專題19 細(xì)節(jié)描寫之198句與25個(gè)身體部位相關(guān)的動(dòng)作描寫（解析版）-2025年高考英語(yǔ)寫作?？碱}型全面突破

專題19細(xì)節(jié)描寫之198句與25個(gè)身體部位相關(guān)的動(dòng)作描寫1head1.He

hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowedhishead

inshame.他羞愧地低下了頭。2.They

noddedtheirheads

inagreement.他們點(diǎn)頭同意。3.She

shookherhead

indisbelief.她懷疑地?fù)u搖頭。4.He

scratchedhishead,notunderstandingaword.他撓了撓頭，一個(gè)字也聽不懂。scratch[skr?t?]抓；撓5.She

buriedherhead

inthepillow.她用枕頭捂住腦袋。6.She

restedherhead

onhisshoulder.她將頭靠在他的肩膀上。7.Hishead

drooped

andtearsfellintohislap.他耷拉著腦袋，眼淚滴落在大腳上。droop[dru:p]低垂，垂落8.Ifellasleepassoonasmyhead

hit

thepillow.我頭一碰到枕頭就睡著了。9.He

put/heldhishead

inhishands,greatlyannoyed.他雙手抱頭，十分生氣。10.Itnever

enteredmyhead

thathemightbelying.我從未想過他會(huì)是在撒謊。11.Idecidedtogoforawalkto

clearmyhead.我決定去走走，清醒一下頭腦。12.Hecouldfeelhishead

spinning

afteronlyonedrink.他只喝了一杯就覺得天旋地轉(zhuǎn)。spin[spin]旋轉(zhuǎn);眩暈13.Heturnedand

headedfor

the

door.他轉(zhuǎn)身朝門口走去。Shestoodupand

headedtowards

theexit.她起身朝出口走去。2face1.Abrightsmileappearedon/spreadacross/crossedhisface.他的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。2.Herfacelitup/brightened/glowedwhenIgaveherthepresent.我給她禮物時(shí)，他的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。Hisfacesuddenlygrewserious他的表情突然嚴(yán)肅起來。4.Hisfacelookedalittleconfused.他看起來有點(diǎn)因惑。5.Jack'sfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment.杰克窘得滿臉通紅。6.Herfacepaledwithfright.她嚇得臉都白了。flush[flN]臉紅Hehadaslightfrownonhisface,他的臉上現(xiàn)出有點(diǎn)兒愁眉不展的樣子。3cheek1.Herestedhischeekonhershoulder他將面頰靠在她的肩上。2.Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.他因?yàn)樾呃⒍械侥橆a發(fā)燒。3.Hercheekswerewetwithtears.她淚流滿面4.Colorrushed/flooded/rosetohercheekswhensherealizedshewasbeingwatched.意識(shí)到有人在看她，她頓時(shí)漲紅了臉。Atearsliddownhercheek.一滴淚順著她的臉頰滑落下來。6.Hekissedheronbothcheeksandgotonthetrain他親了親她的臉頰，然后上了火車。4eye1.Hiseyeswerewidewithhorror他驚恐地瞪大了眼睛。2.Thedog'shungryeyeswereonmysandwich.那條狗饑餓的目光落在我的三明治。fallon/landon...(目光)落在....3.Heturnedhiseyestothedoorwhenheheardthehandleturning.聽到門把轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)的聲音，他向門那邊看去。4.Tinasqueezedhereyesshutandbitherlip,蒂娜閉上雙眼，咬了咬嘴唇。