考點(diǎn)17 書信寫作解題技巧模板-新高考英語一輪總復(fù)習(xí)（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1考點(diǎn)17書信寫作解題技巧模板課前熱身練（2023·上海松江·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華。你校圖書館計(jì)劃布置一個(gè)英語讀書角，需要一張圖片作為背景。校方搜集了以下兩張圖片，向同學(xué)們征求意見。請你給圖書館館長寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你的選擇；(2)你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Deartheheadlibrarian,I’mdelightedtohavethechancetoexpressmyopinionaboutthechoiceofthebackgroundimagefortheEnglishcorner.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ichoosethesecondone.Thereasonsareasfollows.First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythatanyonecanswimintheoceanofbooksattheEnglishcorner.Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.Second,thepatternisclearandsmooth,thecolorsaresimpleandgenerous,withanappropriateandprofoundimpressiontostimulatestudents’interestinEnglishlearning.Ihopemysuggestionwillbeacceptedbyyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給圖書館館長寫封郵件，表達(dá)布置一個(gè)英語讀書角所選的圖片的理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：delighted→pleased就我而言：AsfarasIamconcerned→Formypart不由自主地：spontaneously→involuntarily參加：takepartin→participatein2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.拓展句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,whichmakesstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythatanyonecanswimintheoceanofbooksattheEnglishcorner.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句）【高分句型2】tsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語）核心考點(diǎn)梳理一．評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（1）本題總分為25分，其中內(nèi)容10分，語言10分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)5分。（2）評分時(shí)關(guān)注的主要方面:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性以及上下文的連貫性。（3）評分時(shí)，會(huì)先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定所屬檔次，然后對照相應(yīng)的組織結(jié)構(gòu)檔次給予加分。其中，內(nèi)容和語言兩部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考慮加4—5分，15分以下者只能考慮加0、1、2、3分。（4）詞數(shù)少于70，總分最多不超過10分。高分策略Step1：確定文章框架，包括：時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、格式、展開方式、開頭結(jié)尾等；Step2：確定內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，包括：主要人物、時(shí)間地點(diǎn)、重要細(xì)節(jié)、合理發(fā)揮等；Step3：正式開始寫作，整理思路成篇，行文連貫；Step4：檢查粗心犯下的錯(cuò)誤。注意：（1）卷面一定要清爽，單詞拼寫完整清晰，不要過分連寫或太潦草；

（2）開篇點(diǎn)題（開門見山，直奔主題，切勿模棱兩可）；（3）結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)（回應(yīng)主題，拓展和升華中心思想）；（4）語言準(zhǔn)確，適當(dāng)修辭（適當(dāng)運(yùn)用特殊句式（虛擬、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)等），注意句式要有變化，長短句、難易句交錯(cuò)有層次）。二．應(yīng)用文體模板1.建議信Dear___________,Aboutyourquestionwithregardto_______,Iwouldliketomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,thefollowingactionsmaybeapplicable:firstly,…Secondly,…Moreover,...Lastbutnottheleast,…（建議的內(nèi)容）Ihopeyouwillfindtheaboveproposalsuseful,andpleasefeelfreetodiscusswithmeformoredetails.Goodluckwithyour_______（祝愿）,andkeepintouch.YourssincerelyLiMing2.申請信Dear___________,Iamwritingtoformallyapplyfor___________（申請的內(nèi)容）Isawthenoticefromourschoolwebsite,andIamveryinterestedin________becauseIthink__________(從哪里得知信息并簡單陳述申請?jiān)?.IfIcanbegiventhechancetoget…,Iplantouseitforthefollowingthreepurposes:…(具體陳述和論證申請物的用途及重要性） Isincerelyhopeyouwillconsidermyapplication,andlookforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou!Bestregards,LiMing3.申請信Dear___________,Iamwritingtoformallyapplyfor___________（申請的內(nèi)容）Isawthenoticefromourschoolwebsite,andIamveryinterestedin________becauseIthink__________(從哪里得知信息并簡單陳述申請?jiān)?.IfIcanbegiventhechancetoget…,Iplantouseitforthefollowingthreepurposes:…(具體陳述和論證申請物的用途及重要性） Isincerelyhopeyouwillconsidermyapplication,andlookforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou!Bestregards,LiMing4.