初中英語寫作公開課

LearningtowriteSunnyIlikeLiuQian.Heisacreativemagician.IlikeLiuQianbecauseheisacreativemagician.2009CCTVSpringFestivalGalasurpriseddidmagicshowsHedidmagicshowssowellthateveryonewasreallysurprised.so…that…(春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會）Hedidmagicshowswell.Everyonewassurprised.Hetooktheringoutofanegg.Peoplecheeredforhim.whenassoonasafterbecausewonmanyprizesworkedhard,Makesentenceswithsuitableconjunctionbecauseso…that…beforeafterwhen(連詞）notlike,fish,healthyalthoughso…that…butbecauseMakesentenceswithsuitableconjunction(連詞）knewLiuQian,met,2001,Beijingnot…until…whenassoonasbeforeaftersinceMakesentenceswithsuitableconjunction(連詞）JayComparethearticlesABWhicharticledoyouthinkisbetter?Why?LiuQinwas7yearsold.Hefellinlovewithmagic.Hegraduatedfromtheuniversity,thenhebecameamagician.Hedoesn’thaveateachertoteachhim,butheworksveryhard.Hespendsallhistimethinkinghowtodesigntheshows.Healsodidshowsonstreetstoimprovehimself.Everyoneknowsitisthebiggestchallengeforamagician.WhenLiuQianwas7yearsold,hefellinlovewithmagic.Hedidnotbecomeaprofessionalmagicianuntilhegraduatedfromtheuniversity.Nooneknowsthathelearnsbyhimself.Heworkssohardthatheevendoesnothavetimetorelax.Hespendsallhistimethinkinghowtodesigntheshows.Healsodidshowsonstreetstoimprovehimself.Asweknow,itisthebiggestchallengeforamagician.

complexsentence(復(fù)合句）

JackLiuQian‘spenpalTalkShowNameJackFamilyparents,died,caraccidentHobbywatchLiuQian’smagicshowsweekendactivitiesbusy,dohomework,takelessonsProblemstressedout,examHisparentsdiedinacaraccident.HelikeswatchingLiuQian’smagicshows.Onweekendsheisbusy.Hedoeshishomeworkandtakeslessons.Heistoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams.BirthdayMarch.12th,1994HewasbornonMarch.12th,1994.Theboy’snameisJack.Jackusedtohaveahappyfamily.Unluckily,hisparentsdiedinacaraccident.Hewas10yearsold.However,hedoesn’tgiveuphimself.Heworksveryhard.Hegetsgoodgrades.HelikeswatchingLiuQian’smagicshowstorelaxhimself.Heisatopstudent.Hehasabigproblemthesedays.Heistoostressedout.Theimportantexamiscoming.▼when▼so▼that▼Although▼becausebecause,although,when,so…thatDearJack,Iknowyouhavemanyproblems.Youhavemuchhomework.Youhavetosleeplate.Thenyoufeelsleepyinclass.Youaretoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams.Youstudyhard.YourEnglishisnotgood.HereIhavesomeadviceforyou.First,whynotsleepalittleearlier?Youdon’twastetime.Youcanfinishyourhomeworkquickly.Second,you’dbetterrelaxyourselfbywatchingmyshow.Third,youmustbeconfident.Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.

Yours,LiuQianDearJack,Iknowyouhavemanyproblems.Youhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavetostayup.

Thenyoufeelsleepyinclass.Youaretoostressedoutbecauseoftheexams.Althoughyoustudyhard,youarenotgoodatEnglish.HereIhavesomeadviceforyou.First,whynotsleepalittleearlier?Ifyoumakefulluseofeveryminute,youwillfinishyourhomeworkquickly.Second,you’dbetterrelaxyourselfbywatchingmyshow.Third,youmustbeconfident.Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.

Yours,LiuQian充分利用Writingstrategy:properconjunctions(適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞)

Otherways:goodphrases（詞組）Howcanwemakethearticlesmorefluent

(流暢的）andmorebeautiful?wonderfulsentencepatterns（句型）WritingShow假如你是Jack,寫信給劉謙，感謝他的建議，并告訴他你的變化以及對考試的信心。你的變化包括：1.按時完成作業(yè)，睡眠每天8小時…2.學(xué)習(xí)努力…取得好成績…3.自信，不緊張…DearLiuQin,Thanksforyourlastletter.Youradviceisreallyhelpful.Ihavechangedalot.Now…Theexamiscomingsoon.ActuallyIamnotworriedatall.IbelieveIwilldoagoodjobafterworkinghard.Yours,JackDon’tforgettoshowuswonderfulsentences!SampleIhavechangedalot.Now,Ifinishmyhomeworkontimeandhardlystayuplateatnight.BecauseIsleep8hourseveryday,Iamenergeticinclass.Also,Imakefulluseofeveryminute.IstudysohardthatIcangetgoodgrades.Totellyouthetruth,Iamprettyconfiden