進階練17 書信寫作（模考滿分范文10篇）-新高考英語一輪總復習（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2進階練17書信寫作（最新?？紳M分范文10篇）學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________一、書信寫作1．（2023·上海嘉定·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是李明，你得知美術館將要舉辦“國寶展”，邀請好友王磊周末同往。但王磊擔心參觀耗時太長，影響課業(yè)復習，婉拒了你的邀請。寫一封電子郵件給王磊，在信中你必須：1.簡要介紹此次“國寶展”；2.給出理由再次勸說王磊同往。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWangLei,I’msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.ThisexhibitionhasdisplayedthenationaltreasuresofthemainlandandTaiwan,whichisavaluableopportunity.AlotoffamousChinesetraditionalpaintingbytopartistswillbeexhibitedthere.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors’eyes.IthinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假設你是李明，你得知美術館將要舉辦“國寶展”，邀請好友王磊周末同往。但王磊擔心參觀耗時太長，影響課業(yè)復習，婉拒了你的邀請。寫一封電子郵件給王磊?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累拒絕：turndown→refuse寶貴的：valuable→precious機會：opportunity→chance加強：enhance→strengthen2.句式拓展同義句轉換原句：IthinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.拓展句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibition,whichfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.(運用了as引導非限制性定語從句)2．（2023·上?！ど虾Ｖ袑W?？寄M預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生李明，最近收到好友王磊的郵件，信中提到他對如何選擇大學專業(yè)感到非常困惑?；貜屯趵谝环忄]件，內(nèi)容須包括：1.你對選擇專業(yè)的建議；2.你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWanglei,Hearingthatyouhavetroubledecidingwhichmajoryoushouldchoosewhenyouentertheuniversity,I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.AndIhopetheywillgiveyouahand.Firstofall,it’sadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecauseinterestisthebestteacher.Whenanobstaclearises,youwillhavetheenthusiasmtocrackitinsteadofgivingitup.Also,pickamajoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterconsiderthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantageofwhatyou’velearntincollegetofindyourselfajob.Whenchoicesaremultiple,youwillhavemorechances.Hopemyadviceisworthytakingandyoucanfindyouridealmajor!Yours,LiMing【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以高三學生李明的身份寫郵件給好友王磊，對他將來如何選擇大學專業(yè)提出建議并給出理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累決定：decide→determine建議：suggestion→advice擅長：begoodat→dowellin機會：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.拓展句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodatbecausesufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.【點睛】【高分句型1】Firstofall,it’sadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecauseinterestisthebestteacher.（運用了that引導的主語從句、that引導的定語從句和because引導的狀語從句）【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterconsiderthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantageofwhatyou’velearntincollegetofindyourselfajob.（運用了since引導的狀語從句和what引導的賓語從句，不定式作目的狀語）3．（2023·上?！つM預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生李明，最近收到英國筆友Mike的郵件，其中提到因為父母工作原因，他們舉家搬遷，他也轉學到了一所新的學校，但是他因為換了一個環(huán)境感到不太適應?；貜鸵环忄]件，內(nèi)容須包括：1)分析導致他不適應的原因；2)給他提出建議。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,Iamsorrytohearthatyou’rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Iunderstanditishardtogetusedtoyournewschool.Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.Thereaosnisthatwearefarawayfromourfamiliarsurroundings.Besides,wearenotsurewhetherwearepopularinthenewschoolandwhetherournewclassmatesareeasytogetalongwith.However,youshouldnotworrytoomuchaboutthese.