5.Shelookedherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.她直視父親的眼睛，誠(chéng)實(shí)地回答了他的問題。6.Heseemedunwillingtomeetmyeyes.他似乎不愿意與我的目光接觸。7.Hiseyesgrewwide/widenedwithhorroratwhatshehaddone.看到她所做的事，他驚恐地睜大了眼睛。Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparking/sparkling/glistening/glowingwithexcitement.她笑了，眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。sparkle[spa:kl]閃耀，閃爍9.Hereyesbrimmedwith/filledwithtears她的眼里充滿淚水。brim[brim](使)盛滿10.Shetriedtositup,hereyesfixedonjean'sface.她試圖坐起來，目光緊盯著瓊的臉。11.Hiseyesneverleftmine.他一刻不停地盯著我。12.Hiseyesscannedtheroomasheentered.他進(jìn)屋時(shí)眼睛掃視了整個(gè)房間。13.Hiseyesdroppedtoherlapassheanswered他回答時(shí)垂下眼睛看著膝蓋。14.Tearsblurredhereyes/vision.淚水模糊了她的雙眼。blur[bla:(r)]使變模糊15.Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes,我感到淚水在眼里涌出來。5nose1.Shewrinkledhernoseasifshehadjustsmelledabadsmell.她皺著鼻子，好像剛聞到臭味。Shewasweepingloudlyandhernosewasrunning.她大聲哭著，鼻涕也流了下來。3.Shepushedhisglassesupthebridgeofhisnose.她把眼鏡往鼻梁上面推了推。4.Heblew/wipedhisnosewithahandkerchief.他用手帕擤鼻涕6mouth1.Sheopenedhermouthtosaysomething.她張開嘴要說什么,2.Hecoveredhismouthtohidehisyawn.他捂住嘴偷偷打了個(gè)哈欠。3.Ourmouthsdroppedopeninsurprise.我們驚奇地張大了嘴。4.MymouthstartedwateringwhenIsmelledthefood.聞到食物的香味，我開始流口水了。5.Hismouthwidenedtoasmile.他的咧開嘴笑了。6.Suddenlyahandcuppedhermouth,突然一只手扣住了她的嘴。7.Asmileplayedaroundhismouth他的嘴上掛著一絲笑意。8.Hebegantostuffhismouthwithpasta.他開始往嘴里塞意大利面。stuff[st^f]塞滿;填塞Hestraightenedupandlookedatme,open-mouthed.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看著我。10.MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.我走進(jìn)她的辦公室時(shí)，緊張得心都到了喉嚨口。11.Hermouthgrewstiffwithpainanddistress疼痛和悲傷讓她嘴巴發(fā)僵。stiff[stif]僵硬的12.Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen她呆住了，嘴張開著。7tooth1."Comeherenow!"shegrowledthroughher(clenched)teeth"快到這兒來!"她咬牙切齒地咆哮道。growl[graul]低聲吼叫;clench[klent!]抓緊，咬緊2.Theirteethwerechatteringwithcold.他們凍得牙齒咯咯響。3.Themansmiled,revealingperfectwhiteteeth.男人微微一笑，露出雪白整齊的牙齒,4.Herteethflashedasshesmiled她笑的時(shí)候，牙齒閃閃發(fā)亮。8throat1.Sheclearedherthroat,thenbegantospeak她清了清嗓子，然后開始說話。2.Asmallcryescapedhisthroat他不由自主地輕輕叫了一聲。3.Histhroattightenedwithfearwhenhesawtheknife.他看見刀嚇得喉嚨哽住了。4.Hefeltalumpinhisthroat,andtearsforminginhiseyes他覺得喉嚨哽咽，淚水涌上雙眼。