求職信DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin____________（報(bào)紙或網(wǎng)站名稱）of________（招聘廣告發(fā)布日期，對在網(wǎng)站上看到的內(nèi)容而言，此處日期也可以省略）.Ihavethequalificationandcertificatesrequiredforthisposition,andI’ma…(陳述自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，比如positive,self-motivated,open-minded等）personwholikes…(進(jìn)一步展現(xiàn)自己的長處，比如喜歡挑戰(zhàn)、善于人際溝通，等等。）What’smore,Ihadtwosimilarinternshipworkexperienceduringmysenioryearincollege,andcanthereforeadapttothepositionveryquickly.I’llbeverygratefulifyoucouldconsidergivingmeaninterview.Thankyouverymuch!YourssincerelyLiMing5.書信應(yīng)用文DearEditor,Iwritethislettertorecommendaphotofor____________eventheldbyyourmagazine（某雜志的某個(gè)活動(dòng)）.Thisphotodepicts__________（圖畫中的內(nèi)容）,with_______________（補(bǔ)充說明）.Wecansee________（進(jìn)一步闡釋）Ithinkthisphotoisawakeupcallfor______（所涉群體，如thewholeofthehumanrace）to…(例如，protecttheenvironment/wildanimals,etc.)ifwewantto…Nowadaysasthe…isgetting…,moreandmorepeoplebeginto...becausetheyrealizehowimportant…(夾敘夾議）.Afterall,we…(結(jié)論性的一句話）.Ihopeyoucouldconsiderusingthisphotofortheupcomingevent,andIhavefaiththat…(強(qiáng)調(diào)所推薦之物可能帶來的積極正面影響，升華主題）Lookforwardtohearingfromyou.Thankyou!YourssincerelyLiMing三．?？贾V語總結(jié)，以下諺語警句可以進(jìn)行寫作訓(xùn)練。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。3.Easiersaidthandone.說起來容易做起來難。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，謬之千里。Slowandsteadywinstherace.穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打無往而不勝。Afallintothepitagaininyourwit.吃一塹，長一智。Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.實(shí)踐出真知。Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。Beautywithoutvirtueisarosewithoutfragrance.無德之美猶如沒有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。Morehasty,lessspeed.欲速則不達(dá)。Ifsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。Allthatglittersisnotgold.閃光的未必都是金子。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行女臺(tái)于足下。Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行。Romewasnotbuiltinaday.偉業(yè)非一日之功。Greatmindsthinkalike.英雄所見略同。wellbegun,halfdone.好的開始等于成功的一半。四．高考?？贾V語警句積累Honestyanddiligenceshouldbeyoureternalmates.誠實(shí)和勤奮應(yīng)成為你永遠(yuǎn)的伴侶。Itisnevertoolatetolearn.學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)不嫌晚。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康勝于財(cái)富。Acontentedmindisaperpetualfbast.矢口足長樂。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真青。Self-trustisthefirstsecretofsuccess.自信是成功的第一秘訣。Exampleisbetterthanprecept.言傳不如身教。Strictnesshelps,indulgencespoils.嚴(yán)是愛;松是害。AllworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.只干活不玩耍，聰明的孩子會(huì)變傻。Neverputoffuntiltomorrowwhatcanbedonetoday今天的事情今天干。Timewaitsfornoman,時(shí)不待人。Knowledgeispower.知識就是力量。Nosweetwithoutsweat.苦盡甘來/梅花香自苦寒來。Toerrishuman,toforgiveisdivine.人非圣賢，孰能無過。Agoodthingisknownwhenitislost.失去才知珍貴。Onegoodturndeservesanother.善有善扌艮。Parentsarethefirstteachersofthechildren.父母是孩子的第一任老師。Nogardenwithoutweeds.有利有弊。Romewasn'tbuiltinaday.羅馬不是一天造成的。當(dāng)堂知識檢測1．（2023·上?！ひ荒＃┘僭O(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，你校英語廣播站計(jì)劃在每周五中午開設(shè)名為“TalkandTalk”的欄目，目前正在招募主持人。請給廣播站負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Li寫一封信，應(yīng)聘這一崗位。信中需包含以下內(nèi)容：1)應(yīng)聘的理由；2)專欄內(nèi)容的策劃。