讀后續(xù)寫+解救被困保險箱男孩+講義- 高二下學(xué)期起點考試英語試卷

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IworkedatalocalstationoftheBerlinfiredepartment.Wegotanalert(警報)around8:25pmthatFridayandrushedtothefireengine,wheretheprintoutfromthedispatcher(調(diào)度員)saidtherewasanine-year-oldboylockedinasafe(保險箱).Iaskedmyself:ifitwereasafe,woulditbeairtight?Iwasawarethatitmightalreadybetoolatebythetimewearrived.Ihadtoplanforabadoutcome.Ontheotherhand,ifwewereintime,howlongwouldittakeustoopenthesafe?Iknewitwouldbeanincrediblydifficulttask.It’swhatsafesaredesignedfor—nottobeopened.Ittooklessthanfiveminutestoreachtheproperty.WhenIsawawomancryingonthestreet,Iknewthesituationwasserious.Shewastheboy’smotherandsheledusintothebasement.Shetoldustheboywasaliveandwestartedtalkingtohim;hewasverycalm.Weaskedhowithadhappened:duringagameofhideandseekwithhisfive-year-oldbrother,hehadthoughtthesafewouldbeagoodplacetohide.Theboy’sparentshadgotthehousefromhismother’sfather.Theunlockedsafehadbeentherewhentheymovedinandwasinanareatheydidn’tusemuch.Theboy’slittlebrotherhadshutthesafe,then,whenhecouldn’topenitagain.Theonlypersonwhoknewthecombinationwastheboy’slategrandfather.Fromtheoutset,thebiggestprioritywasgettingoxygentotheboy.Wegotoxygenfromthehospital.Theboysaidthathecouldfeelathinstreamofair.Iaskedhisparentsifanyonehadopenedthesafebeforeandtheysaidno.Sowehadtoguessasix-digitcode(密碼).Westartedtypingthemin—butwehadtowait10minutesbetweeneachattemptbeforewecouldtryagain.Soquicklywetriedthemall.Noluck.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卷的相應(yīng)位置作答。Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.解救被困保險箱男孩的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：在嘗試密碼失敗后，消防員們決定強(qiáng)行打開保險箱。詳細(xì)描述他們準(zhǔn)備強(qiáng)行開啟的過程，如檢查并調(diào)試鉆孔工具，確保工具能正常運作；與男孩再次溝通，安撫他即將聽到巨大噪音，讓他做好心理準(zhǔn)備。同時，描繪周圍環(huán)境，母親焦急踱步，雙手緊握，眼神中滿是擔(dān)憂；弟弟在一旁自責(zé)哭泣，不斷喃喃自語。消防員們神情專注而堅定，汗水從額頭滑落，但目光始終緊盯著保險箱，為強(qiáng)行打開保險箱做最后準(zhǔn)備。第二段：當(dāng)同事輸入正確密碼打開保險箱時，著重刻畫眾人的反應(yīng)。男孩先是驚訝地瞪大雙眼，隨后露出驚喜的笑容，如釋重負(fù)地松了一口氣。母親瞬間沖過去，緊緊抱住男孩，泣不成聲，嘴里不停地說著“感謝上帝”。弟弟也跑過來，拉著哥哥的手，滿臉愧疚地道歉。消防員們則欣慰地笑了，互相擊掌慶祝，之前的緊張與疲憊一掃而空。之后，大家圍在男孩身邊，關(guān)心他的身體狀況，男孩雖有些疲憊，但狀態(tài)良好，對消防員們連連道謝，整個氛圍從緊張轉(zhuǎn)為溫馨與喜悅。情感線（150字）起初，消防員們得知男孩被困保險箱，內(nèi)心充滿擔(dān)憂與緊張，深知救援難度極大。嘗試密碼失敗，準(zhǔn)備強(qiáng)行開啟時，他們的焦慮感達(dá)到頂峰，同時又堅定決心一定要救出男孩。而男孩母親從最初的驚慌失措，到看著消防員行動時的滿心期待與忐忑不安。當(dāng)保險箱被打開，男孩安然無恙，眾人的情感瞬間轉(zhuǎn)為喜悅與欣慰。消防員們?yōu)榫仍晒Ω械阶院?，母親和弟弟的愧疚與擔(dān)憂化作喜悅和對消防員的感激，情感從壓抑緊張逐漸過渡到輕松愉悅，充滿溫情。故事線（6條）救援準(zhǔn)備：消防員到達(dá)現(xiàn)場，了解情況后，迅速準(zhǔn)備救援，包括獲取氧氣、嘗試密碼開啟保險箱。嘗試密碼失?。憾啻螄L試密碼均未成功，大家陷入焦急，氣氛愈發(fā)緊張。決定強(qiáng)行開啟：因密碼嘗試無果，消防員決定采取強(qiáng)行打開保險箱的方案，開始準(zhǔn)備鉆孔工具。輸入正確密碼：就在準(zhǔn)備鉆孔時，同事根據(jù)母親提供的重要日期，嘗試輸入密碼，成功打開保險箱。解救男孩：保險箱打開，男孩被成功救出，母親和弟弟激動不已，與男孩相擁。后續(xù)關(guān)懷：眾人關(guān)心男孩身體狀況，男孩對消防員表達(dá)誠摯感謝，消防員們帶著成就感離開，社區(qū)也因這次救援更加團(tuán)結(jié)。主旨升華句Thisrescuenotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringdeterminationofthefirefightersbutalsohighlightsthepowerofhopeandthevalueofeverylifeinthefaceofdanger.（這次救援不僅展現(xiàn)了消防員堅定不移的決心，也凸顯了在危險面前希望的力量以及每一個生命的價值。）Intimesofcrisis,thecombinedeffortsofthecommunityandtheselflessdedicationoftherescuerscanovercomeseeminglyinsurmountableobstacles,justlikeinthiscaseofsavingtheboy.（在危機(jī)時刻，社區(qū)的共同努力和救援人員的無私奉獻(xiàn)能夠克服看似不可逾越的障礙，就如同這次解救男孩的事件一樣。）Thesuccessfulrescueoftheboyfromthesafeservesasareminderthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,aglimmerofhopecanleadtoamiraculousoutcome.（從保險箱中成功解救男孩這件事提醒我們，即使在最絕望的情況下，一絲希望也能帶來奇跡般的結(jié)果。）