lump[mp]喉嚨哽塞，哽咽5.Istoodtherewithalumpinmythroatandtriedtofightbacktears我站在那里，喉嚨哽塞，拼命想止住眼淚。9lip1.Hebithislipnervously,tryingnottocry他緊張地咬著嘴唇，努力忍著不哭出來。2.Helickedhislipshungrily.他饑渴地舔著嘴唇。3.Shesmiledandthenkissedhislips她笑著然后親吻了他的嘴唇。4.Hislipswerequivering/trembling.他的嘴唇在顫抖。5.Shewipedherlipswiththebackofherhand.她用手背擦了擦嘴唇。6.Therewasasmileonherlips.她的唇邊掛著微笑。10chin1.Hischinquiveredandatearrandownhischeek.他下巴顫抖著，一顆淚珠從面頰上滑落下來。2.Herubbed/fingeredhischinthoughtfully.他若有所思地揉搓著下巴。3.Hischinroseinaproudgesture.他驕傲地?fù)P起下巴。4.Herchinwasrestingonhisshoulder她的下巴靠在他的肩上。11earMyheartwaspounding/ringing/echoinginmyears.我能聽到我的心在怦怦地跳2.Hewenthomewiththeteacher'swarningringinginhisears回家的路上，老師的警告一直在他的耳邊縈繞。3.Hepressedhisearstothedoor,butheardnothing他把耳朵貼在門上，但是什么也聽不到。4.Themusicwassoloudthatithurtmyears音樂太響，震得我耳朵疼。5.AtfirstIstoppedmyearstowhatIdidnotwanttohear.起初我對(duì)不想聽的話捂住耳朵不聽。6.Istrainedmyearstocatchtheconversationintheotherroom我豎起耳朵聽隔壁房間的對(duì)話。7.Shestoodoutsidetheroom,herearsstrainingtohearwhattheyweresaying.她站在房間外豎起耳朵聽他們?cè)谡f什么。8."Taxi?"saidavoiceinmyear"坐出租車嗎?"我的耳邊響起一個(gè)聲音。9.Hewasbeaming/grinned/smiledfromeartoear.他笑得合不攏嘴。10.Sheputherhandsoverherearstoblockoutwhathewassaying她用手捂住耳朵，不聽他說的話11.Sheactuallyapologized.Icouldn'tbelievemyears好居然道歉了，我真不敢相信自己的耳朵。12hand1.Shetookthechild'shandandhelpedhimclimbthesteps她拉住孩子的手牽著他爬上臺(tái)階。2.Hereachedforherhandandheldittightly.他伸手抓住她的手并緊緊握住。3.Theywalkedalong,holdinghands他們手拉手并肩走著。4.Heheldthekeyinhishand他手里拿著鑰匙。5.Hegraspedtheropewithbothhands.他雙手抓著繩子。6.Heshookmyhandsasifwewerelonglostfriends.他握住我的手好像我們是失散多年的朋友。7.Shesmiledandholdout/reachoutahandinwelcome她笑著伸出一只手表示歡迎。8.Sheputherhandstohercheeksinembarrassment.窘迫之中她用雙手捂住了臉。9.Severalstudentsraisedtheirhandstoanswerthequestion.幾個(gè)學(xué)生舉手回答問題。10.Heslidhishandsintohispockets.他悄悄地將手插進(jìn)口袋里。11.Sheshruggedandspreadherhands."That'sallIcantellyou.她聳聳肩，攤開雙手說:“我只能告訴你這么多了。12.Sheshivered,rubbingherhandstogetherfiercely.她一邊顫抖，一邊使勁搓著雙手。13.Herhandsshook/trembledassheliftedtheglasstoherlips她的手顫抖著把杯子送到唇邊。14.Astronghandreachedoutandcaughtholdofherarm.一只有力的手伸了出來抓住了她的手臂。15.Icuppedmyhandoverthephonesotheycouldn'thearme.我用手捂住電話，免得他們聽到我的話。