高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：漢娜的叢林書屋發(fā)現(xiàn)與分享之旅+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)漢娜的叢林書屋發(fā)現(xiàn)與分享之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onceuponatime,inalandfaraway,therewasasmallvillageintheheartofabigjungle.Surroundedbythemountainsandintheshadeofgreentrees,thevillagerslivedahappylife.Allofthemwereusedtotheirroboticdailytasksandnoneofthemhadtheimaginationorthewilltotrysomethingnew,exceptforonegirlnamedHannah.Veryfewpeopleinthevillagecouldread,letalonewrite,andHannahwasoneofthem.Butherparentsalwaysbelievedthattheironlychildcouldgeteverythingpossible.4續(xù)寫原文Hannahwasanadventurousspiritwithanimaginationfarbeyondhertime.Shelovedtoexploreandwouldspendhoursinthewoodslookingfornewthings.Shelovedtocreatestoriesinherheadandusedtoimagineherselfasoneofhercharacters.Oneafternoon,whenHannahwasononeofheradventures,shecameuponanabandonedwoodenhouse,whichlookedveryoldinitscondition.EventhoughHannah’smotherhadstrictlywarnedhernottogowanderinginabandonedplaces,hercuriositygotthebestofher.Shetip-toedslowlytothedoorandslowlyopeneditandshewasleftstunned.InfrontofHannahwasaroomfullofbooks!Booksshoneinthedust,basking(取暖)inthewarmsunlightjustwaitingtobeexplored.Hannah’sexcitementwasvisibleonherfaceasshejumpedupanddownwithjoy!5續(xù)寫原文Hannahtookadeepbreathassherealizedthatshehadfoundahiddentreasure—agoldmineofbooks.Sheknewinherheartthatshehadtoreadallofthemsoshequicklygottowork.Shedustedthebooks,theshelves,andwhatwasleftofthefurniture.Hannahcleanedthehousealldaylonguntilsherealizedthatitwasdarkandshehadtogobackhome.Butthebooks,ohshecouldn’tgetherselftoleavewithoutatleastreadingone.SoHannahpickedtwobooksanddecidedtoreadthemathome.6段首句Paragraph1：Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.Paragraph2：Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在叢林深處的小村莊，村民們生活單調(diào)，漢娜卻充滿冒險(xiǎn)精神。一次探險(xiǎn)中，她不顧母親警告，進(jìn)入一座廢棄木屋，發(fā)現(xiàn)滿室書籍。漢娜視其為珍寶，打掃房間后帶兩本書準(zhǔn)備回家。在回家路上，她遇見(jiàn)朋友，迫不及待分享這一發(fā)現(xiàn)。之后，她決定要把這份“寶藏”分享給大家，盡管知道會(huì)困難重重。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.在回家的路上，她遇見(jiàn)了朋友們。他們正圍在一起玩耍，看到漢娜抱著兩本書，都好奇地圍了過(guò)來(lái)?！皾h娜，你從哪兒弄來(lái)的書呀？”一個(gè)小伙伴問(wèn)道。漢娜眼睛亮晶晶的，興奮地說(shuō)：“我在叢林里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一座廢棄的木屋，里面全是書！好多好多，就像一個(gè)寶藏庫(kù)！”朋友們聽(tīng)了，都露出驚訝的表情。有的朋友羨慕地說(shuō)：“哇，太厲害了，你可以給我們講講書里的故事嗎？”但也有朋友不屑地說(shuō)：“書有什么用，還不如玩游戲呢?！睗h娜并不在意這些質(zhì)疑，她只想快點(diǎn)回家，沉浸在書的世界里。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.她想要把這份“寶藏”分享給大家，盡管知道這會(huì)很困難。漢娜明白，村子里的人大多不識(shí)字，對(duì)讀書也沒(méi)什么興趣。但她沒(méi)有放棄，她決定先從孩子們?nèi)胧?。第二天，她在村子的廣場(chǎng)上擺了幾張小桌子，把書整齊地放好。然后，她邀請(qǐng)村里的孩子們過(guò)來(lái)，給他們講書里有趣的故事。孩子們被精彩的情節(jié)吸引，聽(tīng)得入了迷。慢慢地，越來(lái)越多的孩子加入進(jìn)來(lái)，甚至一些大人也被吸引，開始對(duì)書產(chǎn)生了好奇。漢娜知道，改變不會(huì)一蹴而就，但她會(huì)堅(jiān)持下去，讓更多的人感受到書的魅力。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.TheywereengagedintheirusualplaytimewhentheyspottedHannahcarryingtwobooks.Curiositygotthebetterofthem,andtheyrushedtowardsher.“Hannah,wheredidyougetthosebooks?”oneoftheminquired.Hannah'seyessparkledwithexcitementasshereplied,“Idiscoveredanabandonedwoodenhouseinthejungle.Itwasfilledwithbooks!Thereweresomany,likeahiddentreasuretrove.”Herfriendsweretakenaback.Someofthemsaidenviously,“Wow,that'samazing.Canyoutellusstoriesfromthebooks?”However,othersscoffed,“What'stheuseofbooks?It'sbettertoplaygames.”Hannahpaidnoheedtothedoubters.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasgettinghomequicklytostartreading.14范文呈現(xiàn)Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.Hannahwasawarethatmostpeopleinthevillagewereilliterateandhadlittleinterestinreading.Butshewasdetermined.Shedecidedtostartwiththechildren.Thenextday,shesetupafewsmalltablesinthevillagesquareandplacedthebooksneatlyonthem.Then,sheinvitedthevillagechildrenoverandbegantotellthemfascinatingstoriesfromthebooks.Thechildrenwerecaptivatedbythewonderfulplots.Gradually,moreandmorechildrenjoinedin,andevensomeadultsweredrawninandstartedtoshowcuriosityaboutthebooks.Hannahknewthatchangewouldn'thappenovernight,butshewasresolvedtokeepgoing,toletmorepeopleexperiencethecharmofbooks.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Onthewayhome,shemetherfriends.Engrossedintheirplay,theyimmediatelynoticedHannahclutchingtwobooks.Drawnbycuriosity,theyswarmedaroundher.“Hannah,whereonearthdidyoufindthose?”oneofthemexclaimed.Witheyesablazewithexcitement,Hannahgushed,“Istumbleduponanabandonedwoodenhouseinthejungle.Itwasbrimmingwithbooks,averitablegoldmine!”Herfriendswereastounded.Some,filledwithenvy,pleaded,“Wow,that'sincredible.Please,dotellusstoriesfromthem.”O(jiān)thers,however,sneered,“Books?Useless.Gamesarefarmorefun.”Unfazedbythenaysayers,Hannah'smindwassolelyonreachinghometodelveintothebooks.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Shewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone,thoughitwouldbedifficult.Well-awarethatilliteracyanddisinterestinreadingprevailedinthevillage,Hannahwasundeterred.Herplanwastobeginwiththechildren.Thefollowingday,shearrangedseveral