselfupeverydayandalwayshasasmileonherfaceSolet'stryourbesttoimproveourability,personalityandlooks.【詳解】這是一篇要求根據(jù)文章中許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問(wèn)題，文章最后提出判斷一個(gè)人應(yīng)該根據(jù)他做了什么，而不是根據(jù)一個(gè)人的外貌來(lái)判斷，對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)提出自己的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。2018年江西中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)假如國(guó)外中學(xué)生來(lái)你校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流學(xué)習(xí),期間計(jì)劃參加一項(xiàng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題活動(dòng),為此向你們征求活動(dòng)方案(plan)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,介紹你提供的活動(dòng)方案,內(nèi)容包括:茶或者民樂(lè)介紹,活動(dòng)安排以及與之相關(guān)的理由。要求:1.從表格中任選一個(gè)主題,合理安排活動(dòng);2.短文條理清楚,行文連貫,內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;4.詞數(shù)不少于80,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ChineseCultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPastandpresentTime:______Places:teafarm,teahouseActivities:1.teaprocessing2.ateaartperformance…FolkMusicMusicpiecesandtraditionalinstrumentsTime:_______Places:musicroom,schoolhallActivities:1.takemusicalinstrumentclasses2.attendafolkmusicconcert…Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroduce______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroducetea.Ithasalonghistory.ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina.Sowewillhavesomeinterestingactivitiesaboutitforyou.OnSaturdaymorning,youaregoingtovisitabigfarmwhereyoucanlearnaboutteaprocessing.OnSaturdayafternoon,youaregoingtoateahouseafterdinnerwhereyoucanwatchateaartperformance.Whydoweplanavisittoateahouseforyou?Becauseyoucanlearnalotmoreaboutteaculturethere.YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets.Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如helpsb.do，aboutChineseculture，I'dliketo，oneofthemostpopulardrinks，begoingto，afterdinner，alotmore，bemadewith，listento，haveagoodtime等。而ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina./YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets,/Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2017年江西中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)微笑是人類(lèi)最美的語(yǔ)言．某英文報(bào)以"Smiles"為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事給予你的啟示．

提示：短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；

詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．Power?of?smiles

（get?on?well,bring?good?luck,…）Your?own?story?about?smiles↖Smiles↗↑

What?you've?learnt?from?the?storySmilesA?smile?is?the?most?beautiful?language?of?human?beings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________????????????????????????????????????????????????

A?smile?is?the?most?beautiful?language?of?human?beings.First,Whenwehaveaproblem,conflictormisunderstanding,onlysmilecanhelpuscommunicateandrelease；whenwearefacingwithsomedifficulties,onlysmilecanhelpusovercome.Second,smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother＜高分句型＞．Third,smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill?thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.＜高分句型＞

IrememberIfightwithmybestfriend,I?amsosadandIamafraidthat?wewillnevertrusteachother.Butasmilemakesusbegoodfriendsagain.＜關(guān)于微笑的故事＞Fromthattimeon,Iknowthatnomatterhowlargethedifficultiesare,nomatterhowmuchthesadnessis,youneedtokeeponsmilingandtry?to?useasmiletocreateyourconfidence.＜從故事中得到的啟示＞【分析】這是一篇圖表作文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇以smile為題的作文，這要求我們發(fā)揮自己的思維力和想象力，寫(xiě)出微笑的力量，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該用第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，內(nèi)容包括：首先詳細(xì)闡述一下微笑的力量，其次，寫(xiě)一個(gè)關(guān)于自己的微笑的故事，并寫(xiě)出從故事中得到的啟示．

重點(diǎn)句型：

Smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother.譯為：微笑能幫助我們好好地與人相處，讓我們比此次信任．此句中短語(yǔ)特多，如helpsbdo

幫助某人做某事；getonwithsb

與人相處；makesbdosth讓某人干某事．一個(gè)句子中能有三個(gè)重要短語(yǔ)，不愧為高分句型

Smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill?thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.譯為：微笑能給我們帶來(lái)好運(yùn)．我們會(huì)認(rèn)為生活是陽(yáng)光的多彩的，此句中有個(gè)這個(gè)重要短語(yǔ)bringgoodluckto給．．帶來(lái)好運(yùn)；and連接兩個(gè)句子，構(gòu)成復(fù)合句．

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】寫(xiě)圖表作文時(shí)，我們最好不要漏掉其中的要點(diǎn)，行文注意簡(jiǎn)化，不要拖沓冗長(zhǎng)，適當(dāng)寫(xiě)幾個(gè)復(fù)合句比較用易得高分，但同時(shí)注意，適當(dāng)用幾個(gè)人連接詞，first,besides,what'smore,last等，這樣會(huì)使文章顯得有層次感，同時(shí)，在作文完成的時(shí)候注意檢查，修改，如果有條件的話(huà)最好能夠先打個(gè)草稿，再抄到答題紙上，方能成為一篇好文章中考英語(yǔ)作文滿(mǎn)分必備的句型1.重點(diǎn)句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能…

such…that…如此…以至于…

3).not…until…直到…才…

例：Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback。

4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說(shuō)了謊。)5).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子那是因?yàn)椤?).Itissaidthat+句子據(jù)說(shuō)…

Itisreportedthat+句子據(jù)報(bào)道…

8).Thereisnodoubtthat