16.Hesatwithhisheadinhishands他雙手抱著坐著。17.Theywalkedhandinhandalongthepath.他們手拉手沿著小路走13fingerTheteacherraisedawarningfingerandwestoppedtalking.老師舉起了警告的手指，我們停止了交談。2.Shetookoffhisbandageswithgentlefingers.她用溫柔的手指取下了他的繃帶。3."Itwasthem!"shecried,pointinganaccusingfingerattheboys."是他們！"她喊著，指責(zé)地指著那些男孩。4.Sheraised/heldupafingertoherliptoaskforsilence.她豎起手指放在唇邊，要求安靜。5."Noneofthat!"criedtheteacher,wagging/wavingherfinger."不許那樣！"老師喊道，搖著手指。6.Idippedmyfingerinthesauceandlickedit.我把手指浸入醬汁中并舔了舔。7.Hewasdrumminghisfingersnervouslyonthearmofthechair.他緊張地用手指敲擊著椅子的扶手。8.Hesnappedhisfingersandthewaitercamerunning.他打響指，服務(wù)員跑過來了。14fistHebangedhisfistloudlyonthetable.他用拳頭大聲地敲桌子。2.Themanwasshakinghisfistatusthroughthewindow.那人通過窗戶對(duì)我們揮舞著拳頭。3."Yeah,youdidit!"Sallysaid,pumpingherfistintheair."對(duì)，你做到了！"薩莉說，在空中揮舞著她的拳頭。4.Sheranathim,herfistsflying.她向他跑去，雙拳飛舞。5.Shesawhisfistsclench.她看到他的拳頭緊握。6.Heswunghisfistswildlyattheman'shead.他瘋狂地朝那個(gè)男人的頭揮舞拳頭。15palmSheslappedherpalmagainstthedeskinanger.她憤怒地用手掌拍打桌子。Heheldupapalmforsilence.他舉起手掌要求安靜。3.Icouldfeelmyheartthumpingwildlyandmypalmsweating.我能感覺到我的心在劇烈跳動(dòng)，手掌出汗。16ArmTheyaresuretowelcomeyouwithopenarms.他們肯定會(huì)張開雙臂歡迎你。2.Hewasrunningforward,wavinghisarms.他向前跑，揮舞著雙臂。3.Hestoodtherewithcrossedarms,lookingangry.他雙臂交叉站在那里，看起來很生氣。4.Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.她雙臂交叉凝視著他。Heheldout/openedhisarmswithabroadsmile.他張開雙臂，面帶燦爛的笑容。Hereachedoutahandandcaughtholdof/grabbed/took/herarm.他伸出手抓住了她的胳膊。Shemovedclosertoherfatherandtookhisarm.她走近父親，挽住了他的胳膊。Theywalkedalongarminarm.他們臂挽臂走著。Heranuptoherandput/threw/hisarmsaroundher.他跑向她，伸出雙臂抱住了她。10.Shestood,lookingathimwitharmsakimbo.她雙手叉腰站著，看著他。17shoulderItappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhimtomove.我拍了拍那個(gè)男人的肩膀，讓他讓路。WhenIaskedhimwhyhehaddoneit,hejustshruggedhisshoulders.當(dāng)我問他為什么這么做時(shí)，他只是聳了聳肩。Myshouldersdroppedwithrelief.松了一口氣，他的肩膀垂了下來。Thechildsatonherfather'sshoulderstowatchtheparadegoby.孩子們坐在父親的肩膀上觀看游行。Heshoulderedopenthedoor.他用肩膀頂開門。Sheshoulderedherwaythroughthecrowd.她推開人群前進(jìn)。Helooked(back)overhisshoulder.他回頭看了一眼。18chest"Youneedtohavecourage,"hesaid,thumpinghischest."你需要勇氣，"他一邊說，一邊捶打自己的胸膛。Sheranuntilherchestached.她一直跑到胸部疼痛。