高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：風(fēng)雨無阻的溫情：奶奶的周六餅干之約+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)風(fēng)雨無阻的溫情：奶奶的周六餅干之約1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Istoodinfrontofthehouse,waitingforGrandma’sboxofcookies.EverySaturday,aboxofcookieswouldarriveonourdoorsteptiedwithabrownstring.AsfarasIcouldremember,Grandma,carryingthebox,wasalwaysthereontime.Jack,myyoungerbrother,hadalwaysbeenfonderofthecookies.Hewasstillchildish,maybenotunderstandingthevalueoftimewithfamily.Asforme,IwasalwaysGrandma’slittlegirl,andpossiblyshelovedmemorethanMom.TherewassomethingaboutGrandmathatmadehersospecial.Infact,seeinghereverySaturdaywasthehappiestthingallweekforme.Jackplayedintheyardandpickedflowersforthedinnertable.Momalwayswantedtheprettiestones,andJackjustknewwhichonesshewouldlovemost.4續(xù)寫原文“Theweatherreportsaystodaywillbearainyday.SowillGrandmastillcome?”Jackasked.“I’mnotsure,”Ianswered,lookingupatthesky.Thecloudsweredarkgrayandthick,whichjustmadememoreupset.However,Jackdidn’tseemtooexcitedaboutthecookiesthistime.Hewasarranginghisflowersattentively.“You’dbettercomein!Icanfeelafewraindropsonmyhead,”Momshouted.Jackquicklyrantowardsher,carryingmanyflowers.Someevenslippedoutofhishands,creatingacolorfultrailbehindhim.“IbroughtyousomerosesMom!”Jacksaid,shoving(猛推)theflowersintoherhands.Ifoundheleftsomeflowersinhishand.Whowashegoingtogivethemto?Momthenlookedbackatme.“Wouldyouratherbeoutsideintherain?”shequestioned.Ishookmyhead.“It’sjustaboxofcookies.IcangetitnextSaturday,”Ithought.However,Iknewitwasmoreaboutthecookies—itwasalotoflovefromGrandma.Momgavemeasmallsmileandrepeated,“Iknewyouwouldn’twanttogetwet.Comein,baby.”Iwasabouttostepinsidewhenafamiliarvoicecame,“Jenny,I’mcoming!”IturnedbackandsawGrandmashuffling(拖著腳走)towardsme.5段首句Paragraph1：IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Paragraph2:“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8每個(gè)周六，奶奶都會(huì)帶著一盒餅干準(zhǔn)時(shí)出現(xiàn)在“我”家門口?！拔摇焙偷艿芙芸硕己芷诖棠痰牡絹?，相比之下，杰克更鐘情于餅干，而“我”則享受和奶奶相處的時(shí)光，每周能見到奶奶是“我”最開心的事。杰克會(huì)在院子里玩耍，為媽媽挑選漂亮的花。這天，天氣預(yù)報(bào)說會(huì)下雨，杰克擔(dān)心奶奶還會(huì)不會(huì)來，“我”抬頭看著烏云密布的天空，心里也有些不安。這時(shí)開始下雨了，媽媽喊我們進(jìn)屋，杰克拿著許多花跑向媽媽，還留了一些在手上。“我”準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)屋時(shí)，聽到了奶奶熟悉的聲音。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.我張開雙臂朝著奶奶沖過去。雨滴越來越密集，打在我們身上，可我絲毫不在意。奶奶雖然被雨水打濕了頭發(fā)和衣服，但她臉上依舊掛著溫暖的笑容，手里緊緊地護(hù)著那盒餅干。我緊緊地抱住奶奶，感受著她熟悉的懷抱，心里滿是歡喜和感動(dòng)?！澳棠?，下這么大的雨，您怎么還來呀，淋感冒了可怎么辦?！蔽倚奶鄣卣f道。奶奶輕輕地摸了摸我的頭，慈愛地說：“傻孩子，奶奶答應(yīng)過你們每個(gè)周六都來送餅干，怎么能食言呢。而且奶奶也想你們呀，一周不見，就想得慌?！边@時(shí)，媽媽和杰克也從屋里跑了出來。媽媽看到奶奶被淋濕了，趕忙說道：“媽，您看您，下這么大雨還跑過來，快進(jìn)屋擦擦，別著涼了?！苯芸藙t跑到奶奶身邊，仰著小臉說：“奶奶，我還以為您今天不來了呢，我可想您啦！”說著，他把藏在身后的那束花遞給奶奶，“奶奶，這是我給您摘的花，可好看啦！”奶奶接過花，笑得眼睛都瞇成了一條縫，“我的乖孫子，真懂事，這花真漂亮。”10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.“奶奶，您又帶來了餅干！”杰克開心地說。奶奶把餅干盒遞給杰克，杰克迫不及待地打開盒子，一股香甜的味道撲鼻而來。他拿起一塊餅干，咬了一大口，滿足地說：“奶奶做的餅干還是這么好吃！”我也拿起一塊餅干，細(xì)細(xì)品味著，熟悉的味道在口中散開，心里暖暖的。一家人圍坐在一起，吃著餅干，分享著彼此這周的趣事。奶奶一邊聽著，一邊笑著，時(shí)不時(shí)還插上幾句。窗外的雨依舊淅淅瀝瀝地下著，但屋里卻充滿了溫馨和歡樂。我看著奶奶，心里暗自想著，無論風(fēng)雨如何，奶奶的這份愛從未缺席。她的堅(jiān)持和陪伴，就像這盒餅干一樣，溫暖著我們的生活。這個(gè)周六，因?yàn)槟棠痰牡絹?，變得格外難忘。即使雨下個(gè)不停，也無法阻擋我們一家人相聚的幸福時(shí)刻。大家有說有笑，享受著這難得的溫馨時(shí)光，度過了一個(gè)充滿愛的下午。