Unit1EveryDayWritingWorkshopAnInformalEmail(II)課件北師大版（2024）七年級英語下冊

Unit1EveryDayWritingWorkshopAnInformalEmail(II)義務(wù)教育教科書英語七年級下冊writeanemailtointroduceyourweekend；learnhowtoeditandreviseyouremail.FreeTalk:Whatmakesagoodemailwriting?StructureContentLanguageHandwritingWhatwritingtipsdoyougetfromPaul’semail?Writingtip1:Giveageneralgreetingatthebeginningoftheemail.Writingtip2:Introducetheweekendactivitiesinatimeorder.Writingtip3:Askadirectquestion,orexpresswishesandhopesattheendoftheemail.Writingtip4:Usealways,usually,often,sometimes,seldomornevertointroduceweekendactivities.UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.DraftingSelf-editingSheetIntheemail,I:Yes/No(√/×)If“No”,howtomakeitbetter?giveageneralgreetingatthebeginningoftheemail;

introducetheweekendactivitiesinatimeorder;

askadirectquestion,orexpresswishesandhopesattheendoftheemail;

usealways,usually,often,sometimes,seldomornevertointroduceweekendactivities.

Self-editingEdityourfirstdraftaccordingtothe

sheet.PeereditingLet’sshareyourworkandevaluateittogetheraccordingtothePeerEditingSheet.PeerEditingSheetIntheemail,doesthewriter:Scoregiveageneralgreetingatthebeginningoftheemail?askadirectquestion(Whataboutyou?Howdoyoufeelabouttheweekend)?expresswishesandhopes(I’mlookingforwardto…)?

Assessyourpartner’semail

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therequirements.(1)Circleanyspelling,punctuationorgrammarerrors.(2)Markanyunclearexpressions.Givesuggestionsifyoucan.(3)Underlinetheexpressionsyoulike.Finalediting–Let’sPolish!Reviseyourdraftaccordingtoyourpartner’sopinionandthesample,andthenshareitinclass.Let’sshare!Proofreadyourwritingandthenshareitinclass.HiPam,Howareyou?Yourweekendssoundfun!Here’smyweekends.OnSaturdays,Ialwaysdomyhomeworkinthemorning.Iusuallytidymyroomintheafternoon.Intheevening,Ioftenstayathomeandreadbooks.OnSundays,Ioftengorunningwithmydadinthemorning.Then,wevisitmygrandpaandgrandmaandhavelunchwiththem.Isometimesplayfootballwithmyfriendsintheafternoon.Intheevening,Ioftenwatch