2024秋高中英語Unit5ThepowerofnatureSectionⅣWriting-旅游景點介紹學案含解析新人教版選修6

PAGEUnit5ThepowerofnatureSectionⅣWriting——旅游景點介紹一、基本結構二、增分佳句1．Myhometownisontherailwayline.我的家鄉(xiāng)在鐵路沿線。2．Inthewestsuburbsofthecitytherestandsasmallvillage.Thatismyhometown.市西郊有一個小村子，那就是我的家鄉(xiāng)。3．Ourcountryisalargeonewithalonghistory.我們的國家是個歷史悠久的大國。4．Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyvillageinthepast/last20years.在過去的20年里，我們村子發(fā)生了天翻地覆的改變。5．Thestreetshavebeenwidened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemasandtheatreshavebeensetuponeafteranother.Nowmyhometownhasbecomearichandbeautifulplace.街道已經(jīng)拓寬。工廠、學校、醫(yī)院、影院和劇院一個接一個地拔地而起。如今，我的家鄉(xiāng)變得富有、漂亮。6．LocatedintheeastofFujianProvince,Xiamenisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.廈門位于福建省東部，是一個具有悠久歷史的沿海城市。7．Itcoversatotalareaof5,271squarekilometreswithapopulationofabout3.5million.它總占地面積是5271平方千米，人口約為350萬。8．TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinShanwei,amongwhicharetheFengshanTempleandRedBay.汕尾市有許多聞名的旅游勝地，如鳳山祖廟、紅海灣等。[題目要求]依據(jù)以下提示寫一篇關于倫敦的旅游景點介紹。第一步：審題構思很關鍵一、審題1．確定體裁：本文為說明文；2．確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應為第三人稱；3．確定時態(tài)：主要運用一般現(xiàn)在時。二、構思第一部分，整體介紹。其次部分，分區(qū)介紹。第三部分，總結全文。其次步：核心詞匯想周全1．fullof充溢2．a(chǎn)politicalcenter政治中心3．a(chǎn)hugefinancialmarketplace一個巨大的金融市場4．theoldestpartofLondon倫敦最古老的地方5．a(chǎn)busyshoppingandentertainmentdistrict繁忙的購物區(qū)和消遣區(qū)6．holdsth.successfully勝利舉辦……7．improve改善8．Itisdifficulttodosth.做……很困難第三步：由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1．一句多譯①倫敦是一座藝術氣息和歷史氛圍濃郁的都城，一個重要的政治中心，一個巨大的金融市場。Londonisacapitalcityfullofartandhistory,animportantpoliticalcentreandahugefinancialmarketplace.→London,acapitalcityfullofartandhistory,isanimportantpoliticalcentreaswellasahugefinancialmarketplace.②倫敦是一個“鄉(xiāng)村集散地”，每個地方都有自己的特色和自己的社區(qū)，因此要全面描述倫敦是很困難的。ItisdifficulttodescribeLondonineveryaspect,forthecityismadeupofacollectionofvillages,eachofwhichhasitsowncharacterandcommunity.→Asacitymadeupofacollectionofvillages,itisdifficulttodescribeLondonineveryaspect,foreachofthevillageshasitsowncharacterandcommunity.2．基本句式①金融廣場是倫敦最古老的地方。TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon.②那里沒有太多的人居住。Therearenotmanypeoplelivingthere.③每天30萬人在此工作。300,000peopleworkthereeveryday.④倫敦西區(qū)是繁忙的購物區(qū)和消遣區(qū)。WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrict.⑤倫敦東區(qū)包含倫敦港。EastEndcontainsthePortof⑥那是移民最先到達的地方。Itistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.⑦在倫敦勝利舉辦了2012年奧運會。TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon.⑧當?shù)厝讼Ｍ@個區(qū)的住房、教化和工作機會能夠得到改善。Thelocalpeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanypeopleinthisareawillimprove.第四步：句式升級造亮點1．用定語從句及with的復合結構連接基本句式中的①②③TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon,wheretherearenotmanypeoplelivingwith300,000peopleworkingthereeveryday.2．用while及which引導的定語從句連接基本句式中的④⑤⑥WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrictwhileEastEndcontainsthePortofLondon,whichistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.3．用whose引導定語從句連接基本句式中的⑦⑧TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon,whosepeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanypeopleinthisareawillimprove.第五步：過渡連接聯(lián)成篇London,acapitalcityfullofartandhistory,isanimportantpoliticalcentreaswellasahugefinancialmarketplace.TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon,wheretherearenotmanypeoplelivingwith300,000peopleworkingthereeveryday.WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrictwhileEastEndcontainsthePortofLondon,whichistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon,whosepeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanype