高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：磚后的善意：速度與溫情的碰撞+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)磚后的善意：速度與溫情的碰撞1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AyoungandsuccessfulmanagerhadanewJaguar,whoseside*doorwasdented（凹陷的）.Thedamagewasverynoticeable,butthemanagerneverbotheredtorepairit.Hekeptthedenttheretoremindhimofoneafternoonaswellasthismessage：Don'tgothroughlifesofastthatsomeonehastothrowabrickatyoutogetyourattention!Themanagerwastravelingdownaneighborhoodstreet,goingabittoofastinhisnew.Jaguar.Hewaswatchingforkidsrushingoutfrombetweenparkedcarsandsloweddownwhenhethoughthesawsomething.Ashiscarpassed,nochildrenappeared.Instead,abrickcrashedintotheJag'ssidedoor!HebrakedsharplyanddrovetheJagbackwardtothespotwherethebrickhadbeenthrown.Theangrydriverthenjumpedoutofthecar,grabbedthenearestkidandpushedhimupagainstaparkedcar,shouting,“Whatwasthatallaboutandwhoareyou?”Theyoungboyapologized."Pleasemister...please,I’msorry...Ididn'tknowwhatelsetodo,"hebegged.4續(xù)寫原文“Ithrewthebrickbecausenooneelsewouldstop..."Withtearscorningdownhisface,thelittleboypointedtoaspotjustaroundaparkedcar.“MyelderbrotherfelloutofhiswheelchairandIcan'tlifthimup.hesaid.Stillcrying,theboyaskedtheastonishedmanager,"Wouldyoupleasehelpmegethimbackintohiswheelchair?He'shurtandhe'stooheavyforme.”Movedbeyondwords,hehurriedtothespotwiththeboy.Anotherboywaslyingonthe,groundbleeding.Hetookouthiscleanhandkerchiefandtouchedlightlyatthefreshscrapes（擦傷）andcuts.Aquicklooktoldhimthatthewoundwasserious,thedisabledmustbetakentothehospitalatonce.5段首句Paragraph1:Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitinthecar.Paragraph2:Infifteenminutes,theyarrivedatthenearesthospital.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8一位年輕成功的經(jīng)理有一輛嶄新的捷豹汽車，汽車的側(cè)門有一處凹陷，這處損傷很明顯，但經(jīng)理從未想過要去修復(fù)它。他留著這個(gè)凹陷是為了提醒自己某個(gè)下午發(fā)生的事情，也為了時(shí)刻提醒自己：不要在生活中過得太過匆忙，以至于別人必須向你扔磚頭才能引起你的注意！一天，經(jīng)理開著新車在附近街道行駛，速度有點(diǎn)快。他留意著是否有孩子從停放的車輛之間沖出來，當(dāng)他覺得看到了什么東西時(shí)便放慢了車速。車開過去后，并沒有孩子出現(xiàn)，然而，一塊磚頭卻砸向了捷豹的側(cè)門！他猛地剎車，把車倒回到磚頭扔出的地方。憤怒的司機(jī)跳下車，抓住離他最近的一個(gè)孩子，把他推到一輛停著的車上，大聲吼道：“你這是干什么？你是誰？”小男孩連忙道歉，哭著解釋說他扔磚頭是因?yàn)闆]有人愿意停車，他的哥哥從輪椅上摔了下來，他沒辦法把哥哥扶上去。經(jīng)理十分震驚，男孩淚流滿面地請(qǐng)求經(jīng)理幫忙把哥哥扶回輪椅上，說哥哥受傷了，他一個(gè)人抱不動(dòng)。經(jīng)理被男孩的話深深打動(dòng)，和他一起匆忙趕到出事地點(diǎn)，看到另一個(gè)男孩躺在地上流血。經(jīng)理拿出干凈的手帕，輕輕擦拭著男孩新的擦傷和傷口，他快速查看后發(fā)現(xiàn)傷口很嚴(yán)重，必須立刻把這個(gè)殘疾男孩送到醫(yī)院。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitinthecar.幸運(yùn)的是，他車上有一個(gè)急救箱。經(jīng)理迅速打開急救箱，取出消毒藥水和繃帶，動(dòng)作嫻熟地為受傷的男孩處理傷口。他一邊小心翼翼地清理傷口，一邊輕聲安慰著受傷的男孩，讓他不要害怕。小男孩在一旁焦急地看著，眼中滿是擔(dān)憂。處理完傷口后，經(jīng)理和小男孩一起小心翼翼地將受傷的男孩抱上了車。經(jīng)理讓受傷的男孩平躺在后座上，盡量讓他感覺舒適一些。隨后，經(jīng)理發(fā)動(dòng)汽車，以最快的速度向醫(yī)院駛?cè)?。在路上，?jīng)理不斷地通過后視鏡觀察受傷男孩的情況，同時(shí)還安慰著兩個(gè)孩子，告訴他們不要擔(dān)心，很快就會(huì)到醫(yī)院。小男孩緊緊地握著哥哥的手，眼中閃爍著希望的光芒。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Infifteenminutes,theyarrivedatthenearesthospital.十五分鐘后，他們到達(dá)了最近的醫(yī)院。經(jīng)理迅速停好車，然后抱著受傷的男孩沖進(jìn)了急診室。醫(yī)生和護(hù)士們立刻行動(dòng)起來，對(duì)受傷的男孩進(jìn)行全面檢查和救治。經(jīng)理和小男孩在急診室外焦急地等待著，他們的心情十分沉重。過了一會(huì)兒，一位醫(yī)生走了出來，告訴他們受傷的男孩已經(jīng)脫離了危險(xiǎn)，但還需要住院觀察一段時(shí)間。經(jīng)理和小男孩聽到這個(gè)消息后，都松了一口氣。小男孩感激地看著經(jīng)理，眼中滿是淚水，他不停地向經(jīng)理道謝。經(jīng)理微笑著摸了摸小男孩的頭，說這是他應(yīng)該做的。從那以后，經(jīng)理和這兩個(gè)男孩成為了好朋友，他經(jīng)常去醫(yī)院看望受傷的男孩，還幫助他們解決了一些生活中的困難。