高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：夏夜偶遇流浪狗終獲收養(yǎng)的故事+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)夏夜偶遇流浪狗，終獲收養(yǎng)的故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文JosieandIwantedadogmorethananythingelse.Wheneverwehadtime,we’dsittogetherandtalkaboutdogs.“You’resosilly,Jake,”Josiewouldsay.“Bulldogs(斗牛犬)arescary.”“Hah.Goldenretrievers(金毛獵犬)arescary,”I’dsay.Wehadthisongoingargumentaboutwhatouridealdogwouldbe.Butitmadenodifference—anydogwoulddo,aslongasithadatailtowagandafriendlyface.Onesummernight,aswesattogetherbesidethewindow,Josiesawsomething.“What’sthat?”shesaid,pointingtoadarkshadowonourdriveway.Themoonwasupandeverythinglookedeitherblackormilky.AtfirstallIsawwasdarkness.ThentheshadowmovedandIheardthesoundofmetal.Thentheshadowflowedoutontothesilverydriveway.Withalittlefright,wefoundourselvessteppingdowntothefrontdoor.Thereinouryardstoodadog—abig,blackdogwithlong,shaggy(蓬松的)hair.4續(xù)寫原文Josiemadealittlekissingnoiseandheldoutherhand.“Here,boy!”Isaid.Andthedogcametousslowly,takingafewstepsforward,andthenastepback,notsurewhethertotrustus.Whencloseenough,ithadadoggysmellthatalwaysmademethinkofdirtandgrassandpilesofleaves.“Don’tsay‘Here,boy’,”saidJosie.“She’safemale.”Pullingbackandlooking,Isaid,“Iwonderwhathernameis.”Ifeltforhercollarwhileshesatpatiently.Ifoundnotags,butjustachainwithasmalloldbellonit.“Ibetshe’shungry,”saidJosie.“Icanfeelherribs.”Iranmyhandthroughherfur.Thedogwassoskinnythatyoucouldfeeleverybone,andhercoatwastwistedandfullofdirt.Ifshebelongedtosomeone,theyweren’ttakinggoodcareofher.5段首句Paragraph1:“Whatcanwegiveher?”Josieaskedme.Paragraph2:Thedogdidsomethingcompletelyunexpected.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了喬西和“我”對(duì)狗極度渴望，常討論理想之犬。一個(gè)夏夜，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)院子里有只大黑狗，它瘦骨嶙峋且毛發(fā)臟亂，似乎未被善待。兩人先喂它食物，它狼吞虎咽，表現(xiàn)出極度饑餓。接著，狗做出意外舉動(dòng)，想進(jìn)屋，恰逢父母歸來(lái)，他們向父母講述狗狗的可憐遭遇，最終父母心軟同意收養(yǎng)，喬西和“我”得償所愿，狗狗也將開啟新生活。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Whatcanwegiveher?”Josieaskedme.聽到喬西的話，“我”立刻說(shuō)：“我記得廚房有面包，還有火腿，狗狗肯定愛吃?！闭f(shuō)完便快步?jīng)_進(jìn)廚房，翻找出食物，又拿了個(gè)小碗倒了些牛奶?；氐皆鹤?，喬西仍溫柔地安撫著狗狗?！拔摇卑咽澄锖团Ｄ谭旁诠饭访媲埃幌伦訙惲松先?，大口吃著，邊吃邊發(fā)出嗚嗚聲，仿佛在訴說(shuō)著饑餓?？粗缘孟闾穑瑔涛骱汀拔摇毕嘁曇恍?，心中滿是對(duì)它的憐惜。我們輕聲討論著給它取個(gè)名字，還想象著它以后在院子里玩耍的樣子。不一會(huì)兒，狗狗吃完，滿足地舔了舔嘴巴，趴在地上，眼神溫順地看著我們。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Thedogdidsomethingcompletelyunexpected.正當(dāng)我們沉浸在與狗狗相處的溫馨時(shí)刻，狗狗突然起身，緩緩走向屋子。它來(lái)到門前，先是用鼻子嗅了嗅，接著用爪子輕輕扒門，還發(fā)出低低的叫聲，似乎在請(qǐng)求進(jìn)屋。喬西和“我”都愣住了，沒(méi)想到它會(huì)有這樣的舉動(dòng)。就在這時(shí)，父母下班回來(lái)，看到狗狗，一臉驚訝。我們趕忙向父母解釋狗狗的來(lái)歷，說(shuō)它多么可憐，希望能收留它。父母聽后，蹲下身摸了摸狗狗，狗狗乖巧地蹭著父母的手。