2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：森林奇遇引轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)妹妹病情得救助+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)森林奇遇引轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，妹妹病情得救助1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Petersatatthekitchentable,havingbreakfast.Ithadbeenanotherbadnightforhisbabysister,Lily,andhisparentswerearguinginthesittingroom.HeheardhismothermentionTom,anoldmanwholivedintheforest.PeteroftenexploredtheforestandknewMr.Tomwasakindherbalist(草藥醫(yī)生).WasittruethathecouldhelpLily?Peterwouldn’trestuntilhefounditout.Afterbreakfast,Peterimmediatelysetoff.Itwasashortwalkfromhishometotheforest’sedge.Peterwassofocusedonhisthoughtsofhissisterthathedidn’tnoticethestrangecryingsoundsinthedistanceuntilhegotcloseenough.Hefollowedthesoundsuntiltheyledhimtoacave.4續(xù)寫原文Aflashlightlitupsuddenlyinthecave,andPetersawalittleboylyingonthedirt-coveredstone.PeterlearnedthattheboycalledCliffcametothisforestwithhismotherbutranoffbyhimself.Cliffwasinjuredanddidn’tseehismother.PeterdecidedtotakeClifftoMr.Tom.WhentheysawMr.Tomandtoldhimeverything,Mr.Tomtreatedtheinjurywithabandage(繃帶)andhelpedcontactCliff’smotherovertheradio.PetermovedclosertolookatCliff’sbandagedankleandfeltasenseofrelief.ThenPeterturnedtoMr.Tomandsaid,“Mr.Tom,mybabysisterisverysick.IoverheardMommentionyou,soIcameoutheretodaytoaskyouforhelp...”BeforePeterfinishedhiswords,Mr.Tomsaid,“Ihadtriedtohelp,butyoursisterneededtobesenttoabighospitalandalotofmoney...”Peterrealizedhisparentshadarguedbecausetheycouldn’taffordLily’streatment.5續(xù)寫原文Mr.TomwastryingtocomfortPeterwhensomeoneknockedonthedoor.Mr.Tomopeneditandsawalady,whoclaimedherselfasCliff’smother.“It’syou!”Mr.Tomshoutedexcitedly.“You’reafan?”theladysaid.“Icametothisareatospendaholidaywithmyson.Thankfully,youhavesavedhim.Whereishe?”6段首句Paragraph1:Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9彼得的妹妹莉莉生病，父母為此爭(zhēng)吵，彼得得知森林里的草藥醫(yī)生湯姆先生或許能幫忙，便出發(fā)尋找。途中他在山洞發(fā)現(xiàn)受傷的男孩克里夫，帶他去找湯姆先生。湯姆先生為克里夫處理傷口并聯(lián)系其母親。彼得向湯姆先生求助，湯姆表示莉莉需大醫(yī)院治療但費(fèi)用高昂。此時(shí)，克里夫母親到來，她竟是位富商。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.湯姆先生點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，領(lǐng)著這位女士走向她的兒子?？吹絻鹤影踩粺o恙，女士激動(dòng)得淚水奪眶而出?？死锓蛞簿o緊抱住母親，訴說著自己的害怕與無助。女士平復(fù)情緒后，對(duì)湯姆先生和彼得千恩萬謝。湯姆先生在交談中，不經(jīng)意間說起彼得妹妹莉莉生病卻沒錢醫(yī)治的困境。這位女士聽聞后，內(nèi)心深受觸動(dòng)。她深知疾病給家庭帶來的痛苦，作為一位富有同情心且財(cái)力雄厚的商人，她當(dāng)場(chǎng)決定要伸出援手，承擔(dān)莉莉所有的醫(yī)療費(fèi)用。彼得站在一旁，簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信自己的耳朵，眼中瞬間燃起了希望的光芒。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.第二天清晨，在自己的臥室里，彼得被一聲歡快的尖叫喚醒。他迷迷糊糊地睜開眼睛，聽出是母親的聲音，便急忙沖向客廳。只見父母都滿臉洋溢著興奮與喜悅。母親一把拉住彼得，激動(dòng)地告訴他，那位好心的女士已經(jīng)迅速安排好了一切，莉莉馬上就能轉(zhuǎn)去一家頂尖的大醫(yī)院接受治療。很快，莉莉被送往醫(yī)院，在專業(yè)醫(yī)生的精心照料下，病情逐漸好轉(zhuǎn)。一家人對(duì)這位女士的善舉感激不盡，而彼得也感受到了人間的溫暖與美好。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.WhentheladysawCliff,shewassoexcitedthattearswelledupinhereyes.Cliffalsorantohismotherandhuggedhertightly,tellingherhowscaredhewas.Aftercalmingdown,theladythankedMr.TomandPeterrepeatedly.Duringtheconversation,Mr.TommentionedPeter'ssisterLily'sillnessandthefinancialproblemtheyfaced.Thelady,whowasawealthyandkind-heartedbusinesswoman,wasdeeplytouched.ShethoughtforamomentandthendecidedtocoverallofLily'smedicalexpenses.Peterstoodthere,hiseyeswideopen,hardlybelievingwhathehadjustheard.Aglimmerofhopeappearedinhiseyes.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.Heopenedhiseyessleepilyandrecognizeditwashismother'svoice.Herushedtothelivingroominahurry.There,hesawhisparentsbeamingwithhappiness.Hismothertoldhimthatthekindladyhadarrangedeverythingquickly.Lilywasgoingtobetransferredtoatop-classhospitalrightaway.Soon,Lilywassenttothehospital.Withthecarefultreatmentofprofessionaldoctors,Lily'sconditiongraduallyimproved.Thewholefamilywasextremelygratefultothelady,andPeteralsofeltthewarmthandkindnessoftheworld.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Mr.Tomnoddedand,withagesture,ledtheladytowardsherson.ThemomenttheladylaideyesonCliff,overwhelmingexcitementsurgedwithinher,andtearswelledinhereyes.Cliff,inturn,sprintedtowardshismother,embracinghertightlyashepouredouthisfearandhelplessness.Oncetheinitialemotionsubsided,theladyexpressedhergratitudetoMr.TomandPeterprofusely.ItwasduringthisconversationthatMr.Tom,casuallyyetsincerely,broughtuptheplightofPeter'ssisterLily—herillnessandthefinancialburdenthatcamewithit.Thelady,awealthyandcompassionatebusinesswoman,wasdeeplymoved.Withoutamoment'shesitation,sheresolvedtoshoulderallofLily'smedicalexpenses.Peter,standingby,wasleftdumbfounded,hiseyeswidewithdisbelief,yetaglimmerofhopesparkledwithinthem.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwasrousedfromhisslumberbyajoyfulscream.Rubbinghiseyessleepily,herecognizeditashismother'svoice.Hasteningtothelivingroom,hewasgreetedbythesightofhisparentsbeamingwithelation.