Unit 1 寫作課-如何寫建議信學(xué)案

PeriodIIIReadingforWriting如何寫建議信語言知識：behaviour,attract,focuson,addicted,“動詞+it+賓補(bǔ)+不定式（短語）”結(jié)構(gòu)，too---to---結(jié)構(gòu)等。語言技能：學(xué)會寫建議信。核心詞匯Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.我建議你跟你的朋友談一談他的行為。教材P18behaviourn.[U]行為；舉止Hisbehaviourwas,inaword,shocking.總之，他的行為是令人震驚的。聯(lián)想詞①behavevi.表現(xiàn)；舉止規(guī)矩有禮；運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)behavewell/badly表現(xiàn)得好/差behaveoneself舉止規(guī)矩有禮Mycarhasbeenbehavingwellsinceitwasrepaired.我的汽車自修理后一直運(yùn)行良好。MrBlakewasagentleman.Heknewhowtobehave.布萊克先生是位士。他知道如何舉止得體。②well-behavedadj.彬彬有禮的；行為端正的Thekidsatthisschoolaredisciplined,hard-workingandwell-behaved.這所學(xué)校的孩子們遵守紀(jì)律、學(xué)習(xí)勤奮、彬彬有禮。③ill-behavedadj.沒有禮貌的；舉止表現(xiàn)不好的牛刀小試①Hehasbeenbehaving____________(strange)recently.②Howisyournewcar______________(behave)?③Smokinginpublicisbad_____________(behave).④這些表現(xiàn)不好的孩子真的很令我頭疼。___________________________________________Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.你們這一代青少年被電腦游戲和網(wǎng)絡(luò)世界吸引，這并不稀奇。教材P18attractvt.吸引；引起······的注意（或興趣）Herbeautyattractedmanypassers-by.她的美貌吸引了很多路人常用搭配attractsbto...吸引某人到·……beattractedto...喜愛……；被……吸引attractattention吸引注意Whatfirstattractspeopletothejobisthechancetotravel.這份工作首先吸引人們的是有機(jī)會去旅行。Afewyearslater,stillattractedtothecountry,hereturnedtoUzbekistantowriteanarticleaboutthedisappearanceoftheAralSea.幾年后，他仍然被這個(gè)國家吸引，于是回到烏茲別克斯坦寫了一篇關(guān)于咸海消失的文章。(2020新高考全國1]Theytendtoattractattentionwherevertheygo.他們不管到哪里都容易引人注意。聯(lián)想詞①attractionn.[C，U]喜愛；吸引力；魅力[C]吸引人之物Shefeltanimmediateattractionforhim.她對他頓生愛慕之情。②attractiveadj.迷人的；有魅力的；有吸引力的Ithoughthewasveryattractiveandobviouslyveryintelligent.我覺得他魅力非凡，而且顯然才智過人。牛刀小試①What_________memostinBeijingistheGreatWall.②WewelcomeyoutojoinusinthisspecialtourwhichwillexploreoneoftheuniqueAustralian_________(attract).③Summerattractsvisitors___________thecountryside.④Guilinisan_____________(attract)citywhichmanyvisitorswanttogoto.⑤Thousandsoftourists___________(attract)toShanghaiDisneyResortthedayitopened.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.但花費(fèi)過多的時(shí)間上網(wǎng)是不健康的，并且這也會讓你們很難專注于生活中的其他事情。教材P18focuson集中；特別關(guān)注；(眼睛、攝像機(jī)等)對準(zhǔn)，調(diào)節(jié)焦距What'smore,itisofsignificancetofocusonbothfoodquantityandquality.另外，關(guān)注食物的數(shù)量和質(zhì)量都很重要。ButmorecamerasfocusonStalloneandhisthreebeautifuldaughters.但是更多的照相機(jī)聚焦在斯塔隆和他的三個(gè)漂亮的女兒身上。聯(lián)想拓展focus①vi.&t.集中(精力、注意力等)；(使)調(diào)節(jié)焦距；(使)聚焦focus...on...把……集中到……上focus/centre/concentrate/fixone’sattentiononsth集中某人的注意力于某物上Hefocusedhisblueeyesonher.他那雙藍(lán)色的眼睛注視著她。②n.焦點(diǎn)；重點(diǎn)；中心thefocusofattention/concern/interest關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)牛刀小試根據(jù)漢語提示補(bǔ)全句子。①Thoughthestoryisamusing,Ihavetoputitawayand______________________________(把我的注意力集中在)study.②Theoldmanstoodtherewith_______________________(他的眼睛盯著)thepicture.翻譯句子。③我們必須關(guān)注產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量的提升。(focuson)④這是會議上關(guān)注的主要焦點(diǎn)。___________________________________________________SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.有些學(xué)生甚至上網(wǎng)成癮，無法將精力集中到學(xué)校生活和家庭生活上。教材P18addictedadj.有癮的；上癮的；入迷的常用搭配beaddictedtodoingsth對……入迷；沉迷于；對……上癮Mychildrenarehopelesslyaddictedtothetelevision.我的孩子們都沉迷于看電視，簡直無藥可救了。Manysmokerswhoareaddictedtonicotinecannotgiveupeasily.許多對尼古丁有癮的吸煙者不容易把煙戒掉。特別注意短語beaddictedto中的to是介詞，后接名詞、代詞或動名詞形式。Heisaddictedtoplayingvideogames,whichcanaccountforhisfailureintheexam.他沉迷于玩電子游戲，這是他考試不及格的原因。聯(lián)想詞①addictn.對……入迷的人；吸毒成癮的人SheisaTVaddictandwatchesasmuchasshecan.她是個(gè)電視迷，看起電視來沒完沒了。②addictionn.癮；入迷Heisnowfightinghisaddictiontoalcohol.他現(xiàn)在正努力戒酒。牛刀小試①SomeWesterncountriesarefacingthetoughissueofdrug________(addict)amongyoungpeople.②Iwentthroughaboutfouryearsofbeing_________(addict)tovideogames.③Heisturninginto______Internetaddict.④People_____________(addict)tosmokinghavegreatdifficultyingettingridofthe(addict).⑤__________(addict)toplayinggamesrecently,heiseasytofeelsleepyinclass.⑥Muchtomyshock,mydaughteris________(addict)tosurfingtheInternet.句型探究Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.