最終，父母被狗狗的乖巧和我們的請(qǐng)求打動(dòng)，點(diǎn)頭同意收養(yǎng)。喬西和“我”高興得歡呼起來(lái)，狗狗也歡快地?fù)u著尾巴。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)HearingJosie'squestion,Irepliedimmediately,"Irememberthereisbreadandhaminthekitchen.Thedogmustlovethem."ThenIrushedintothekitchenquickly.Ifoundthefoodandpouredsomemilkintoasmallbowl.WhenIgotbacktotheyard,Josiewasstillsoothingthedoggently.Iputthefoodandmilkinfrontofthedog.Itrushedforwardatonce,eatinggreedilyandmakingwhiningsounds,asiftellingushowhungryitwas.Watchingiteatdelightfully,JosieandIsmiledateachother,filledwithpityforit.Wetalkedsoftlyaboutgivingitanameandimaginingitplayingintheyardinthefuture.Soon,thedogfinishedeating,lickeditsmouthcontentedly,andlaydown,lookingatusgently.13范文呈現(xiàn)Whilewewereenjoyingthewarmmomentwiththedog,itsuddenlystoodupandwalkedslowlytowardsthehouse.Whenitreachedthedoor,itfirstsniffedwithitsnose,thengentlyscratchedthedoorwithitspawsandbarkedsoftly,asifaskingtoenter.JosieandIwerestunned.Wedidn'texpectittodothis.Justthen,ourparentscamebackfromwork.Theyweresurprisedtoseethedog.Wequicklyexplainedtoourparentshowwefoundthedogandhowpitifulitwas,hopingtokeepit.Afterhearingus,ourparentssquatteddownandstrokedthedog.Thedogrubbedagainsttheirhandsobediently.Finally,ourparentsweremovedbythedog'scutenessandourrequestandagreedtoadoptit.JosieandIcheeredwithjoy,andthedogwaggeditstailhappily.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Whatcanwegiveher?”Josieaskedme.HearingJosie'squery,Ipromptlyresponded,"Irecalltherebeingbreadandhaminthekitchen,whichthedogwillsurelyrelish."Withthat,Idashedintothekitchen,whereIrummagedthroughthecupboardstolocatethefoodandpoursomemilkintoasmallbowl.Returningtotheyard,IfoundJosietenderlycalmingthedog.Placingthefoodandmilkbeforethedog,itinstantlylungedforward,devouringthefoodgreedily,accompaniedbywhiningsoundsthatseemedtoconveyitsintensehunger.Watchingiteatwithsuchgusto,JosieandIexchangedsmiles,ourheartsbrimmingwithpityforthecreature.Wesoftlydiscussednamingitandenvisionedthejoyitwouldbringasitfrolickedintheyardinthedaystocome.Beforelong,thedogfinisheditsmeal,contentedlylickeditsmouth,andlaydown,itseyesfixedonuswithgentleaffection.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thedogdidsomethingcompletelyunexpected.Amidourenjoymentofthewarmmomentwiththedog,itabruptlyrosetoitsfeetandambledslowlytowardsthehouse.Uponreachingthedoor,itfirstsniffeditwithitssensitivenose,thengentlyscratchedthedoorwithitspaws,emittingsoftbarksasifpleadingtobeletin.JosieandIwereleftdumbfounded;thiswasthelastthingweexpected.Justatthatmoment,ourparentsreturnedfromwork.Surprisedtoseethedog,theylookedatusque