讀后續(xù)寫Ruby和Max的滑冰故事講義-湖北省武漢市八月高二開學(xué)考高二上學(xué)期開學(xué)英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完成的短文。Rubywassoproudofhernewskates!Sheputthemonrightawayandwassoonrushingalongthesidewalk.HerlittlebrotherMaxcouldonlywatchinenvy.“IwishIhadapair!”hetoldhismum.“Well,you’renearlybigenoughtowearRuby’soldskates,”shereplied.ButwhenMaxtriedonRuby’soldskatestheyweretoobig.Hestuffednewspaperintotheboots.Muchtohisdisappointment,hefellovereachtimehetriedtostandupinthem.Finally,hegaveup,onlywatchingRubyskatingaroundhim.“Ishouldputonaskatingdisplay!”Rubydecided.“Allouraunts,unclesandcousinswille.You’llwatchme,Max?”Maxsighed.Hedidn’twanttowatchtheshow.Hewantedtobeinit!“PoorMax!”saidhismum.Then,shetookoutapairofthickredsockstoletMaxpullthemonwiththehopeoffittingbetter.Maxeyedtheredsocksskeptically,saying,“Mum,theselookjustlikemyredsoccersocks,butsmaller.”Hismumsmiled,“Ah,yourredsoccersocksaretoothinandmeantforrunning,butthesearemagicsocksthathavethepowertoexpandandstretchtofitmostfeet...”Magic?WhenMumlefttheroom,Maxtookthewand(魔杖)fromhismagicsetandwaveditaroundafewtimes,“Magicsocks,youaresogreat!Useyourmagictohelpmeskate”Maxslippedthesocksonandtriedskatinginhisbedroom.Hedidn’tfullover!Hetriedagain.Hestilldidn’tfall.Hecouldnowskate—thankstohismagicsocks!Hooray!Thenextmorning,whenheskateduptoRubyononefoot,shestaredinamazement.“Max,youaremagic!”Thrilled,Rubyinvitedhimtojoinintheshow.Topreparewellfortheshow,Maxpracticedhappilywiththemagicsocksoneveryday.Maxeventriedtrickslikejumps,believingthesockswouldhelphim.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ruby和Max的滑冰故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：重點(diǎn)描繪表演時的場景。詳細(xì)描述Max和Ruby在花園中面對家人展示滑冰技巧的過程，包括他們的動作細(xì)節(jié)，如Max的跳躍、Ruby的旋轉(zhuǎn)等，以及家人的反應(yīng)，如歡呼、鼓掌等，突出表演的精彩與歡樂氛圍。第二段：主要圍繞“魔法襪子”的秘密展開。母親指出Max沒穿“魔法襪子”，引發(fā)眾人關(guān)注。Max此時意識到自己不再依賴襪子，而是通過不斷練習(xí)獲得了真正的滑冰能力。最后闡述Max在這次經(jīng)歷中的成長感悟，以及對未來的積極展望。情感線起初，Max因不能滑冰而沮喪，穿上“魔法襪子”能滑冰后興奮不已。表演時，Max滿懷自信，盡情享受展示技能的喜悅。母親指出沒穿“魔法襪子”時，Max先是驚訝，隨后為自己的成長感到自豪。最終，Max從依賴“魔法”到相信努力的力量，實(shí)現(xiàn)了心態(tài)的重大轉(zhuǎn)變，內(nèi)心充滿對未來的堅定與期待。故事線Max因Ruby的新滑冰鞋而羨慕，嘗試穿舊鞋失敗。母親拿出“魔法襪子”，Max借助它學(xué)會滑冰，并受邀參加表演。表演當(dāng)天，Max和Ruby在花園中為家人展示滑冰技巧，動作精彩，家人反應(yīng)熱烈。母親發(fā)現(xiàn)Max沒穿“魔法襪子”，引發(fā)眾人注意。Max意識到自己已不再依賴“魔法襪子”，通過練習(xí)獲得了真正的滑冰能力。Max從這次經(jīng)歷中成長，對未來充滿信心，決定繼續(xù)挑戰(zhàn)新的滑冰目標(biāo)。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtMaxthathardworkandpractice,notmagic,arethekeystoachievingone'sgoals.（這次經(jīng)歷讓Max明白，努力和練習(xí)，而非魔法，才是實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的關(guān)鍵。）Fromthatdayon,Maxunderstoodthattherealmagicliesinone'sowndeterminationandtheeffortsputintomakingprogress.（從那天起，Max懂得了真正的魔法在于個人的決心以及為取得進(jìn)步所付出的努力。）Max'sjourneyfromrelyingon"magicsocks"tomasteringskatingthroughpracticeshowsthatwithperseverance,wecanovereanyinitialdifficulties.（Max從依賴“魔法襪子”到通過練習(xí)掌握滑冰的歷程表明，只要有毅力，我們就能克服任何最初的困難。）TheshownotonlyshowcasedMaxandRuby'sskatingskillsbutalsorevealedthepowerofselfimprovementandthediscoveryofone'struepotential.（這場表演不僅展示了Max和Ruby的滑冰技巧，還揭示了自我提升的力量以及發(fā)現(xiàn)個人真正潛力的重要性。）Maxrealizedthathisgrowthwasnotaresultofamagicalitembuthisownconsistentefforts,inspiringhimtofacefuturechallengeswithcourageanddetermination.（Max意識到他的成長并非源于某件神奇物品，而是自己持續(xù)的努力，這激勵著他以勇氣和決心面對未來的挑戰(zhàn)。）寫作示范示范一Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Max,hisfacebeamingwithexcitement,glidedontothemakeshiftrinkgracefully.Ruby,rightbesidehim,addedatouchofelegancewithhersmoothmovements.Maxstartedwithasimpleforwardglide,thenbuiltuphisconfidenceandattemptedasmalljump.Thefamilygaspedindelightashelandedsafely.Rubyfollowedwithaseriesoftwirls,herhairflowingbehindher.Theirsynchronizedmoveswereasighttobehold,andthefamilycheeredandclappedloudly.“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum.Maxlookeddownathisfeetinsurprise.Hethensmiledbroadly,realizingthathenolongerneededthesocalledmagicsocks.“IpracticedsomuchthatIcanskatewellnow!”heexclaimed.Everyonelaughedandnoddedinapproval.Fromthatdayon,Maxknewthathishardworkhadpaidoff,andhewaseagertotakeonmoreskatingchallengesinthefuture.示范二Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Maxskatedoutfirst,hiseyesshiningwithdetermination.Heexecutedaflawlessspin,hisbodymovinginharmonywiththerhythmhehadcreatedinhismind.Rubyjoinedhim,andtogethertheycreatedabeautifulpatternonthegrass.Maxthentookadeepbreathandmadeadaringjump,soaringthroughtheairforabriefmomentbeforelandingsteadily.Thefamilyeruptedintoapplause.Rubydidaquickslideandabackwardglide,impressingeveryonewithherskills.“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum.Maxwasstartledatfirstbutthenbrokeintoahugegrin.“IguessIdon'tneedthemanymore.Allthepracticemademeabetterskater!”hesaid.Thefamilywasproudofhisgrowth.Maxlearnedthattrueabilityesfromdedication,andhewasexcitedtoseehowfarhecouldgoinskatingfromthenon.參考答案Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Maxwasnervous,afraidthathewouldfalloveragain.However,everythingwentperfectly!Theaudienceheldtheirbreathasthetwosiblingsdidtheirspecialskatingtricks,turnsandju