Herchesttightenedwithfear.她的胸部因恐懼而緊繃。Sheclutchedherbabytightlytoherchest.她緊緊地把孩子抱在胸前。Hischestswelledwithprideasheacceptedtheaward.當(dāng)他接受獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)時(shí)，他的胸部因自豪而膨脹。19stomachThesmellofthedogturnedhisstomach.狗的氣味讓他感到惡心。"Calladoctor!"hesaid,clutchinghisstomach."叫醫(yī)生！"他一邊說，一邊捂著肚子。"I'meatingfortwonow!"shesaid,pattingherstomach."我現(xiàn)在吃兩個(gè)人的份！"她一邊說，一邊輕拍著肚子。Ilayonmystomachonthebeach.我趴在海灘上。20heartWithaheavy/sinking/brokenheart,shewatchedhimgo.她懷著沉重/下沉/破碎的心情，看著他離去。Hesetoffwithalightheart.他心情輕松地出發(fā)了。Hissadstorytouchedherheart.他悲傷的故事觸動(dòng)了她的心。Herwordspiercedmyheart.她的話刺痛了我的心。Justfollowyourheartandyou'llbehappy.只要跟隨你的心，你就會(huì)快樂。Finally,hebrokedownintearsandpouredouthishearttoher.最后，他崩潰大哭，向她傾訴了心聲。Relieffilledhisheart.他的心里充滿了寬慰。Herheartleapedwithjoy.她的心情因喜悅而激蕩。MyheartacheswhenIthinkoftheirsorrow.想到他們的悲傷，我的心就痛。Inside,hisheartwasslowlybreaking.在內(nèi)心深處，他的心正在慢慢破碎。Hesmiledandherheartmelted.他笑了，她的心融化了。Herheartisbeatingfast.她的心跳得很快。Herheartwaspoundingwithexcitement.她的心因興奮而怦怦直跳。Hisheartthumpedwithfear.他的心因恐懼而怦怦直跳。Myheartbegantothumpwildly.我的心開始狂跳。Herheartseemedtomissabeat.她的心似乎漏跳了一拍。Thosewordscanmakeyourheartskipabeatandbringtearstoyou.那些話可以讓你的心跳停拍，眼淚涌上你的眼睛。21backHebends/huncheshisbackwhenhewalks.他走路時(shí)彎腰駝背。Heyawnedandstretchedhisbackashegotoutofbed.他打了個(gè)哈欠，伸了伸懶腰，從床上爬起來。Heleanedhisbackagainstthebar.他背靠在吧臺(tái)上。Hesmiledandgavemeaheartyslap/patontheback.他笑了，在我的背上重重地拍了一巴掌。Theytiedhishandsbehindhisback.他們把他的手綁在背后。Hewascarryingasmallchildonhisback.他背上背著一個(gè)小孩。Shewaslyingonherbackonthesofa.她仰面躺在沙發(fā)上。Hebackedslowlyoutoftheroom.他慢慢地從房間里退出。Hetookastepforwardandshenervouslybackedaway.他向前邁了一步，她緊張地往后退。22footHegotshakilytohisfeet.他顫抖著站起身。Shejumpedtoherfeetwhensheheardthenews.她聽到這個(gè)消息時(shí)，跳了起來。Shewastapping/stampingherfeetimpatiently.她不耐煩地跺著腳。Shedraggedherfeetasshereluctantlyfollowedherparents.她不情愿地跟著父母，拖著腳步。MyfeetslippedasIwasabouttoshootandImissedtheball.我正要射門時(shí)，腳一滑，沒射中球。Theycarriedhimoutoftheroomwithhisfeetkicking.他們把他抬出了房間，他的腳還在亂踢。Heshiveredashisfeettouchedthecoldfloor.他的腳碰到冰冷的地板，打了個(gè)寒顫。HelikestoputhisfeetupandwatchTVwhenhegetshome.他喜歡回到家后，把腳翹起來看電視。23KneeSuddenlyherknees

