高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：沙灘沙堡：海浪來襲兄弟倆的堅(jiān)持與重建+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)沙灘沙堡：海浪來襲，兄弟倆的堅(jiān)持與重建1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onceuponatime,inthemidstofafinesummer,TomandhisyoungerbrotherJackwentonanamazingtriptoapicturesquebeachwiththeirfamily.ExcitementfilledtheairasTomandJackeagerlypackedtheirbucketsandshovels(鏟子),readytoexplorethesandywondersthatawaitedthem.Themomenttheyarrivedatthebeach,theywastednotimeandrusheddirectlytowardstheshoreline.Withthewindbrushinggentlyovertheircheeks,TomandJackdugtheirhandsintothesoftgrainsofsand,laughinghappilyastheyfeltgrainsofsandpassingthroughtheirfingers.Theirlaughterwasechoingalongthecoast.4續(xù)寫原文Thenthetwolittlebrothersdecidedtobuildasplendidsandcastlethatwouldleaveeveryoneinawe.Withthesoundofseabirdssinginginthebackground,theybegantheirgrandproject.Sidebyside,theycuppedtheirhands,dugintothesoftbeach,andstartedbuildingtheirdreamcastle.Withgreatcareandprecision,theysculptedandshapedthesandwiththeirfingers,craftingeachtowerandwall.Theboyswerelostintheirwork,feelingthewarmthofthesandbeneaththeirfingers.Theyseemedtohearwhisperingtalesofthedistant,mysteriousocean.Timeseemedtostandstillastheboyspouredtheirheartsintoeverydetailoftheirsandycreation.Witheachpassingmoment,thesandcastlegrewinbothsizeandbeautyanditbegantotakeshape.Together,theypatientlydecoratedtheirdreamcastlewithseashellsandtwigs,imaginingaworldofsoldiers,princesses,andmagicalcreatures.Seeingthecastlestandproudlybeforethem,thetwolittlebrothersbreathedoutasighofrelief.Theireyesshonewithexcitement.Theywerelikearchitectswhowereappreciatingtheirmasterpiecethatexpressedtheirextraordinaryimagination.5段首句Paragraph1:However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Paragraph2:Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8在一個(gè)美妙的夏日，湯姆和弟弟杰克與家人一同前往美麗的海灘旅行。一到海灘，兄弟倆就興奮地帶著工具沖向海岸，迫不及待地玩起沙子，歡聲笑語(yǔ)在海邊回蕩。接著，他們決定建造一座驚艷眾人的沙堡。在海鳥歌聲的陪伴下，兄弟倆并肩作戰(zhàn)，精心雕琢每一處細(xì)節(jié)，用沙子堆砌出塔樓和城墻，還找來貝殼和樹枝裝飾，仿佛置身于一個(gè)充滿士兵、公主和魔法生物的奇幻世界。經(jīng)過努力，一座美麗的沙堡終于建成，兄弟倆滿心歡喜，欣賞著自己的杰作。然而，就在他們沉浸在喜悅中時(shí)，海水開始上漲，一場(chǎng)考驗(yàn)即將來臨。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.然而，就在他們還沒反應(yīng)過來時(shí)，海水開始上漲。起初，只是細(xì)小的浪花輕輕拍打著沙灘，可沒過多久，海浪就變得越來越大，越來越?jīng)坝?。冰冷的海水迅速蔓延，一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)逼近他們精心建造的沙堡。湯姆和杰克瞪大了眼睛，滿臉驚恐地看著這一切。他們眼睜睜地看著海浪無(wú)情地沖擊著沙堡的城墻，那些原本堅(jiān)固的塔樓在海浪的攻擊下?lián)u搖欲墜。杰克的眼眶瞬間紅了，他帶著哭腔說道：“哥哥，我們的沙堡要沒了！”湯姆雖然心里也很著急，但他努力保持鎮(zhèn)定，安慰弟弟說：“別擔(dān)心，我們想想辦法?！毙值軅z試圖用手擋住海水，可這一切都是徒勞，海水依舊不停地上漲。很快，沙堡的一角被海浪沖垮，沙子隨著海水被卷走。看著心愛的沙堡一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)被摧毀，兄弟倆的心情無(wú)比沉重。但他們沒有放棄，依舊在海邊焦急地尋找著能夠拯救沙堡的方法。他們四處張望，希望能找到一些東西來阻擋海水，然而，周圍除了沙子和貝殼，什么也沒有。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.杰克點(diǎn)頭表示同意，他們決定重建沙堡。湯姆拍了拍弟弟的肩膀，鼓勵(lì)道：“弟弟，這次我們一定能建得更好！”于是，兄弟倆再次拿起鏟子和水桶，投入到重建工作中。這一次，他們吸取了上次的教訓(xùn)，選擇了一個(gè)離海水更遠(yuǎn)的地方。他們更加努力地挖掘沙子，雙手不停地忙碌著。湯姆仔細(xì)地規(guī)劃著沙堡的結(jié)構(gòu)，確保它更加堅(jiān)固。杰克則負(fù)責(zé)收集更多漂亮的貝殼和樹枝，用來裝飾沙堡。他們齊心協(xié)力，配合默契。經(jīng)過一番努力，一座嶄新的沙堡逐漸成型。這座沙堡比之前的更加雄偉壯觀，塔樓更高，城墻更厚。兄弟倆還在沙堡周圍挖了一條深深的護(hù)城河，用來阻擋海水的侵襲。當(dāng)他們完成這一切后，太陽(yáng)已經(jīng)漸漸西斜，金色的余暉灑在沙灘上，為他們的沙堡披上了一層美麗的外衣。看著重新建好的沙堡，兄弟倆相視而笑，他們的臉上洋溢著勝利的喜悅。