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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)少年守護(hù)校園操場,師生共筑清潔環(huán)境1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Everydayaftertheirclasses,thechildrenatTom’sschoolrushedtotheschoolplaygroundtospendsometimetherebeforetheirparentspickedthemup.Eventually,everyonewouldbegone,exceptTom.Everyday,Tomwaiteduntiltheplaygroundwasempty,afterwhichhecleaneditbypickinguptrash,throwingitintrashcans,andsweepingthewholeplayarea.Oneday,Tom’sscienceteacher,Mrs.Peterson,happenedtoseethewholething.ShewasconfusedastowhyTomwasdoingthatastheschoolalreadyhadacleanerwhocleanedtheplaygroundintheevenings.Shedecidedtofindoutwhatwasgoingon.“Hello,Tom,whatareyoudoinghereonyourownatthishour?”shegreetedhimwithabigsmileonherface.4續(xù)寫原文“Hello,Mrs.Peterson,”Tomreplied.“I’mcleaningtheplaygroundbecauseit’sdirty.Theotherkidslittereverywhere,buttheynevercleanit.”“Oh,howawful!”Mrs.Petersonexclaimed(喊道).“I’llmakesuretheydon’tdothatagain,Tom,”sheaddedgently.“Youarenotsupposedtocleanupafterthem.It’slate,soyoushouldgohome.”“Ican’tgohomeuntilIfinishcleaning,Mrs.Peterson,”Tomsaid.“Yourparentsraisedyouverywell,”shesaid,praisinghim.5段首句Paragraph1:“ButIhaveabetterideaofhowwecanhelpthecleaner!”Mrs.Petersonadded.Paragraph2:Soon,withtheheadmaster’ssupport,theclean-upeventwasorganized.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8在湯姆的學(xué)校,每天放學(xué)后孩子們都會在操場玩耍,而湯姆總是等其他人都離開后獨自清理操場。一天,科學(xué)老師彼得森夫人偶然看到這一幕,感到十分困惑,因為學(xué)校有專門的清潔工。在與湯姆交談后,老師了解到他是因同學(xué)們亂扔垃圾才決定清理。彼得森夫人決定幫助湯姆,她想到了一個更好的辦法,一場全校參與的操場清潔活動即將展開。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:
“ButIhaveabetterideaofhowwecanhelpthecleaner!”Mrs.Petersonadded.“但我有個更好的辦法來幫助清潔工!”彼得森夫人補充道。她興致勃勃地告訴湯姆,打算組織一場全校性的操場清潔日活動?;顒佣ㄔ诒局芰w師生都將參與。接下來的幾天,彼得森夫人在課堂上大力宣傳,講述保持校園整潔的重要性,鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參與。同時,她還與其他老師溝通,確保大家都能協(xié)助組織。湯姆聽聞后,興奮不已,主動提出要負(fù)責(zé)準(zhǔn)備清潔工具,還幫忙設(shè)計宣傳海報,張貼在校園各處,為活動預(yù)熱。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Soon,withtheheadmaster’ssupport,theclean-upeventwasorganized.很快,在校長的支持下,清潔活動順利開展。周六那天,同學(xué)們早早來到操場,在老師的帶領(lǐng)下分組行動。有的負(fù)責(zé)撿垃圾,有的清掃地面,還有的用濕布擦拭體育器材。湯姆穿梭在各個小組間,積極協(xié)助大家。在大家齊心協(xié)力的努力下,操場變得煥然一新?;顒咏Y(jié)束后,校長表揚了全體師生,并表示今后會定期舉辦類似活動,共同守護(hù)校園環(huán)境。通過這次活動,同學(xué)們不僅體會到了勞動的樂趣,更增強了環(huán)保意識。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)“ButIhaveabetterideaofhowwecanhelpthecleaner!”Mrs.Petersonadded.ShetoldTomthattheywouldorganizeaschool-wideclean-updayonSaturday,involvingallstudentsandteachers.Inthefollowingdays,Mrs.Petersonpromotedtheeventvigorouslyinclass.Sheemphasizedthesignificanceofkeepingthecampuscleanandencouragedstudentstoparticipateactively.Meanwhile,shecommunicatedwithotherteacherstoensuretheirassistance.Tomwasextremelyexciteduponhearingthis.Hevolunteeredtopreparecleaningtoolsandevenhelpeddesignposters,whichwerethenpostedalloverthecampustobuildupthehypefortheevent.13范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,withtheheadmaster’ssupport,theclean-upeventwasorganized.OnSaturday,studentsgatheredattheplaygroundearly.Ledbyteachers,theyweredividedintogroups.Somewereresponsibleforpickinguptrash,someforsweepingtheground,andothersforwipingthesportsequipmentwithdampcloths.Tommovedaroundamongthegroups,activelyassistingeveryone.Withthejointeffortsofall,theplaygroundtookonacompletelynewlook.Aftertheevent,theheadmasterpraisedalltheteachersandstudentsandstatedthatsuchactivitieswouldbeheldregularlyinthefuturetojointlyprotectthecampusenvironment.Throughthisevent,studentsnotonlyexperiencedthejoyoflaborbutalsoenhancedtheirenvironmentalawareness.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“ButIhaveabetterideaofhowwecanhelpthecleaner!”Mrs.Petersonadded.Hereyesgleamingwithexcitement,sheproposedorganizingaschool-wideclean-updayonSaturday,whichwouldengageeverysinglestudentandteacheroncampus.Intheensuingdays,ineachofherclasses,Mrs.Petersonpassionatelypromotedtheevent,highlightingthevitalimportanceofmaintainingacleancampusenvironment.Sheencouragedstudents,withinfectiousenthusiasm,tobeactivelyinvolved.Simultaneously,communicationwithotherteacherswascarriedouttosecuretheirfull-fledgedassistance.Tom,uponlearningofthisplan,wasfilledwithboundlessexcitement.Volunteeringtotakeonthetaskofpreparingcleaningtools,healsolentahandindesigningeye-catchingposters,whichwerethenstrategicallypostedthroughoutthecampus,successfullygeneratingsignificantanticipationfortheupcomingevent.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,withtheheadmaster’ssupport,theclean-upeventwasorganized.OnSaturdaymorning,studentsflockedtotheplaygroundbrightandearly.Ledbytheirteachers,theywereneatlydividedintovariousgroups.Somestudentsweretaskedwithpickinguplitter,whileotherssetaboutsweepingthegroundthoroughly,andsomededicatedthemselvestocarefullywipingdownthesportsequipmentwithdampcloths.Tom,anenergeticfigure,movedbrisklyamongthegroups,offeringhishelpwhereverneeded.Itwasthroughthecollectiveandconcertedeffortsofeveryonethattheplaygroundunderwentaremarkabletransformation.Aftertheeventconcluded,theheadmastertooktothestageandpraisedalltheteachersandstudents.Hefirmlystatedthatsuchactivitieswouldberegularlyorganizedinthefuturetojointlysafeguardthebeau
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