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMr.Li,Inoticedintoday’sschoolnewspaperthatyouwerelookingforpeopletobeahostoftheprogramnamed“TalkandTalk”.SoI’mwritingtosayI’dliketoapplytheposition.Hereisabriefintroductionofmyself.Firstofall,Iamanoutgoingpersonwithstrongcooperationability.Secondly,IamverygoodatEnglish.IcanspeakfluentspokenEnglish.Finally,andIthinkthisisthemostimportantpoint,Ihaverelevantexperienceasapresenter,whichwillgreatlyassistmeinthisposition.Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”.Inmyopinion,wecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.Sincerely,ifthispositionisofferedtome,Iwilldevoteallmywisdomandeffortstoit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校英語廣播站寫一封申請信，應(yīng)聘“TalkandTalk”的欄目的主持人。信中應(yīng)包括學(xué)生應(yīng)聘的理由和對專欄內(nèi)容的策劃?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：firstofall→firstandforemost此外：secondly→what’smore我認(rèn)為：Ithink→asfarasIamconcerned喜歡：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”.Inmyopinion,wecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.拓展句：Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”thatwecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.【高分句型1】Inoticedintoday’sschoolnewspaperthatyouwerelookingforpeopletobeahostoftheprogramnamed“TalkandTalk”.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Ihaverelevantexperienceasapresenter,whichwillgreatlyassistmeinthisposition.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）2．（2023·上?！ひ荒＃┘僭O(shè)你是浦潤中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李青，你校?？系摹罢雇磥怼睓谀空谡魑模堃浴?0年后的學(xué)?！睘轭}寫一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必須包括：描述50年后的學(xué)校里的一個(gè)場景；談?wù)劕F(xiàn)在的你置身其中的感受。（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及學(xué)校名稱。）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Schoolsin50years50yearslater,theschoolusesrobotstoteachstudents,andstudentssitinatransparentclassroomonallsidestolearn.Besides,students’performanceinclassandlearningfeedbackareallconductedbyAIequipment.Theconstructionoftheschoolisnolongerwhatitisnow.Theschool50yearslaterisveryintelligent,andstudents’needscanbemetinaninstant.Theschoolhasonlyafewtechniciansandteacherswhomanagemachineryandequipment,soitissoconvenient.Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater.ItwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.Iwillbeshockedbyallmoderndevicesandintelligentfunctions.It’sgreattofeelthelearningefficiencybroughtbytheinfinitepowerofmodernscienceandtechnology,feelthefriendshipbetweenclassmates,andcarefullytastethemagicofknowledge.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“50年后的學(xué)?！睘轭}為?？系摹罢雇磥怼睓谀繉懸黄恼峦陡濉！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累用、利用：use→makeuseof此外：besides→what’smore智能的：intelligent→smart震驚的：shocked→astonished2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater.ItwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.拓展句：Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater,whichwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.【高分句型1】Theconstructionoftheschoolisnolongerwhatitisnow.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的表語從句）【高分句型2】Theschoolhasonlyafewtechniciansandteacherswhomanagemachineryandequipment,soeverythingissoconvenient.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）課后鞏固提高3．（2023·上海奉賢·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，你的朋友Jack邀請你一同制定畢業(yè)后的暑假計(jì)劃，請從他提供的計(jì)劃清單中選擇你所心儀的一個(gè)。給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容需包含：1.你的選擇2.