buckled/weakened

andshefelltothefloor.突然她的膝蓋一軟/無力，她跌倒在地。He

huggedhisknees

tokeepwarm.他環(huán)抱著膝蓋以保持溫暖。He

went/gotdownonhisknees

andbeggedforforgiveness.他跪下請(qǐng)求原諒。Hesat

onherfather'sknees

whilehereadherastory.他坐在她父親的膝上，聽他讀故事。Hewas

onhisknees,searchingforthemissingring.他跪著尋找丟失的戒指。24legShecrossedthefinishline

ontiredlegs.她拖著疲憊的雙腿沖過終點(diǎn)線。Herosetohisfeet

onshakylegs.他用顫抖的雙腿站起身來。ImovedthechairawayfromthetablesoIcould

crosshislegs.

我把椅子從桌子邊移開，這樣我就可以交叉雙腿。25skinHerskinwas

glistening

withsweatafterherrun.跑步后她的皮膚因汗水而閃閃發(fā)光。Beneathhisskin,themusclesweretightwithtension.他的皮膚下，肌肉因緊張而緊繃。Justthinkingaboutit

makesmyskincrawl.光是想想就讓我毛骨悚然。Writing01【河北省石家莊市部分學(xué)校2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月聯(lián)考】Jackandhismotherhadjustmovedintotheirnewapartment,aplacethatfeltlikeafreshstartforbothofthem.Theapartmentwasspacious,withalivingroomthatwasaperfectfitfortheirbelovedpiano.Thatevening,Jackandhismotherdecidedtocelebratetheirnewhomewithamusicalevening.Theysatsidebysideonthepianobench,theirfingersdancingoverthekeys,andcreatedaharmoniousblendofjazzmelodies.Themusicwasacelebrationoftheirnewbeginning.However,thepeaceofthenightwasreplacedbyanotethenextmorning.Apieceofpaperhadbeenslippedundertheirdoor,acomplaintfromoneoftheirneighborsaboutthenoisefromthepiano.Thenoteremindedthemthattheiractionshadanimpactonothers.Inresponsetothiscomplaint,Jacksuggestedtheywritealettertotheirneighbors,expressingtheirapologiesforthedisturbance.Hismother,however,hadadifferentidea.”Whydon’tweinviteeveryoneoverforaparty?”shesaid.”Wecangettoknowthemandshowthemthatweareconsiderateneighbors.”Jack’seyeslitupattheidea.Itwasaperfectopportunitytoconnectwiththeirnewneighbors.Thatafternoon,theybegantoplantheparty,carefullyselectinginvitations,food,anddrinks.Theywantedittobeawarmandwelcomingeventthatwouldallowthemtointroducethemselvestotheirneighborsandapologizeinperson.Thedayofthepartyarrived,andtheirapartmentwaschangedintoalivelygatheringspot.Neighborsstreamedin,eachbringingasmallgiftsuchasflowers,andhomemadedesserts.Theroomwasfilledwithlaughterandconversation.AmongtheguestswasMrs.Gertrude,anelderlyladywhohadbeentheonetoleavethenote.SheapproachedJack’smotherwithabookofChopin’spianomusic.“Iheardyouplayingtheothernight.”sheadmitted,”andthemusicwokemefrommysleep.Iwasconcernedthatsuchbeautifulmusicmight.becomeanightlyevent,disturbingmyrest.Thet’swhyIwrotethenote.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TouchedbyMrs.Gertrude’shonestyandgesture.Jack’smothersmiledwarmly.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterlookingthroughthebook,Jackmadeapromise.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:TouchedbyMrs.Gertrude’shonestyandgesture,Jack’smothersmiledwarmly.“Weshouldbetheonestoapologize,”shesaid.“Wedidn’trealizehowlateitwasandtheimpactourmusicmighthavehadonyouandothers.We’llmakesuretoplaymorequietlyatnight.”Mrs.Gertrudewavedofftheapology,insistingthatsheenjoyedthemusicandjustwantedittobeconsiderateofthelatehour.Shepointedtothebookshehadgiventhem,suggestingthatthepieceswithinwerenotasloudandwouldbesuitableforeveningplay.Afterlookingthroughthebook,Jackmadeapromise.”Thesesongsareindeedbeautiful,andwepromisetoplaythemsoftlyandconsiderately.”Hismother’ssmilegrewevenwider,pleasedwiththewarmthandacceptancetheyfeltfromtheirnewcommunity.Asthepartycontinuedintothenight,Jackandhismotherrealizedthattheyhadindeedfoundnotjustanewlivingspace,butatruehome.Thebigsmileonhismother’sface,thelaughteroftheirneighbors,andthesharedjoyofmusicfilledtheirheartswithasenseofbelonging.