Unit2單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練-【寫(xiě)作課】八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)

Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecitypark.

Ifeelgreattohelp...

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Itgivesmeafeelingof...

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Ithinkhelpingotherscan..

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It'sameaningfulthingtopassonwarmthtomorepeople.?Inmyfreetime,Iliketo...soIthinkI'mupto(能勝任)thisjob/Icandothisjobwell.

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I'mgoodat/I'mstrongin/Idowellin/I'mableto/Inmyfreetime,Iliketo...soIthinkI'dbegoodatthisjob.?Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyouroldpeople'shome/school/museum/groupbecause...?Iamfreetohelpin/on...?

It'smeaningfulforusto...?ThebestthingIwanttodois...◆開(kāi)頭句②Oneofmymostunforgettableexperienceswasavolunteerservicelastsummervacation.③LastSaturday,myclassmatesandIwenttodosomevolunteerwork.Hereiswhatwedid.◆結(jié)尾句①Adaywaslimited,butthevolunteerworkwouldneverstop.②Ihopetohavemorechancestodovolunteerwork.③Ithinkthiskindofactivityismeaningful.【名言積累】①Givingisbetterthantaking.給予比索取更好。②Loveisthebeststageforvolunteers，anddedicationisthemostbeautifullanguageforvolunteers.愛(ài)心是志愿者最好的舞臺(tái)，奉獻(xiàn)是志愿者最美的語(yǔ)言。?

Helpothersandyouwillgetinreturn.

Theroseisinherhand,theflavorinmine。

贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手留余香。?It'sbettertogivethantotake．

給予比得到更好。

?Helpingotherisavirtue．助人為樂(lè)是一種美德。

?Ithinkhelpingotherscanbringhappinessnotonlytoothersbutalsotoourselves.笑Sometimessmallactionscanmakeabigdifferencetotheworld.

我認(rèn)為幫助他人不僅給他人帶來(lái)快樂(lè)，也給自己帶來(lái)快樂(lè)，有時(shí)小作為也可以改變世界（小作為，大世界）。?Servingotherscanbringushappiness.助人為樂(lè)。?Inaword,

ifeveryonegivesahelpinghand,theymayliveabetterlifeandtheworldwillbefulloflove.

總之，只要人人都獻(xiàn)出一點(diǎn)愛(ài)，世界將變成美好的人間。?Themoreyougive,themoreyouwillget.

andthemoreIdo,thehappierI

willbe.

