讀后續(xù)寫火災(zāi)故事續(xù)寫講義廣西欽州市示范性高中高一下學(xué)期第三階段考試英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的短文。ThomasandChristineNoctorhavelivedandraisedtheirfamilyinthehomeforthreedecades.Theyandtheir12yearoldgrandsonDean,wholiveswiththem,hadmostoftheirpersonalbelongingsdamagedordestroyedafterafirebrokeoutinThomas’homeofficeonSaturdayevening.AllyNoctorwasinthehomewithhermother,father,nephewDean,andbrotherJameswhentheincidenthappened.“MymomhasCOPD（慢性阻寒性肺?。﹕oIsaid‘justgetouttheback’,andshetookthedogouttheback,”Allyrecalled.“Mybrothercamerunningdownlookingforafireextinguisher（滅火器）,andmydadwasscreaming,‘Fire!’”ThefirestartedintheboxroomIt’sThomashomeoffice.He’djustdoneitup.Itwasclearlyanelectricalfaultbutnoonethoughtatthetimetoturnofftheelectricity.Theroomstartedfillingwithsmokequicklyandtheyhadtoleaveimmediately.Thehouseislocatedjustashortwalkawayfromthefirestation.Butwhenneighborscalled,theavailabletruckswerealreadyout—sonearly20minuteshadpassedbeforethefirecrewarrived.Thankfully,theymanagedtopreventthefirefromspreadingtotheattic（閣樓）ortoanymorehomesinthemunity.Thefamilythenwentbackinsidethehousetoinvestigatewhathadhappenedandsurveythedamagecaused.Dean’sgamingPCwasmelted,toysweremelted,andeventheshowerwasmelted.Alltheirclothescouldn’tbetakenout.“Thedownstairsisokay,butthereissmokedamageandwaterdamage.Andalloftheupstairsispletelydamaged.Mymomisstillinshock.She’sjuststaringintospace,”Allysaid.ButAllywasquicktopraisehermunity,whowererighttheretohelptheNoctorsgetoutofthehousethemomenttheysensedtroubleandeveryoneofthefamilygottimelyhelp.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置上作答。Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________火災(zāi)故事續(xù)寫一、續(xù)寫分析?第一段續(xù)寫分析：此段圍繞Ally逃生后的遭遇展開。故事線從火災(zāi)發(fā)生時(shí)Ally赤腳跑出家門，到鄰居們對(duì)她及家人的及時(shí)救助。高頻單詞有escape（逃跑）、chaos（混亂）、distress（痛苦）、neighbor（鄰居）、support（支持）。短語包括ranout（跑出）、inthechaos（在混亂中）、watching...billowing（看著……滾滾而來）、brought...over（拿來）、provide...for（為……提供）。主旨升華句如：“Intimesofcrisis,thekindnessofneighborscanturnatragedyintoamomentofhope.”（在危機(jī)時(shí)刻，鄰居的善意能將悲劇轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M希望的時(shí)刻。）“Theimmediateresponseofthemunityshowedthathumanityshinesbrightestinthefaceofadversity.”（社區(qū)的迅速反應(yīng)表明，人性在逆境中最為閃耀。）?第二段續(xù)寫分析：該段聚焦于火災(zāi)后家庭在新年期間的狀況以及社區(qū)的關(guān)愛。故事線從家庭難以適應(yīng)臨時(shí)住所、新年臨近的悲傷，到社區(qū)組織特別聚會(huì)帶來溫暖。高頻單詞有temporary（臨時(shí)的）、adjust（適應(yīng)）、celebration（慶祝）、kindness（善良）、munity（社區(qū)）。短語有tryingtoadjustto（努力適應(yīng)）、theapproachingNewYear（即將到來的新年）、loomwith（籠罩著）、organizinga...gathering（組織一場(chǎng)……聚會(huì)）、bringback（帶回）。主旨升華句比如：“Eveninthedarkestoftimes,thepowerofmunitycanlightupthepathtorecovery.”（即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，社區(qū)的力量也能照亮恢復(fù)之路。）“Themunity'seffortsduringtheNewYearnotonlybroughtjoybutalsoreaffirmedthestrengthofhumanconnection.”（社區(qū)在新年期間的努力不僅帶來了歡樂，還再次證實(shí)了人與人之間聯(lián)系的力量。）二、故事線?第一段故事線：火災(zāi)突發(fā)，Ally赤腳逃出家門，震驚地看著自家房子起火。鄰居們發(fā)現(xiàn)她的困境，紛紛伸出援手，送拖鞋、毛毯，提供臨時(shí)住所，慈善機(jī)構(gòu)也送來生活必需品，家人感受到社區(qū)支持帶來的希望。?第二段故事線：家庭搬到臨時(shí)住所，新年將至，因無法在自家慶祝而難過。社區(qū)得知后，組織特別的新年聚會(huì)，裝飾臨時(shí)住所、準(zhǔn)備大餐，讓Noctors一家深受感動(dòng)，意識(shí)到社區(qū)的愛和支持是他們面對(duì)未來的堅(jiān)實(shí)力量。?三、高頻單詞?第一段高頻單詞：escape（逃跑）、chaos（混亂）、distress（痛苦）、neighbor（鄰居）、slipper（拖鞋）、blanket（毛毯）、charity（慈善機(jī)構(gòu)）、necessity（必需品）?第二段高頻單詞：temporary（臨時(shí)的）、adjust（適應(yīng)）、celebration（慶祝）、sadness（悲傷）、munity（社區(qū)）、organize（組織）、decorate（裝飾）、meal（餐食）?四、短語?第一段短語：ranout（跑出）、inthechaos（在混亂中）、watching...billowing（看著……滾滾而來）、brought...over（拿來）、provide...for（為……提供）、offertodo（主動(dòng)提出做）、sendover（送來）、aglimmerofhope（一線希望）?