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Theraindropsweregettingdenserandhittingus,butIdidn'tcareatall.AlthoughGrandma'shairandclotheswerewetfromtherain,therewasstillawarmsmileonherface,andsheheldtheboxofcookiestightlyinherhands.IhuggedGrandmatightly,feelingherfamiliarembrace,andmyheartwasfilledwithjoyandgratitude."Grandma,it'srainingsohard.Whydidyoustillcome?Youmightcatchacold,"Isaidwithconcern.Grandmagentlytouchedmyheadandsaidaffectionately,"Sillychild,GrandmapromisedyoutocomeandbringthecookieseverySaturday.HowcouldIbreakmypromise?AndGrandmamissesyousomuch.Ican'twaittoseeyouforaweek."Atthistime,MomandJackalsoranoutofthehouse.WhenMomsawthatGrandmawaswet,shequicklysaid,"Mom,lookatyou.Youcamehereinsuchheavyrain.Comeinanddryyourselfquickly.Don'tcatchacold."JackrantoGrandma'sside,lookedupatherwithhissmallface,andsaid,"Grandma,Ithoughtyouwouldn'tcometoday.Imissyousomuch!"ThenhehandedthebunchofflowershehadhiddenbehindhisbacktoGrandma."Grandma,thesearetheflowersIpickedforyou.Theyaresobeautiful!"Grandmatooktheflowersandsmiledsowidethathereyesbecameslits."Mydeargrandson,you'resosensible.Theseflowersarereallybeautiful."13范文呈現(xiàn)"Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!"Jacksaidhappily.GrandmahandedtheboxofcookiestoJack.Jackcouldn'twaittoopenthebox,andasweetsmellfilledtheair.Hepickedupacookieandtookabigbite,sayingwithsatisfaction,"Grandma'scookiesarestillsodelicious!"Ialsopickedupacookieandsavoreditcarefully.Thefamiliartastespreadinmymouth,makingmyheartwarm.Thewholefamilysataround,eatingcookiesandsharingtheinterestingthingsthathappenedtousthisweek.Grandmalistenedwithasmileandinterjectedafewwordsfromtimetotime.Therainwasstillpatteringoutsidethewindow,buttheroomwasfilledwithwarmthandjoy.IlookedatGrandmaandthoughttomyselfthatnomatterhowheavytherainwas,Grandma'sloveneverfailedtoarrive.Herpersistenceandcompanywerelikethisboxofcookies,warmingourlives.ThisSaturday,becauseofGrandma'sarrival,becameparticularlyunforgettable.Eventhoughtherainkeptfalling,itcouldn'tstopthehappymomentwhenourfamilygottogether.Wetalkedandlaughed,enjoyingthispreciouswarmtimeandspendingalovingafternoon.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Theraindropswerefallingmoreandmoredensely,peltingusmercilessly,yetIpaidthemnoheed.Grandma,herhairandclothesthoroughlysoakedbytherain,stillworeawarm,affectionatesmileonherface,tightlyclutchingtheboxofcookiesinherhands.Ithrewmyarmsaroundher,savoringthefamiliarityofherembrace,myheartbrimmingwithjoyanddeep-seatedgratitude."Grandma,it'spouringoutside!Whyonearthdidyoustillcome?Youcouldcatchacold,"Iexclaimed,myvoicelacedwithconcern.Grandmagentlystrokedmyheadandsaid,hertonefilledwithlove,"Sillychild,GrandmamadeapromisetoyoutocomeandbringthecookieseverySaturday.HowcouldIgobackonmyword?Besides,Imissyouallterribly.Aweekwithoutseeingyoufeelslikeaneternity."Justthen,MomandJackrushedoutofthehouse.UponseeingGrandmadrenched,Momexclaimed,"Mom,lookatyou!Youbravedthisheavyraintocomehere.Hurryinsideanddryoff.Wedon'twantyoutofallill."Jack,inthemeantime,skippedovertoGrandma,hisfacebeaming,andsaid,"Grandma,Ithoughtyouwouldn'tcometoday.I'vebeenmissingyousomuch!"Withthat,hepresentedthebouquetofflowershehadhiddenbehindhisback."Grandma,Ipickedtheseforyou.Aren'ttheybeautiful?"Grandmatooktheflowers,hereyescrinklingwithdelight."Mydeargrandson,you'resothoughtful.Theseflowersaresimplylovely."15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!"Jackexclaimedwithunbridledjoy.GrandmahandedtheboxofcookiestoJack,whotoreitopenwitheagerhands.Asweet,enticingaromaimmediatelywaftedthroughtheair.Jackgrabbedacookieandtookahugebite,exclaimingwithsatisfaction,"Grandma'scookiesarestillasscrumptiousasever!"Itoopickedupacookieandnibbledonitslowly,relishingthefamiliartastethatfloodedmysensesandwarmedmyheart.Thewholefamilygatheredaround,munchingonthecookiesandsharingtheamusinganecdotesof