【句意】但花費(fèi)過多的時(shí)間上網(wǎng)是不健康的，并且這也會讓你們很難專注于生活中的其他事情。教材P18知識拓展“動詞+it+賓補(bǔ)+不定式(短語)”結(jié)構(gòu)定向練1當(dāng)不定式(短語)作賓語，且有賓語補(bǔ)足語時(shí)，常用it作形式賓語，而將不定式(短語)放在賓語補(bǔ)足語之后。構(gòu)成的結(jié)構(gòu)為：動詞+it+賓補(bǔ)+不定式(短語)。常用于這一復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的動詞有：consider,feel,find,make,think等。TheyallfeelitveryhardtolearnGerman.他們都認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)德語很困難。Theroughroadmakesitdifficulttogettothedestination.崎嶇不平的路使到達(dá)目的地變得困難。牛刀小試1①Hefound________hisdutytoworkhardatallhissubjects.②Hethoughtitworthwhile_________(have)atry.③Theyconsider________bettertodoitthatway.④Ifeltitimportantforwomen________(join)andtakealeadingrole.ThereisagirlIlikeinmyclass,butI'mtooshytotalktoher.Therebe句型【句意】班里有一位我喜歡的女孩，但是我太害羞了，不敢和她說話。教材P19知識拓展too...to...結(jié)構(gòu)①too...to...意為“太……而不能……”，表示否定意義。Uponhearingtheteacher'stalk,thechildrenprobablyfeltitsoundedtoogoodtobetrue.聽到老師說的話，孩子們可能覺得那聽起來太好了，以至于不是真的。Itwastoocoldtodoanythingoutside.天氣太冷了，在戶外什么也做不了。②too...to...結(jié)構(gòu)也可以轉(zhuǎn)換為so...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。Heistooyoungtodothisthing.=Heissoyoungthathecan'tdothisthing.他太小了，做不了這件事。特別注意當(dāng)too前面有all，but,only,just,never等詞修飾，too后面的形容詞為表示心情的或描繪性的形容詞，如happy,pleased,willing,thankful,delighted,anxious,eager,kind,good,wise等時(shí)，此結(jié)構(gòu)沒有否定意義，而表示強(qiáng)烈的肯定意義。Sheisonlytoogladtohelpyou.她非常樂意幫助你。It'snevertoolatetolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。Theyarealltoodelightedtogoanddothiswork.他們很樂意去做這項(xiàng)工作。牛刀小試①It'sclearthatthetreeistooyoungtostandthestorm.同義句轉(zhuǎn)換。→It'sclearthatthetreeis________young________itcan'tstandthestorm.②Youcannotbetoocarefulindrivingacar.（英譯漢）建議信寫作1.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)建議信是寫信人向收信人針對某事提出的建議或忠告。信的內(nèi)容要包含寫信的原因、具體建議以及提出建議的理由等。文章結(jié)構(gòu)一般是“三段式”，通常以first(ly)，second(ly),third(ly)或tobegin/startwith,then,besides,lastbutnotleast等依次陳述建議，具體為：第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，需要的話可以簡單介紹自己，注意禮貌用語的使用和語氣。第二段：最好先肯定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況給出具體的建議或忠告。注意使用禮貌用語，建議信是在提建議，而不是投訴。第三段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意結(jié)尾更要有禮貌，使對方容易接受。2.常用表達(dá)(1)首段常用表達(dá)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/about...我寫信是想表達(dá)我對……的看法。Youhaveaskedmyadviceabout/on...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.你已經(jīng)問了我一些關(guān)于……的建議，我會盡量給你一些建議。AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat...我在報(bào)上看到你的信后，很遺憾得知……Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto...我很高興聽到你想要……Iknowyouhavetroublein...afterreadingyourletter.讀完你的來信后，得知你在……方面有麻煩。Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof...我寫信給你是為了……Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.我寫信是想和你分享一些建議/意見。(2)提出建議時(shí)的常用表達(dá)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould....我認(rèn)為如果你能……會更有益。Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat..我想建議/推薦……IfIwereyou,Iwould...如果我是你，我會······Whynot...?/How(What)about...?/You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...為什么不·····?/··…怎么樣？/你最好……/做……更好。Whatdoyouthinkof...?/Howdoyoulike...?你認(rèn)為……怎么樣？---isagood/greatidea.……是個(gè)好主意。Youmayconsiderdoing...你可以考慮做……AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看來，采取以下行動是明智的。Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Isuggestthatyoushould....當(dāng)談到這種情況時(shí)，我建議你應(yīng)該……(3)尾段常用表達(dá)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.我希望你會考慮我的建議。Ibelieveyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我相信你將會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議是實(shí)用的/有用的/有幫助的。Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.最后，如果你覺得我的建議有用的話，我會很高興的。模擬演練為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為“Worried”的同學(xué)的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請你用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern.脾氣；情緒Hi“Worried”,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jamie答案核心詞匯1.①strangely②behaving③behaviour④Theseill-behavedchildrenarereallyabigheadacheforme.2.①attracts②attractions③to④attractive⑤wereattracted3①focus/concentrate/fixmyattentionon②hiseyesfocu