Thisincidentdemonstratesthatwheneveryonecomestogether,whetherit'stherescuers'expertiseorthefamily'ssupport,theycanturnapotentiallytragicsituationintoaheartwarmingstoryofsurvivalandgratitude.（這一事件表明，當(dāng)所有人齊心協(xié)力，無論是救援人員的專業(yè)技能還是家人的支持，都能將一場潛在的悲劇轉(zhuǎn)化為一個關(guān)于生存與感恩的溫馨故事。）Therescueoftheboyreflectsthespiritofhumanityandtheimportanceofnevergivingup,asthefirefightersandthefamilypersevereduntiltheboywassafelyfreed.（對男孩的救援體現(xiàn)了人性的光輝以及永不放棄的重要性，因為消防員和男孩的家人堅持不懈，直到男孩被安全救出。）寫作示范一Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Thechiefcarefullyinspectedthedrill,makingsureitwasinperfectworkingorder.Iwalkedovertothesafe,croucheddown,andgentlytoldtheboy,“Son,we'regoingtouseadrillnow.It'sgoingtobeverynoisy,butwe'llhaveyououtsoon.Coveryourearstight.”Theboy'smotherstoodnearby,herhandswringingnervously.Thelittlebrotherwascryingsoftlyinthecorner,filledwithguilt.Weputonoursafetygogglesandstartedthedrill.Theharshsoundechoedthroughthebasement,makingeveryone'sheartrace.Butweweredetermined,oureyesfixedonthesafe,readytobreakthroughthebarrierthatseparatedtheboyfromsafety.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafeletoutaloudclick,andthedoorslowlyswungopen.Theboy,hiseyeswidewithsurprise,emergedfromthesafe.Hismotherrushedforwardandhuggedhimtightly,sobbingwithrelief.“Thankyou,thankyousomuch,”shecried,lookingatuswithgratitude.Thelittlebrotherranover,grabbinghisbrother'shand.Weallsmiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishmentwashoverus.Wecheckedtheboy'scondition,andalthoughhewasabitshaken,hewasfine.Asweleftthehouse,theboyturnedtousandsaid,“You'remyheroes.”Hiswordsmadeourday,andweknewthatalloureffortswerewellworthit.寫作示范二Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Oneofthefirefighterscarefullyadjustedthedrill'ssettings,whileanotherdouble-checkedtheoxygensupplytoensuretheboyhadenoughair.Ikneltdownnexttothesafeandsaid,“Hey,kiddo.We'regoingtostartthisdrill.It'sgoingtobeabitscary,butwe'rerightherewithyou.”Themotherpacedbackandforth,herfacepalewithworry.Wecouldseethefearinhereyes.Theroomwasfilledwithtensionaswepositionedthedrillagainstthesafe.Thenoiseofthedrillpiercedtheair,anddustfilledthespace.Despitethedifficulty,wewereresoluteinourmissiontosavetheboy.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafe'slockdisengagedwithasharpsound.Thedooropened,andtheboysteppedout,blinkinginthebrightlight.Hismotherletoutacryofjoyandrushedtoembracehim.Theyoungerbrother,whohadbeenblaminghimself,joinedthehug,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Weallletoutasighofrelief.Wepattedeachotherontheback,happythatourlong-awaitedrescuehadfinallybeensuccessful.Theboylookedatusandsaid,“Iknewyou'dgetmeout.”Hiswordswarmedourhearts,andweleftthescenewithasenseofpride,knowingthatwehadmadeadifferenceinthisfamily'slife.參考答案Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,

startingwithadrill.Theoverwhelmingtensionintheairofthebasementweighedheavilyonourhearts.Additionally,theboy’sweakbreathfromthesafebroughtour

hearts

intoourmouths,whichurgedustoactquickly.“Staybackandyou’llbealright.”

Isoothedthehelplessboyinacalmingvoice.

Sweatsstreamingdownmycheeks,Iexaminedthesafecarefully,pointedthedrilltoitsfrontdoorandturnedonthedrill.Asthedrillwasroaring,

Icouldevensensetheparents’

anxiouseyesfallonthedrill.Iknew,fromthebottomofmyheart,wewereallracingagainsttime.Meanwhile,myworkmate,

focusedanddetermined,wasmakingeveryattemptt