而那輛捷豹車上的凹陷，也一直提醒著經(jīng)理，在生活中，要多留意身邊的人和事，不要因?yàn)樽约旱拇颐Χe(cuò)過幫助他人的機(jī)會(huì)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitinthecar.Themanagerquicklyopenedthefirst-aidkitandtookouttheantisepticsolutionandbandages.Heskillfullytreatedtheinjuredboy'swound.Whilecarefullycleaningthewound,hesoftlycomfortedtheinjuredboy,tellinghimnottobeafraid.Thelittleboywatchedanxiouslyfromtheside,hiseyesfullofworry.Aftertreatingthewound,themanagerandthelittleboycarefullycarriedtheinjuredboyintothecartogether.Themanagerlettheinjuredboylieflatonthebackseattomakehimfeelascomfortableaspossible.Then,themanagerstartedthecaranddrovetowardsthehospitalatthefastestspeed.Ontheway,themanagerkeptobservingthesituationoftheinjuredboythroughtherear-viewmirror.Atthesametime,healsocomfortedthetwochildren,tellingthemnottoworryandthattheywouldarriveatthehospitalsoon.Thelittleboyheldhisbrother'shandtightly,hiseyesshiningwithhope.13范文呈現(xiàn)Infifteenminutes,theyarrivedatthenearesthospital.Themanagerquicklyparkedthecarandthencarriedtheinjuredboyintotheemergencyroom.Thedoctorsandnursesimmediatelytookactionandconductedacomprehensiveexaminationandtreatmentfortheinjuredboy.Themanagerandthelittleboywaitedanxiouslyoutsidetheemergencyroom,theirheartsheavywithworry.Afterawhile,adoctorcameoutandtoldthemthattheinjuredboywasoutofdangerbutstillneededtobehospitalizedforobservationforawhile.Themanagerandthelittleboywererelievedtohearthenews.Thelittleboylookedatthemanagergratefully,withtearsinhiseyes.Hekeptthankingthemanager.Themanagersmiledandpattedthelittleboyonthehead,sayingthatitwaswhatheshoulddo.Fromthenon,themanagerbecamegoodfriendswiththetwoboys.Heoftenwenttothehospitaltovisittheinjuredboyandalsohelpedthemsolvesomedifficultiesinlife.AndthedentontheJaguaralwaysremindedthemanagerthatinlife,heshouldpaymoreattentiontothepeopleandthingsaroundhimandnotmisstheopportunitytohelpothersbecauseofhisownhaste.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Luckily,hehadafirst-aidkitstowedawayinthecar.Withoutamoment'shesitation,themanagerdashedtowardsthevehicle,flingingopenthedoorandretrievingthekit.Hishandsmovedwithpracticedeaseashedeftlyopenedit,pullingouttheantisepticsolutionandbandages.Withutmostcare,hebegantreatingtheinjuredboy'swound,hiseyesfocusedintentlyonthetaskathand.Ashegentlycleanedthecutsandscrapes,hespokeinasoft,soothingvoice,tryingtocalmthefrightenedboy."Don'tbescared,everythingwillbeokay,"hemurmuredreassuringly.Thelittleboystoodnearby,hiseyeswidewithworry,watchingeverymovethemanagermade.Oncethewoundwasproperlytreated,themanagerandthelittleboyworkedtogether,liftingtheinjuredboyasgentlyastheycouldandcarefullyplacinghiminthebackseatofthecar.Themanagerarrangedtheboyinacomfortableposition,makingsurehewasasrelaxedaspossible.Then,heslidintothedriver'sseat,startedtheengine,andspedofftowardsthehospital,thetiresscreechingonthepavement.Throughoutthejourney,hekeptacloseeyeontheinjuredboythroughtherear-viewmirror,hisheartpoundingwithconcern.Meanwhile,hetriedhisbesttocomfortthetwochildren,assuringthemthathelpwasjustaroundthecorner.Thelittleboyclutchedhisbrother'shandtightly,hissmallfacefilledwithhope.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Inamatteroffifteenminutes,theypulledupatthenearesthospital.Themanagerwastednotime.Hequicklyparkedthecarandscoopeduptheinjuredboyinhisarms,rushingtowardstheemergencyroom.Thedoctorsandnurses,alertedbythecommotion,immediatelysprangintoaction.Theytooktheboyfromthemanager'sarmsandbeganathoroughexamination,theirmovementsswiftandefficient.Themanagerandthelittleboywereleftstandingoutsidetheemergencyroom,theirnervesonedgeastheywaitedfornews.Everypassingminutefeltlikeaneternity.Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeanage,adoctoremergedfromtheroom.Withareassuringsmile,heinformedthemthattheinjuredboyhadbeenstabilizedandwasnowoutofdanger.However,hewouldneedtobehospitalizedforaperiodofobservation.Themanagerandthel