付出越多，收獲越多，我做的越多，我就越快樂(lè)。連詞firstofall,aslongas,so...that...,Although,allinall，both...and...,bothof,however,that'swhy/oneofthemainreasons,too...to...,inaddition,inmyopinion,asforme,inmyeye,besides,lastbutnotleast,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand如何寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)做志愿者的自薦信MyExperienceofDoingVolunteerWork①Oneofmymostunforgettableexperiences（我最難忘的經(jīng)歷之一）wasavolunteerservicelastsummervacation.Ivisitedtheoldpeople'shomewithmyfriendsonaSaturdayafternoon.Wepreparedlotsoffoodfortheoldlikesnacksandfruits.Wecleanedtheirroomsandhelpedthemcook.Wealsotalkedtothemandsharedsomeinterestingstorieswiththem.②Howhappytheywere!③Ithinkthiskindofactivityismeaningful.④Wecannotonlybringwarmthtotheoldpeople,butalsolearntoloveandshareinthisway.Ihopetohavemorechancestodovolunteerwork.升格技巧技巧一：巧用oneof…句型升格①技巧二：巧用how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句升格②技巧三：巧用Ithink引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句升格③技巧四：巧用notonly…butalso…句型升格④以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”為話(huà)題例文：Hello,everyone!LaborDayHolidayising.IamgoingtodosomevolunteerworkonMay2nd.NowI'dliketosharetheworkplanwithyou.Tobeginwith,Iwillhelptocleanupthecityparks.Iwillpickupthelitter,theplasticbagsandotherwastes.Inthisway,Icanmakeourcityacleanerplacetolive.Besides,IamgoingtovisittheelderlyintheSeniorCitizens'Home.Iwillhelpthemdosomechoresandtalktothemtocheerthemup.Lastly,IamgoingtovisitthesickkidsinthehospitalwhereIplantosingforthemforfort.Ihopetheycanrecoverandgetbettersoon.Thereisasayingthathelpingothersishelpingourselves.Ibelieveitwillbeameaningfulday.假如你是李華,上周六上午,你們班全體同學(xué)在特殊教育學(xué)校做了一次志愿者活動(dòng).請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中提供的信息,用英語(yǔ)給你的筆友Sandy寫(xiě)一封信._【答案】LastSaturday,myclassorganizedavolunteeractivitytothespecialschool.MyclassmatesandItookalotofpresentstothem,suchasbooks,snacksandtoys.Theschooliscleanandtidy.Somestudentsareblind.Othersaredeaf.Somestudentscan’tspeakorreadorwrite.Itisdifficultforthemtodoeverydaythings.Buttheyfollowedtheteachertodothingscarefully.Afterarrivingthere,someofusbeganplayinggameswiththem.Someofustaughtthemtolearnpapercutting.Wealsoperformedwonderfulprograms,suchassinging,dancing.Wealsoaskedthemtojoinusandtheywereveryhappy.Allofuswerehappybecausewedidsomethinggoodtoothers.Inmyopinion,weshouldspendmoretimehelpingthem.HelpingothersisChinesepeople’svirtue.根據(jù)以下提示,以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文.內(nèi)容:1.過(guò)去我將錢(qián)花在買(mǎi)衣服和零食上;2.老師告訴我們有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上學(xué);3.從那以后,我將零花錢(qián)捐給一個(gè)幫助兒童的組織;4.我為能幫助別人而自豪.要求:1.語(yǔ)句通順,語(yǔ)意連貫;2.必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.80詞左右(不含所給詞).I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedto______________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedtobuyclothesandsnackswithmypocketmoney.Butsometimestheywereawasteofmoney.Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.Theyevencouldn’tgotoschool.Hearingthat,Ifeltsorryforthem.Ishoulddosomethingforthem.Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.IhopeIcanhelpthepoorkids.Atleasttheycanbuyabook.Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”;③提示:注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中給出的要點(diǎn),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫.[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步:表明寫(xiě)作意圖.內(nèi)容是根據(jù)提示,以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文.第二步:具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容.首先介紹過(guò)去我將錢(qián)花在買(mǎi)衣服和零食上;然后從老師那兒得知還有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物,更不能上學(xué);其次介紹從那以后,我將零花錢(qián)捐給一個(gè)幫助兒童的組織.第三步:書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ).表示“我為能幫助別人而自豪.”[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①pocketmoney零花錢(qián)②awasteofmone浪費(fèi)金錢(qián)③feltsorryfor感到抱歉

④gaveaway捐贈(zèng)[高分句型]①Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.(therebe句型)②Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.(tohelpchildren.做目的狀語(yǔ))③Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.(makesb.dosth.讓某人做某事)SecondChanceFarm是一個(gè)收留流浪貓狗和其他小動(dòng)物的志愿者組織.該組織想要招募一些喜愛(ài)動(dòng)物的志愿者照顧小動(dòng)物,請(qǐng)幫助該組織寫(xiě)一個(gè)招募廣告.要求:1、條理清晰,語(yǔ)句通順,語(yǔ)法正確,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范.

2、不少于80個(gè)單詞.____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:

Areyouafriendlyperson?Doyouliketohelpothers?Doyouloveanimals?ThenSecondChanceFarmislookingforyou!Wehavemanydogs,catsandotheranimalshereatSecondChanceFarm.Noonewantedthesepets,sotheycametolivewithus.Wetraintheanimalstobegoodpets,sotheycanfindnewhomes.Wealsoteachpeopletolookaftertheirpetswell.Weneedhelptolookafterallouranimals!Canyouhelpusfeedandwashtheanimals?Canyouplaywiththem?Ifyou’reinterested,thenpleasegiveusacall!【詳解】1.題干解讀:題目要求為SecondChanceFarm寫(xiě)一封志愿者招募廣告,志愿者需要喜愛(ài)動(dòng)物、會(huì)照顧小動(dòng)物,招募廣告一般要突出重點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練且朗朗上口.2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo):寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一、二人稱(chēng)為主,時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).招募廣告多會(huì)使用一般疑問(wèn)句來(lái)詢(xún)問(wèn)有意向者是否符合招募條件,要仔細(xì)審題抓住寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn),做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.為了更好地舉辦冬奧會(huì),市冬奧辦現(xiàn)在面向全社會(huì)招聘身體健康、熱愛(ài)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、樂(lè)于助人,并能熟練運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)和外國(guó)友人交流的志愿者.假如你叫李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示和要求,寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)征冬奧會(huì)志愿者的自薦信.提示:1.Whydoyouwanttobeavolunteer?2.Whatcanyoudo?要求:1.自薦信須包含所有提示信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名;3.詞數(shù)80左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.Because________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.BecauseIlikesports.Inschool,Ioftentakepartinallkindsofactivities.IamgoodatEnglish.IlistentoEnglishnewsontheradioeverydayandcanmunicatewithforeignfriendsfreely.Iamoutgoing,too.Icangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.Ithinkvolunteerworkisgreat.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,要求寫(xiě)一篇自薦信;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)圍繞所給提示信息寫(xiě)作,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步:文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,應(yīng)承接文章開(kāi)頭,接著寫(xiě)出想成為志愿者的原因及你擅長(zhǎng)做的事情;第二步:對(duì)自薦信進(jìn)行總結(jié),寫(xiě)出你的期待和愿望.[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加,參與②municatewithsb和某人溝通,交流③givethemahand幫助某人④getalongwith和某人相處[高分句型]①I(mǎi)cangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.(用whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.(hope后省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)10月4日是世界動(dòng)物日,你校組織以“IWanttoBeaVolunteerofProtectingAnimals”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽.假如李明參加比賽,請(qǐng)你以“李明”的名義寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己,內(nèi)容如下:品質(zhì)善良,善待動(dòng)物;勤勞,做額外事愛(ài)好……(至少兩點(diǎn))事跡為SaveChina’sTigers籌款;……(至少一點(diǎn))感悟動(dòng)物是人類(lèi)的朋友;保護(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己打算……(至少兩點(diǎn))IWanttoBeaVolunteerofProtectingAnimalsHello,everyone.I’mLiMing.Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals.I’mgladtomakeaspeechhere.____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IWanttoBeaVolunteerofProtectingAnimalsHello,everyone.I’mLiMing.Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals.