I’mwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice.Firstly,Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.Inthiswayyouwon'tfeellonelyandyourschoollifewillbecomecolorfulandinteresting.Secondly,youshouldmakeagoodscheduleandfocusonimprovingyourstudy.Asateenager,itisourresponsibilitytostudywell.Ihopemysuggestionswillbesuitableforyou.Ihopeyoucanadaptquicklytothenewenvironment.Yours,LiHua【導語】本書面表達屬于應用文寫作。要求回復筆友郵件，分析他不適應新學校的原因并提出建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累適應：adjustto→adaptto此外：besides→what’smore確定的：sure→certain建議：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.拓展句：Actually,anyonewhoentersastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.【點睛】【高分句型1】Iamsorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）4．（2023·上?！つM預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李華,你的英國朋友Jim要在暑假來滬旅游,有人給他推薦了兩個旅游主題供他選擇:“文化上海”或“摩登上?！?。Jim來信希望你能給他一些建議。請你給他回信,內(nèi)容包括:1.你推薦的旅游主題;2.你推薦該主題的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】onepossibleversion:DearJim,I’mgladtohearthatyouaregoingtomakeatriptoShanghai.Ihighlyrecommendthatyouchoose“CulturalShanghai”asyourtraveltheme.Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnabouttheuniqueShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.Besides,Shanghaialsohasmanyfolkcustoms,whichnotonlyenrichtheculturalheritageofShanghai,butalsoattractmanyoverseastouriststocometoappreciateandexperiencethem.Lastbutnotleast,manysnacksinShanghaiarealsoveryfamous.Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJianBaorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,whichisalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.IhopeyoucanenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutShanghai.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國朋友約翰寫信邀請他周末看電影，表示對他給予你的幫助的感謝?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→pleased建議：recommend→suggest此外：besides→what’smore著名的：famous→well-known2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.拓展句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,whichreflectstheintegrationofChineseandWesterncultures.【點睛】【高分句型1】Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnabouttheuniqueShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.（運用了notonly…butalso…連接兩個并列結構）【高分句型2】Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJianBaorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,whichisalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.（運用了which引導非限制性定語從句）5．（2023·上?！つ涎笾袑W?？既＃〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.學校大力推進勞動敎育，打算開辟校園農(nóng)場組織學生進行果蔬花卉種植實踐。假設你是校學生會干部李華，負責老師Helen委托你了解同學們對此項活動的看法。經(jīng)了解，你發(fā)現(xiàn)有些同學缺乏種植經(jīng)驗，不敢嘗試；有些學生擔心種植成果沒有實用價值，興趣不大。請你寫封信給Helen1.反映同學們的想法；2.提出建議并說明理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearHelen,Asforthepracticalactivityoffruit,vegetableandflowerplantingorganizedbythecampusfarm,afterinvestigation,Ifoundthatsomestudentslackedplantingexperienceanddarednottryit.Somestudentsarenotinterestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshavenopracticalvalue.Inviewofthesephenomena,Iwouldliketoputforwardsomeideasofmyown.Firstofall,weshoulddoagoodjobintheearlypublicityandmobilizationwork.Letstudentsknowthemeaningandvalueofthisactivity.Secondly,letthestudentsknowtheinformationoffruits,vegetablesandflowersthroughvariouschannels,andunderstandtheappearance,growingenvironmentandprocessofthecrops.Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.Abovearesomeofmysuggestions.Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，學校大力推進勞動敎育，打算開辟校園農(nóng)場組織學生進行果蔬花卉種植實踐。假設你是校學生會干部李華，負責老師Helen委托你了解同學們對此項活動的看法。經(jīng)了解，你發(fā)現(xiàn)有些同學缺乏種植經(jīng)驗，不敢嘗試；有些學生擔心種植成果沒有實用價值，興趣不大。請你寫封信給Helen，反映同學們的想法；提出建議并說明理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累調(diào)查：investigation→inquiry擔心的：worried→concerned了解：know→learn成功：beasuccess=besuccessful2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.拓展句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial,becauseinthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.【點睛】[高分句型1]Somestudentsarenotinterestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshavenopracticalvalue.(運用了because引導的原因狀語從句和that引導的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.(運用了省略that引導的賓語從句和抽象名詞具體化)6．（2023春·上?！じ呷Ｂ?lián)考階段練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學的高三學生李華，你的班級將要組織高考倒計時100天的主題班會，班長正在征集主題班會活動方案，請你給班長寫封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：1.活動流程及理由;2.需要做哪些準備。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.NowIwouldliketointroducemyclassmeetingactivityplanasfollows.First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificanceoftheclassmeeting.Afterthat,thesong“MyFutureisnotaDream”isplayedtocreateaclassatmosphere.Thenitisarrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.Finally,everyonewilltakeacollectiveoathtostimulatethepassionoflearning.Inaddition,beforetheclassmeeting,studentsshouldpreparethelyricsof“Myfutureisnotadream”andthecontentoftheirspeech.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一個以高考倒計時100天的主題的班會課活動方案，其中包括活動流程及原因以及需要做的準備。【詳解】1.詞匯積累激勵：stimulate→motivate方案：plan→scheme目標：goal→aim此外：inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.拓展句：Inordertostimulatestudents’enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillholdaclassmeetingwhosethemeis100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.【點睛】【高分句型1】First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificanceoftheclassmeeting.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）【高分句型2】Thenitisarrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.（運用了it作形式主語，that引導主語從句）7．（2023·上海崇明·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生徐晶，你校的英文報向即將畢業(yè)的高三學生征文，給高中三年來最值得你感謝的一個人或一件事表達感謝。你有意投稿，內(nèi)容包括：描述這個人或這件事；表達感謝，說明感謝的理由。注：文中不得提及真實姓名或學校。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMs.Zhang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary.Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.WhenIwasataloss,asmyheadteacher,youaskedmetogotoyouroffice.Insteadofblamingme,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailingintheexam.Moreunforgettably,youmanagedtohelpmewithmystudyandinspiredmefromtimetotime.Ms.Zhang,I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.Yours,XuJing【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假設你是明啟中學高三學生徐晶，你校的英文報向即將畢業(yè)的高三學生征文，給高中三年來最值得你感謝的一個人或一件事表達感謝?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累感謝：gratitude→appreciation幫助：givesb.ahand→dosb.afavor害怕的：afraid→scared鼓勵：inspire→encourage2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.拓展句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,IwasnervousandinlowspiritsbecauseIwasafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.【點睛】[高分句型1]Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary.(運用了who引導的定語從句和when的省略句)[高分句型2]Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.(運用了with的復合結構和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)8．（2023·上海·上海中學?？寄M預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生李明，你校英語報正在進行主題為“如何應對壓力”的征文，你有意參加，寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：1)你對如何應對壓力的建議；2)用具體的事例說明這一建議的有效性。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Psychologisttellusthatstressisastateofworrycausedbytheprobleminlife,suchastoomuchworkorstudy,heavyresponsibilities,andquickenedpaceoflife.Ithinktherearelotsofthingswecandotosolvetheseproblems.Asweknow,musicisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Ithinkit'shelpfultolistentosomemusicwhenweareundertoomuchpressure.Itwillmakeusforgetallourproblemsandrecallsomegoodmemories.Orwecouldreadsomejokesandaburstoflaughterhelpsalot.Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytiredphysically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhaveagoodsleep.WhenIfailedthelastexaminJuniorschool,stressbegantomount.Iwasinlowspiritsandcouldn'tconcentrate.Luckily,oneweekend,mybestfriendpulledmetothewood,wherewehikedandjoggedforthewholemorning.Sweatingthoroughly,andmountainsofloadgone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.Last,wecantalkaboutourproblemswithourteachersorbestfriends,whomayhelpustogetoverit.Inaword,everythingdependsonourattitude.Itisimportanttostayhappyallthetime,isn'tit?Themoremeaningfulthingswedo,thehappierwewillbe.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一篇短文給校英語報進行的主題為“如何應對壓力”的征文比賽投稿。內(nèi)容須包括：1)對如何應對壓力的建議；2)用具體的事例說明這一建議的有效性?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：stress→pressure此外：besides→what’smore/furthermore/additionally情緒低落的：down→depressed/inlowspirits增長：increase→accumulate/mount2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.拓展句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems,whichisnotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.【點睛】【高分句型1】Sweatingthoroughly,and