第二段短語：tryingtoadjustto（努力適應(yīng)）、theapproachingNewYear（即將到來的新年）、loomwith（籠罩著）、organizinga...gathering（組織一場(chǎng)……聚會(huì)）、decorate...with（用……裝飾）、preparea...meal（準(zhǔn)備一頓……餐食）、bringback（帶回）、bedeeplytouchedby（被……深深感動(dòng)）?五、主旨升華句?第一段主旨升華句：“Intimesofcrisis,thekindnessofneighborscanturnatragedyintoamomentofhope.”（在危機(jī)時(shí)刻，鄰居的善意能將悲劇轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M希望的時(shí)刻。）“Theimmediateresponseofthemunityshowedthathumanityshinesbrightestinthefaceofadversity.”（社區(qū)的迅速反應(yīng)表明，人性在逆境中最為閃耀。）“Thesupportfromneighborsandcharitiesdemonstratedthepowerofunityinoveringdifficulties.”（鄰居和慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的支持展示了團(tuán)結(jié)克服困難的力量。）第二段主旨升華句：“Eveninthedarkestoftimes,thepowerofmunitycanlightupthepathtorecovery.”（即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，社區(qū)的力量也能照亮恢復(fù)之路。）“Themunity'seffortsduringtheNewYearnotonlybroughtjoybutalsoreaffirmedthestrengthofhumanconnection.”（社區(qū)在新年期間的努力不僅帶來了歡樂，還再次證實(shí)了人與人之間聯(lián)系的力量。）“ThisspecialNewYear'sgatheringsymbolizedtheresilienceofthefamilyandtheunwaveringsupportoftheirmunity.”（這次特別的新年聚會(huì)象征著家庭的堅(jiān)韌和社區(qū)堅(jiān)定不移的支持。）六、寫作示范?示范一?Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Theintenseheatandthicksmokepropelledherforwardinablindpanic.Standingoutside,herheartracedasshewitnessedtheinfernoconsumingherhome.Neighborsrushedtoherside,theirfacesfilledwithconcern.Oneneighborquicklyfetchedapairofoldbutfortableslippers,whileanotherwrappedasoftblanketaroundhertremblingshoulders.Someneighborsimmediatelycalledlocalcharities,andwithinhours,boxesoffoodandessentialitemsarrived.Theirselflessactionswereabeaconoflightintheotherwisedarksituation,makingAllyandherfamilyfeelasenseofwarmthandsecuritydespitetheloss.?ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.Thefamilyhasbeenstrugglingtoetotermswiththeirnewlivingarrangement.AstheNewYearapproaches,theabsenceoftheirfamiliarhomeandtraditionsweighsheavilyontheirhearts.However,themunityhasonceagainsteppedin.NeighborsarebusyplanningasurpriseNewYear'sparty.Theyaregatheringdecorations,bakingdelicioustreats,andarrangingmusicalperformances.ThiscollectiveeffortisnotjustaboutcelebratingthenewbeginningbutalsoaboutmendingthebrokenspiritsoftheNoctors.Thefamily,touchedbythisoutpouringoflove,realizesthathomeisnotjustaphysicalplacebutthepeoplewhocareandsupportthem.?示范二?Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Thesuddennessofthefireleftherdisoriented,andshestumbledoutside,herfeetstingingonthecoldground.Thesightofherhomeengulfedinflameswasheartwrenching.Neighbors,alertedbythemotion,werequicktoact.Theybroughthershoesandofferedwordsoffort.Someopenedtheirhomes,invitingthefamilytotakeshelter.Localcharities,informedofthesituation,dispatchedvolunteerswithbagsoffoodandclothing.Themunity'simmediateandcoordinatedresponsewasoverwhelming,givingtheNoctorsthecouragetofacethedifficultdaysahead.?ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.Adjustingtothetemporaryhousehasbeenachallengeforthefamily.TheapproachingNewYear,usuallyatimeofgreatcelebration,nowseemsgloomy.Butthemunityhasaplantochangethat.TheyareorganizingaNewYear'seventatthelocalmunitycenter.Volunteersareworkinghardtodecoratethecenterwithfestivelightsandstreamers.TheyarealsocollectingdonationsforaspecialNewYear'sdinnerfortheNoctors.Thisgestureofkindnessisapowerfulreminderthatinthefaceofdisaster,themunity'sloveandsupportcanturnadifficultsituationaround.TheNoctorsarefilledwithgratitude,knowingthattheyarenotaloneinrebuildingtheirlives.?參考答案Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Anei