專題13-應(yīng)用文寫作(13)-研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考

研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考Part1應(yīng)用文寫作文（十三）1．（2013·陜西卷）假定你是李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.做家務(wù)的理由；2.做家務(wù)的過程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文詞數(shù)不少于100；2.開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。Iaman18-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iaman18-yearoldmiddleschoolstudent.Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework.Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Isuddenlygotanidea:whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning?FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.Atthisverymoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseealltheroomstidyandfloorsshining.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseesatisfactioninhereyes.TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累很少：seldom→rarely開始：begin→start徹底的：thorough→complete驚訝的：surprised→astonished2.句式拓展句式轉(zhuǎn)換原句：TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.拓展句：ThoughIwastired,Ineverfeltsohappy.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）2．（2013·江西卷）星光中學(xué)（XingguangHighSchool）近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1．時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)：4月10日，大青山（DaqingMountain）；2．活動(dòng)的過程；3．你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!【詳解】試題分析：本文要求寫一篇報(bào)道。報(bào)道一次登山活動(dòng)。故時(shí)態(tài)使用一般過去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。首先寫清寫作目的，然后是時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，過程，包括如出發(fā)，途中，到達(dá)目的地等情況的介紹。最后寫活動(dòng)的意義，即對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論(感受)。文章比較容易入題?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】①高級(jí)句型結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，如感嘆句Whatawonderfultime及倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)notonly...butalso的運(yùn)用。②好的短語：setoutfor出發(fā),動(dòng)身，著手做某事inhighspirits情緒高昂fallbehind落后③非謂語動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用句式賦予變化，如：Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文的寫作。3．（2013·江蘇卷）請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)以下兩幅圖的理解，以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。參考詞：banner(橫幅)stump(樹樁)你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:1.簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；2.概述你對(duì)兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；3.舉例說明兩幅圖對(duì)你的啟示。注意：1.可參照?qǐng)D片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.作文詞數(shù)150左右；3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ActionsSpeakLouderthanWordsPeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.Themessageconveyedhereisclear:“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”O(jiān)urearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionsshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too.Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrules,stoppingattheredlightratherthancomplainingabouttrafficjams.Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文。要求考生以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”為題，簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖，概述對(duì)兩幅圖中不同做法的理解，并舉例說明圖片給予自己的啟示?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累傳達(dá)：convey→transmit肯定地：definitely→certainly改善：better→improve遵守：follow→observe2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.拓展句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildrenwhoareinneed.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.（運(yùn)用了while連接并列句，表示對(duì)比）【高分句型2】Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.（運(yùn)用了“only+狀語從句”置于句首的部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，whatever引導(dǎo)賓語從句）4．（2013·福建卷）孩子的成長(zhǎng)和教育是社會(huì)熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容；2.分析漫畫所揭示的問題；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；3.詞數(shù)120左右;4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯:pavethewayFromthepicture,wecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇圖畫作文?！驹斀狻窟@篇書面表達(dá)以漫畫的形式講述"以孩子為中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆"這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，發(fā)人深省。漫畫式作文就是通過漫畫提供的圖像信息寫一篇短文，漫畫作文就內(nèi)容而言，可以寫觀察到的內(nèi)容，也可以根據(jù)合理想象適當(dāng)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮來補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容；就表達(dá)方式而言，可以單純地理解、說明，也可以在說明中加以描寫、敘述。寫好漫畫作文的要求是：認(rèn)真審圖，確立主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，展開聯(lián)想或發(fā)表感想，變點(diǎn)為句，連句成篇。要達(dá)到這些要求，我們就必須認(rèn)真審圖，善于利用圖中人物間的關(guān)系、人物的對(duì)話、人物的活動(dòng)及所處場(chǎng)所，以及圖（表）中的文字說明和標(biāo)識(shí)來提煉要點(diǎn)；要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級(jí)的句式:Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.這句話里面是while引導(dǎo)的并列句。還有Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.這句話里面用了非謂語動(dòng)詞，還有最后一句話Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.這句話用了倒裝句。高級(jí)句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。5．（2013·重慶卷）Amothersaid,“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”要求：1)就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；2)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；3)詞數(shù)不少于60；4）在答題卡上作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.Itisnotjustbecausetheyoncegaveussomuchselflesslove,butit’sourdutytolookafterthemwell.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文。要求考生對(duì)于一段母親說的話“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”就此材料發(fā)表你的看法，寫一篇作文。【詳解】1.詞匯積累在我看來：Inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned照顧：lookafter→takecareof盡力做：tryourbesttodo→managetodo職責(zé)：duty→responsibility2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.拓展句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors,whichisbecomeaseriousproblem.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.（運(yùn)用了連接詞what引導(dǎo)的主語從句。）【高分句型2】Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.（運(yùn)用了nomatterhow引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。）6．（2013·安徽卷）假設(shè)你校英語社團(tuán)舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.遵守交通法規(guī)；2.注意舉止文明。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.短文的題目已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonthewaytoschool.Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I’llneverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,I’llregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文參加以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累環(huán)境：environment→surroundings開始：start→begin責(zé)任：duty→responsibility同時(shí)：meanwhile→atthesametime2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.拓展句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,whichcauseseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）【高分句型2】NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）7．（2013·浙江卷）請(qǐng)以“onethingI’mproudof”為題，用英語寫一篇100—120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述這件事2.簡(jiǎn)要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）.OneThingI’mProudof_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Iwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，要求考生以“onethingI’mproudof”為題記述一件自己認(rèn)為得意的事情?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累驚奇：amazed→surprised實(shí)現(xiàn)：realize→achieve訓(xùn)練：practice→train決心做：bedeterminedtodo=makeupone'smindtodo2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.拓展句：IwassoamazedbyhowskillfultheywerethatIwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句以及that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)8．（2013·湖北卷）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Weallknowthat“sticksandstonesmaybreakourbones”,butweshouldalsobeawarethatwordscanhurtpeople,too.注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；④詞數(shù)為120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________