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】文章以人物為線索展開，講述了杰克和他的母親搬入新公寓后，通過舉辦一場(chǎng)音樂聚會(huì)來解決因彈奏鋼琴引起的鄰里噪音投訴的故事。在慶祝新家的音樂之夜后，他們收到了鄰居的投訴信，指出鋼琴聲影響了休息。面對(duì)這一投訴，杰克的母親提議邀請(qǐng)鄰居們參加聚會(huì)，以此作為道歉和結(jié)識(shí)新鄰居的機(jī)會(huì)。聚會(huì)當(dāng)天，公寓變成了熱鬧的聚會(huì)場(chǎng)所，鄰居們紛紛前來，帶來了小禮物，并享受了愉快的交流時(shí)光。其中，留下投訴信的格特魯?shù)路蛉艘矃⒓恿司蹠?huì)，并親自向杰克的母親解釋了投訴的原因?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“被格特魯?shù)路蛉说奶拐\(chéng)和舉動(dòng)所打動(dòng)，杰克的母親露出了溫暖的笑容?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Jack母親向Gertrude太太道歉的過程以及Gertrude太太的回應(yīng)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“翻看過那本書后，杰克許下了一個(gè)承諾?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼慗ack和他母親通過這件事得到的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：道歉——獲贈(zèng)樂譜——作出保證——感到高興——感悟3.詞匯積累行為類意識(shí)到：realize/beawareof喜歡：enjoy/befondof對(duì)……有影響：haveanimpacton/haveaneffecton情緒類高興的：pleased/delighted體貼的：considerate/attentive【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Mrs.Gertrudewavedofftheapology,insistingthatsheenjoyedthemusicandjustwantedittobeconsiderateofthelatehour.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Asthepartycontinuedintothenight,Jackandhismotherrealizedthattheyhadindeedfoundnotjustanewlivingspace,butatruehome.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）Writing02【江西省上進(jìn)聯(lián)考2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月月考】Itallstartedwhenmyfour-year-oldson’sbloodtestshowedtumor(腫瘤)markers.WehadtodoanMRI(核磁共振),anditwasatrulyterribleexperienceasthedateapproached.Whenthebigdaycame,itwasevenworsethanIimagined.Mylittleboyheldmetightlyasnursesinstructedmetolaymybabydownonthehospitalstretcher.Hescreamedanddesperatelyreachedoutformewhiletheyputhimtosleepusingamask.Thenurseexplainedtheprocedurewouldtaketwohours.Ifelthopeless,worried,andguiltyforthewayIhadtohelpholdhimdown.Mylittleboyalreadysufferedfrombreathingproblemswhenhewassleeping,andthepossiblefuturetestresultwasweighingheavilyonme,too.IknewIdidn’twanttositinthatwaitingroom.ButwhatelsecouldmymomandIdotogetthroughthosenexttwohours?Wewenttotheelevatorandgotoffwhenwesawthecafeteria,whereIgotahotcupofcoffee.Afteracupofcoffeeandafewminutesofbitingmynails,Igotupandtoldmymom,“Let’sgoshopping.”ItoldMumthatIwasonamissiontomakethenexttwohourscount,doingsomethingworthwhileinsteadofsittingthereworrying.AsIwasinthegiftshoplookingfortoysformyson,anideacametome.SoIwalkeduptothefrontcounter,stillteary-eyed,andexplainedmyplantotheyounggirlworkingatthecashregister.“MylittleboyisgettinganMRItoday.Sowearejusthangingoutandwaitinghereforthenexttwohours.Woulditbeokayifwepurchasedawholebunchofgiftsandsentthemupstairstokidsinthehospital?ImeanIwanttosendgiftstorandomkidsinthehospital.Canyoujustgivethemtothenursesandletthemgiveittothekidswhoneedthemthemost?”Shesmiledandgavemeathumbs-up.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Overthenexthourandahalf,Ifilledupalltheextracounterspaceinthestorewithgifts.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aswewerepaying,myphonerangandmyson’snursecalledtosaythateverythingwento