I’mgladtomakeaspeechhere.Iamkindtoothers.Iamgoodwithanimals.Ilikeplayingfootballandtheguitar.IhaveeverraisedmoneyforSaveChina’sTigers.AndIkeepsomehomelesslittleanimals.Animalsareourfriends.Weshouldlovethem.Iamalwaysthinkingprotectinganimalsisprotectingourselves.IfIcanbeavolunteer,Iwillworkharderanddomoremeaningfulthingstoprotectanimals.Iwillaskmorepeopletocareforanimals.Imusttrymybesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】這篇作文要求以IWanttoBeaVolunteerofProtectingAnimals寫(xiě)一篇演講稿,推薦自己成為保護(hù)動(dòng)物的志愿者.題目中利用表格的形式列舉了文章的主要內(nèi)容,包括自己的品質(zhì)、愛(ài)好、事跡、感悟和打算,學(xué)生們應(yīng)從這幾個(gè)方面入手,補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容,組織語(yǔ)言,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái).通過(guò)審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述,應(yīng)注意分清主次,以事跡和感悟?yàn)橹饕獌?nèi)容,其他是次要內(nèi)容.寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)不同,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),寫(xiě)完整的句子.例如可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,穿插使用and,but,so等連接的并列句,以及賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)以及非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式,提升文章檔次.同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫,表達(dá)流暢.【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿,推薦自己成為保護(hù)動(dòng)物的志愿者.短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí),作者按照題目中列出的提綱分成五個(gè)方面對(duì)自己進(jìn)行了介紹,并補(bǔ)充了細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容,使文章更加豐富.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,主次分明,以后半部分自己的事跡和感悟?yàn)橹?內(nèi)容安排合理.其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主來(lái)敘述,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.短文中主要以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞、動(dòng)詞不定式等結(jié)構(gòu),調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升了作文檔次.文章中較好的句型有I’mgladtomakeaspeechhere.、Ilikeplayingfootballandtheguitar、Iamalwaysthinkingprotectinganimalsisprotectingourselves.、IfIcanbeavolunteer,Iwillworkharderanddomoremeaningfulthingstoprotectanimals.、Imusttrymybesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful等等.3月5日是學(xué)雷鋒紀(jì)念日,你校師生去幸福敬老院(NursingHome)開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng).假如你是李華,請(qǐng)通過(guò)郵件將此活動(dòng)情況介紹給Mary.活動(dòng)形式:1.送鮮花、水果和美好的祝福.2.幫老人打掃衛(wèi)生……3.陪老人聊天;為老人表演(唱歌、跳舞),讀報(bào)……活動(dòng)感想:此活動(dòng)很有意義,從中學(xué)會(huì)了關(guān)愛(ài)老人、尊重老人……要求:1.要點(diǎn)齊全,條理清晰,語(yǔ)句通順,不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.2.詞數(shù)100左右.(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))DearMary,Thankyouforyourlaste-mail.Letmetellyouwhatwe

didon5thMarch._________________________________________________________________