這次經(jīng)歷讓他們明白了，只要不放棄，勇于嘗試，就一定能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Atfirst,onlytinywavesgentlylappedatthebeach.Butbeforelong,thewavesbecamebiggerandmoreviolent.Thecoldseawaterspreadrapidly,graduallyapproachingtheirelaboratelybuiltsandcastle.TomandJack'seyeswidenedinhorrorastheywatched.Theyhelplesslysawthewavesmercilesslypoundingagainstthewallsofthesandcastle,andtheonce-sturdytowerswereshakingundertheattackofthewaves.Jack'seyesinstantlyfilledwithtears,andhesaidwithasobbingvoice,"Brother,oursandcastleisgoingtobegone!"AlthoughTomwasalsoveryanxious,hetriedtostaycalmandcomfortedhisbrother,"Don'tworry.Let'sthinkofaway."Thetwobrotherstriedtoblocktheseawaterwiththeirhands,butitwasallinvain.Theseawaterstillkeptrising.Soon,acornerofthesandcastlewaswashedawaybythewaves,andthesandwascarriedawaybytheseawater.Watchingtheirbelovedsandcastlebeingdestroyedbitbybit,thetwobrothersfeltextremelyheavy-hearted.Buttheydidn'tgiveupandwerestillanxiouslylookingforawaytosavethesandcastlebythesea.Theylookedaround,hopingtofindsomethingtoblocktheseawater.However,therewasnothingaroundexceptsandandseashells.13范文呈現(xiàn)Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Tompattedhisbrotherontheshoulderandencouragedhim,"Brother,thistimewewilldefinitelybuilditbetter!"So,thetwobrotherspickeduptheirshovelsandbucketsagainandthrewthemselvesintothereconstructionwork.Thistime,theylearnedfromtheirpreviousexperienceandchoseaplacefartherawayfromtheseawater.Theydugthesandevenharder,andtheirhandswereconstantlybusy.Tomcarefullyplannedthestructureofthesandcastletoensureitwasmoresolid.Jackwasresponsibleforcollectingmorebeautifulseashellsandtwigstodecoratethesandcastle.Theyworkedtogetherinperfectharmony.Afteralotofeffort,abrand-newsandcastlegraduallytookshape.Thissandcastlewasmoremagnificentthanthepreviousone,withhighertowersandthickerwalls.Thetwobrothersalsodugadeepmoataroundthesandcastletoblocktheseawater.Whentheyfinishedeverything,thesunwasgraduallysetting,andthegoldenafterglowsprinkledonthebeach,castingabeautifulcoatontheirsandcastle.Lookingattherebuiltsandcastle,thetwobrotherssmiledateachother,andtheirfaceswerefilledwiththejoyofvictory.Thisexperiencetaughtthemthataslongastheydidn'tgiveupandwerebraveenoughtotry,theycoulddefinitelyachievetheirdreams.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Initially,onlyminusculewaveslappedgentlyagainsttheshore.Butinnotime,thewavesgrewinsizeandferocity.Thefrigidseawaterspreadwithalarmingspeed,steadilyadvancingtowardstheirpainstakinglyconstructedsandcastle.TomandJack'seyesdilatedinsheerhorrorastheywitnessedtheunfoldingdisaster.Helplessly,theywatchedasthewavesmercilesslybatteredthewallsofthesandcastle,causingtheonce-sturdytowerstoteeterprecariouslyundertheonslaught.Jack'seyeswelledupwithtearsinstantly,andhechokedout,"Brother,oursandcastleisdoomed!"Despitehisownmountinganxiety,Tommusteredthestrengthtostaycomposedandsoothedhisbrother,"Don'tfret.We'llfiguresomethingout."Thetwobrothersmadedesperateattemptstohalttheseawaterwiththeirbarehands,yetalltheireffortswereinvain.Theseawatercontinueditsrelentlessadvance.Beforelong,acornerofthesandcastlesuccumbedtothewaves,andthesandwascarriedawaybythechurningwater.Watchingtheircherishedsandcastlebeingdemolishedbitbybit,thebrothers'heartssankwithaprofoundsenseofdespair.Nevertheless,theyrefusedtoyieldandscouredthebeachinafranticsearchforameanstosavetheircreation.Theyscannedthesurroundings,hopingagainsthopetofindsomethingtostemthetide,butalltheysawweregrainsofsandandscatteredseashells.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Tomgavehisbrotherareassuringpatontheshoulderandsaidencouragingly,"Brother,thistimewe'llbuildanevenmoreamazingsandcastle!"Thus,thetwobrothersonceagaingraspedtheirshovelsandbucketsandplungedintothereconstructioneffort.Thistime,theydrewontheirpreviousexperienceandselectedalocationfurtherfromtheencroachingseawater.Theydugintothesandwithrenewedvigor,theirhandsmovinginaflurryofactivity.Tommeticulouslyplannedthestructureofthenewsandcastletoensureitsenhancedstability.Jack,ontheotherhand,tookchargeofgatheringanarrayofbeautifulseashellsandtwigsfordecoration.Theyworkedins