你的理由及如何執(zhí)行該計(jì)劃①參加山區(qū)支教志愿服務(wù)②去祖國各地走走③學(xué)習(xí)技能，如駕駛、樂器演奏、視頻剪輯等________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearjack,I’mmorethangladtohearfromyou.Yes,likeyousaid,IhavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummervacationaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.Thisthree-monthvacationwillundoubtedlybemylongestholidayever.Therefore,I’dliketomakeitasmeaningfulaspossible.Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.Inthemeanwhile,Icanmeetmanyinterestingpeopleandlearnaboutsociety.Besides,I’mplanningtoenrollinadrivingcourseandtrytogetmydriver’slicenseasdrivingwillbeanimportantandnecessaryskillinmodernsociety.Iftimepermits,I’mgoingtolearnsomeMusicalInstruments,whichissomethingI’vealwayswantedtodo.Ihaveastronginterestinguitar,soIwanttolearnhowtoplayguitar,whichcanenrichmyhobby.Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于你的朋友Jack邀請你一同制定畢業(yè)后的暑假計(jì)劃這一情況，請從他提供的計(jì)劃清單中選擇你所心儀的一個(gè)，寫封郵件給他。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy與此同時(shí)：Inthemeanwhile→Atthesametime此外：Besides→What’smore重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.拓展句：Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoney,whichcancoverpartofmycollegetuition.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Yes,likeyousaid,IhavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummervacationaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.（運(yùn)用了介詞during+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.（運(yùn)用了sothat引導(dǎo)的的目的狀語從句）4．（2023·上海浦東新·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假期即將來臨，你的朋友李華計(jì)劃完成一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，他對去公共圖書館還是去自習(xí)室(self-studyroom)寫報(bào)告猶豫不決，現(xiàn)征求你的建議。請參考以下信息，寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容需包括：1.你的建議；2.你建議的理由。公共圖書館自習(xí)室收費(fèi)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)免費(fèi)20元/5小時(shí)開放時(shí)間9：00a.m—5：00p.m24小時(shí)交通時(shí)長45分種10分鐘設(shè)施環(huán)境免費(fèi)使用館內(nèi)資源免費(fèi)茶點(diǎn)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearLiHua,

Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-studyroomtowriteyourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons:Firstofall,thepubliclibraryisfreeofcharge,whilegoingtotheself-studyroomwillcostyou20yuanevery5hours.Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyourreportfrom9a.m.to5p.m.Third,itmaytakeyoumoretimetogotothepubliclibrarythantotheself-studyroom,butyoucanusethetimeonthebustoformulateyourreport.Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreportandtheyarefree;however,youcanonlyenjoyfreerefreshmentsintheself-studyroom.Hopethatmysuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Yours,...【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友李華寫一封郵件，就寒假期間去公共圖書館還是去自習(xí)室寫調(diào)查報(bào)告提出建議，并說明理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累猶豫不決：intwominds→hesitant建議：suggest→advise豐富的：awealthof→abundant對……有幫助：behelpfulto→beofhelpto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreportandtheyarefree.拓展句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesthatmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreport,andtheyarefree.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyourreportfrom9a.m.to5p.m.（運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）【高分句型2】Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-studyroomtowriteyourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）5．（2023·上?！ひ荒＃┘僭O(shè)你是啟明中學(xué)高三學(xué)生王華，你校學(xué)生會(huì)將組織一次“品上海”的活動(dòng)，已在學(xué)校官網(wǎng)上發(fā)布方案，征求全體學(xué)生的意見。你需要寫一封郵件，包含以下兩點(diǎn)：1.提出你覺得需要改進(jìn)的地方；2.需要改進(jìn)的原因。主題品上海時(shí)間2023年1月2日上午7:00–下午18:00路線從人民廣場坐旅游巴士前往青浦，參觀“陳云故居”、“朱家角古鎮(zhèn)”、“青西郊野公園”，然后返回人民廣場。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________