mountainsofloadgone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞和獨立主格結構作狀語）【高分句型2】Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytiredphysically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhaveagoodsleep.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語及which引導的非限制性定語從句）9．（2023春·上海·高三上海市建平中學?？奸_學考試）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.76.你是中學生李明，你所居住的小區(qū)(如圖)有塊常年閑置的空地;最近小區(qū)居委會(theresidents’committee)向大家征集開發(fā)改造這片空地的建議，請給居委會主任寫封信，你的信中必須包括：1.你對空地的開發(fā)改造的具體建議；2.你的理由________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DeardirectoroftheResidents’Committee,

ThisisLiHua,amemberoftheResidents’Committee.Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.

Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.Newplacesforsportsandexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkoutregularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchassportsmeetings,whichwillpromotetheconstructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.

IhopemysuggestionisusefulandI’dappreciateitifcouldtakeitintoconsideration.Yours,LiMing【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給小區(qū)居委會主任寫封信，就小區(qū)常年閑置的一塊空地提出具體的開發(fā)改造建議，并說明理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累：建議：advice→suggestion鼓勵、激勵：encourage→inspire鍛煉：workout→takeexercise杰出的、卓越的：excellent→remarkable2.句式拓展：同義句轉換：原句：Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.拓展句：BecauseIknowthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I’mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.【點睛】【高分句型1】Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.（運用了以that引導的同位語從句和情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)。）【高分句型2】Newplacesforsportsandexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkoutregularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchassportsmeetings,whichwillpromotetheconstructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.（運用了notonly...butalso..連接兩個并列謂語，及以關系代詞